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Recent Reviews for Marlene Dawn
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From A Distance ( REVISED) (Poetry) - 3/3/2004 2:11:58 PM
A most beautiful and well-penned poem!
From A Distance ( REVISED) (Poetry) - 2/28/2004 12:59:30 AM
you've done a superb job in making this a truly wonderful poem!
From A Distance ( REVISED) (Poetry) - 2/27/2004 9:37:20 PM
I'd fall gently toward your [shirt]
Change shirt to "heart" so that you don't repeat the same word in the same verse.
This is darling. Loved it.
Elizabaeth
From A Distance ( REVISED) (Poetry) - 2/27/2004 1:06:40 AM
WONDERFUL poem!
From A Distance ( REVISED) (Poetry) - 2/25/2004 8:51:50 PM
Marlene this is utterly enchanting! I love the premise of the snowflake and what you did with it. Very beautifully and romantically written!
From A Distance ( REVISED) (Poetry) - 2/25/2004 10:58:07 AM
Nice job, Marlene! Warm and loving write. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace. Regis
From A Distance ( REVISED) (Poetry) - 2/25/2004 7:59:11 AM
Marlene, this is romantically beautiful and the ending
is awesome. 'in a melting heart embrace' Wow! I love that.
From A Distance ( REVISED) (Poetry) - 2/25/2004 6:26:42 AM
You revise well! Great poem! Lisa
You Complete Me (Poetry) - 2/19/2004 9:55:32 PM
We've already stood the test
of time & distance and passed.
I am so happy to be one with you.
No matter how near or far
Very romantic write!!!!
You Complete Me (Poetry) - 2/18/2004 9:51:31 AM
Very beautiful! So romantic!
You Complete Me (Poetry) - 2/17/2004 5:27:19 AM
Exquisite poetry!
You Complete Me (Poetry) - 2/16/2004 11:40:31 PM
Lovely sentiments and feelings. Inspiring and warm-feeling write.
Cheers
Alain
You Complete Me (Poetry) - 2/14/2004 6:50:45 PM
Marlene this is os beautiful special one
and so fitting for today!!!!!!
From A Distance (Poetry) - 2/12/2004 4:39:45 AM
A very unique and beautiful description of love from a distance.
From A Distance (Poetry) - 2/11/2004 10:03:06 PM
The second stanza is perfect, what a great image of the person in the doorway. I like the idea of this one.
From A Distance (Poetry) - 2/10/2004 6:45:49 AM
And what a gorgeous snow flake it would be. Watching it fall towards a very warm heart. To imagine such a sight is the majesty of this superb romantic piece. Outstanding write!
Peace and Love
Tony
From A Distance (Poetry) - 2/9/2004 10:11:59 PM
Marlene this is so beautiful......
excellent ending....
OH the ending....
HUGS Peg
From A Distance (Poetry) - 2/9/2004 7:19:30 PM
Beautifully written though a bit sad...
From A Distance (Poetry) - 2/9/2004 7:17:42 PM
well written but has such a fatalistic conclusion ... melt his heart instead ...
From A Distance (Poetry) - 2/9/2004 6:31:14 PM
tender and beautiufl Mar, ty al
From A Distance (Poetry) - 2/9/2004 5:41:50 PM
This was excellent! very powerful images, loved this one!
Reindeer
There is a person that needs LOVE to shine in you (Poetry) - 2/6/2004 9:02:29 AM
Written so eloquently, Marlene. This piece shows the compassion in your angelic heart.
Peace and Love
Tony
There is a person that needs LOVE to shine in you (Poetry) - 2/6/2004 1:30:02 AM
Inspirational excellent, this a most delightful write
peace and sunshine
There is a person that needs LOVE to shine in you (Poetry) - 2/5/2004 5:40:08 PM
A wonderful poetic reminder. Thank you.
There is a person that needs LOVE to shine in you (Poetry) - 2/5/2004 5:35:54 PM
Beautifully written with words of compassion that show your heart knows the dilemma and feels the need...
There is a person that needs LOVE to shine in you (Poetry) - 2/5/2004 4:40:16 PM
Love Is a Myth,i.e. Compassion Few If Any Have Is What You Wrote About-
HUMANITY Better Hurry Up N Get It Too Late Now!
