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Recent Reviews for Deborah Ann Tornillo

Grief - An Ongoing Journey (Short Story) - 11/22/2009 8:08:29 PM
My Dad passed away January of 2009. It is hard to watch the last year I saw him slip away. After his passing I began to grieve both parents. For me it has been a process of finding them. I know it will always be an ongoing journey, and I will keep finding them and be happy for where it leads me. Blessings and prayers, John

Thanksgiving - Why I'm Thankful (Short Story) - 11/18/2009 6:39:27 PM
A moving and meaningful write, Deborah Ann. Thank you for sharing. Love and blessings, Regis

Rewards of a Caregiver (Short Story) - 10/19/2009 1:34:14 AM
enjoyed the read

Rewards of a Caregiver (Short Story) - 10/18/2009 3:47:36 AM
God bless you, Deborah! Heart touching write; well done! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Grief - An Ongoing Journey (Short Story) - 9/21/2009 2:48:06 PM
Dear Deborah , You have amazing strength ! You have been through so much and are giving back in such a wonderful way. Sharing your thoughts and feeling and a part of your parents lives,plus what you husband is going through, helps you and us too . It gives us a glimpse into the reality of life, death and how one can overcome emotional hardships with the help of God. I know love can transcend death ! The loss human presence is gone,but the spirit lives on. Please know you are never alone! Keep writing and sharing! You and John remain in my prayers,,, Love.....M

Grief - An Ongoing Journey (Short Story) - 9/18/2009 4:22:37 PM
I lost my wife February 9th of this year. She suffered for six months before release.

Wild Horses (Short Story) - 9/18/2009 7:40:22 AM
I think many find comfort in music of some kind. It helps to ease our burdens!....M

Wild Horses (Short Story) - 9/18/2009 5:48:03 AM
Is this the song Susan Boyle sang the other night on America's Got Talent?? If so, she did a fantastic job! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Request for Prayers (Short Story) - 8/29/2009 7:15:17 PM
I will pray for you and your family. I hope he is one of those they have found , and that he can be returned home to America and his family!Blessings....M

Every 70 Seconds.... (Short Story) - 8/29/2009 7:12:40 PM
This is a great informative write that gives much incite into the world of a person with Alzhiemers . Right now there are medications to delay its onset , but only for a while. I pray and look at articles written , hoping some type of medical break through will occur soon. They have to do something as more and more are being diagnoised with it. Its a scarey situation... A great write !!!!...M

God Held My Hand (Short Story) - 8/18/2009 4:14:08 AM
Dear Deborah. i can feel the pain that you write about. I also can feel the innerstrength that flows through your body into words . Every one dies differentl.I wa sa nurs eand workd many yearys in Geratrics. I liked my job and tried to give something of my self to make their lives a little brighter. Hospice is a wonderful organization and help in so many different ways. I sincerely believe that you were not ment to be with your dad when he passed away . (To every thing there is a reason , a time to live a time to die.)..Eclast.. in the Bible. You've grown and learned from all these life expierences. Sometimes a person womders how they'll get through it all! Putting your faith in God helps so much and he'll get a person through the really tough times in their lives..I wasn't with my dad either when he passed away, but I was with mom . Toward the end, I told her it was alright to go. She slipped quietly away, basically , she went to sleep and never woke up. She was lucky to go that way. Facing death is very hard to do and it does leave its mark upon ones heart. I think its how a person faces it , thats really important. We can't change the outcome , but how its done can be changed somewhat, by those involved at times.People need to die with dignity! Keep trying and never give up....M

Magic's Kingdom (Short Story) - 8/18/2009 3:51:28 AM
What a tender heartfelt write. It touched the depts of my soul. I like the way yuo incorporate d it into a story , thos its very sad. Time stops for no one . I believe evrey thing is predestined in life and we have to take the good with the bad. happy endings are not always an option. Thankyou for sharing A part of your life with us...M

