|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
You could not be more "out of focus"
with this sultry, but inappropriate
review of "Jolting Journey."
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Feel me inside you...warm olive oil...I push until there is no more...unalterable unity...take it from my waist...see the shadow on the wall?...ancient ache...Dance it to me...make me beg...
|Reviewed by S Cardin
|I enjoy how you've captured our cosmic cycle - for me, though the lines Steadfast Struggle, Resurrected Renewal, Perpetual Phoenix standout simply because they sum up the human condition and I try to really idenifity with that in my writing.
|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
This is incredible, a riveting write.
Poignant Purpose - I relate to the poem, but especially to these three lines.
Thanks for sharing
|Reviewed by jude forese
|the comic cycle is unified unti it evolves ...|
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|Carolyn, this is fantastic. Love the way each line stands on its own and complements the whole. Dawn|