Sunshine Personified
by David Lee Thompson
Thursday, January 13, 2011
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Sometimes it's fun to personify something without life that we cannot live without. |
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Sunshine Personified
The Venetian blinds were
Reduced to slits -
Yet somehow the sun’s beams
Squeezed their way through.
Afterwards they boogied
Across the stillness
Of my indoor world,
Pierced my snoozing eyes,
And warmed my spirit.
©2011 By David Lee Thompson
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| Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford |
1/14/2011 |
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| Lovely. Just lovely. I love poems that offer visuality. |
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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
1/14/2011 |
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These are wonderfully warming and insightful words David...and a perfect sequel to your last poem...I'm so glad the sunbeams found you and warmed your spirit!
Hugs, Diana... |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
1/13/2011 |
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Perceptive and beautiful...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by The Poetess |
1/13/2011 |
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| Gotta love the sun! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Schilken |
1/13/2011 |
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Nice words, David. Cannot help but move the spirit!
rege |
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