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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/20/2006 |
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| a moving, beautifully penned poem ... |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
2/20/2006 |
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| Wow, Lisa, this one brings tears. Beautifully done. |
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| Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett |
2/20/2006 |
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| This is exactl how I have always felt when someone died ar walked out of my life. Life is such a journey and gives us plenty to write about. Very nice read and relative. |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
2/20/2006 |
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This poem just reaches into the chambers of the heart and rips out hunks before it finally settles into the soul. I am rendered (nearly) speachless as I feel the emotions of sadness, emptiness, pride, gratituds and humility. I am overwhelmed that there are those who so love and believe in freedom that they are willing to face the threat, and sometimes the reality, of death so that we can live in this great land of liberty. Thank you, Lisa, once again you have touched my heart and have drawn my spirit to walk along your same path and become one with those who have perished. Feel better soon, Lisa, I am keeping you in my prayers.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
2/20/2006 |
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Lisa,
You need to have this poem published; in fact, ALL of your poems! You are great at what you do!
Hope you are feeling better; you are in my prayers, sweetie!
(((Gentle Hugs))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/20/2006 |
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Lisa,
I'm glad you're back; I've missed you. Hope you're feeling stronger.
You haven't lost the ability to make us think...cry...and force us to confront the sacrifices made in freedom's name. Good on you--never let us forget. An outstanding, powerfully poignant reminder--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
I concur with Jerry as well--you need to get this to a publisher toot-suite! |
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| Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher |
2/20/2006 |
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Strong, fascinating and compelling! Jerry is absolutely right!
Birgit and Roger |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
2/20/2006 |
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So powerful Lisa that it pulls the heart strings like they are hooked to a tow truck. The sad truth you present is all too often blind to the eyesight of the masses and only a few careing people recognize and feel the pain of a soldiers funeral.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
2/20/2006 |
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| Hell, Lisa, a LOT of your stuff needs to be published. This is yet one more that rips at the very sould of the reader. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/20/2006 |
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One of your very best Lisa!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/20/2006 |
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Lisa, you wring out the heart and soul with your soldier poems!
This one is so beautifully composed it needs to be published!
Splendid work!
Eileen |
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