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A P A R T.
by Kay P M- Devenish

Saturday, October 04, 2003

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The sunrise through my window paints a sky of blue


and all the clouds are abstract


whilst Crimson seeps out  hue,


my frail floral curtains


 partly hide the dawn


and sounds of birds outside my room


 serenade the morn...


I now know that...' I MISS you,'


(there's aching in my heart)


and tears are SWELLING in


 my eyes


because WE 


are.........          


  A P A R T.


 


 


Footnote:


This poem is dedicated to my two eldest girls who live several hours North of me ....I am just home after spending 9 days visiting them (taking along my 11 year old daughter with me too) and now that I am back I find  I even miss them more than I did before I left...(perhaps I should have stayed home...'tain't fair! )Still, it was lovely catching up with them.


Also, guess what?


When I was there...I really missed YOU heaps too.


Can't wait to catch up on your poems.


Love...


from


Kay.

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/20/2011
I can certainly relate to this compelling write, Kay. One of my daughters recently moved to Toronto (I live on the west coast here) and the other one moved to Melbourne, Australia. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Amira van Kerk 7/26/2004
So true!
We always miss the things we can't have for the time-being.
Instead of treasuring what we had and have.
Humans are so stupid sometimes, don't you think so???
Good write.
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 10/6/2003
I know this feeling Kay, but now you have something else to look forward to...the next visit :). Excellent write.
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa 10/5/2003
Ahhh..my Kate..once a mother always a mother..it seems that is one role that is never relinquished..my God our kids give us so much joy...I am still surrounded by all of mine..six of `em...even though they tend to drive me nuts at times...i revel in their life scenarios and know that I will always have them within me..no matter what !!!
Great write...it is a present to us mothers....I missed you heaps as well...oxoxoxox



Vesna

Reviewed by jude forese 10/4/2003
a mother's love is very powerful...
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 10/4/2003
I feel your longing to be with your girls...it is so genuine and powerful. Beautiful work.
Amor
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 10/4/2003
I know the feeling! My daughter lives a few provinces away from me. Wonderful write.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 10/4/2003
(((kay)))

beautiful, yearning, fantastic write of longing and love

well done

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) 10/4/2003
Beautiful write, Kay.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 10/4/2003
Missed you partner!!

Come join the Party on the Beach!!

Lovely heartfelt write from you KaY!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers 10/4/2003
aww, so lovely and sweet... these girls must know they are loved deeply
Reviewed by Christine Morell 10/4/2003
This is so poignant that it made me eyes well up. Beautifully written, Kay
~Chrissie
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 10/4/2003
Kay, this is so heartfelt and written with such expression. You capture the moment in this write.... thank you...missed you, too... stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 10/4/2003
Lovely write, Kay! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader) 10/4/2003
Well written piece, progression is nice..
Reviewed by Jimmy Holder 10/4/2003
Pretty!
Really well written! Flows wonderfully!
Shy
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 10/4/2003
Oh, Kay.. the way you approach this longing is so effective, so beautifully poetic.. the curtains, the bit of sun.. I could feel myself there and could feel that yearning to have them with you.. This is such a human feeling and you've written it exactly as it truly is. I love this poem. katy xox.
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot 10/4/2003
Absolutely sweet and loving.
TY
Hugs
Ch'erie
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 10/4/2003
Yes, true, I miss my two who live far away
I've missed you very much Kay.
SMoooooooo0000000000000Ch!
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