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Recent Reviews for Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley
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Humility (Short Story) - 2/4/2013 1:02:36 AM
Some prople have no imagination.
Staywell and keep writing
Eddy
Humility (Short Story) - 2/3/2013 11:54:23 AM
A few of us have noticed there is another poetess here who likes to steal your ideas. I'm not surprised, you're very good. So yes a compliment to you even though it isn't her intent we're sure.
Di
Humility (Short Story) - 2/3/2013 4:38:02 AM
To (have to) steal ideas from others is childish, pathetic and unworthy for someone who calls him or herself a writer. Or maybe I have to turn it around, in that case you're unworthy to use the name writer.
Although it's a compliment when others steal your ideas I hope that your beautiful and original ideas are spared from being copied by others. and I hope this article will be read by those who lower themselves to do this.
Good that you denounce this subject Carol
Humility (Short Story) - 2/3/2013 4:33:44 AM
they are there it is too obvious not to see them for what they are
budd
Humility (Short Story) - 2/2/2013 8:18:11 PM
Oh, how I know about "sharks". They are out there alright! They have no shame, Carol. They are parasites.
Love ya!
Jane
Humility (Short Story) - 2/2/2013 6:23:50 PM
I hope no one has stolen from your beautiful poetry...
Humility (Short Story) - 2/2/2013 2:49:19 PM
Okay. Something has happened to cause you to pen this "short story." I'll not inquire what that something may have been, I shall only say write what you know, and if they steal from you they have stolen a part of you, but the best part of you is the part they do not, and never will, know. I've been fortunate in that I have never seen anyone with the slightest bit of my writing in their posts. It could be the writing thieves find nothing of mine worth the theft of, in that case I can smile and say . . . "Good."
The Light on the Wall (Short Story) - 1/10/2013 11:03:01 AM
A most touching and meaningful story well-shared, Carol; it also gives the reader hope. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Desiderata (Short Story) - 12/17/2012 10:40:29 AM
Graet story, Lily; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
Desiderata (Short Story) - 12/15/2012 6:05:04 AM
I never thought this was written in 1927, I would think the 1960's!
Great advice we all need to be thankful Lilly
Mark
Desiderata (Short Story) - 12/14/2012 7:23:41 PM
We must all be grateful for these words, they are wise advise.
Di
Desiderata (Short Story) - 12/14/2012 4:56:59 PM
The world hasn't changed much in 85 years with respect to these words.
Eddy
Desiderata (Short Story) - 12/14/2012 4:16:26 PM
So long ago from my time as a young lad, I remember this fellow he was ahead of his time. Wonderful advice dear Lady Lily
I bow and tip my hat to you
Cyrano
Desiderata (Short Story) - 12/14/2012 12:05:41 PM
There is so much to live by here, and right now I need this!
Gail
Desiderata (Short Story) - 12/14/2012 11:42:22 AM
Very wise words you share here with us Carol.
This is indeed wisdom for a way of life, a good way of life.
Thanks for sharing with us
Desiderata (Short Story) - 12/14/2012 11:32:03 AM
Thank you for sharing this gift, Carol. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Desiderata (Short Story) - 12/14/2012 11:17:31 AM
Mr. Ehrmann had his thoughts all in the right place, Carol, as so do you for posting these pearls of great wisdom. Wonderful thoughts to live by and to live a better life. Thank you for giving us the touch of greatness . . .
The Gift (Short Story) - 12/12/2012 9:04:15 AM
Excellent story; well done, Lily!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
The Gift (Short Story) - 12/10/2012 6:51:41 AM
You are a gift Lilly, your parents were lucky they got you. You had a sad life but it turned out for the best here.
Mark
The Gift (Short Story) - 12/10/2012 6:22:03 AM
Dear Lady Lily, you have surpassed many tragedies in your young life and you are a gift sent to us all. You have been a dear gift to me and my wife. You are a blessing from God my dear dear lady
I bow and tip my hat to you
Cyrano
The Gift (Short Story) - 12/10/2012 3:26:14 AM
This story emphasizes what a wonderful person you are.
You’re born with a beautiful gift and use it to help everyone in need indiscriminately.
Whatever people say or do to you, your love never fades away.
You’re a white soul with a golden heart Carolee
Take good care of yourself, we love you
The Gift (Short Story) - 12/9/2012 7:54:01 PM
What a wonderful emotional story and how you overcame all that happened to you. You are a gift and I believe all this to be true
Di
The Gift (Short Story) - 12/9/2012 7:42:40 PM
I believe at an early age one knows what they want to become...but many do not read the signs or think they have no gift. Always, Deborah
The Gift (Short Story) - 12/9/2012 5:44:00 PM
Thank you for this inspirational wonderful sharing into a small part of your life. Thank you for this gift.
Gail
The Gift (Short Story) - 12/9/2012 5:15:49 PM
this recollection of your journey from wee tkye to the death of your husband shows us all that your grandmother was right when she told your parents the you are a special gift to those in need.
budd
Rhythm of my Heart (Poetry) - 6/18/2013 3:06:16 AM
Beautifully composed
thank you for sharing
peace be with you
William
Rhythm of my Heart (Poetry) - 5/31/2013 9:50:24 AM
Such beauty for the fair
with such artistry of music!
