|Reviewed by Jerry Andrews
|Never read anything just like this and thats a compliment!! If you don't, as prolific as you are, you should have a daily column in your local newspaper. Ever try? Local editors can be interesting people. Love your writing- just too lazy to write or read much now. Jerry-Thanks, gal!|
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|You are a riot! ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by firstname.lastname@example.org Bennett
|IT HAS BEEN A PLEASURE TO READ SUCH FINE WORK.|
|Reviewed by Saleh Razzouk
|the comment on the story but it was blank page. so i added it to the poem.
Between conversation and description past experience unfolds as to make life neverending, and continuous .
Well composed , with humor.
|Reviewed by Cynthia Borris
|Wow! What a treat. You are very good.
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|L O L ~!! :)|
|Reviewed by A PAX
I was never affected by a sunrise that way, but..........
one can only hope!!!
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|ROFL, ROFL... my own cheeks are flushing here!! :)) You is just so good at crackin jokes, me lil ol darlin - whether it be daybreak or moonshine - and takes me back to me old country ways and roots... shan't niver ferget that old bucket in the privvy... nor the newspaper that went with it... Don't think even The Thinker would be strainin too much over this one. Tis as plain as the smile on my face... which disappears rapidly if it's my turn to empty the bucket... LOL Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
|So Paw's pants were down the whole time? I hope the sun was the only thing that riz. But then, maybe that's why Maw grabbed her shirt. ;-j|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|At first I was pretty upset because morning is one of my favorite times and you had to go and break it. But now, all I can say is, Cute, Cute, Cute...|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Nicely done, Katy. Reminds me of my childhood days on the prairies when we actually did have an outhouse. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|If its day break,
Better you should it fix,
Morning starts somewhere near six,
My day don't start till afternoon,
Bet in that case you think me an everlovin' loon...ed
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Clever write, clever you! Very well done, Katy; thanks for the smiles this early morning! Enjoyed~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by jude forese
|extremely clever, Katy ... the pink can have that kind of effect of a man ...|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
You wanna see sunrises (sunsets), come Texas way. Now those are pretty! Not discounting y'all's up there, what with all of the storms y'all have had...a cleverly penned, witty write, glad I stopped by to read. You always put a smile on my face--I'm too serious.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Whew! I have been hectically (word? Naw, don't care.) busy for the last couple of day, sorry I am late getting here, but some damn nature fool has uprooted my "sitting and thinking" place, talkin' foolishness about the day a-breaking.|
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|You have one of the most clever minds I know of on AD. I'm always happy to read your witty poetry Katy. ~ Sara|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Hee, hee, your a mess Katy..
Thanks for stopping by...
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|LOL....thanks for sharing!!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Cute, whimsical and I think you outdone yourself here. LOL
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen (Reader)
|I love it!!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This is a gem Katy! in every way! love the vernacular, and the topic!
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|Outhouse Poetry, now on AuthorsDen! What's the world a-comin' to?
This is delightful and funny beyond where you live, kind lady.
I don't forward all that outhouse stuff I get daily, but I'm sending this on to them educated foks I usta' go to school with.
Thank a bunch. - Bill
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Having just returned from the wild northern woods, I can attest to the fact that peekin out at the sunrise from behind the old outhouse door - ain't too bad at all!
PS I hear Wisconsin may get indoor plumbing soon - don't sell out, young lady - keep that old outhouse - they sure don't make 'em like they used to.