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| Reviewed by Jerry Diamond |
10/16/2009 |
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Karen - Two Words
Hang Tough !!!
Jerry |
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| Reviewed by casey Donley |
9/2/2009 |
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| well placed feelings of the every day and those days that oush us to far I feel writting them placeing them all to see is the best relief I can tell you write from with in and your soul and essance is on every word Please review my work and let me know you sight on it thank you |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
8/11/2009 |
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| Expressing your feelings instead of letting them eat you up inside is always a good thing. Sorry to see your going through a rough patch. Hoping things are much better for you now and yes you will be in my prayers Always! |
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| Reviewed by Deborah Tornillo |
7/16/2009 |
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| You write from your heart and the deepest part of your soul. Your poems are wonderful and I look forward to reading your stories. Don't ever stop writing. Karen, you've made a fan out of me. |
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| Reviewed by E S |
7/11/2009 |
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| You are a good writer. Elijah |
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| Reviewed by Sharon Whitworth Daring Sunshine |
7/1/2009 |
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| You are holding up good and you both have the art of expression. God gave it to you to share!LOL! |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
6/28/2009 |
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| YOU EXPRESSED YOURSELF WELL...AND BECAUSE WE ALL, AT ONE TIME OR ANOTHER, HAVE 'BEEN THERE' - I CAN RELATE. I SEE FROM READING YOUR BIO THAT YOU HAVE THE 'ANTIDOTE' AND I KNOW BY NOW, 'HE' HAS STEPPED IN AND RENEWED AND STRENGTHENED YOU. YOU MAY NOT WANT TO ACKNOWLEDGE THE 'GIFT' OF POETRY THAT HE HAS PLACED IN YOU BUT I ACKNOWLEDGE IT AND I THANK YOU FOR SHARING IT IN THIS WELL WRITTEN 'STORY'. THIS PIECE IS FILLED WITH THE PHRASES, IMAGERY, RHYME AND RHYTHM THAT FLOW TOGETHER SO SMOOTHLY AND SUPPORTS YOUR THEME SOLIDLY. IT WAS DEFINITELY ENJOYED. GOD BLESS. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/27/2009 |
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| happy belated birthday! |
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| Reviewed by Sister Deborah Young |
6/23/2009 |
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| Lord, Karen, I'm so glad I stopped by (smile). I could feel you--with every word unraveled; I reflected upon some of my own challenges. But God is good--and you are a blessing!(smile) You shall be in my prayers... Yet, I found joy and release with each unraveling word, thanks. The Lord gave me a scripture,tonight, so I will share it with you. Romans 8:15, but, read down to verse 18 and be blessed (I did). Lots of Love Sis (smile) P.S. It may be 2009, more than 2 years later, yet your testimony(poem)--is still a blessing to the soul (smile). |
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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
6/15/2009 |
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Oh Karen that poem is so, so real. You just don't know
how effective your stories and poems are!!! Today this
poem is so refreshing to me, you are not alone, keep on
writing your stories, and your poems. Harvest time is here
for you, you will reap the harvest!!! God bless you Karen
and thanks for all that you do!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORKS!! |
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| Reviewed by jing javier |
6/15/2009 |
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| hi karen.. just checking on my friends in AD...You may not be a real poet but your writings are great... :) smile! |
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| Reviewed by Eileen Granfors |
6/5/2009 |
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| Your poetry is fine and I love the way you have capsulized the way all of us get now and then. Thank the Lord for our pets! e |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
6/4/2009 |
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It's easy to read the stress, and feel it, in your words Karen. It's at times like this we must breathe deeply and direct our thoughts to the important things in life.....family, friends, a loving pet. Well done!
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
4/19/2009 |
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| The Robert Frost website says that some of the best poetry starts with a cry. I think this qualifies, Karen! I'm facing a trial myself but I've come to the realization that my worrying will neither help nor change the situation. One step at a time/One day at a time and learning to live in the moment really help. Besides when you are anxious about a problem, there's no way you can think of a creative solution. But by all means first get that scream out! That will give you the adrenaline you need for the challenge. Prayers are thoughts with wings--that I can do, you got 'em. When I'm feeling especially vulnerable, I try to channel my sister Cheri's strength. It's almost like having her here to give me a pep talk. "Chin up!", that's what she would say...Lin |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
4/11/2009 |
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Not a poet? But you had me nodding, relating to that feeling of being overwhelmed by life's curve balls. After 3 years of solid bad luck, I sometimes wonder where all the good luck lands...lol. The least we can do is find a minute to write and let it all out. It does keep us sane. Stay strong! Love and Hugs,
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| Reviewed by Stephanie Murray |
3/28/2009 |
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I liked the honesty of your poem. Everyone can relate to stress. I hope your situation improves.Wishing you well, always.
Stephanie |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
3/23/2009 |
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For a brat that doesn't write poetry (according to the author) I see nowhere in AD, that had 115 reviews of a single poem.
