Recent Reviews for Marie Wadsworth
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Let Her Dream (Book) - 3/19/2004 5:15:33 PM
I LOVE THIS!!! I can't believe you EVER doubted whether you could write poetry at all.. You dream girl.. and go FREE and dream big and bold and let the universe hear you.. your voice matters.
love, Donna
Trick or Treat? (Short Story) - 12/29/2008 4:21:51 AM
This has the makings of a great story, the only think I would consider changing is the scene where the boyfriend/cop comes to the door and she says she has to get it...
Would he just let her go because she asked him to...and when he hid why didn't she just dash right out the door, you are probably meaning that he hid behind her with knive to her back so maybe just add a little more detail at that scene. Other than that very nicely done.
fee
SWFF: Last of the Jedi Episode 1 (Short Story) - 8/9/2007 3:48:38 AM
Though I was never a Star Wars Fan, my little brother was though, I found this both an interesting and enjoyable read as you build up steam from the opening dream sequence up until the evil father gloating at the end...
Fee
FF: Why Can't I Find a Super Man? -- No. 1 (Short Story) - 8/8/2007 3:02:48 AM
I like it. Brings back many memories of hours spent reading Marvel on hammocks, in cars, on back steps, at the beach etc. So many lessons were also learned from these comic series of superstars.
Fee
FF: Why Can't I Find a Super Man? -- No. 2 (Short Story) - 8/8/2007 2:59:37 AM
Hmnnn interesting and I would have been slightly insulted if my other half figured they had to buy the paper that my work would not speak for itself...and she seems pretty smart as most reporters are so instincts are kicking in...
Fee
Trapped By Addiction #2 (Short Story) - 8/6/2007 8:26:25 AM
Excellent story, Marie; very well penned! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Trapped By Addiction #2 (Short Story) - 8/6/2007 2:41:42 AM
Love the way you put the reader in the same room with them with your descriptive style, I felt I was eavesdropping from the next table. Also enjoyed the use of the children, you could almost read Sam's mind kicking into gear contemplating this but as expected the last line was the stunner. Look forward to more Marie.
fee
Trapped by Addiction #1 (Short Story) - 7/30/2007 7:19:34 PM
Sounds great, enjoyed this and will be looking forward to more!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Trapped by Addiction #1 (Short Story) - 7/29/2007 6:55:41 PM
Sounds like the start of another one of your good series stories Marie, will be looking forward to next installment soon.
Fee
Wings of Fire (Short Story) - 7/16/2004 2:57:25 AM
interesting read
Life of a cowboy (Article) - 11/11/2008 12:14:30 PM
An insightful view of the life of a cowboy ... great imagery, Marie. Thank you ... I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
Rising Gas Prices Cause Increase in Online Enrollment (Article) - 9/20/2008 1:34:41 PM
interesting read
Bullying: Hobbs Schools consider anti-bullying policy (Article) - 11/18/2007 4:47:39 PM
UP here in Nova Scotia they have a policy of automatic dismissal for bullying.
Fee
Bullying: Hobbs Schools consider anti-bullying policy (Article) - 11/18/2007 2:05:51 PM
interesting article, i think all schools are becoming policy driven regarding bullying
Bullying: Hobbs Schools consider anti-bullying policy (Article) - 11/18/2007 11:32:03 AM
As one who has gone through bullying (still live with the painful memories years later as a result), I think this is a very good idea. They also need to put prayer/discipline back into the homes/schools.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Navajo jewelry (Article) - 1/15/2007 7:20:11 AM
All that effort creates true beauty and you expressed it so well. Thank you for sharing.
Branding: Just another part of the cowboy lifestyle (Article) - 5/29/2006 3:04:01 AM
Very interesting and informative write, I like to learn new things and you have given me a good lesson in some of the aspects of the cowboy life. Very well written Marie.
Fee
Life of a cowboy (Article) - 5/1/2006 2:29:50 AM
Interesting character with strong images of what is going on and how this cowboy's life is lived.
Felix
From hell to heaven: Hurricane Katrina evacuee shares her story (Article) - 4/3/2006 4:32:00 PM
Thank you for sharing this inspiring story
God Bless
Michelle!
