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A Lesson Well Learned
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JoAnna Drelleshak
Saturday, June 15, 2002
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"You shouldn't have hit her, Marco." She looks down into the eyes of the man whose back she has just broke. Letting him drink in her beauty, waiting, just long enough for the whimpers to start. She pulls out a gorgeous hand-crafted chalice and slits his throat with a perfectly manicured nail.
"Beauty should never be mistreated..."
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This was written by a character of mine, I find the thought behind it, poetic.
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| Reviewed by vanessa mendez |
12/6/2007 |
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nice poem
love how you can
feel likes it
you with tha problem |
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| Reviewed by Afrika Abney |
10/30/2002 |
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Strong imagery and well written.
Afrika M.A.Abney |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
6/15/2002 |
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| Dark beauty... very good. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/15/2002 |
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| beauty should never be misunderstood... |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Carroll |
6/15/2002 |
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| Intriguing, would have liked to read more. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
6/15/2002 |
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A real dark piece!
May Lu $*_*$ / Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
6/15/2002 |
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| Yes, very poetic.....good imagery here. |
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