Neptune and I (Poetry) - 8/28/2009 6:36:25 AM
THIS ALLEGORY IS BEAUTIFULLY DONE...LIKE LIFE WE LEARN...A
FEAR(RESPECT) OF GOD....IS THE BEGINNING OF WISDOM. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Neptune and I (Poetry) - 8/26/2009 4:35:12 PM
Good job, Ron. Great enjoyable poem with both lots of simile and smile. I like your painting of Neptune and the sea plus your reference to the girl. You must have excellent genetics to write such work.