Feeling Stressed is the end or beginning of an author so full of inspiration than the writing flurry will overwhelm the spirit trying to write all at once. That's no stress, that's literary divinity!
Georg
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
3/21/2009 |
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You have a lot of support here.
TC,
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
3/16/2009 |
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| Your a great poet your writing is wonderful sweet lady and that picture it rocks ..(I think I look like that a lot of times).LOL..never stop what your heart wants to do keep smiling OK..Hugsss..stay safe and well.. |
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| Reviewed by Suzie Palmer |
3/9/2009 |
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Dearest Karen,
This poem is brilliant!
Spoken so clearly from your heart to ours!
I understand the physical challenge side of things, and the inconvenient moving apartment difficulties.. Good luck with all that... It'll work our for you and your sis!!
Biggest love to you and Karla... blessed to have such love in each other!
And thank you for sharing your heart through this well-crafted heartfelt, real life poem!
Love and Hugs, Suzie :-D |
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| Reviewed by Liz Cosline |
2/25/2009 |
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| Poems are for feelings released a little. have a good one. |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
2/14/2009 |
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I can only pray that life has changed to the better for you and Karla.
Now, girl...waddaya mean your not a poet? I've enjoyed every one of your poems, so I hope you get back at this poetry writing and not be critical of yourself :o)
Blessings and Love - Micke |
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| Reviewed by randy smith |
2/14/2009 |
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| karen, i wasn't a poet untill i had to have brain surgery! that was a crock. but GOD knew what he was doing.now i share the poetry. and am amazed at the responce. go ahead and write. it will help clear your mind, and eaze your soul. it is ok to scream sometimes. God bless. randy |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
2/10/2009 |
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| You don't necessarily have to be a poet to pen such intense emotion. It reads like a giant scream...a release of pent up frustration and stress, not only for yourself, but for your sister, as well. I imagine there are many of us who empathize and completely understand some of, if not all of, these feelings. Intense and a great release. I hope things have improved since this was written. Sending hugs ~ Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry, R.C. |
1/20/2009 |
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You know, sweetheart, I don't know if SSD denied you just once or more. But, know this, I was denied twice; so, all that was left was to request a hearing before the SS judge. A total of 2 years was consumed by the time I went to court: the Judge was irrate that I had been denied twice and approved my claim on the spot. AND, he was so angered that he also decreed that he did not want my case reviewed for 7 years (normally 1 year when a court has to make the approval). Well, 7 years from that date and I would be 65: no review! LOL!
When I first applied I was like you, on welfare. They provide the SS facilitator, who told me that, despite the fact I clearly could not work and their own doctors had agreed, I likely would not get approved with the first or even the second application. His reason: "If you were an alcoholic or drug addicted AND depressed, you would get approved immediately." He was right! Seems it pays to be dishonest. But, I know you won't, just like I didn't. Just push it to the limit and a judge surely will rule in your favor! Even though it took two years, when I was approved SS had to pay me back retro to the date of first application!
Oh. . . and you are a poet! :)
Luv and hugs, BonnieQ
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| Reviewed by Sandra Corona |
1/15/2009 |
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Honey, it's not the form with which you write that captivates us, it's the honest expression of emotion. You draw us because you confide in us :)!
Thanks for allowing us to be part of YOUR life, Dear.
God bless and scooch over, please, I feel a scream coming on too :)!
Sandy |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
1/13/2009 |
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Your writing is a breath of fresh air. You don't gloss over the truth, making it all gooy and prettified. I've been there for more years than I thought necessary but God disagreed with me on that. Yes it is hard to live a life with disabilities, been on a disability pension since 1994. What year are we doing now!
Blessings and prayers too. J'nia |
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| Reviewed by * Starman * * |
1/8/2009 |
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Poetess,
How do we see the light at the end of tunnel? By adjusting our focus to things we can control. See the hand coming down to help you? It the Master's. And all of us are crowding around to you to help pull you up from the pit. Love you! Love your poetry.
Our stories and articles don't get the same reviews, because they don't have the musicality and rhythm of the poetry, and it takes more effort for people to read and stay interested in something it takes more 5.5 seconds it takes to read like your wonderful poems. We are all stressed too. But we need you! Come on now, Karen Lynn.
Give us smile, and turn that frown upside down.
TO MY FRIEND, KAREN. YOU ARE NOT ALONE! The reviews and stats on this poem prove it!
Rockie Coppolella
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
1/4/2009 |
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Dear Karen,
True grit, straight from the heart. This poem tells a true story that we all experiece from time to time. A great write that all should hear.
Happy New Year!
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| Reviewed by kg cummings |
12/30/2008 |
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| sux huh? I don't think so! I read this with a quick rap beat and you could top the charts with this one! It's so real and relatable. Your friend, Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
12/22/2008 |
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You've captured 'stress' to a T.
I will keep you in my prayers, Karen!
