|
| Reviewed by CJ Heck |
6/9/2011 |
|
Hello CJ, it's nice to read your work. This is a beautiful poem, a fitting and lovely tribute. Isn't it amazing how something as simple as a piece of warm bread can evoke the touching love you've written about here.
Hugs to you,
CJ |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
1/9/2011 |
|
| Excellent. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Carol Grace |
8/6/2009 |
|
| Much is said in the simplicity of the words. Well done |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Z McClure |
8/21/2008 |
|
Wow! ... profound depth to the most common things for those with eyes see! Mr. Stevens I felt this poem in my soul . Thanks for helping me to see.
-Zach |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
7/28/2008 |
|
| This touches the heart and senses |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
6/19/2008 |
|
| I love the nostalgic feel to this write. It reminds me of my grandmother, known for her homemade bread - dough needed with aged, tiring, rheumatic hands. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
5/25/2008 |
|
| Beautiful eulogy and remembering your Mother's warm bread should comfort you. I know many of the things my mother baked and cooked cannot be duplicated and taste as well as hers did. So she is with God in heaven and eating of the leaven. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell |
6/10/2007 |
|
Oh Sweetie, I do love this and I know that your Mom knows how much you love her. Very nice.
Janet xoxoxo |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
8/28/2006 |
|
Indeed mothers are etched into our very souls..never forgotten but sorely missed..
vesna:) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Leland Waldrip |
2/7/2006 |
|
Warm words, C.J. Thanks.
Leland |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Phyllis Du'Gas |
12/31/2005 |
|
| This says so much to me. Thanks. Happy New Year! |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Jeremy Vaeni |
8/31/2005 |
|
| Wow, you've really got a handle on the power of sparse imagery. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez |
6/6/2005 |
|
YES John,
I relate well to this great poem.
I long to say things to one so wonderful but is
no longer physically here.
Her spirit, my sister Sylvia's, is never far though
and at times she's very near!
Thank you for a great write!!
ALL THE BEST TO YOU',
Rich CRISO Suarez |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
4/26/2005 |
|
| This left me conforted- just like warm bread on a Cold day. Beautiful piece writting with ease. Thank you 4 sharing... She knows your feelings, you spoke them into the universe. Lady,Sheee |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
3/10/2005 |
|
| wow...very very good write...simple but excellent!!!! |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
2/18/2005 |
|
| This is warm and nice and full of the realization that so often we allow the good in our life to go unnoticed and unappreciated. Of course, there is also the other side to this coin, some aren't able to look back all that fondly. Good, very good poem. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/5/2005 |
|
| It is incredible how something so simple can elicit so much and you express that most effecitively in this poem. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
2/4/2005 |
|
*sigh*
so unexpected!!!
so sorry to hear
but she knows now for sure |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
2/4/2005 |
|
| This is splendid! I love the title also. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
2/4/2005 |
|
| this is so poignant...i need to quit writing and call my mother and say i love you |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by M. B. |
2/4/2005 |
|
| Oh this hurts. Yes, *Warm Bread* just reached in and squeezed my heart into a bloody pulp. I'm not sure I will be able to recover to finish this revie |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Carrie Deveney |
2/4/2005 |
|
| Wow...very moving in such a short piece. I thought it was very touching. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
2/4/2005 |
|
| You just reminded me to go and bake a loaf of bread. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Michelle Close Mills |
2/4/2005 |
|
| I've never read anything more simplistic that is so packed full of meaning. Beautiful words, beautiful sentiment. (Isn't this one in your book?) :-) Blessings to you CJ...Michelle |
|
|
|
Bookmarks
Share
Print
Save