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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
11/14/2011 |
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Sage,
You could not be more "out of focus"
with this sultry, but inappropriate
review of "Jolting Journey."
CG |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
4/1/2009 |
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Feel me inside you...warm olive oil...I push until there is no more...unalterable unity...take it from my waist...see the shadow on the wall?...ancient ache...Dance it to me...make me beg...
Sage |
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| Reviewed by S Cardin |
7/5/2004 |
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I enjoy how you've captured our cosmic cycle - for me, though the lines Steadfast Struggle, Resurrected Renewal, Perpetual Phoenix standout simply because they sum up the human condition and I try to really idenifity with that in my writing.
Steph |
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| Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga |
6/29/2004 |
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Dear Carolyn,
This is incredible, a riveting write.
Awareness Alters
Modified Magnetism
Poignant Purpose - I relate to the poem, but especially to these three lines.
Thanks for sharing
Warm hugs
Elga
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/28/2004 |
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| the comic cycle is unified unti it evolves ... |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
6/28/2004 |
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| Carolyn, this is fantastic. Love the way each line stands on its own and complements the whole. Dawn |
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