Where Do Soldiers Go
by Patricia A Boudreau
Saturday, April 24, 2004
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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an unanswered question, a plea
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Where do soldiers go,
when they die...?
When Cain spilled first blood
defying brotherhood,
in anger black and bitter
did it's poison taint forever
that which was once
Holy ground...?
Were the seeds of hatred
at the same time created
sown beside compassion,
it's roots of self destruction
choking out the blooms of
Tolerance...?
We put guns in young men's hands
send them off to foreign lands
trained to kill, and ignore
what Your own son died for,
should he kill...or die
should he question...why
How do You judge forever,
on this soul...?
When they cry out Your name
( Thou Shalt Not Kill )
through the bullets and the flames
( Thou Shalt Not Kill )
do You hear...?
do You Suffer...?
Do You forgive...?
Where do soldiers go,
..................when they die ?
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| Reviewed by Dpka shri (Reader) |
5/2/2004 |
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Such a touching poem,it proves that u have a heart of gold!
"Friends who have touched our lives,remain forever in our hearts----
Friends like--you! |
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| Reviewed by Micha Julian |
5/2/2004 |
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Tricia, such 'felt'/'honest' questions from the hear, mind, guts/anger/pain, caring/concern...
A Beautiful, Haunting, devasrting work from the depths, real questions written so well..
You know how I feel about the extraordinary mixture of emotions, this timely and ancient, as well piece, is one which should give pause to Anyone reading it...
You, my Gifted, Carin, Questioning Friend...
(((Tricia))))
so perfectly done and, it...I don't know what to say, makes images, thoughts and emotions come into the reader, extraordinary, yes--
as are you...
The comments here, prove to me what an amazing Affect you have has...
Hurts...I agree w/Mountain Poet -- I, too hope, it is as the 'same place your beautiful words come from'...
I love you...
mich |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
4/25/2004 |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
4/25/2004 |
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| Sigh, perhaps, Trish, it all reaches back to the likes of my ancestors, the Vikings, who thought the ONLY way to reach Valhalla was to die in battle, as a warrior. Even the teachers of those commandments do not equate, for our well-being, the act of waging war with "Thou shalt not kill." So many poems have now been posted about this war and every aspect has been spoken of.. until now! Yours rings unique, creative and with a thought-provoking element I have not seen. Oh, yes, and as an aside, I am sitting here with tears streaming down my face to have you back in my "company"... dear heart, welcome back. love, katy xox. |
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| Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart |
4/24/2004 |
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| I had a cousin over there in the first war. Now one of my good friends is over there. I hope to God he comes back alive, too. If soldiers go anywhere, I hope it's the same place your beautiful words come from. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
4/24/2004 |
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A moving write. I wish we all had the answers.
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~ |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/24/2004 |
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| These are poignant questions, Patricia. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
4/24/2004 |
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This one is so powerful and I missed reading you!!!!
Excellent Tribute poem to them........ |
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| Reviewed by Larry Rochelle |
4/24/2004 |
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| A touch of pathos in those lines, and questions hard to answer. |
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