Lady Vivian
Rhythm of my Heart (Poetry) - 5/31/2013 3:05:56 AM
Unspoken magic is the best kind.
Rhythm of my Heart (Poetry) - 5/30/2013 7:14:23 PM
whoever this poem is for must surely be pleased with your sweet words of affection---well done
Rhythm of my Heart (Poetry) - 5/30/2013 5:05:03 PM
I like Diana's comment; you do have a way of adding that extra sense to it.
Rhythm of my Heart (Poetry) - 5/30/2013 6:50:16 AM
There is a consistent flare you have for giving us words of the 'senses,' Lily. Most of your poetry is filled with sound, scent, touch, taste, and that sixth sense 'awareness.' It is a joy to read these sensations. 'Rhythm of my Heart' contains a line I find to be glorious: "A glow of soundless words spoken within." That is so big that it could be the answer to the whole of seeing joy in life. The "words spoken within" can glow even in the dark if we let them. Thank you for this thought, I love it. ~~ Diana
Rhythm of my Heart (Poetry) - 5/29/2013 6:09:50 AM
I'm sure this thought is so "right on" that your fair lover actually hears it in his soul.
Love ya
Jane
Rhythm of my Heart (Poetry) - 5/29/2013 4:39:52 AM
Boy Lily you can write! You write about love in a way everyone can read it. You really make it special.
Mark
Rhythm of my Heart (Poetry) - 5/29/2013 4:20:19 AM
Such a beautiful vision you try to convey to your love interest Carolee.
Di
Rhythm of my Heart (Poetry) - 5/28/2013 5:24:52 PM
Another beautiful romantic piece from your heart. Thanks for the view once again.
Gail
Rhythm of my Heart (Poetry) - 5/28/2013 4:00:52 PM
You have shared a lovely and romantic aura via your verses, Carol. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Rhythm of my Heart (Poetry) - 5/28/2013 1:44:04 PM
~Lily~
Loving the image of barefeet rippling the serene waters.
Beautiful poetry .. unspoken magic..feel the rhythm
Lady Mary Ann
Rhythm of my Heart (Poetry) - 5/28/2013 12:53:14 PM
Sure can. Every time I place my ear on a bosom fair. Women have a whole different way of viewing the rhythms of life, that most men cannot comprehend.
Ron
Rhythm of my Heart (Poetry) - 5/28/2013 8:06:27 AM
Aaahh, The heart always beats faster when love steps in.....our hearts talk to our soul and when you meet your "twin flame" the one you have been waiting for your
Rhythm of my Heart (Poetry) - 5/28/2013 8:05:52 AM
i agree with Jerry and Adriaen you have written beautifully of sharing that most intimate of feelings with the one you love
budd
Rhythm of my Heart (Poetry) - 5/28/2013 8:01:31 AM
Yes indeed, the love is apparent and wanting in this fine rendition of the rhythm of a heart filled with love evermore, giving your own kind of magic in the embrace of it forever..
Rhythm of my Heart (Poetry) - 5/28/2013 7:50:45 AM
The stillness of the soul, is there anything more serene.
Unspoken magic, the rhythm of your heart.
Things you can only share with your fair lover, the deepest intimacy.
Beyond beautiful Carol
Gently unto me (Poetry) - 5/27/2013 8:29:15 AM
Beautiful tapestry, Lily -- with the most beautiful threads "...unto each other we comfort," "softening even the miser unto giving of his own heart" (I love that phrase) and "impearled love," very unique. Enjoyed this. ~~ Diana
Gently unto me (Poetry) - 5/24/2013 11:28:19 AM
I concur with some here. An excellent lovers card or wedding vow. This should be under romance young lady. Very romantic indeed.
Art
Desire within (Poetry) - 5/24/2013 11:23:16 AM
How many maidens have loved from afar the unreachable. Great vision and story here.
Art
Sweet nectars (Poetry) - 5/24/2013 11:21:59 AM
This is the way love ought to be, share between two people. Very good.
Art
Gently unto me (Poetry) - 5/23/2013 8:32:36 PM
Love universal..but uniqueness
to portray is yours *Carolee*
Lady Vivian
Desire within (Poetry) - 5/23/2013 6:18:50 PM
Its very hard to love someone that is untouchable, great poem about this frustration when loving someone.
Gail
Gently unto me (Poetry) - 5/23/2013 6:15:58 PM
What a beautiful poem! No one can touch your ability to write about love the way you do.
Gail
Sweet nectars (Poetry) - 5/23/2013 6:14:50 PM
A very powerful poem Carol, when it comes to love and passion no one can top you.
Gail
Sweet nectars (Poetry) - 5/23/2013 5:20:53 AM
This is a nice picture Lily, very suductive and passionate!
Mark
Gently unto me (Poetry) - 5/23/2013 5:19:18 AM
Nice one Lily, it sounds very old like from a long time ago. Romance at it's best and one of your best!
Mark
Desire within (Poetry) - 5/23/2013 5:18:21 AM
That must be hard to love someone from a distance, great one again Lily.
