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| Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington |
8/24/2003 |
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Such ships as these do arouse the mind and touch the soul.
~Jackie~
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| Reviewed by Glenna Cancilla (Reader) |
4/25/2003 |
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WOW! Great write here Patricia.
Glenna |
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| Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza |
3/17/2003 |
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| good write dear poet. when the ship sinks, so does the captain. but in life, we all are survivors. |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
2/19/2003 |
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| Well written ! |
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| Reviewed by richard poor |
2/5/2003 |
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| sometimes we must commandere the ship...very good!!! |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
2/5/2003 |
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| A meaningful 'borrowing' from Mr. Whitman, indeed.. but that's not what this is about.. I took senior lifesaving as a kid.. you go under those waves, Tricia, I'm there! And now, I sit here weeping for the utter beauty and depth with which you have told this, I fear, auto-biographically. I cannot bear to think of you this sad. katy. |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
2/4/2003 |
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| graceful & heartrending |
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| Reviewed by Micha Julian |
2/4/2003 |
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oh, and the pain, such pain...still, my friend, so beautifully etched, flowing within your wondrous way, you...oh, just, well...the beauty so caprures those sightless eyes and the emptiness wrenched from one...love you so much, and always, your work, too!
mi
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
2/2/2003 |
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Excellent write
so good. |
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| Reviewed by Eileen |
2/2/2003 |
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| Excellent! well constructed! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/2/2003 |
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| silence can be golden ;) |
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| Reviewed by the phantom pheonix |
2/2/2003 |
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| My captain oh my captain I have just read a great poem!! great job!! Liked it alot! |
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| Reviewed by Marco Landi |
2/2/2003 |
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| very well done Pat. |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
2/2/2003 |
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2-02-03
Whence You Give Up . It You Are Already Dead!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Brittany Renée |
2/2/2003 |
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Very poetic, Patricia ;)
Warm Love,
*-Brittany-* |
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