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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
10/14/2009 |
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| Powerful images. Thank you for your service and for sharing. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
5/22/2009 |
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| Most warriors are more boy than man, boyhood lost forever in the dark caves of war. A truly compelling write. |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
5/21/2009 |
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A well written piece,Great work,take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
5/20/2009 |
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| Great writing sweet man..enjoyed very much...stay safe and well..Hugss |
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
5/20/2009 |
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"Undergraound"
Complete and such vivid detail.
Have heard not that I went on the "Tunnel Rat" tour but my husband has. Had the opportunity but that is one adventure regardless "once a Marine always a Marine" I just did not want to try! Regardless, I know this was not a tour by description instead reality and you have shared it from a bird's eye pov~Thanks!
Sure my husband will know exactly what you are portraying after his 30 yr stint in MC <smile>.
Take care,
Gwendolyn
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/19/2009 |
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War is hell, as you aptly pen here, Lloyd. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine |
5/19/2009 |
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| The not so glamorous side that is usually not written about. You have many experiences for the world to read about. Excellent write. R |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
5/19/2009 |
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Lloyd, this should become a classic of wartime memoirs.
I find it difficult to think of anything more frightening
than to be stuck in a wormhole.
Aside: I was there for the invasion of Okinawa, on a navy DE
a few miles offshore. It turned out to be the worst naval
engagement in U.S. history. I was a baby at the time.
-gene. |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
5/19/2009 |
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| well said |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
5/18/2009 |
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| The use of imagery and the detail in this are incredible. Your last three lines tore at my heart. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/18/2009 |
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Lloyd,
This is splendid in detail, tension, imagery and language, I was hooked from start to finish; I've never been to war and it's through such well expressed and vivid telling that its dangers and indeed horrors come home to me. Thank you so much for this.
John |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/18/2009 |
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You have very effectively shared what truly must have been a most fearsome experience. Thank you, Lloy. Love and peace,
Regis |
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