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| Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson |
5/16/2006 |
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Beautiful write Huda...I love the free expression of this longing write. Splendid.
~Peace and Blessings~ |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/16/2006 |
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| excellent allegory and imagery, Huda ... your poem like a ballet dancer is a moving display of creative form ... |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
5/16/2006 |
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| Aaah!! Now I get it!! I have just come from Peter's page and your collaboration is delightful - NO WONDER!! Great to get a glimpse of the Muse at work and love this the inspiration, doubtless, behind the joint work. Delicate as the dance of love itself, Huda. Bless you, Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher |
5/16/2006 |
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A beautiful romantic longing, heartbreaking lovelyness,
Birgit and Roger |
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| Reviewed by Suzie Palmer |
5/15/2006 |
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Oh Huda,
Absolutely beautiful and heartfelt!
May you dance with your prince; posthaste!!
Love & Unity Suzie :-D |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
5/15/2006 |
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I have enjoyed the theme, contents and imagery of "Ballerina".
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Michael Wells |
5/15/2006 |
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I can hear the moonlight tune in your magical verse
Very beautiful poem, Huda
I agree with the others; brilliant analogy
God bless - Michael |
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| Reviewed by Silvia Hartmann |
5/15/2006 |
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I really recognise that sensation of feeling in storage until "they" return. That's a very cool poem.
SFx |
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| Reviewed by Jane Rodway |
5/15/2006 |
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| Loved this analogy, really brilliant, that first verse especially, and the suffocating at the end makes me think of the boxed closed on the ballerina, good work. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/15/2006 |
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Love is all, Huda! Thank you for sharing these precious sentiments. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader) |
5/15/2006 |
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Beautiful descriptions..
Peace & Love, Dove |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
5/15/2006 |
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| Love is intoxicating and fills you with longing. Splendid write. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/15/2006 |
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Huda, such a beautiful longing , love poem! Choosing the ballerina an excellnt analogy, as it depicts their true state so often. Lovely work!
Love,
eT |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
5/15/2006 |
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This is absolutely gorgeous, Huda
The consummate love poem...:)
And the picture of the ballerina is exquisite...
Love and Peace
Peter |
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