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| Reviewed by Regis Schilken |
7/26/2011 |
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Yes, I agree with you. Ultimately, each of us is alone and wondering why!
rege schilken |
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| Reviewed by Robert Cosmar (Reader) |
5/29/2011 |
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| great poem about the simplicity of the inner truth of realization of beingness.When we are fully aware we have no outer desire to fulfill or need to fill it. |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
6/18/2009 |
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I believe the most difficult thing there is to do in life is "learning to love yourself". It took me 35 years! But I now realize I am worthwhile. Loneliness is a terrible disease. Nicely written.
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| Reviewed by Ken Chartrand |
11/14/2008 |
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| Hello Marion, I read your poem, "Loneliness". I found it very hard to read in the sence it reminded me of times when I am writing. How alone one feels. Alone with your thoughts and your blank pages. We are our brother's keeper BUT we are also our keeper. Great piece of writing. Please feel free to visit my site here in the "Den" |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
7/15/2008 |
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Sombering thoughts in this poem but always remember...To the world you may be ONE person but to ONE PERSON you may be THE WORLD!"
John Michael |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
5/26/2008 |
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| Completeness is needed in our life and thoughts. You have that. It tell mo you do not let your grief out to others, thereby saving them boredom within, living alone is only you, you do have God there with you each and every dayl; Very uniquely written and you are surely a unique person to tell us all this and still be yourself. |
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| Reviewed by Mariann Klimczuk |
5/17/2008 |
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| These five last words project a powerful message. I am alone with myself. To be able to master the art of being alone is a gift. It clearly states Yes I like me and I can be with me. |
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| Reviewed by Z McClure |
5/2/2008 |
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You make the abstract idea of loneliness very concrete and vivid Marion. Before I trusted Christ, I felt like this almost all the time.
The repetition of the word "nobody", like an echoe, helps me hear the loneliness, and "myself",at the end of verse, lets me see the isolation.
A remarkable poem! |
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| Reviewed by Denise Contreras |
3/25/2007 |
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Great write many can relate just being human we can relate. One thing I have come to find out and feel within the depth of my soul is that I am never alone. Only if I choose to be.
Sending hugs Angela |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
1/14/2007 |
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| powerful |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
11/30/2006 |
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Ohhhhh Marion~
I hope ALOT has changed since this time...
YOur heart speaks the truth
I feel that way often
I get beyond it... somehow!
I hope your happy and feeling Proud
The gifts of your heart are very precious to me!
Warmest Blessings! Of PEACE, Love, Wisdom and Joy!
WArm HuGs,Sheeexoox
Another Keeper!
To my Vault it goessss! |
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| Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett |
6/14/2006 |
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| WOW THIS IS EXACTLY OW I FEEL EACH AND EVERDAY BUT LIFE FOR ME GOES ON AND I DONT KNOW HOW. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/27/2005 |
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I can completely relate, Marion; a most compelling offering. Oddly, it is much along the same theme of the poem I posted on Friday. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you.
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
9/8/2005 |
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Hypnotic and. . .comes from a deep place, and it shows. Surely, every sensitive person can relate. Great job$ Phyllis aka Pea aka
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
2/11/2005 |
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an excellent write, which I feel many of us can relate too...you are never alone on here.
Paul;-} |
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| Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga |
9/27/2004 |
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Dear Marion, *Welcome to the Poetry section*
Strange how life is, I had not seen your name before and when I signed in today, your bio pic came up, my curiosity piqued, I stepped in and I am glad I did so :) I relate to you poem so well, sometimes we may feel like that, yet I know, that one needs to positive in life, and we should look for the bright light always. Thank you for sharing this wonderful write, this is one that is going into my library. Take care and God bless.
warm hugs
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com |
3/30/2004 |
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All of us have cycles of loneliness Marion.
Now the question is, "what are you going to do about it?"
Writing is a start. You show much insight within yourself.
Now reach out and observe the world around you, and be blessed
by what it reveals.
What it reveals, heals.
blessin's,
cynth'ya lewis reed |
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| Reviewed by Eddie Thompson |
2/12/2004 |
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| Stunning insight into the heart of loneliness. Wow. This poem is very good. |
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
1/30/2004 |
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| Unfortunately, we are all alone within ourselves. Our interactions with other people do not really allow us to know them totally, or to understand them totally. Interesting viewpoint. |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell |
12/13/2003 |
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I gave this a lot of thought, read it twice and decided it's true for me as well. I only 'think' the opposite reality. Very cool.
Happy Holidays
Janet xoxoxoxo |
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| Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja |
9/11/2003 |
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A nice poem. Well expressed thought.
Greetings from Atlanta.
Goreja.com |
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