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| Reviewed by Jimmy Mills |
12/2/2006 |
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| Rein--A masterpiece at best. BTW, I'm not going anywhere. We are friends for life! Get use to it. :-) Jim |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
10/31/2006 |
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| What a beautiful haunting poem. It touches my heart...M |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
8/19/2006 |
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| this poem of yours is absolulely a gem. |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
7/15/2006 |
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so touching..you have such a big heart..wish you lived nextdoor to me..
I could use a true friend..
Vesna :) |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
7/12/2006 |
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You are a good friend.
Beautifully said...
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
7/11/2006 |
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An elegant farewell and saying goodbye is
oh so sad. Moving Retta! |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
7/10/2006 |
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grace, dignity, & transcendence herein, retta. beautifully expressed.
peace,
carolyn |
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| Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook |
6/27/2006 |
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Beautiful piece and beautiful photo.
Simply beautiful, Retta! |
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| Reviewed by richard poor |
6/27/2006 |
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i wouldnt want you to sat farewell to me....maybe see ya...
but you have done very good with this write!!! |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
6/27/2006 |
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Dear Reindeer,
What a beautiful way to say "farewell". Your poetry is so down to earth and filled with the spirit.
Love & Light,
Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
6/26/2006 |
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Sad emotion filled lines Retta but written with grace and beauty.
Paul;-) |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/25/2006 |
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| farewell can be hard to say but you have eloquently done so, in this beautiful poem ... |
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| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
6/25/2006 |
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Sometimes that's how life is, kinda sad when friends part.
Nice work
Blue skies and sunshine
HH |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
6/25/2006 |
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Whatever you write, it's great!
Have a great day! |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/25/2006 |
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Bittersweet, full of heartfelt emotion, and very very good, Reindeer.
And what a marvelous picture. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
6/25/2006 |
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Outstanding write
Good challenge
enjoyed
William
LOve & Peace |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
6/25/2006 |
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A very intriguing write. I absolutely love that message. Sometimes we just have to move on, even if it means being alone...
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
6/25/2006 |
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So gentle yet sad, though we all must travel on alone...
A beaut of a soul you do indeed have.... |
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| Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme |
6/24/2006 |
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Retta...beautiful poetry full of love from your inner being.
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/24/2006 |
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This brings tears from the well of my soul, Retta; that is because I can relate so well to what you express via your verses here. Thank you for sharing this soul-reaching gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
6/24/2006 |
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Beautiful write from a beautiful heart, Retta. You have amazing talent.
~Linda |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
6/24/2006 |
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Beautiful and heartbreaking poem, Reindeer. Your verses stand alone with or without the challenge line and your images are both intense and tangible. Your writings often take my breath away and this is one of those times.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
6/24/2006 |
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Beautiful touching verse....challenge well met!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by J M |
6/24/2006 |
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This is not only serene and scenic but outstanding. I hope you were given vote for this challenge. Beautifull.
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But the times have changed,
And the hours we share now are so few,
I know its time to let go,
We both have other things to do.
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/24/2006 |
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Reindeer, the beauty of the art and poem combine to make this an outstanding work! I love the way you so eloquently wrote this one!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Aberjhani |
6/24/2006 |
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Golden lines filled with poignant emotion and spiritual grace. Captures fully the intimate substance of relationships and parting.
Aberjhani |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/24/2006 |
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A beautifully moving eulogy and write, Reindeer, very well penned.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
6/24/2006 |
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| Wonderful poem, one I can relate to so well. In fact, I've been writing a poem on saying farewell to someone as well. You make it sound so peaceful, so right. But to me, it is heart-breaking. It seems as though every aspect of life is such a struggle. Even something as simple as friendship. ~ Sara |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/24/2006 |
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It isn't easy to say goodbye; very well done! LOL at Jerry's comment!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
6/24/2006 |
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| I panicked when I read the title. Don't DO that! Very well written pice of poetical poetry with the premise of love/friendship sour'd. Very good. |
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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
6/24/2006 |
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Saying goodby, farewell, so long, or Get Lost, isn't easy.
But, you make it so tender and meaningful, I almost wish you were my FORMER friend. - That's good work. Sharing it is a morning joy.
- Bill
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/24/2006 |
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| I'm glad this is not a farewell but a challenge for us to write one that will never be as good as that which you have written. The pic is as beautiful as the poem. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
6/24/2006 |
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Retta
This is a wonderful and spontaneous response to the challenge..
Kudos to you
God Bless
Peter |
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