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| Reviewed by Linda Settles |
12/19/2008 |
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This write is hilarious--because, as they say, "if the shoe fits" and it does--it fits us all from time to time. I am so glad I stoped by your den. How could a poem that you say sucks made me feel so much better? Maybe because you (in your poem) are in a worse mood that me right now. LOL
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| Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry |
11/29/2008 |
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wow - you do get the reviews!
why you are a texas tornado - now sock it to those barking wolves.
and, karen - i'll keep you in my prayers as well as your sister.
great pen on stress and day-to-day foibles of living.
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| Reviewed by Carol Surber |
10/19/2008 |
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| Your a poet...and don't know it! |
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| Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain |
10/10/2008 |
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Hello Karen Lynn,
My dear friend you write poetry very well and I frankly enjoyed this piece very much. I hope your officials can help you with the disability checks and other benefits, but it seems the money went
tothe bailouts fist. I pray that God will bring someone in to bless you and offer a place for decent shelter soon. Don't lose hope,
the answers usually come at the last minute and it will be a downpour of blessings as you keep trusting God for all the burdens. He is Faithful and has never failed to keep HIS word. (Did you know I have the gift of prophecy?)
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
10/10/2008 |
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Every day stress comes in some form or fashion.
I cling to James 1:2
Knowing God's up to something
He has never made a mistake.
God knows you better than you know yourself.
And everything He ever does to you or for you is pefect and right.
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| Reviewed by Robert Sheridan |
10/10/2008 |
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Karen,
Splendid writing - you have a wonderful poetic talent which is truly beautiful!
Hugs,
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| Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald |
10/9/2008 |
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How very often I feel this way myself. I think stress is something all can relate to. This is a very well written poem and I know it came from your heart.
hugs
Kathy Lynn |
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| Reviewed by Susie McCray |
10/2/2008 |
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| I love your poetry and your stories, you are great at both. Hope you and your sister get a chance to relieve some of your stress. |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
7/30/2008 |
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I hope the move to the apartment might help. I myself am moving to low income apartment since fuel is so high for trailer in Aug 16th. Keep your move happy and you will be content as I shall too. Glad for this story, I feel stressed out lots and have to handle it too.
Great writer************ |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Huffaker |
7/5/2008 |
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Hug!
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
5/16/2008 |
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| Karen Lynn, this is wonderful poetry. Full of raw emotion and one of the stories of living day to day life. Excellent poem. I did not know you were Karla's sister, far out! She's a very special lady too. And another excellent poet. But even more, she's a real humanitarian. A compassionate person. May peace be with you always. JMW |
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| Reviewed by Katie Gabrielle |
2/25/2008 |
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I can really relate to this poem and I took the liberty of
copying it down and putting it up on my refrigerator
to remind me that I am not alone!!
thanks so much for sharing this powerful poem!!
I have a new story up also...if you have a few can you
review it for me...no one seems to want to review it and
I am curious if it is any good!
do you ever feel like that
I get stressed over my writing
thanks
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
2/9/2008 |
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| Keep looking up my friend, please don't stop writing, you're too good. You and Karla are in my prayers. I found when you turn everything over, God burst through with unbelievable joy. He's your father Karen and he loves you. Love and hugs, Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by Patricia Burden-Evans |
12/13/2007 |
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You are so right! I feel what you have felt because you wrote this a while ago! However, I know the feeling! By the way, you are a poet and hopefully now you know it! :) |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
10/29/2007 |
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you are some one who is well loved here and your pain is felt, all around, all over the den I wish there was something like all who loves you here i could do to help ease your pain I will keep you in my prayers and even though this was written so long ago i really hope you continue writing....you wrote this poem and many others you are a poet and a writer a friend and a sister from what i know about you your also a great human being too many bad things happen to the good ones but do hold on and whenever i see you on the story board i'll visit ;)
hope your feeling much better when you get this
Much love and peace
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| Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart |
10/28/2007 |
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Wonder why I hadn't heard from you in a while, Karen. Hope you're doing better these days.
By the way, you ARE a poet. I don't see anything here that sucks. |
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| Reviewed by R.D. Pounds |
10/25/2007 |
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So sorry you're going through this...your words express it all very well! Hope things look up for you soon.
Hang in there, please.
Gina |
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| Reviewed by Walter Jones |
10/20/2007 |
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| First the write, clever adn filled to the brim with every sound given in form and rant, enjoyed, second, prayers are there for you both.. Walt |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
10/14/2007 |
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| Stress...we all experience it and live with it on a day to day basis. You described it beautifully! |
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| Reviewed by . ignis |
10/12/2007 |
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The indifferent and senseless who exploit and abuse the innocent will be punished severely. Had they known what type of retribution is in store for their ignorant acts they would have never thought of behaving the way they do. The innocent live under the wings of the angel of Light, the wicked in the shadows of the dark - even if now it is not perceivable to blinded eyes. Stay strong and take care,
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
10/10/2007 |
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| Ya know, I think I've figured it out. Sometimes we readers need a quick fix. We turn to poetry--the ultra condensed read with all the vitamins and nutrients of the prose, but with a much more intense flavor. You can read it out loud, chew on each word separately, swish it around in your mouth and savor the flavor. However, when time allows, a great full-meal story is always good. Don't get down-hearted.--Charlie |
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| Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner |
10/10/2007 |
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| Wow sounds like my work day :). Although very nice wording and well written. Hope it gets better. |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell (author) |
10/7/2007 |
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Wow, sounds like you two need a miracle, I'll pray for you both. All my love.
