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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
7/14/2012 |
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"Love?" meaning so many different
things to each one *Deborah* who
is to say if it works or not
between two...but your poem sure
sounded like it did for them
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
7/14/2012 |
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You hit the nail on the head! I'm really surprised still have the title, “ Love,” available. I keep discovering that I'm using the same title over again and have to change the second one. Since it begs the question, perhaps the title should be, “Love?”
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
7/14/2012 |
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my husband gave a girl his comb when he was in 2nd grade
ain't that too cute? lol
Love is so marvelous
from the 1st love-which is nice
but being last is the very best! :)
Love's Innate Hour Glass
Vickie
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
7/13/2012 |
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Hmmm! Was it love?
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
7/13/2012 |
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| You have placed a great deal of 'happening' into these few lines. The effect is complete revelation. Scrolling down to read your text, the first thing I see is the image of a precious braid, so cared for with ribbon, so shockingly truncated. Then, entering your poem, the words immediately interlaced into the painting and the lines read like a beautiful romance clear to the last provocative line, which bookended the experience of seeing the sliced, sacrificed braid. Artistic flare of line placement made this a fabulous poem to me; and it was enhanced with your last word "Love?" Marvelous writing! ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
7/13/2012 |
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No, something is very lacking here for Love is so much more.
Good food for thought
Love and Light
Lily |
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