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| Reviewed by ~ Chanti |
6/23/2005 |
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Fantastic imagery and a very impactful last line. Good stuff Lisa!
Chanti |
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| Reviewed by Pierre Ortega |
6/17/2005 |
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| Awakening to love is wonderful, but we can only reach so deep into each others hearts no matter how close to each other we long to be,for are allwe separate and lost in our own lonliness and understanding |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
6/16/2005 |
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Excellent write this one Lisa
Paul;-} |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/16/2005 |
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Lisa,
Stunning imagery, stunning write--this is my new favorite of yours (and there are many). Strength is the underlying message in your words--thank you, Poet and friend! DEFINATELY a keeper (as many of yours are in my library). :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *applause!* |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/16/2005 |
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The eyes have it--mirrors to the soul.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/16/2005 |
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beautiful stuff, lisa; very well done! brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in burleson, karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
6/16/2005 |
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Splendid poetry Lisa!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
6/16/2005 |
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| Your usual grace with the pen shines here, Lisa. And thank you for that kind review. ~~Nordette |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
6/15/2005 |
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I love the twist that you applied at the end of this, Lisa. Your poem is poetic perfection, with depth, an interesting and strong rhyme scheme, and a story line that I found to be captivating. It is always a pleasure to read your poems. Each one stands alone in its uniqueness and its glory. I find it so hard to believe that you are the same writer I started reading a couple of years ago. Your growth as a writer has been not only astounding and quick but also a direct path to literary excellence.
Take care,
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/15/2005 |
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This touches deep somewhere in my own soul as well, Lisa. Somtimes we know we have other persons inside us that we can only release in the tiniest ways. It would be nice if every now and then we could set them free and just see what the results would be. Anyway as always a thought provoking piece.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
6/15/2005 |
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Looking at the person in the looking glass.
You are carving out some masterpieces.
Top drawer Lisa... |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/15/2005 |
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| Splendid write of self examination. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
6/15/2005 |
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| Fantastic write! Many will be able to relate to this :-) |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/15/2005 |
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Fascinating poem Lisa, A unique and brilliant write!
A treat for all of us!
Eileen
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
6/15/2005 |
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Paints a biography of iron will and resolve Lisa
" Be true to yourself " is the undying mantra of life
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
6/15/2005 |
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| Gotta love it! And I do. Great job. |
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