Cheer to My Eyes
by * * Starman * *
Sunday, June 17, 2012
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I'd say it in caps, but yelling's not allowed. All my fellow writers you have made me so proud! |
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Undeniable postulate,
Computer wispy soul,
My childhood fantasy,
Entering a rabbit-hole.
Chasing clouds away,
Here a rainbow’s end,
Mad as hatters,
Hellos we send.
Hello, cyber-ghosts,
Invisibles never met,
A matrix types back,
Words of joy, regret.
A Waltzing Matilda's,
Ghost these maybe,
You’ve heard them,
But never’ve seen.
Matilda’s written review,
Spattered words saved,
Words perfectly formed,
Thus is poetry engraved.
These very well thens,
Cat-calling poets nice,
Once here, there twice,
Sometimes even thrice.
Though we’ve not met,
Still I am happy to say,
Yes it’s a heart matter,
That I love you today!
I’m a junkie for words,
This writer’s meme,
Onward on words,
‘Tis poetry for me.
Our general discussion,
Your words abounding,
Leaves me breathless,
Heart beat resounding.
Cheer to my eyes,
Gripping me mad,
The best feelings,
A poet ever had.
Magician’s rabbit hat,
Easter hippity Bunny,
Indescribable colors,
Jellybean day sunny.
Gives courage to try,
Don’t give up hopes,
Dreams top facts,
Special telescopes.
Undeniable postulate,
Ere our happy ending,
In poetry I see you still,
My telescope unending.
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/11/2013 |
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You did not need to write it in ALL CAPS; message got through loudly and clearly; thank you, Rockie. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/18/2012 |
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Managed to slip in a little bit of Alice in Wonderland there. Wonderful ravings.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
6/18/2012 |
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| Truly stunning work, Starman |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
6/17/2012 |
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| Well, regards stealling, I will put it as Bob Dylan did in song..."Everything is legal in Jersey if you don't get caught..." e |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
6/17/2012 |
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Starman,
So maybe I am a criminal after all, but I could live by the George Carlyn rule of life "If a cop didn't see it it isn't illegal". Enjoyed it very much.
Budd |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
6/17/2012 |
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Poetry is our claim to fame,
Be us wise guys or fantastic dames.
And we don't have to make it rhyme,
If we write free-style its no crime. |
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| Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks |
6/17/2012 |
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| Such a guy, such a poem, such writing, Oh my. Wonderful. |
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