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| Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi |
3/23/2005 |
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| Startling. You have cultivated a splendid and captivating style. |
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| Reviewed by Huda Orfali |
2/28/2005 |
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Beautiful poem, Lee, thanks for sharing
love and peace |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/27/2005 |
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| Most of the time, I wish I could do without eating. But you're right. We cannot do without. Well thought-out write. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Mary Quire |
2/24/2005 |
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I like this one, Lee. Very inventive. A breakdown of life's mysteries for all of those who are food motivated.
M.Rose |
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| Reviewed by Judith Bailey |
2/20/2005 |
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Hi Lee... I'm way behind on reading and commenting on your works... will be corrected asap--
As to this little sweetness, I can't tell if you are being appreciative or cynical-- or a realist! Anyway: I like the imagery and contrast.
judith |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
2/20/2005 |
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| Well I like gummis and I do agree with Robert about the cosmic dust and God's breath. |
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| Reviewed by Robert Montesino |
2/20/2005 |
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| They say you are what you eat and what you believe you become... but I believe who & what we are was decided long ago by cosmic dust & God's breath! Wonderful write. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/20/2005 |
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A whole lot to chew over...but we are a consuming society;-)
Eileen |
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