Janet xoxoxo |
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| Reviewed by Todd-Michael St. Pierre |
10/3/2007 |
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| boy oh boy, have I felt this way before! |
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| Reviewed by Beverly Medley Jones |
10/3/2007 |
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Karen, you are such an inspiration. When I think life is stressful for me, I can be encouraged by what you have overcome. Keep looking up! God is on your side.
Beverly |
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| Reviewed by Jennave Coz |
9/26/2007 |
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| My Dear, You are a diamond,This is just one of many beautiful facets...You are in my prayers,Do be well.Jen |
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| Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon |
9/22/2007 |
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Thank you for your kind remarks. I have missed all of you. This past year was tough for me too. Losses, hard time at work, going through some medical stuff...know what you mean!
Love,
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| Reviewed by Donald Beaulieu |
9/20/2007 |
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| May be your not a poet, at heart, but you heart snuck out anyway and the poem is still very good. I tend to believe that a work is good because it moves the reader to do something - like feel, understand and at the very least, empathise. Your poem does all three. |
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| Reviewed by James Pajot |
9/16/2007 |
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Very emotional words. Sometimes life just doesn't play fair...but we who write have a release valve that many others do not...I have noticed that very few folks read short stories...I confess I am as guilty much of the time...guess they take longer to read? Wish you all good things, M'Lady, and hope that they will find their way to your door soon.
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| Reviewed by Gwynita Leggington |
9/12/2007 |
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| Wow! You are a wonderful poet....This poem was very well written. I pray that all is going well for you in your life. Take care! |
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| Reviewed by Peter Adotey Addo |
9/11/2007 |
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| What a beautiful and creative writing ... One can relate easily with your work and you have a real nack fot the words you chose to convey your thoughts... |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
9/8/2007 |
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| All I can say is to HANG IN THERE! Better days are bound to happen!!!........M PS, you wrote a pretty good poem for a non poet...........M |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
9/6/2007 |
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Just found your poem. While it's been months since you posted it, I trust that the stress you and your sister had been under is greatly diminished, if not gone. Regardless, I will keep you both in my prayers.
I know God doesn't give us more than we can handle, but dog-gone sometimes I've felt like I must be like Atlas [the world on my shoulders]. Your poem genuinely tells us that you, too, have the weight of the world on your shoulders.
I pray that God gives you the strength, tenacity and wisdom to get you through these trying times.
Blessings to you, both,
Kathy
PS - for saying that you are not a poet, you done GOOD! |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
9/3/2007 |
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| Not in a million years would I agree with you. Your poetry does not suck my dear; you have much to offer everyone! Love Holly |
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| Reviewed by Mary Coe |
8/30/2007 |
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The picture goes with the poem very well. You are a very good poet.
Your picture got my attention, and your poem keep it through every line, from beginning to end. Very well penned. |
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| Reviewed by David Young |
8/21/2007 |
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| Your writing has such deep emotions that it rants in its beauty. Just like you, I bare my feelings in frustrations of raw words that have to vent poetry in every beat of every word. Keep the Artmosphere blossoming in how special you are. |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
8/9/2007 |
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| What on earth else did you want to say in that wonderful poem, you said it all just beautifully, without a twinche of bull, it's so honest and real to life, that the message comes through loud and clear. I send prayers on the wings of an eagle to you and your sister. Hugs Jasmin Horst. |
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| Reviewed by Tavia McDowell |
8/7/2007 |
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Judging by the date of this poem, I hope what had you stressed out is past you and everything is okay.
You're in my prayers.
Tavia. |
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| Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi |
7/24/2007 |
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We'll do that, for sure. You are summing up what life can be -and most of the time is, at least to many- with a rage that gives a feeling of relief even to the reader. I can appreciate every bit of it. You're in no way alone with these experiences.
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
7/21/2007 |
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Karen sometimes it helps to express what you are bottleling up insid, let go of the stress, my mom use to say something will turn out and it is usally for the best, you just don't see it right now, and yes I agree you are a wonderful writer and that goes for all your words you put on paper. Thanks and keep smiling.
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| Reviewed by richard poor |
7/19/2007 |
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| you are a writer,and you do write poetry...very good poetry...and it did help ya stress didnt it? it helped mine. |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
6/27/2007 |
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Hi Karen,
Honey you are a good poet, and very good story teller. You write from your heart, and from your personal experiences, and give us something to melt our hearts, because of the tenderness you put in your stories, and in your sometimes poems. Tenderness yes, but with a fierceness, telling the world that disabled people are humnan beings with feelings, and complex thoughts.
I only hope you can bring yourself to write more poems. Poems of the disabled, and the plight in life they face.