TRASK
There is a person that needs LOVE to shine in you (Poetry) - 2/5/2004 2:00:06 PM
Meeting these people everday, why do we turn away? How can we change? Marlene, you have the answers!
There is a person that needs LOVE to shine in you (Poetry) - 2/5/2004 1:29:42 PM
While the message is much needed and a grim reminder of the need for compassion, the poem itself warmth the heart.
Well done, Marlene!
Gina
There is a person that needs LOVE to shine in you (Poetry) - 2/5/2004 1:20:48 PM
Very inspiring, Marlene, and a wonderful message for everyone.
On Cold Dark Winter Nights (Poetry) - 2/5/2004 1:19:04 PM
Another gem of a write..a masterpiece!
Winter Is Special (Poetry) - 2/5/2004 1:17:14 PM
BRILLIANT evocative imagery..
There is a person that needs LOVE to shine in you (Poetry) - 2/5/2004 1:11:06 PM
Probably I am reading you for the first time..but reading this made me repent what quality of art I have missed..I am fortunate to read this brilliant poem...GREAT work..Marlene!
Winter Is Special (Poetry) - 2/5/2004 7:08:57 AM
Very beautiful Marlene!
Winter Is Special (Poetry) - 2/4/2004 8:35:02 PM
winter can certainly have its wonderful moments ... well done!
Winter Is Special (Poetry) - 2/4/2004 7:09:34 PM
wonderful metaphor, beautiful poem Marlene!
Winter Is Special (Poetry) - 2/4/2004 6:22:02 PM
Drifting love... well put!
On Cold Dark Winter Nights (Poetry) - 1/30/2004 6:45:54 AM
wonderfully done.
On Cold Dark Winter Nights (Poetry) - 1/30/2004 4:46:54 AM
So well done and emotive. Enjoyed reading this so much.
On Cold Dark Winter Nights (Poetry) - 1/28/2004 10:33:08 AM
Marlen,
This is beautiful.....
"The aches are there inside and out.
They say time heals all.
She tries believing that true til
the moon falls from the sky.
She knows the love stays with her.
Forever & always it does. ---- < <---.
So cry and let those dripping tears
wash away in time."
OH OH!!!!!
Lady peg
On Cold Dark Winter Nights (Poetry) - 1/28/2004 5:59:56 AM
This poem brings light to us all. Thanks for sharing it, Marlene!
On Cold Dark Winter Nights (Poetry) - 1/28/2004 2:26:33 AM
"On Cold Dark Winter Nights"... romantic stanzas entwined in the lines of wise words...
Thank You for being a bricklayer in the building of the tower of Grace and wonders.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
On Cold Dark Winter Nights (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 10:45:20 PM
well done!
On Cold Dark Winter Nights (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 10:00:37 PM
Gotta love those nights... ;)
On Cold Dark Winter Nights (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 9:01:51 PM
Wondreful poetry, Marlene! Hope your feeling better;-)
On Cold Dark Winter Nights (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 8:37:14 PM
Enjoyed, a very good inspirational piece. cheers G
On Cold Dark Winter Nights (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 7:12:37 PM
'Let it warm you deep inside
on cold dark winter nights.'
Beautiful and haunting. Hope
you're doing ok?
On Cold Dark Winter Nights (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 7:03:22 PM
Aude Lang Syne
always is bitter sweet
nice write,
thanks,
d.
So Often (Poetry) - 1/23/2004 1:04:09 PM
You make some very good points in this poetic offering, Marlene. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis
So Often (Poetry) - 1/22/2004 5:56:44 PM
This is so true Marlene and so sad...I just spoke to a friend who has such problems and cannot get help ....sad poem..floria
So Often (Poetry) - 1/22/2004 12:02:47 AM
So heartfelt i agree with Bhuwan this is excellent..
HUGS
Peg
So Often (Poetry) - 1/21/2004 9:29:57 PM
Heartfelt write....sad but very very realistic write...love n luck...BHUWAN
So Often (Poetry) - 1/21/2004 5:59:44 AM
This is a sad and brutal reality. Often it's because one government or country is trying to out do another, regardless of the cost.
peace and happiness
So Often (Poetry) - 1/20/2004 6:24:27 PM
a deep and tender look Marlene and governments just doing too many favors, ty al
So Often (Poetry) - 1/20/2004 4:41:31 PM
A sad lament that has been going on for centuries,
but will soon come to an end, as promised in Rev.
