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| Reviewed by Chris Vaillancourt |
9/14/2012 |
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| You painted this in a very beautiful manner right from the heart.. A great write..!! |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
5/14/2012 |
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How beautifully your words work together! Thank you for this poetic treat!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Ron Dondiego |
5/11/2012 |
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| You know, you were truly inspired when you wrote this gem. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
5/5/2012 |
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| This poem is everything Morgan said it was, and more. I like the last line rhymes very much. |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
4/30/2012 |
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| in my opinion this is romantic, downhearted, yet erotic and simply beautiful and grounded...luv this. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
4/29/2012 |
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Wonderful choice of words about magic in the heart ~
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
4/28/2012 |
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Treats by night dreams,
full steam ahead *Paul*
if the knock does not come!!!
for beauty of your sentiments!!!
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Tajwer khan |
4/28/2012 |
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amazing poetry!! very touching!!
love Tajwer Shaheryar |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
4/27/2012 |
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Truly a touching poem so heartfelt and beautifully written Laura
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
4/27/2012 |
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| Amazing poetry, I could feel the emotions that sweep the floor~ |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
4/26/2012 |
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| love in abeyance Paul? - its beat faint and we feel so distant - until the gloom ushers in a surprise that warms our need - this is an artful rendering that teases the emotions - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
4/26/2012 |
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Paul,
A very beautiful write.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
4/26/2012 |
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gentle, bittersweet and touching
i like this much, Paul
john |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
4/26/2012 |
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A beautiful write here, thank you for sharing this waith us, love it!!!
In Christs Love
Michelle! |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
4/25/2012 |
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This one was a beautiful tearjerker.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
4/25/2012 |
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Soft the dreams in pure surprise.
Beautiful write Paul. Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/25/2012 |
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"like soothing waves
licking the shore"
vivid image ... good poem ... |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
4/25/2012 |
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Beautifully written Paul, she can still surprise in soft dreams at night.
Rose |
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| Reviewed by Janna Hill |
4/25/2012 |
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Hope that love might show herself and ward off the gloom and chill...
I had to look out at the beautiful sunrise through a warm open window to remind me that it is not winter after reading this.
:) Janna |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/25/2012 |
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Well done, almost spiritually haunting feeling of romance in this one Paul. Like...
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