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On Finding A Strand Of Hair In A Book
by Richard Atwood

Saturday, October 18, 2008
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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From the ms.
Death and Morning

     
     ON FINDING A STRAND OF HAIR IN A BOOK



     Tell me, tell me
     what is more sad,
     more sorrowful
     than a love you would
     give your life for...

     to see it fall apart
     in your fingers.
 

     When you remember
     all you dreamed,
     and all the mountains you hoped,
     and there was nothing,
     nothing you could do

     to stop, or to save it.
     (Neither one's fault, nor the other's.)

     To realize, even at the moment,
     and the graved years you will carry it:

     nothing, nothing you could do --
     still falling apart, and one strand of hair

                    in the dark
        ... still falling, in your fingers.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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Reviewed by David Hightower 9/3/2011
Passion and melancholy come through forcefully in this poem, Richard.
Love the simple idea of a single hair that releases the emotions evoked by absence.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/2/2008
I still have here hairnets that she left here. She had to wear them at the place where she worked. I can completely relate to your sentiments, Richard. Love and peace to you,

Regis
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