21:3-5. "The former things will have passed away."
Silence Drifts (Poetry) - 1/11/2004 3:21:05 AM
Lovely verse!
Peace
Tony
Silence Drifts (Poetry) - 1/9/2004 11:33:38 PM
Excellent write!!!
Silence Drifts (Poetry) - 1/9/2004 10:18:33 PM
Gentle beauty of a write...hopefully the love will come, if we can but wait it out...
Silence Drifts (Poetry) - 1/9/2004 7:22:32 AM
a beautiful poem. nicely done.
Silence Drifts (Poetry) - 1/9/2004 5:02:33 AM
Marlene, this IS BEAUTIFUL. Lovely imagery and an oh so gentle exhortation!
Silence Drifts (Poetry) - 1/9/2004 4:57:46 AM
"Silence Drifts" talks with the voice of the wise tongue and delivers a sage message entwined in its elegant composition dressed with the lexicon of wisdom.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Silence Drifts (Poetry) - 1/9/2004 3:32:37 AM
Love cures all Marlene! Beautiful piece!
Silence Drifts (Poetry) - 1/8/2004 9:11:01 PM
Wonderful work Marlene, especially the third stanza it rocks
peace
Silence Drifts (Poetry) - 1/8/2004 8:23:15 PM
very pretty Mar, and contained such tender and fragile elements, ty al
Happy New Year (Poetry) - 1/5/2004 10:58:38 AM
Happy New Years Marlene! Wonderful sentiments.
Happy New Year (Poetry) - 1/3/2004 5:44:43 PM
What a beautiful festive write!
Happy New Year
~Nikki~
Happy New Year (Poetry) - 1/3/2004 12:34:12 PM
'Everything happens for a reason
I shall no longer question why."
These are wise words and I wish I could follow the implicit advice. Thank you for this offering, Marlene. Love and peace, Regis.
Happy New Year (Poetry) - 1/3/2004 12:15:05 AM
"So raise your glass and toast with me
to be happy with what you have."
I like the sound of this
peace and best wishes for 2004
Happy New Year (Poetry) - 1/2/2004 8:58:53 AM
a happy 2004 to you, too, marlene; may 2004 be your best year EVER! (((HUGS))) and much love, your tx., friend, karen lynn. :D wonderful and heartfelt write!
Happy New Year (Poetry) - 1/1/2004 12:50:21 PM
Happy New Year to you, too, Marlene! Hope it's a grand one for you.
Dance Me To The Stars (Poetry) - 12/16/2003 10:42:53 AM
I love the romance in your work. Absolutely beautiful. You are such a warm poet.
I especially loved this:
"Lift me to the stars my love.
Let me touch the moon with you."
Excellent work... you take my breath.
Thank You,
Emilie
Quality Time (Poetry) - 12/16/2003 10:41:02 AM
This needs to be posted everywhere... grocery stores, malls, ---this would be a great billboard--like the "GOD" ones ... These words ate a treasure and PLEASURE to find and read! I appreciate this. This is like a little holiday book that belongs on the coffee table. Everyone needs to read this. Wonderful conversation starters.
Thank You,
Emilie
...Did I say this was excellent?...
Soulful Smile (Poetry) - 12/16/2003 10:38:33 AM
These thoughts alone are wonderful... the way you weaved them is sheer perfection. Mmmmmmmmmmmmm love is SUCH a wonderful thing.
Beautiful work. What a writer!
Thank You,
Emilie
Soulful Smile (Poetry) - 12/15/2003 7:05:47 PM
Marlene beautiful and tender WRITE!
Soulful Smile (Poetry) - 12/15/2003 12:35:06 PM
What a lovely picture of a beautiful love. The flow is just wonderful.
Soulful Smile (Poetry) - 12/15/2003 9:14:43 AM
great metaphoric rhetoric!
Soulful Smile (Poetry) - 12/15/2003 6:26:35 AM
Beautiful thoughts and poem, Marlene. Enjoyed very much.