Mark
A Mother's Day Gift (Poetry) - 5/23/2013 5:17:43 AM
Wow another great one of yours!
Mark
Gently unto me (Poetry) - 5/23/2013 2:38:22 AM
for we have gathered in the meadows of life our sweet song
A very lovely song, indeed.
Rains Heartbeat (Poetry) - 5/22/2013 3:29:06 PM
Is it hot in here or is it just me??? well...this is very nice and I guess you can tell I liked it a lot....
Gently unto me (Poetry) - 5/22/2013 3:27:31 PM
I think it would be wonderful to hear your read this poem before a live audience--might be something even a Dark Knight would come out of the shadows and slip in the back to hear it read--well done
Sweet nectars (Poetry) - 5/22/2013 3:26:11 PM
wow...I may have to read this poem again....quite powerful
Gently unto me (Poetry) - 5/22/2013 11:10:46 AM
Such a soft declaration of love set in the peace and tranquility of nature. Adorable, simply adorable.
Ron
Gently unto me (Poetry) - 5/22/2013 8:14:05 AM
You keep surpassing yourself in beauty, in romance and in depth of love.
Your heart has found an eternal spring of the most beautiful inspiration.
So deep and beautiful again Carol
Gently unto me (Poetry) - 5/22/2013 6:33:06 AM
Carolee, this is a beautiful sonnet ... words well chosen, layered in the right place.
Cheers,
Dan
Gently unto me (Poetry) - 5/22/2013 6:04:51 AM
That should be a wedding vow!
Love ya!
Jane
A Mother's Day Gift (Poetry) - 5/22/2013 4:53:01 AM
A different twist on the love for mother and child. How beautiful and touching.
Di
Desire within (Poetry) - 5/22/2013 4:51:00 AM
To admire and love from afar is both beautiful and painful. Excellent visuals Carolee I hope she obtains this love.
Di
Gently unto me (Poetry) - 5/22/2013 4:39:22 AM
It doesn't get any better than this, this is true poetry. You are a true poetess of love and romance.
Di
Sweet nectars (Poetry) - 5/22/2013 4:37:44 AM
Love at its best where Carolee, a visual delight.
Di
Gently unto me (Poetry) - 5/21/2013 3:12:40 PM
This should be made public and sold. It is the best love poem I have read. How many sweethearts would love to have a card with this printed on it. Marvelous.
G
Gently unto me (Poetry) - 5/21/2013 11:44:49 AM
so many before me have stated all that is to be remembered in this write of love eternal
budd
Gently unto me (Poetry) - 5/21/2013 11:39:18 AM
What Jerry said times ten...;-) e
Gently unto me (Poetry) - 5/21/2013 11:10:45 AM
Beautiful....... Makes one to wish for love. Love, Deborah
Gently unto me (Poetry) - 5/21/2013 10:06:08 AM
IIIIII.......LOVE this, I do!
Gently unto me (Poetry) - 5/21/2013 9:41:09 AM
~Lily~
Gentle the meadow in sweet song of the morning dove coos.
Beautiful splendor in essence of your heart.
LadyMary Ann
Sweet nectars (Poetry) - 5/21/2013 9:25:32 AM
The way love ought to be... ...and love is all after all. Thank you, Carol. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Gently unto me (Poetry) - 5/21/2013 9:24:18 AM
Mystically compelling; I am drawn in the mood that you have shared through your verses here, Carol. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Gently unto me (Poetry) - 5/21/2013 8:14:42 AM
Perfect in every way is this poem of absolute and eternal love. Your words are like an oracle delivered from the Goddess of Love.
Desire within (Poetry) - 5/17/2013 12:40:43 PM
I have no doubt that most of us have had feelings for someone without them knowing, I know I do!
Love,
Deborah
Sweet nectars (Poetry) - 5/17/2013 12:37:11 PM
Carol, One cannot get any more romantic then that..." in our nakedness we have tasted our sweet nectars " Aaaahhh!
Love,
Deborah
Sweet nectars (Poetry) - 5/17/2013 12:30:33 PM
Stylishly and tastefully rendered. Short and concise. great job, leaves the reader wanting more and using their imagination.
Stay well and keep writing
Eddy
Sweet nectars (Poetry) - 5/17/2013 2:48:26 AM
Immortal Love - lovely, indeed.
Sweet nectars (Poetry) - 5/16/2013 10:47:11 PM
ahhh and truly sigh-worthy
Sweet nectars (Poetry) - 5/16/2013 7:39:20 PM
How sweet the nectars you have
penned for us to feel, Carolee
Lady Vivian
Sweet nectars (Poetry) - 5/16/2013 11:59:05 AM
And that's why they make both men and women! Viva the difference…
Ron
Sweet nectars (Poetry) - 5/16/2013 5:57:37 AM
So beautifully put! Such a tender and sensual picture you have painted here.
Love ya!
Jane
Sweet nectars (Poetry) - 5/16/2013 5:11:00 AM
~Lily~
Artfully painted..moonlight encase us aglow..
Passion immortal.
Lady Mary Ann
Desire within (Poetry) - 5/16/2013 3:20:58 AM
A wonderful expression of forbidden love,
a burning existence in the mind of the person(s) concerned.