You are a wonderful and loving person, Karen, and I know I haven't been reading your stories lately, but now I can finally say my book is almost finished, and I can devote more time to reading and reviewing. I consider you my sister, Karen, and when my sister hurts, I hurt.
Stay strong Karen Lynn Vidra, because it is in our strength that we can heal.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and keep you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your loving sister, Barbie |
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| Reviewed by James Wright |
6/27/2007 |
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Karen, you are a poet and don't know it. (smile)
If you will allow me a cliche; it is always darkest before dawn.
Your poem grabbed my attention and held me there. What you are feeling we have all felt it in one form or another. God knows how much we can bear and will allow us to be stressed out just so far, after that comes His abundant blessing. |
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed |
6/26/2007 |
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Hang in there Sistah! And stop saying your poetry sucks. . . If God brings you to it He will bring you THRU it!
love and hugs and a slap up side the head for denouncing the gift of writing our Lord gave you, and only you. So write, write, write. Have you read the stuff by so-called award winning writers and poet laureates of the past?
"Wonder sometimes what those folks be smokin'" as some of my older relatives used to say!
The devil is a liar, so knock 'im out in Jesus name!
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| Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme |
6/22/2007 |
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Hi Karen...just popping in to visit old AD friends and enjoyed this poem.
Susan
myspace.com/happyscribbler |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
6/20/2007 |
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You have always written great stories, but you cannot deny you have been writing poetry for all the time I've read you...they are fantastic inlets of who and what you are inside...a beautiful human being full of the same emotions and many of us have shared the frustrations in life as well. That is something you must realize is the best part of who you are...being able to relate these things we all feel.
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| Reviewed by High Country Girl |
6/15/2007 |
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Im with Michelle on this one, I must of been offline when this went through.
AU CONTRAIRE, to the "Im not a Poet"
You have wonderful skills in this area, and so to hone them would be a great release to you, mentally and spiritually.
Keep em coming Karen, and I am hoping by now your situation has been rectified, if not then my thoughts and prayers are with you.
Much love and blessings to you, Your Friend in OZ Ch'erie xxxxx
U too Karla honey. |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
6/14/2007 |
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Karen I do not know how I missed this, but I am praying for you now and always, keep on keeping on
God Bless
Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
6/6/2007 |
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An excellent powerful write Karen
love & peace
William
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
6/6/2007 |
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Hey Girl....
Richards post was right on...
like any good author....If you want to know about me...don't read me....read my reviews
Walt |
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| Reviewed by George Thompson |
6/2/2007 |
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Karen,
How expressive!! I've only read and reviewed ONE of your poems yet I feel a kindred spirit with you. God blesses all His children. When you get a chance, look at my poem, "Jesus Is My Brother," and let me know your feelings.
Thanks,
George |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
5/31/2007 |
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| In my prayers dear friend powerful writing! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
5/25/2007 |
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| This is an excellent poem and every body has bad days. I went through a time before I was "granted" disability. Hang in there. I had to get a lawyer. and yes, you will be in my prayers.LIz |
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| Reviewed by Keith Rowley |
5/19/2007 |
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Karen - people have made good money from lyrics like this (and ususally lack the authentic flavor you impart)- I think it's rap (yes, RAP, not *rap!!!) - feel the beat!
Write on Karen - a lot of people care about you. |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
5/18/2007 |
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Sad, but your strong enough to over come this.
Seems a lot of authors care about you, so I
know it's easier said than done, but cheer up.
Lurve ya!
ron |
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| Reviewed by Southern Comfort |
5/16/2007 |
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| You are so ADORABLE! We all get the downy-dumps, it is all part of the life cycle. It sure aint no picnic, put we just got to keep on keepin on, draggin our weary tails behind us! You write excellent poetry, a true joy to read! LOVE YA! SC |
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| Reviewed by Sandra Ferrara Gentry |
5/16/2007 |
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You are not bad at all! I enjoyed it. Been there, done that myself. Written from the inside out, one can never go wrong. If some do not like, it is because they cannot relate. God bless you. Keep writing, it is after all, therapeutic :)
Sandi |
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| Reviewed by Spirit Warrior |
5/16/2007 |
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Wow! and you think your not a poet...all of my best works have been born out of frustrations!!! And would you LOOOOOOOOOK at all those reviews! They took me over a half hour to read...43 and counting! Let me tell you a little something about frustration...I've been beaten,stabbed,shot at,run over,inprisoned for something I didn't do,cheated on by every woman iv'e ever been with!,my only child in this world taken out of my life, near death more times than I care to remember...but there was a lesson to be learned! I had to learn to give it all to God, because if I didn't well...Remember you Are A Child of God, the battle is already won, you don't have to fight it Thanks be to Jesus Christ our Lord and Savior! Pick yourself up brush those feet off...take a break if need be...I did for awile...(not too long tho O.K.) Keep smiling your a beatiful woman! No weapon formed against us can prosper! Use your trials as stepping stones...then in the end you will have rattled his bones (satan). You can do it girl!
