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Me, Eternity, Strong, Forever
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JoAnna Drelleshak
Friday, October 08, 2004
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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You are the one who told me to believe in every dream yet; you have hidden yourself away from the world
And me.
You have lost faith in your dreams and, more important, you have lost faith in us
You said eternity.
You have always needed to be needed yet, you must know that you can lean on me
I will be strong.
You mean the world to me and, most important, you are the best of everything that is us
We are forever.
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| Reviewed by jude ashiedu |
11/15/2008 |
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| love is all that can be needed to show more love...........from eternity to eternity |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
2/28/2008 |
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| Yes, your style is different. I am a friend of Bonnie May the author from Colo. She lived as my cousin's neighbor for 10 years and is a beautiful person. She is in hosp at moment getting a pace maker to make her heart better and loves feedback too. Many authors on Authors den are making poems to her. She is well liked as you will be too. Love your poems. Am concerned with death very much. B ut not afraid of it. Like your style. You own. |
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| Reviewed by Anne Brooks |
8/8/2005 |
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I just posted a poem called" me":your poem is melody of hope and love.Mine, in contrast, is a battle to be heard.
Me and strong.. Your poem delivers faith.Anne pawlak. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
10/12/2004 |
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| A beautiful poem of oneness, a pleasure to read. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/10/2004 |
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| a very strong sense of union ... |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
10/8/2004 |
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| Sad, yet beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
10/8/2004 |
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Wonderful sentiments!
Sandie May Angel :o) |
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