How many hearts have burned with a secret desire this way
You've expressed it so very well Carol, so beautiful again
Sweet nectars (Poetry) - 5/16/2013 3:11:52 AM
Let our silken bodies become as one again
Beautiful wording in this highly sensual poem.
Sensuality, passion but above all oneness of two deeply in love
Breathtaking Carol
Sweet nectars (Poetry) - 5/15/2013 11:12:29 PM
I love that first line, satin sheets & stars sound to be a place to enjoy...e
Desire within (Poetry) - 5/15/2013 9:45:49 PM
Feeling
hopes and fears of
secrets
not to be beholden
Lady Vivian
A Mother's Day Gift (Poetry) - 5/15/2013 4:39:02 PM
The Queen of Hearts..Carolee
Lady Vivian
Sweet nectars (Poetry) - 5/15/2013 4:16:05 PM
sensual. lusty, wonderful love. nicely put together here.
Sweet nectars (Poetry) - 5/15/2013 3:52:16 PM
You made me feel young again.
G
Sweet nectars (Poetry) - 5/15/2013 3:12:09 PM
passionately worded and penned allowing us the vision such a love
budd
Sweet nectars (Poetry) - 5/15/2013 3:03:21 PM
Ahh, yes, and your "silken bodies become as one" forever and a day. This poem was artful, sensuous, and reality all boiled into the lovemaking and the real love which it spawned. Wonderful poetry!
Desire within (Poetry) - 5/15/2013 1:55:58 PM
~Lily~
Beauty in verses of mystic and dreams of forbidden love.
Accolades to you.
Lady Mary Ann
Desire within (Poetry) - 5/15/2013 9:47:28 AM
Unrequited love, it's so enticing and ever so dangerous...
I do a lot of Shakespeare plays, I feel as though this could be one of those stories in the making..
Great work as always!
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Desire within (Poetry) - 5/15/2013 7:10:49 AM
History in the making! I wonder how many times this has played out. The simple chemistry of opposites attracting, women wanting power and security to feather their nest, and men liking youth and vulnerability.
You had me on the edge of my seat, wondering what she would do next to get his attention.
Ron
Desire within (Poetry) - 5/15/2013 4:11:55 AM
A most delicate expression of love, the words,the senses, the allure behind hidden of veils, hugs.
Desire within (Poetry) - 5/14/2013 7:36:49 PM
Ah, to gaze upon the one you love and not be able to "make a move". My heart breaks for her!
Love ya!
Jane
Desire within (Poetry) - 5/14/2013 2:21:49 PM
I was here & read I did, dear...you know how I felt, but now I need a belt...e
Desire within (Poetry) - 5/14/2013 1:13:42 PM
Thank you for sharing this engaging account of love, Lily. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Desire within (Poetry) - 5/14/2013 9:24:55 AM
This story needs to continue...there's a wee bit more to share, of that I'm sure.
Cheers,
Dan
Desire within (Poetry) - 5/14/2013 9:15:28 AM
Admire from a close distance hiding what one feels. I think many do this. Wondeful write.
Stay well and keep writing
Eddy
Desire within (Poetry) - 5/14/2013 9:05:47 AM
Out of a book of love that you have created.
G
Desire within (Poetry) - 5/14/2013 8:28:15 AM
this is such a well written statement of love not to be where both feel only the pain of wanting to be what can not and you found the perfect visual to accompany it
budd
Desire within (Poetry) - 5/14/2013 8:17:31 AM
Ahhh . . . This so reminds me of the British television drama series "Upstairs, Downstairs." Although I seem to remember there was some physical contact between the highbrow and the servants. This was done especially well, Carol.
A Mother's Day Gift (Poetry) - 5/13/2013 10:39:06 AM
"and your seed is a song of love" - such is the true definition of Mother in every sense of the word. May every child of whatever age and state of maturity be gifted with such a champion and comforter as I believe we have become a world of motherless children, largely (judging by our behaviour). And may every 'motherless ancient' have a child/junior who can be to them the mother/father to the (wo)man. Motherhood in many capacities is a gift that all are hungry for. xx
A Mother's Day Gift (Poetry) - 5/13/2013 7:14:09 AM
There is nothing greater than the gift of love.
Ron
A Mother's Day Gift (Poetry) - 5/13/2013 6:27:22 AM
Carolee...wonderful tribute to mothers everywhere.
Cheers,
Dan
A Mother's Day Gift (Poetry) - 5/12/2013 8:28:59 PM
This poem is lovingly dedicated to the real maternalism.
well modified in the light of mother.
Peace and light
Fakhre
A Mother's Day Gift (Poetry) - 5/12/2013 6:45:54 PM
May I send this to my son?
Love ya!
Jane
A Mother's Day Gift (Poetry) - 5/12/2013 4:21:48 PM
A very " Happy Mothers' Day " Carol! Beautiful poem, as always...