Hey go check out "The Dance of all Dances" a poem posted yesterday now that will deffinately lift anyones spirits!
Chin-up,Shoulders-Square,Close-Ranks,No Enemy-Spare! Your in the Lords Army never forget that!
Father God: I thank You oh Lord, for sending Your Son Jesus to die on that Cross and shed His Blood to cover our sins oh Lord, and for showing Your Power thru-out this universe when You raised Him up from the grave. Father, I thank You that because of this I have the right as a grafted in member of Your Family, I can come to Your Throne Boldly, yet humbly, and ask oh Lord, that You would Touch these women "right now" Lord, in the mighty Name of Jesus, Touch them, heal them Lord, and disperse their fears and troubles, Give them Peace of mind oh Lord, and Joy and Love to fill thier Hearts, in Jesus Name -Amen
God Bless & Keep Smiling -Spirit Warrior
P.S. Your poetry is GRRRREATT! |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
5/14/2007 |
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hummmm...methinks you should write poetry more often.
Was rambling about in here this afternoon and ran across this gem.
Tis a grand flow of thought about the ups,downs and frustrations that life flings at us with abandon. You handled it well kiddo. |
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| Reviewed by angelina neves |
5/14/2007 |
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| Oh! How can you say that! It is poetry and poetry is about feeling and as we feel! And here we really feel what you feel, (almost, as we can never be real inside another) and can relate to it and with the life experiences we have
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there are some days just to forget! Any how if you put it down in paper they get over quicker, I think! And whishes that today will be a really lovely day to you, angi |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
5/13/2007 |
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Bless your heart! I hate that all this is happening to you and Karla.
No one deserves good luck more!! It is very smart of you to let the anger, frustration, and sadness out so they don't keep building up inside. Shout to the [leaking] rooftop, girl!! Get it ALL out !!! Praying with all my heart for better days for you. UPs from this day forward!!!! Love always, and then, Pea Hooluvzyoo Tunz xoxoxoxoxoX
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
5/12/2007 |
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Hi Karen:
My prayers are with you and Karla! I'm so sad to learn about this.
Your emotions and frustrations are well-expressed in this piece.
Sandie May Angel :o( |
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| Reviewed by Somali Community Access Network SomaliCAN |
5/11/2007 |
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| I feel bad about your level of terrible stress combined with the ellergy season. I hope Karla gets well soon. You are strong ladies. Never dispair. Don't underestimate your abilities. Thanks. Jibril |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/10/2007 |
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I haven't been around for awhile. I can feel your emotions through these verses, Karen. I hope things are better now. Amour et paix, ton ami de la C-B, Canada,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Henry Lefevre |
5/3/2007 |
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Hi Karen:
They say "life isn't fair.," but it is the only option we have. Fair or not, it's better than the alternative.
Vaya con Dios,
Hank |
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| Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore |
5/2/2007 |
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| Done. Your friend in San Marcos. :) |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lynn Plaisance |
5/1/2007 |
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I like your poetry!! I enjoyed the read. Wishing you much PEACE, my Sha~!~ Know that you are loved!
Mary Lynn Plaisance
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
4/28/2007 |
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| And you keep in me yours. Glad you wrote a poem. I needed to commiserate. :-) Your poetry's fine with me, Karen. ~~Nordette |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
4/28/2007 |
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| Karen you are a great poet, this was excellent. No phony review, truth and fact. Quit saying you're not a good poet. And don't quit praying, the devil wants you to quit praying. Pray on, thats all we have is prayer, God has a blessing somewhere for you and Karla. Praying keeps the door open, some blessings are very small but equal big, some times we just have to open our eyes wider. You have a blessing right now right under your nose, just look deep and keep praying and it will be revealed. Love One |
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| Reviewed by * Aberjhani |
4/28/2007 |
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Being multi-talented is, I think, a good thing. Just like letting out a good scream of a poem every now and then:-)
Aberjhani |
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| Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten |
4/28/2007 |
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"He who hath begun a good work in us will perform it until the day of Jesus Christ" You and your sister have surely done this to many, your good works...keep plugging along and watch his good tidings appear...do not despair! For we are NEVER alone!
You are more than any poet, more than any story author, you are a daughter of the Almighty God himself, and with that and His gifts bestowed upon you, He shines through! What more do we need?
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~ |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
4/27/2007 |
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My dear Karen, your poem is sad and filled with discouragement, which I sincerely hope will pass very soon. I pray things will fall in place for you. Sometimes I think God tests our patience, fortitude and strength to see how we will handle situations, and with all the prayers I hope you will find an answer.
I disagree with you about your statment that you are not a poet. "Feelin' Stressed" touched me considerably and the emotion is one of its main ingredients as well as the ideas that are expressed so well.
You are in my prayers and many blessings to you.
