|Reviewed by s g (Reader)
|Hello Rosemary, you have a gift.
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|I especially agree with Regis's "Dark and somehow sadly real; very
Also love your clever use of repetition and the brevity. Says so
much without wasting a word!
xOx Phyllis xOx
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|It has been a while since I last heard from you and now, this enchanting poem, if not a bit dark as I found the imagery profound and hauntingly beautiful in its form.
|Reviewed by The Poetess
|Haunting reality!!! Thank you for sharing it. I feel that we need to look at and face these most difficult parts of life so that we can help prevent them from happening to more "little Girls" and big ones too.|
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Lovely written piece.
|Reviewed by Mike Bayles
|I'm glad to see you've posted another poem. Some nice rhymes. It has both an innocent side and a dark side.
It reminds me of being poolside at the aparment complex in, although the person whom I was observing was a woman about my age at the time.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Dark and somehow sadly real; very compelling, Rosemarie. Love and best wishes to you,