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At the end of a thousand year old Anatolian empire, two warriors are dispatched on a desperate peace mission...

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commit by Sara J Cunningham Wednesday, April 13, 2005 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan the boy today said 'word chunks' to me on the phone. i wrote a poem.
a slow beating heart accelerates from fingers probing ribs i hit the floor on my back laughing pinned down shielding my neck high just from breathing "you cant go" but the going happens i confuse him he wants what inside to know it all persistantly persistant i allow access to places that shouldnt usually wouldnt be allowed i offer up word chunks and a few days later sentence and paragraph chunks and an understanding is reached if not a little too late but no matter waiting is ok as long as he knows eventually

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Reviewed by Regis Schilken	2/2/2011

Very nicely said, Sara. Inspiration for inspiration! rege




Reviewed by john zimmerman	4/14/2005

immediate and insightfull good write john+