Love,
Deborah
A Mother's Day Gift (Poetry) - 5/12/2013 3:58:55 PM
There is no greater gift through the eyes of love
A Mother's Day Gift (Poetry) - 5/12/2013 3:02:03 PM
HAPPY mother's day Lily!........unique poem, awesome quote. love, ~ Morgan
A Mother's Day Gift (Poetry) - 5/12/2013 1:38:09 PM
Lily,
This is indeed an inspired work of art. Yes, you are a very special soul. I can relate to every single word!
Happy Mother's Day, my dear Lily!
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Umbrellas of love (Poetry) - 5/12/2013 12:37:41 PM
I could listen to you read poetry all day--well done
A Mother's Day Gift (Poetry) - 5/12/2013 12:28:06 PM
Splendid offering on this great and precious day for Mothers.
G
A Mother's Day Gift (Poetry) - 5/12/2013 11:13:30 AM
~Lily~
A song of love seeded in your great joy and passion.
"A Mothers Day Gift" graceful and elegant aura/
Lady Mary Ann
A Mother's Day Gift (Poetry) - 5/12/2013 10:02:55 AM
and that gift is your spirit shared with them
budd
A Mother's Day Gift (Poetry) - 5/12/2013 9:37:43 AM
This is more than beautiful Carol and it says all about the beauty of your soul, your compassion with everyone and your eternal love.
wonderful !!!!
A Mother's Day Gift (Poetry) - 5/12/2013 9:34:56 AM
Stirring words to celebrate this special day set aside for the mothers of the words. Your words are carved out of experience and a life of learning with some hurting and pain, but eventually much joy. I liked this "different" Mother's Day poem very much. You are an exceptional person.
A Mother's Day Gift (Poetry) - 5/12/2013 9:34:18 AM
You indeed are a gift and loving sould to all. Beautiful poem.
Stay well and keep writing
Eddy
The Cottage (Poetry) - 5/3/2013 2:24:11 PM
an amazing write Lily
truly enjoyed reading
Love & Peace
William
The Cottage (Poetry) - 5/1/2013 5:54:25 PM
WOW. love the mystery. love the setting/theme. just great. enjoyed this much!!
The Cottage (Poetry) - 4/24/2013 6:45:27 AM
Wow this is absolutely great Carol, it makes me wonder what is on her back. I hope you write a follow up to this one.
Gail
The Cottage (Poetry) - 4/23/2013 12:32:28 PM
Not only have you written an outstanding poem all of a woman's quite when her man does not return from the sea, you leave us with a mystery about what is “etched upon her back.” Now we will have to read the sequel.
Ron
The Cottage (Poetry) - 4/23/2013 4:56:16 AM
This is good but I wanna know what was on her back?
Mark
Rains Heartbeat (Poetry) - 4/23/2013 4:54:16 AM
This is a great dream and a nice story Lily. I like the ending.
Mark
Umbrellas of love (Poetry) - 4/23/2013 4:52:55 AM
Wow a nice picture and surrounded by nature with memories of love. This is a wow Lily
Mark
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 4/23/2013 4:51:44 AM
This is a very magical place in time for him, very romantic Lily.
Mark
Silence Falls (Poetry) - 4/23/2013 4:50:09 AM
Wow Lily this sounds like someone who is really desperate.
Mark
The Cottage (Poetry) - 4/22/2013 12:52:32 PM
Suspense in the etching
magnificent an ending?
leaving us wanting more!
Lady Vivian
The Cottage (Poetry) - 4/22/2013 9:24:48 AM
A captivating tale, Carol. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
The Cottage (Poetry) - 4/22/2013 8:05:31 AM
This was excellent, it makes me wonder what they saw. This lets the mind wander to many conclusions. What killed the writer and why, what was the message left.
Di
The Cottage (Poetry) - 4/22/2013 3:41:42 AM
A perfectly written narrative poem Carol.
Building up the tension layer by layer with all little details
And leaving the audience in the end amazed and puzzled.
Perfectly done
The Cottage (Poetry) - 4/21/2013 3:48:59 PM
One of your very Best story poems, Carol...I am guessing that the mystery at the end you leave to your readers. I'm guessing some sort of tattoo. Very descriptive and poignant. Very much enjoyed!
Love,
Deborah
The Cottage (Poetry) - 4/21/2013 1:24:36 PM
~Lily~
Romantic story of a broken heart. Rich in details and mystery.
Etched into her back ~ the shape of a locket that once held her
love's picture.
Lady Mary Ann
The Cottage (Poetry) - 4/21/2013 12:52:54 PM
quite a romantic tale with the enduring question for others at the end
budd
The Cottage (Poetry) - 4/21/2013 12:01:40 PM
I swear this will be on my mind forever! What was etched into her back?????? A name? A sign?
Love ya!
Jane
The Cottage (Poetry) - 4/21/2013 11:27:48 AM
A story told is worth telling thrice. This is very good, Carol, very good indeed. Poem stories are most endeared to my heart and soul. This is a pure delight, strong images and places where the imagination can fly at will.
"Suicide? No, not suicide just look under her
what’s etched into her back, I’ve never seen anything like it"
There must be another one in the offering unless what is etched into her back is in this poem, and I can't find it.
Rains Heartbeat (Poetry) - 4/20/2013 7:29:21 AM
What a beautiful dream! And to wake up to the man you love. I felt it all you are very talented.
