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| Reviewed by Biri Amante (Reader) |
8/24/2005 |
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| What a marvelously crafted set of verses! |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
8/23/2005 |
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Say that writing is your hobby; methinks it is a calling. This is
e x c e l l e n t. Great poetry in my opinion pares down to the bone, then keeps going. . .like Just So I'll Know. B r a v a !
'Pea' {aka Passle O'kin N. Texas}
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com |
8/23/2005 |
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This is prophetic my Sister. One of the most stirring ones I've read from your pen. blessin's for more like this--it hits the target.
cynth'ya |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
8/22/2005 |
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You have surpassed even yourself with this write, Lisa...Wish I had written it! Every line is simply awesome and I just wanted to keep reading on and on. I am at a loss for words because I fear that my lavish comments would seem insincere. This is by far your favorite of mine, I suppose until your next post, when I will again reel at your amazing talents. I will be keeping this to savor again and again.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez |
8/22/2005 |
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Really , Really Well Written !!!
Exceptionally outrageous!!!
peace',
Rich Criso Suarez |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
8/22/2005 |
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Ah Lisa, your poetry touches something so deep inside of me, beautifully insightful and excellent. Love your poetry,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
8/22/2005 |
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| A lot of strange requests but requests that might soothe the turmoil within. Good. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/22/2005 |
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Lisa,
That opening grabs the reader and pulls them joyfully into this provocative write--a marvelous ode to triumphing over death! BRAVA--this is among your best! You bet I'm saving it--thank you.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
8/22/2005 |
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Capyivating Lisa, when you write of death and feeling the opposite of death as life it made me also look at it in a new perspective. Rich thoughtful write.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
8/22/2005 |
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Ditto!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/22/2005 |
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You have written perfection with this pen Lisa! Your voice is heard loud and clear and it speaks wisdom in knowing that to live life we must experience every aspect of it, or we are already dead! Bravo!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
8/22/2005 |
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This is why death will always raise questions for it is tied in so closely to life. The two sentences that touched me that most are:
"what makes the dying cling to their last breath-
And be close enough to feel them exhale-"
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
8/22/2005 |
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| lisa, i have always been a fan, but this poem strikes me deep inside, the words, the form, the content is perfect |
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