Soulful Smile (Poetry) - 12/15/2003 3:19:26 AM
SO beautiful Marlene tender and Jude is right it just flows..
Happy Holidays
Peg
Soulful Smile (Poetry) - 12/14/2003 9:54:16 PM
superb flow and imagery!
Soulful Smile (Poetry) - 12/14/2003 8:33:38 PM
"You are new strings on my broken guitar." There are days when I could use new strings. Thank you for sharing this offering, Marlene. Love and peace, Regis.
Quality Time (Poetry) - 12/4/2003 7:44:56 PM
Write on :)!
:)Sandy
Quality Time (Poetry) - 12/2/2003 10:41:47 PM
A beautiful poem!
From You To Me (Poetry) - 11/27/2003 1:49:38 AM
wow...i enjoyed this gem of a write!!!
From You To Me (Poetry) - 11/27/2003 1:07:17 AM
very nice, heartfelt write...
From You To Me (Poetry) - 11/25/2003 12:24:02 PM
lovely!
From You To Me (Poetry) - 11/25/2003 9:08:21 AM
Romantic and touching!
The Little I had (Poetry) - 11/24/2003 9:00:47 PM
You are a very blessed writer and that is all you will ever need! Truly inspiring! :)Smiles.
From You To Me (Poetry) - 11/24/2003 8:58:50 PM
Wow! This is truly beautiful. It brought tears to my eyes. Amazing choice of words.
From You To Me (Poetry) - 11/24/2003 8:23:15 PM
This is wonderful and so heartfelt...I loved this piece.
Allen
From You To Me (Poetry) - 11/24/2003 8:19:40 PM
A most touching expression of love that goes to the depth of the soul. Thank you for sharing this offering, Marlene. Love and peace, Regis.
The Little I had (Poetry) - 11/21/2003 3:25:57 PM
Much wisdom and truth expressed in lovely poetic form. Thank you. Regis
The Little I had (Poetry) - 11/21/2003 3:06:42 PM
Beautiful and so wise, this was outstanding,
Reindeer
The Little I had (Poetry) - 11/21/2003 8:14:49 AM
Indeed it did make you strong and compassionate, lovely write.
The Little I had (Poetry) - 11/21/2003 7:11:57 AM
Much wisdom and I've never known a happy
rich man. Funny how that works.
The Little I had (Poetry) - 11/21/2003 12:29:01 AM
there's nothing wrong with getting our poetic hands a little dirty...
enjoyed reading...
The Little I had (Poetry) - 11/19/2003 11:39:49 PM
great message!
The Little I had (Poetry) - 11/19/2003 7:08:49 PM
a well written poem.
The Little I had (Poetry) - 11/19/2003 6:15:35 PM
Little often leads to Big results. Enjoyed your poem very much.
Dance Me To The Stars (Poetry) - 11/19/2003 5:38:58 AM
A real beauty! This poem will "Dance Me To The Stars"
Just outstanding! ;)
Dance Me To The Stars (Poetry) - 11/17/2003 8:44:57 PM
An enjoyable, soothing poem. Thank you for this offering. Regis
Dance Me To The Stars (Poetry) - 11/17/2003 5:32:28 AM
wow....fantastic composition....thanks for sharing....love n luck....BHUWAN
Dance Me To The Stars (Poetry) - 11/16/2003 7:22:23 PM
Beautiful verses so tender and flowing.
Dance Me To The Stars (Poetry) - 11/16/2003 3:36:21 PM
Wonderful poem, Marlene!
Dance Me To The Stars (Poetry) - 11/16/2003 3:21:23 PM
Marlene, soft,sexy and sensual,,very enjoyable read. Lisa
Dance Me To The Stars (Poetry) - 11/16/2003 1:57:04 PM
Hi Marlene,
Such a beautiful write...
Trixie :)
Dance Me To The Stars (Poetry) - 11/16/2003 1:56:50 PM
This is a flowing portrait of love.
Exquisitely written and felt!
Thanks.
Dance Me To The Stars (Poetry) - 11/16/2003 1:36:30 PM
very nice composition
thanks,
donna.
A dream Come True (Poetry) - 11/13/2003 9:57:39 PM
So very Beautiful!
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