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Pass the Mustard, Please
by Lisa Hilbers
Wednesday, July 05, 2006
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Pass the Mustard, Please
Edging; Nudging; Somewhere close to you- Can you feel the heat from my intentions? Good? Bad? Who knows? The cat seemed happy enough- Figure eights; In. Out. It’s all about the comfort- Zoning; Honing, in on me. You. Them. Us. Stretching; Making the day appear natural; Don’t upset the children! Hug them for the very last time, just don’t tell them so- Hear the rumble? See the dust- Flying through the air with might and must- Monster dreams coming true at last! Grab those sunglasses; Don’t miss the final moment! Wear your pretty hat to this memorable occasion- Independence Day; Hear the blasts? Scud or Dud? Oh look Mommy at all the lights in the darkened skies! Ever ask yourself, Why? Are they really lies? Who knows! Who cares? Will it matter in the end? Ask anyway; Will our skies return to fair- Fair to partly cloudy? Or was it just a notice? Eviction or Friction? Hand me the hotdog buns; Mustard please; Put the cat out; Close the door; Pull the drapes; It won’t matter anyway- Say? Say man? Have you any clay? Maybe we can create our own perfect day- World- Way-
© Lisa Hilbers
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
9/27/2006 |
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| Love it! |
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| Reviewed by Leysa Lowery |
7/5/2006 |
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Loved the style, flow of this -- really captured the feeling of the day.
Leysa |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/5/2006 |
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Lisa as always you capture the very soul of the day as it happens and bring it into our hearts and let us savour the taste of your thoughts. This poem is almost Dylan-istic in it's lyrical ability and that is a compliment because Dylan was my hero. Great write Lisa.
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
7/5/2006 |
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| Always a pleasure to read your excellent work Lisa!Love this one! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
7/5/2006 |
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Lisa,
W O W. Amid the chaos, blessings come in little moments--enjoy each one as it comes. As I loved reading this slice of life poem, very well written, by the way...thank you.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot |
7/5/2006 |
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Yes amid the torment of worrying day to day over who's gonna go to war with whom, plague pestilence and poverty, a little bit of enjoyment breaks the monotony. Well said Lisa.
Good to read you again, it's been a while.
Ch'eriexx |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
7/5/2006 |
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The world is certainly feeling like something we might want to hide from these days but the truth is, if we don't keep our finger on the pulse, we will lose all that we have. Apathy abounds...Let's all just pretend it is another perfect day in paradise. Excellent work, Lisa. This poem kind of played out like an old B movie...your images casting themselves in black and white. I could almost see the blackout shades on the windows.
Take care,
Sherry
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