Gail
Umbrellas of love (Poetry) - 4/20/2013 7:28:25 AM
You are a master of romance Carol, this is wonderful.
Gail
Rains Heartbeat (Poetry) - 4/19/2013 8:59:00 PM
Such memories are beautiful and to be kept and made. Beautiful write.
Stay well and keep writing
Eddy
Umbrellas of love (Poetry) - 4/19/2013 8:57:28 PM
Love will always surround you especially mine. You are a beautiful lady inside and out
Stay well and keep writing
Eddy
Rains Heartbeat (Poetry) - 4/19/2013 7:48:03 PM
Spirit of the rain fresh
against a window pane..
while love sleeps
tender
Thank You Carolee for being
so romantic with your poetry
Lady Vivian
Rains Heartbeat (Poetry) - 4/19/2013 12:05:15 PM
~Lily~
Rain's heartbeat and flickers of candle light. A romantic and passionate poem. Beautiful.
Lady Mary Ann
Rains Heartbeat (Poetry) - 4/19/2013 11:42:00 AM
Strong images of the power of the storm and the comfort of being in someone else's arms. Sometimes I wish for a tin roof so I can hear the full effect of the rain on it.
Ron
Rains Heartbeat (Poetry) - 4/19/2013 5:22:38 AM
Carolee, you've done an excellent job of opening the doors of our imagination...Your poem reminds me of a short story written by Ernest Hemingway, titled "A Clean and Well Lighted Place" written while he was in Spain...your reference to the waiters with glances to the 'two'...Nice work.
Cheers,
Dan
Rains Heartbeat (Poetry) - 4/19/2013 2:55:38 AM
Was it all a dream, a beautiful dream?!?!
Not all as it ends up with a tender romantic moment when she, very caring, pulls up the sheets and brushes a wisp of hair from his forehead.
Beautiful and romantic Carol
Rains Heartbeat (Poetry) - 4/18/2013 5:33:33 PM
Whoah, does this take me back to a love like no other love I'll ever have again!
Love ya!
Jane
Rains Heartbeat (Poetry) - 4/18/2013 4:23:31 PM
Another pleasingly romantic poem by Lily of Lough Neagh, thank you!
Love,
Deborah
Rains Heartbeat (Poetry) - 4/18/2013 4:11:35 PM
Let it rain...........the rhythmic flow
of you poetic words, Lily...in harmonious
heart beat...are piercing my skin...touching
my soul...penetrating my mind...it defines
my deepest dream.....
Thank you for a sweet experience.
Rains Heartbeat (Poetry) - 4/18/2013 2:58:21 PM
you have caught the romantic rhythm of a wind fed rain so romanticly i need a towel to dry off.
budd
Rains Heartbeat (Poetry) - 4/18/2013 2:14:26 PM
This had me going, in fact it surprised me going from the room with the tables to her bedroom so quickly, I thought the woman must have been dreaming. Whatever! I may have been confused about that, but I wasn't confused about how you managed to make the words flow in a romantic and real-time love affair.
Umbrellas of love (Poetry) - 4/18/2013 7:07:30 AM
Another romantic poem from the top poetrese of AD. Your words fall softly and gently on those who look for a romantic interlude wanting to be loved and sharing their life with someone who can give what the other needs. Knowing there are no guarantees and that love is a commitment between two hearts that beat as one...
Love,
Deborah
Umbrellas of love (Poetry) - 4/18/2013 2:04:52 AM
Tranquility of loves memories
So beautiful depictured in the verses of this poem
All that your eyes see and your senses feel
Reminds you of his wonderful love for you
breathtaking again
Umbrellas of love (Poetry) - 4/17/2013 12:57:50 PM
Your imagination and imagery are compelling for this very romantic piece. Love is the answer here.
Di
Umbrellas of love (Poetry) - 4/17/2013 7:30:45 AM
So bittersweet your memories
*Carolee*
which I embraced as I read
so tenderly..
Lady Vivian
Umbrellas of love (Poetry) - 4/17/2013 5:59:42 AM
Surrounded by the sand, birds, flowers and sea, you are treading on memories of love. What more could anyone ask?
Ron
Umbrellas of love (Poetry) - 4/17/2013 4:18:28 AM
~Lily~
Art suspended under each petal..love's reflective whispers.
Beautifully penned in tender and charming verses.
Lady Mary Ann
Umbrellas of love (Poetry) - 4/17/2013 3:43:26 AM
yes a beautiful walk among natures gift
budd
Umbrellas of love (Poetry) - 4/16/2013 11:20:24 PM
Wonderful use of the ever changing nature of dandelion, Lily.
It doesn't exist at once. Only the Nature's elements
(air, sun, water, earth) can poor themselves into a dandelion,
following (knowing) the pattern imprinted in the seeds.
So is the music, the pattern's written in the score...becomes
sound of song, or/and instrumental play...by performance.
So is human living, action. We never have the whole thing
at once...can pick up only a little portion of...performance,
like love....the rest becoming, well... memory...that can be
poor together......when with nature.....
Everything is a performance.
