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Vigilantly Comatose by John P. Donovan Wednesday, June 18, 2003 Share Print Save Become a Fan

The axis opens peripherly Seen as nebulous shaded lack Sight is but a blur known to Pavlov's Dog Schrodinger's act came from with in The outer inward needed simply and profoundly Physical fact Are we a collective of mind Are we Carbon based cracks Is the breath of life ours Proven beyond us without a doubt From commencement, nothing comes from nothing Tangibly we interact Superficially we reject Meet with the Maker He is close as a tree

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Reviewed by Axilea MU	7/1/2008

Very interesting work, I love the fragments of thought and knowledge and the way you put them together. The artwork and poem seem to interact effectively. Axilea




Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen	6/18/2003

Love the twists and turns in this piece, John, great opening line and wonderful mind-bending sense!! :)




Reviewed by Beth Elaine	6/18/2003

full of faith and intellect at the same time