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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
7/23/2009 |
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| Beautifully emotive and deeply touching. |
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| Reviewed by Zach McClure |
7/15/2009 |
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I've felt like this and you've captured that feeling in a very original and fresh way. When my Grandparents passed into the next life, this was my heart. Superbly written Lena. :)
~Zach |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
7/2/2009 |
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| Written July 30, 2007...still this is timeless poetry! |
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| Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain |
4/23/2009 |
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Ah, the love that cannot be touched...that cannot be held...nor can it be fulfilled. Such longing so well expressed in this tender poem.
Lovely.
Cynthia |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
4/15/2009 |
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You definitely pour out your heart and soul into this poem.I am looking forward to reading the next poem,take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
4/11/2009 |
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Lena,
We are lucky in life if we can find this deep of a love, even if it's lost after time. This poem is beautifully written. The starting lines captured me with their originality. Not a surprise that this piece placed in a contest! Even more impressive when one considers that English was not your first language. Love and Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Ofira Sephiroth |
2/12/2009 |
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| Deeply-emotional write. Very nicely written poem. |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
1/25/2009 |
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Congrats. I could feel the deep emotion you poured into this piece.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
9/2/2008 |
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| You are a poet and a very good one. This was excellent. Best regards, Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/8/2008 |
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This reads like a hymn to love, Lena. It is beautifully expressed. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
6/27/2008 |
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| I still continue to weep for my Tom at times. Driving in the car with a thought of an old vacation, at nights, whenever I leave the cemetery, often it is a way of clensing to me too. He is with me in spirit. This poem is so soothing and so sentimental to me and I can relate to it personally. That is what makes it so special to me. Glad you won an award for it. It is good writing. |
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