Umbrellas of love (Poetry) - 4/16/2013 6:25:50 PM
Such a bittersweet sentiment........ah, love! A soul warmer for sure.
Love ya!
Jane
Umbrellas of love (Poetry) - 4/16/2013 2:40:48 PM
When you can find those memories which soothe and caress and console you it is a happy day indeed.
Umbrellas of love (Poetry) - 4/16/2013 2:40:41 PM
As always, one of the dens best romanticists...e
Umbrellas of love (Poetry) - 4/16/2013 2:31:11 PM
"whilst yellow petals turn to white umbrellas..." very, very cool image language, Lily. This poem gives a temperature and balm of gentleness. Nice ~~ djl
Silence Falls (Poetry) - 4/8/2013 9:50:19 PM
excellent write
a very scary picture like a tornado in the making
Peace be with you
William
Silence Falls (Poetry) - 4/5/2013 10:21:57 AM
The darkness and struggle against the storm life forces so many times.
It can almost totally suck out the last spark of energy.
How wonderful when we can reach with the last bit of inner force the light, the silence, the inner peace.
Beautiful Carol
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 4/5/2013 10:12:06 AM
The depiction of serenity, this beautiful early morning scene.
Slowly flowing into a scene of romance with a wonderful and magical climax..........................................
~~ Intoxicated by the magic of her soul their eyes meet ~~
Wonderful Carol
Silence Falls (Poetry) - 3/27/2013 1:13:38 PM
Thanking the Lord *Lily*
that YOU are not silent!!
Lady Vivian
Silence Falls (Poetry) - 3/26/2013 12:09:27 PM
wow--quite the imagination you have there
Silence Falls (Poetry) - 3/25/2013 3:51:36 PM
I held my breath while I read this and released it when I came to the end, with the light. Calm at the end of the storm...
Released from this leash, shining from the light!
Teresa
Silence Falls (Poetry) - 3/25/2013 12:25:29 PM
To me, this sounds like a person coming back to reality. For this person was clinically depressed, "Silence Falls"....seeing light again. Your poetry is breathless!
Love,
Deborah
Silence Falls (Poetry) - 3/24/2013 10:25:50 AM
wow so many people can relate to this on different levels
Silence Falls (Poetry) - 3/24/2013 9:25:57 AM
reminds me of my own life storms, well put...Bob-
Silence Falls (Poetry) - 3/24/2013 7:53:56 AM
I have never known faeries (I love that word) to reside in a storm, but I detect that this is some sort of nightmare of mixed emotions where you finally begin to pick away at the edges until you see the “light.”
Ron
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/24/2013 6:26:16 AM
A beautiful and descriptive magic you weave in every word of poetry you write. I loved it, Lily.
Love and Dreams,
Karen
Silence Falls (Poetry) - 3/24/2013 4:53:37 AM
this bespeaks of a wanted inner calm
budd
Silence Falls (Poetry) - 3/24/2013 2:12:39 AM
The calm after the storm is always a marvelous thing.
Silence Falls (Poetry) - 3/23/2013 5:49:26 PM
~Lily~
Light of life assurance. The silence befalls us only for a moment.
Lady Mary Ann
Silence Falls (Poetry) - 3/23/2013 5:29:27 PM
To reach that light and sun and get out of the storm is what so many of us do daily on different levels.
Love ya!
Jane
Silence Falls (Poetry) - 3/23/2013 5:22:27 PM
I love the images you instil in my mind, that some how I'm the person walking in that pic and having your thoughts as you wrote them.
Marvelous probing poetry.
George
Silence Falls (Poetry) - 3/23/2013 2:54:50 PM
All storms pass with all things. The struggle to survive and hold on is what prevails. Wonderful peom with an erie feel tio it.
Stay well and keep writing
Eddy
Silence Falls (Poetry) - 3/23/2013 1:21:19 PM
Eerie and mysterious is this gem, Carol. The staggering walk-run toward the center of this person's world is mired with mixed emotions and desire. To what end does this person seek?
Silence Falls (Poetry) - 3/23/2013 12:34:46 PM
One should never pick at anything on their person as it is bad for the health...? e
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/23/2013 10:01:41 AM
written with a palpable yearning. Peace to you ...
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/22/2013 3:41:49 PM
I really can't add more here to previous comments. but always in these types of writings a serenity comes through a peacefulness.
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/22/2013 10:13:33 AM
Full of magic and grace and very intoxicating for them both.
Di
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/22/2013 8:57:16 AM
Thank you for sharing this magical and mystical experience, Carol. Your gift stirs the imagination. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/22/2013 8:07:46 AM
The stepping stones of these words created magic in my soul, Carol...
My mind is still thinking about the beauty written here!
Awesome!
Teresa
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/21/2013 5:26:57 AM
This is full of grace, Lily. Two segments especially leap out of this poem for me: "...she throws the smattering of droplets left into the air," "And there she is the song," I just love "And there she is the song." ~~ Diana
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/21/2013 5:15:30 AM
An absolutely beautifully composed piece of a jewel
Enjoyed reading with refreshing pleasure
Love & Peace be with you
William
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/21/2013 4:18:43 AM
A magical moment, indeed!