Fear, Hope and Faith (Short Story) - 8/10/2009 11:44:22 AM
This write brought tears to my eyes as I read it. You have been through so much and a person wonders how they can keep going on and surviving one heartache after another. I think you might be depressed because of all the emotional trama you have been, and are going through.It happens to the strongest of us . There are some mild antidepressants that could help . Also the power of prayer. God is always there. I've found there is a reason for everything that happens, tho its hard to discern what it is when ones living through it. In the time that follows , it all becomes clear as to the whys and where fors .. I've been through a lot too and almost lost my faith when our little grandson lived with us and was dying.. It has a direct impact on one life and mind. I have suffered from depression since the 90s and took medication to help combat it. I'm in a good place mentally now.. Perhaps a pastor , friend or counselor could help you . You need someone to help bear the burden. Its hard to do it alone.. I'll pray for you and your husband. It must be very hard for him also.. Are your daughters old enough to understand and help in some way?.Writing is a great out let to release one inner emotions... You writing draws the reader in and holds their attention! Don't give up . Keep forging ahead and don't look back. You can't change what has happened , you can only go forward...Love...M

A Living Death (Short Story) - 8/10/2009 11:24:51 AM
Dear Deborah. This is a heart touching story ! I'm sure there is much you have left out, but its emotional and lets the reader know what has happened. I have done a lot of writing about Alzheimers on my den, as I am living through it. I will check out the web site and refer friends to it.Its wonderful that you are writing and speaking out about it. The more awareness , the better it is for everyone. I pray a cure will soon be found for the millions who have this. There is a genetic link in my family unfortunately. It must have been very hard for you to care for them and live through it also. Every one pays a price! You know you did the best you could for them and they are at peace now. As you said, your dad did well to care for your mom as long as he did. I have seen many married couples who die with in months of each other. Some times it just happens and thats the way its suspossed to be. Its all in Gods hands . Keep writing and sharing your thoughts and feelings with us. God Blees you...MaryGrace

The Beast (Short Story) - 7/16/2009 4:42:06 AM
Alzheimer's disease is one of the cruelest diseases known by mankind; I can't even begin to imagine caring for someone who has it! I am so glad you were there for your parents; God will reward you handsomely when you get to Heaven! Well done, Deborah; God bless you too! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Magic's Kingdom (Short Story) - 7/14/2009 10:02:08 PM
Somewhat sad, unusual topic, a great read would have liked to have seen a happier ending. Bern

God Held My Hand (Short Story) - 7/13/2009 5:36:12 PM
Deborah this is a very heart felt story and it is a powerful testimony God, Abba Gather being there with you each step of the way! I a am blessed and encouraged by this story. I am going to read more stories because of this one!! Love And Prayers Always!!

God Held My Hand (Short Story) - 7/9/2009 11:36:13 AM
Powerful write of hope admist chaos, confusion, and fear in the face of illness; well done, Deborah!

Fear, Hope and Faith (Short Story) - 7/7/2009 2:55:17 PM
You have been a loving and devoted wife, mother and daughter. During the painful and difficult times, you have been their ray of hope. Continue to be strong and be your husband's light. I know that your day seem dark now, but your future will hold a special gift for you. All of the love and support that you have shown for your parents, children, and husband will come back to you in a very good way. Although your husband is not the same as he was before as he has lost weight and is battling cancer, just remember that there is one thing that will never change....that is the love that you have for each other. Continue to love him and encourage him. That is the most precious gift of all. Also, God will never turn his back on you. He will listen to your prayers and will grant you the strength that you need. During this painful time, you might want to think about putting together a collage, or a group of pictures that will you and your husband to talk about the good memories or special times. He might want to take a stroll down memory lane with you, or maybe you can read something special to him. There is a poem that I had written that might cheer you up or help you to escape for a moment or two...it is called, "Rainbow in the Piazza". It might uplift your spirits.

Fear, Hope and Faith (Short Story) - 7/2/2009 9:54:50 AM
Heartfelt; you are in my prayers; God be with you both in the difficult journey that surely lies ahead! Powerful writing!

