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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
5/4/2012 |
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| Love and true devotion can fill any void. Lovely work and heart touching thoughts. |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
4/22/2012 |
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| Music to my heart !! |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
4/18/2012 |
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The heart is but a marvelous pumping muscle. However, the mind can feel these emotions you so eloquently describe in ways even a scientist cannot figure out. Such as what you call, and I perceive as “heart.”
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
4/18/2012 |
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Poignantly engaging as you confront the missing pieces with passion and sensitivity. I love the choice of words, the voice soft and wise.
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
4/17/2012 |
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| there's actually a very serious tone to this. A directness. very much admire this poem. nice work. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/17/2012 |
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| your romantic query is top-notch and explores some very deep emotions and their potential conflicts as well as considerations ,,, |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
4/17/2012 |
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| A truly introspective poem. "however faint are the changes that the two of us should meet as we wander a field of dreams where reality fails to tread" ... sometimes there is great joy and comfort in that field of dreams, where in reality, most things are out of our control. Too bad we can not control our dreams at night, at least we would have the solace for even a little while. The heart is a tender organ, very tender. Beautiful poem. ~Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by T Jett |
4/16/2012 |
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| Beautifully expressed as only you can, Amor! So very true and deeply moving, my sweet friend! A warm aloha from my shores to yours ... |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
4/16/2012 |
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Our dreams center us they bring up deep emotions and feelings that we may never realize if we couldnt dream dreams are windows to which we can see our lives unfolding and inspiring us to fulfill our destiny.
Peace love and light
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
4/16/2012 |
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Beautifully crafted and soooooo romantic, Amor! Truly enjoyed this.
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
4/16/2012 |
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Wow, this is truly a deeply moving poem so meaningful and wonderfully written Laura
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/16/2012 |
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Splendid writing Amor! You are so right, and your last verse is perfect!
A poem to read and savor! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
4/16/2012 |
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| How this makes me sigh, Amor! Wandering a field of dreams where reality fails to tread breaks the tender blades of those desires that lie in wait and their sweet-smelling fragrance surely stimulates that impetus which then provokes them further. The heart is truth; it is a fallow bed that receives whatever is sown into it and judges not. It's warnings can be trusted and if love is genuine, each committed heart can bare to live out the truth it guilessly exposes. Fantasy and fiction are not the same and the heart knows which is which. But fantasy can be truth in waiting that we "dress up and play with" in the meantime. How your words make me wander... Awesome and beautiful. xx |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/16/2012 |
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Dreams are wonderful... ...and meaningful as well; and love is all! Thank you, Amor. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
4/15/2012 |
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Amor,
I personally feel as though our dreams are out of our control, but I also think they can play a small part in real life if we pay attention to them. I guess we should pay the same attention to warnings from the heart. Nicely penned. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
4/15/2012 |
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Amor,
your questions go well beyond the merely rhetorical,
they demand answers within us; here i read longing, fear,
challenge and hope..and love, great love
john |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
4/15/2012 |
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Lessons learned or to be...we are
who we are from where we have been
*Amor*
sometimes less traveled, sometimes
trampled, but always should be a new
journey in progress for heart reckoning
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
4/15/2012 |
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| In this writing I feel turmoil in conflict and confluence. It feels like a push-me-pull you . I like the clause, "as our feet sweep the tall grass leaving unseen obstacles underfoot." That contains so much potential of risk in all ways possible. Adventurous read that I find can touch many personal situations. ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
4/15/2012 |
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| Quite a lesson of life and what we can, and cannot, do about the path we walk and the decisions we must make. There is a lot here to mull and ponder, but basically the questions you raise are good questions and we can only hope how we answer them will chart our course for the good. |
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