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| Reviewed by Theresa curnow |
4/27/2007 |
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| Hi Karen. I'm not a poet either! We should form the non poets society.lol. Seriously, your poem seems fine to me and its given you an avenue for your stress which is a good thing. Don't be too down. Remember, frowns give you wrinkles and when you smile, you could make someone else happy too. Stay positive. Love Theresa. |
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| Reviewed by Huda Orfali |
4/26/2007 |
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You and Karla are in my prayers
Hope that you won't feel stressed any more
love and peace |
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| Reviewed by Evelyn Simon |
4/25/2007 |
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| Oh Karen, don't let it get you down. The reason why you and your sister are feeling this way, is because God is opening you-two up for a huge blessing. Life becomes harder, when God is getting ready to bless you big. Let us know when God reveals this blessing to you, okay. :o) |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
4/25/2007 |
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sorry to hear things have been so awful.......
you are indeed a poet t ho
i have a thought.....
on the internet there must be writing sites that specilize in stories, i know AD is more of a poets haven
at least we poets participate tons that is
but are there sites like that you could join.......for m ore feedback???
pax a |
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| Reviewed by d. krusky |
4/23/2007 |
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I must say your true feelings have come out very well in this piece. That is a good sign my friend. I agree with Richard in that we have all been concerned for you. The stories just weren't coming and it has been noticed.
Some days you just have to say, "Life sucks," then pull yourself together and keep on truckin'. If anyone can do this, it would be you. Stay strong!
Thinking of Karla also!! Will keep her in my prayers!
Smiles,
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
4/21/2007 |
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Life's a training ground for your future work, Karen. And boy are you gettin' an education!
Did you happen to notice that in only a couple of days you have over
twenty members of the den expressing their opinion of your work and their concern for you and your sister?
I left a review today at a den where the author has posted a total of three poems and there were only two other reviews. Total. The den was opened several months ago.
Karen, admit it or not, you're right in the thick of things. The responsibility of getting your life and housing on the right track
may seem overwhelming at the moment, but I have no doubt in my mind at all that things will change. Soon.
You know, a number of these reviewers below will be praying for you. And when God thinks you've had enough training in this category, things will change. We just want to edge him along with our prayers.
And a poet? Poetry is simply a lovely means of communication. And you have certainly communicated with us. And very effectively, Ms.
Poet. So, you can suck all you want about your poetry, but your opinion is not what matters when it comes to communicating in verse;
our opinions--the receivers and reviewers--will decide. And we have.
They share my opinion: Your words move me!
Let me leave you with my bio page words: "What I focus upon becomes reality. I have the power to choose."
Based on my earlier life, I'm practically on a first-name basis with God. I will be praying for you tonight, Karen. God listens to me.
Be patient and focused and watch what happens.
Bless you,
Richard
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) |
4/21/2007 |
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So sorry, lady, about those stresses you and Karla are facing!
God grant you both some peace of mind.
And YOU ARE TOO a poet...so there. |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen |
4/20/2007 |
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| You got your point across, so I'd say that you are good! All of your writing is from your heart and touching. |
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| Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia |
4/20/2007 |
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STANDING O!!!!!
Karen, you are actually a very GOOD poet! Continue to flex that part of you, would you?....I believe you have just barely tapped, into that true reservoir inside of you!
You could always put your journalings into rhyming form, you know! What a neat twist that would be!
Maybe The LORD is TRYING to get you to do a NEW thing. been there lots of times, and it is usually very frustrating, until I "get it".
Anyhow, please know, this is very good!
Remember, things get the worst, right when they are about to get better. No matter how it LOOKS, keep praising Him!
Love&Hugs, Rhonda
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| Reviewed by Virginia Tolles |
4/20/2007 |
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| Very well expressed, although I disagree. You ARE a poet (You just don't know it). You know, some days, I don't think we're supposed to write. On those days, it's better to find something else to do. Seek a different environment. Get out of the house. Or even stay in but do some physical work - like dusting and vacuuming. That tends to clear away the mental cobwebs as well as the ones in the corners. Sometimes, you'll even receive inspiration for what to write next! In fact, quite often, that happens. While praying on those days, don't forget to send Satan back into his corner. "Begone, Satan! I'm the Lord's child. I have no room for you and put-down attitude in my life." Believe it or not, it really works! |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
4/20/2007 |
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It's wonderfully writen. The advice a yanky friend in the same position was told that if creditors ring, ignore them... So she has a phone and a voice thingy so she can hear who is calling..
Not sure if that's good or bad advice, but I don't know the yanky law.. Go out get drunk, don't be affraid and go and get......a burger..lolo |
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| Reviewed by Pier Tyler |
4/19/2007 |
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Get it out, it's good to write about it. You need a change of scenery. You've got a great vehicle...writing. You can travel places with your pen. You need one character, a strong one, write about it, to help absorb your stress. You are a wonderful storyteller and poet, claim it. I've got you and Karla in my prayers.
Cheer up, keep writing,
Hugs Pier |
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| Reviewed by Patricia Eichler |
4/19/2007 |
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Wow Karen, there is so much feeling coming out of this poem. I think that's why others want to read your poetry. I haven't read any of your writings lately. I don't know if you have tried writing stories instead of letters. If you haven't, you might try doing that. If you could write a story with as much feeling as your poetry, you might get more readers.