All Alone (Poetry) - 11/23/2009 1:39:48 PM
Such a sad yet beautiful write. Nicely done. GOD BLESS TMN

The Magic That I Need (Poetry) - 11/23/2009 1:35:26 PM
Very nice written piece of magic and fantacy. GOD BLESS TMN

The Magic That I Need (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 7:57:19 PM
How absolutely soothing and so lovingly scripted... Be always safe, Karen

The Magic That I Need (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 11:59:16 AM
This brings back memories of when I believed in magic. Very beautiful thoughts. Perhaps somewhere in all the ashes of what was there are embers that could use a breeze. John

Talk to Me (Poetry) - 11/21/2009 9:32:17 PM
Very Touching and eleoquent .Together so much more can be shared and accomplished. One doesn't have to carry the burdens alone..... Always Together Forever ......M

Talk to Me (Poetry) - 11/21/2009 9:31:59 PM
An open heart, what a beautiful and corageous way to be... Be always safe, Karen

Affinity (Poetry) - 11/21/2009 9:25:58 PM
Beautiful . This poem touches ones heart in amny ways!...M

Talk to Me (Poetry) - 11/21/2009 6:09:37 PM
If only... I could hear those words. Beautiful words and dreams, John

I Promise (Poetry) - 11/18/2009 8:26:58 PM
I believe in your promise. Beautiful writing. John

I Promise (Poetry) - 11/18/2009 7:41:34 PM
VERY POWERFUL DEBORAH. It provides one with strength and courage to go onward....M

Shine, Forever Soar (Poetry) - 11/18/2009 7:39:22 PM
Beautiful and heart felt. I neede to read this today....Blessings to you...M

Together (Poetry) - 11/18/2009 7:37:41 PM
A wonderful poem filled with inspiration and hope. Its true , we are really never alone if we beleive in our Lord....M

I Promise (Poetry) - 11/18/2009 6:40:37 PM
Everything is going to be okay Do you hear what I�ve been saying? I Promise you today Didn�t you hear me yesterday? Your words provide assurance, hope, and encouragement, Deborah Ann. Love and peace, Regis

I Promise (Poetry) - 11/18/2009 6:02:14 PM
Awwww, living in such turmoil and future looking bleak it is understandable to suddendly develop fears... Be always safe, Karen

I Promise (Poetry) - 11/18/2009 5:47:03 PM
In a world that has fallen away from God it is little wonder our children or friends can turn a deaf ear to what is meant to help them. Well done Deborah.

Shine, Forever Soar (Poetry) - 11/18/2009 3:09:59 PM
Such a spiritual reality that you wear proudly... Be always safe, Karen

Thanksgiving Day (Poetry) - 11/17/2009 6:47:14 PM
A most apt and timely write for this holiday, Deborah. In Canada, our Thanksgiving is in mid October. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes, Regis

Together (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 7:27:55 PM
Walk with God and allow him to soothe the hurt and fear until you can stand on your own. God bless... Be always safe, Karen

Together (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 9:48:33 AM
THIS IS SO TRUE...ONE SHOULD NEVER WALK ALONE AND I AM SO GLAD THAT I NEVER DO...AND I, KNOWING YOUR FAITH, KNOW THAT YOU DON'T EITHER. GOD BLESS AND THANKS FOR SHARING THIS REALLY WELL DONE INSPRATIONAL WRITE.

Listen (Poetry) - 11/10/2009 2:40:11 PM
Debbie, This is a real heartbreaker. Very simple that speaks volumes. Mary

Listen (Poetry) - 11/10/2009 1:55:20 PM
An innocence belies these heartwrenching lines. Your simplicity of expression is touching and the overall composition wraps the reader up in pure emotion.

Alone (Poetry) - 11/9/2009 9:03:47 PM
Such pain expressed in these lines. Powerful poem. I think we've all experienced this to some degree.

Dreaming (Poetry) - 11/9/2009 8:18:24 PM
A Fantastic Poem Well Done!!!

Hold Me (Poetry) - 11/9/2009 7:38:08 PM
a tormented soul reaching out and having the coffin lid closed on its heart.. brusting free breathing again... thanks

Hate (Poetry) - 11/9/2009 6:37:08 PM
I assume this poem reflects your actual feelings...if so, get help now. Let me know if you want to discuss it. I know a lot about depression...Been There, Done that!