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/20/2013 7:16:46 AM
I wonder what was in that coffee? Whatever it was, it sure was hot!
Ron
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/20/2013 5:57:15 AM
Lily this is a lovely portrait of a magic woman. Well penned and enjoyed.
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/20/2013 5:50:55 AM
wow--I keep thinking there should be a Part 2 to this and maybe even a 3rd chapter----excellent
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/20/2013 3:37:12 AM
Truly Outstanding poetry!!Laura
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/19/2013 9:38:18 PM
Oh! MY!! *Lily* Exquisite..
Totally entranced by this one!!!
Lady Vivian
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/19/2013 3:53:38 PM
as everyone before me has already said wonderful poem
budd
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/19/2013 3:35:11 PM
~Lily~
Lovely this romantic poem..smattering of droplets left in the air..
Beautifully penned.. there eyes meet..ah!!
Lady Mary Ann
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/19/2013 2:25:36 PM
Another filled with beauty and romance like you do so well, intoxicated by the magic of her soul their eyes meet. Sighing deeply
Gail
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/19/2013 12:51:07 PM
There truly is, magic in her soul
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/19/2013 12:50:28 PM
There you go again, Carol...another perfectly romantic way to see life & the world...e
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/19/2013 12:12:26 PM
I am entranced reading this marvelously exquisite poem!
Blessings,
Christine
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/19/2013 12:04:43 PM
Carolee, this is absolutely wonderful...getting a glimpse of the 'Magic of her Soul'
Cheers,
Dan
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/19/2013 11:32:49 AM
Ahhhhhhhhh. What a lovely picture you paint!
T h a n k s !!
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/19/2013 10:52:18 AM
Carol, You are the most magical of souls and a romantic woman who writes of romance with words that echo in our hearts and dreams knowing that each one of us, (those that are looking) will find
their twin flame...
Love,
Deborah
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/19/2013 10:12:53 AM
The delicateness of this moment would be shattered by a blink. Lovely.
Love ya!
Jane
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/19/2013 10:06:37 AM
You have a beautiful soul. The eloquence of beauty shines in the poem. Wonderful write.
Stay well and keep writing
Eddy
Magic of her Soul (Poetry) - 3/19/2013 9:49:05 AM
You. Have. Done. It. Again. Carol. You have homespun your words and enchanted your audience. You have made from your phrases gentle lovers of your words. You, poet, are wonderful.
Etching Memories (Poetry) - 3/18/2013 3:41:13 PM
rolls right off the lips ... smooth ...
Etching Memories (Poetry) - 3/18/2013 2:26:18 PM
Just great Lily, let everything be engraved with that love!
Mark
Etching Memories (Poetry) - 3/17/2013 5:01:20 PM
A muse-inspired beautiful and lyrical verse!
Blessings, xx
Christine
Etching Memories (Poetry) - 3/13/2013 10:44:06 PM
Splendid verses and rhyme...love the meter and the images encompassed within. Let not the heart be as fragile as the one written in sand.
Etching Memories (Poetry) - 3/13/2013 3:37:58 PM
Beautiful write.
Etching Memories (Poetry) - 3/11/2013 6:17:03 AM
"Let naught the waters wash it
engraved it must remain
one-heart two names within it
scribed pyramids the same"
These four lines encircle the human condition in the last two of those lines. That is colossal, Lily. ~~ Diana
Etching Memories (Poetry) - 3/9/2013 4:55:30 PM
So inspiring is this love
with which you so elegantly
write *Lily* Opening ones
heart to an amazing warmth
Lady Vivian
Etching Memories (Poetry) - 3/9/2013 1:51:37 PM
to be able to share amoment like that with someone special is a gift.YOu brought this to life.
Etching Memories (Poetry) - 3/9/2013 1:23:41 PM
It's almost like I was sitting there with you, sharing the sand,
the breeze,a salty kiss, whilst tickling the palm of your hand...
Etching Memories (Poetry) - 3/9/2013 8:12:52 AM
Your visual expression is always felt, words deep from the heart in this poem.
Di
Etching Memories (Poetry) - 3/9/2013 6:41:06 AM
This is really a beautiful poem Carol, very romantic dreams.
Gail
A beautiful new picture of you as well.
Etching Memories (Poetry) - 3/9/2013 5:01:43 AM
~Lily~
Beauty in the etched heart, scribed initials and the sounds of waves
ever to remain the tears of love endearing within your hearts.
Lady Mary Ann
Etching Memories (Poetry) - 3/9/2013 12:14:54 AM
Beautiful Write enjoyed reading
Love & Peace be with you
William
Etching Memories (Poetry) - 3/8/2013 7:14:59 PM
So Enchanting and such a lovely photo to go along with this beautiful poem Laura
Etching Memories (Poetry) - 3/8/2013 1:51:21 PM
What a wonderful expression of love and romance, drawing a heart for you on the beach with both names in it. He must have touched your heart deeply with it.
You both share the same feeling of romanticism.
What a beautiful pair of lovers you are Carol
Etching Memories (Poetry) - 3/8/2013 1:39:58 PM
Carol, Anything between two lovers is romance to me...
Love,
Deborah
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