MY PENSIVE LINES (Short Story) - 5/8/2013 12:53:48 AM
Good write-up. Really heart-touching. Keep it up.
MY PENSIVE LINES (Short Story) - 9/28/2011 9:57:27 AM
A powerful and emotion-filled story that kept me in it's grasp from the beginning to the sad ending.
MY PENSIVE LINES (Short Story) - 9/21/2011 6:19:24 PM
really riveting writing within an interesting story. the bolded words were distracting- there was no additional message there that i understood. interesting writing.
Behind my face (Poetry) - 8/22/2012 10:22:02 PM
Excellent work...once you begin to question the face you show to the world... your true self comes through and above it all.
Behind my face (Poetry) - 2/16/2012 11:23:44 AM
Serious wonderment...beautifully written.
Shadows (Poetry) - 1/22/2012 8:39:25 AM
i do not see why the R rating...this is a beautiful poem, as you helpfully explain death...and i suppose...many losses...fill the parallel pathways...lovely poem -thanks for sharing
Behind my face (Poetry) - 1/8/2012 5:21:25 PM
very nice work. i too wonder who is the me, behind the face of me. we must keep asking and searching.