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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
5/18/2012 |
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| Such a lovely revealing pen Deborah. |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
5/17/2012 |
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There are so many lovely souls that pass by us in life. We have the desire to hold onto them for they are a beam of light to us. Often they are sent to brighten our day, to say you are loved. They know, as do you within your soul.
Lovely Deborah
Love and Light
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
5/16/2012 |
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Sweet sorrow!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
5/16/2012 |
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| this is a very clever poem, I like what Ron said,isn't it always that aggressive person knocking you over to shake the other persons hand or something. So best to learn several phrases, as Vickie stated, so at least the whole thing can be confusing....but, anyway this very good! |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
5/16/2012 |
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I have moments like these from time to time
someone wants to carry on with their day...or something
and I'll want to spend time well past hello...
Oh sweet to see the glimmers that shine in the eyes
and the hand gestures that show a persons soul...
how about this: (with a lil we bit of me Irish accent)
ELLO....
Cad é mar a tá tú? (how are you)
Bail ó Dhia ort (the blessing of God on you)
I shalnt say good-bye instead I shall say
Till Next Time :) |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/16/2012 |
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pithy and tender and so much said
and not said
i like this very much
john |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/16/2012 |
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Ahhh those magic chance encounters can be dead ends or the beginnings of wonderful relationships....nice capture Deb
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/16/2012 |
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Contrary minds can never meet, no matter how the eyes entreat.
Ron |
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