I understand the part about not having enough money. My husband and I have been loaded down with hospital and doctor bills. This all can be very frustrating.
I will keep you and your sister Karla in my prayers.
Love,
Patty
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/19/2007 |
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I was surprised to see you on the poetry boards. Sorry your mood was so low, hope it has improved. I'm keeping you both in prayer and know you are both strong in faith.Bless you Karen, stay well! Have faith He will supply your needs in His time.
Love,
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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
4/19/2007 |
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YOu BOTH are in my prayers!
When the dark clouds come up, sunshine is around the corner Karen!
I know... It hit here too, it must the Full moon!
Don't give up hope (story writing) something will break!
This was a great poem by the way!
There really is alot happening these days, Ppl moving, to smaller places, -( too much money going out for oil bills)
Kids proms, school is almost over!
Alot I tell ya'- and not alot of computer time expressing or reading!
Hang IN!
SMILE!
The world looks better - nomatter how hard, To you and Karla!
Good luck on your move, make it fun somehow, share a pizza and put on music!
That's what we did, when times were lean!
Stay Strong!
Stay Positive!
Warmly,Warrior PURPLE Lady Sheeeoox
P.s. On your disability, a lawyer, *(when won, will take out his sum) My daughter Jen's been there, and she needed disability for the seizures she goes through and being shunted/etc...
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/19/2007 |
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Been there done that the past week...keep the faith and KNOW that we LOVE you 2 OKAY!!
You and your sis are in my prayers
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
4/19/2007 |
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Karen, stating that you are or are not a poet is not like going church to confess your sins; for me, it's a state of mind, and you are a poet. In regards to what Ed said, I agree...give it both barrels.
This work is excellent, no other way to say it.
Be strong
Peace,
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
4/19/2007 |
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| I thought it to be pretty damned good for someone who is NOT. A. POET. PERIOD. Disability will come through eventually, keep pluggin' & when you fill out the paper work next time make it look like you are worse than you are...if the powers that be see the remotest chance that you are not as bad as you say, they will deny your application...hit with both barrels and then some...get what you deserve...! ED & Rufuz are both pulling for you and keeping you in our thoughts...e & R |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
4/19/2007 |
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| This is a great poem of your feelings Karen. Get yourself a good lawyer who can win your disability for you. |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone |
4/19/2007 |
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| Karen, don't fool yourself. There is nothing wrong with your poetry. In fact I always find feelings weave the best rhythm and rhyme, and amazingly the best ballets are written under duress. Write more poems as a break from your stories and let all the frustration pour out here. You need to read your own poem again because I think you are a good poet. Best of luck to both of you. Hope some sun shines for you. Lady J |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
4/19/2007 |
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Honey it's not the stories. It's not what they are about, or who wrote them. It's the fact that I have found this time of the year, most everyone is busier than a one legged line dancer. The kids are into every summer sport there is; The yard needs its extra attention; There are graduation plans to be made along with proms and prom dresses and suits. It's not the stories..it's the readers. Just keep writing. If not for the readers, do it for yourself. If you need a break? Take it! There aren't any deadlines around here. Just don't get lost! *hugs* We need you back, and you know we'll come looking for ya!! lol
If my not reading is a part of the problem I deeply apologize, it's just that I too have become extremely caught up in other things. I'm attending classes and trying to further my education and I just don't have the time right now, but I will read later on.
Just remember you girls are loved here in the Den!
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/19/2007 |
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(((Karen))),
Know how you feel. I'm screaming right along with ya. We'll get through, somehow, someway--we always do. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
4/19/2007 |
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Your poetic rant is very good - Scream On!
And we all hope and pray that things get much better for our two favorite Twinks. |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
4/19/2007 |
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I have enjoyed the reading of "Feelin' Stressed...". It is sad, but the composition is excellent.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
4/19/2007 |
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I enjoyed your poem very much my dear friend...your story telling shines through your poetry more than you know...you are a gifted and wonderful writer with much to offer the world. I will keep you and Karla in my prayers...remember God said He would not put anymore on us than we can bear...keep repeating that and before you know it, the sun will be shining again, and things wont seem as bad! Hang in there dear friend, know that you have friends and never lay your pen down, exercise your gift!
Blessings from the mountains of Kentucky,
Joyce Bowling |
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| Reviewed by J M |
4/19/2007 |
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You are not a sucky poet {{Smiles} This was wonderful writing always helps me to see things differently. keeping you both in prayers.
Blessings josie |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/19/2007 |
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No, your poetry does not suck. It is wonderful, refreshing, a peek a real life, not fantansy. The world is a stage Karen, waiting for you to create something wonderful, leave your mark!! Yes, always have faith, God will see you through, he always does.
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
4/18/2007 |
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How sweet you are to share these feelings with us. Hope things will turn out to be on your side. Thanks dear sister. Y
Your brother in Africa, Abdi-Noor |
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