|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Wow on this one Felix, I sure would like to know who this is for. It's deep alright.
Love ya face Cuz Hugs XOXOXO Rose
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|they are everwhere here in cyber space
and the den is not immune to them...
is it a man pretending to be a woman?
or a woman pretending to be a man?
is it a married man revealing his gay secret?
well the lists are long & some are just pathetic
With Authenticity & Love
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|OK my mind went somewhere else with the title ;) LOL|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Bold, shivery and eloquent writing!
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|this, Fee, is tight rich writing of a high order
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|Tru e.....fool me once shame on you...true... Great write! Best wishes,neerja|
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Fee, I would wager most of us have met
someone like you have written about...Enjoyed!
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Deep....and yes this is 'self-explanatory', sometimes people are hand-made complicated (meaning by their own hand), makes me dizzy~
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|"Hiding behind guise of an angel....." How could we know the same person?
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Well crafted in image to verses Fee.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|I have said on many occasion that "pain makes the pen fly" but, in this instance, not only is this a masterly-crafted felt piece but is absolutely acute in its imagery and pin-pointing detail. I can sense the tautness of the cheeks that are pinched with the regret at having to articulate such pain, Felix. That last line, though an oft-used phrase, is heart-stopping due to where and how it is placed. How your big heart bleeds here. :(( Bless you, xx|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Nicely written, Fee; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :)
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Cleverly written and very meaningful as always great poetry Laura
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|and a guise it is...|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Amen! Nicely done, Fee...
|Reviewed by Richard King
|As you say, "All will face a day of reckoning" Unfortunately those who do the reckoning can often be bought, (at least until the day of that final reckoning.)
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
well done, I like your use of visions