Mirage (Poetry) - 11/23/2009 5:07:40 PM
This group of verses is like a mini art gallery of words...lovely indeed.
fee
Thunderbird (Poetry) - 11/23/2009 5:05:45 PM
You paint a vivid picture with sweeping brushstrokes of your mind.
fee
Blessings (Poetry) - 11/23/2009 5:04:38 PM
This is comforting in a world that lately seems to be sooo much gloom and doom...yet, if we take the time we can still find so much beauty around us free to enjoy.
fee
Thunderbird (Poetry) - 11/23/2009 11:55:26 AM
A lovely vivid rendition is born from your verses, Marie. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Nature Abounds (Poetry) - 9/9/2009 8:26:52 AM
Beautiful, smooth, seamless, and I could almost smell the pine, listen to the chirping birds. The poem takes a turn in L11, and the imagery explodes. You have captured the moment better than a wide angle zoom lens could, and that is poetry of top drawer!
Nature Abounds (Poetry) - 7/22/2009 4:37:56 PM
My father used to tell me, "Stay close to nature and you will stay close to God." Your poem reminds me of this, Marie. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Nature Abounds (Poetry) - 7/22/2009 3:34:49 PM
You paint a picture that is more crisp and clear than any camera lens could possibly capture and it is one of peace and beauty....good to see you posting again Marie
hugs
fee
Rune Tree (Poetry) - 5/23/2009 4:13:46 PM
Marie as always your writes are always worth reading and this one is no exception. Well done.
fee
Fifty Years Ago (Poetry) - 5/22/2009 9:35:48 PM
This is a fine tribute and gift for your aunt and uncle, Marie. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Rune Tree (Poetry) - 5/22/2009 9:34:45 PM
An interesting and insightful perspective, Marie. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Fifty Years Ago (Poetry) - 5/8/2009 4:07:50 PM
Just perfect...congratulations to them.
fee
To Catch Butterflies (Poetry) - 4/6/2009 4:53:04 PM
Spring is barely making an appearance here so there are no butterflies yet. I love this ode to spring from your verses and the graphic image very nicely complements the whole offering. Thank you for sharing, Mary. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Commencement (Poetry) - 4/6/2009 4:47:41 PM
These are worthy thoughts, Mary. I appreciate your philosophical perspective. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Winter Storm (Poetry) - 3/6/2009 1:56:43 AM
Astorms lullaby can indeed put you to sleep. But then we have a tin roof. nice poem. come visit sometime. randy
Just You and I (Poetry) - 2/27/2009 9:22:43 AM
Good to see your words of Love, and encouragement. Leslie
Just You and I (Poetry) - 2/26/2009 11:36:46 AM
Ideally, that's the way it ought to be, Mary. Thank you for sharing these lovely sentiments; a fine gift for your sister and her fiance. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Just You and I (Poetry) - 2/26/2009 5:56:01 AM
This poem captures my immediate moment. I love it. It says it all. Very good work of words, thoughts and emotions. Blessings!
chijike
Just You and I (Poetry) - 2/26/2009 2:35:34 AM
Well done and so close to being the lyrics to a bride and groom waltz that you should really explore that possiblity. Would make a lovely wedding present for them. I wrote the waltz for the father daughter waltz at my daughters wedding and she loved it as a special gift from me to her.
hugs
Fee
Waiting for the Train (Poetry) - 2/19/2009 8:23:35 PM
makes me want to ride a train somewhere, in the middle of the night, with my lover, my wife! Good poem marie, long time no see, Leslie
Valkerie (Poetry) - 12/29/2008 10:41:58 AM
When one loves --
Whether it be beauty,
Knowledge or anything --
There's bound to be
Joy and pain
So true, Marie. I can vouch for that. Again, the image that you have chosen very aptly complements your verses. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Make Love By Moonlight (Poetry) - 12/29/2008 10:40:31 AM
Sensually compelling verses, Marie; and the photo very nicely complements the whole offering. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Angel of Roses (Poetry) - 12/29/2008 10:39:31 AM
I believe in angels. I do not know where I'd be now if they had not stepped in and saved me from certain disaster time and time again. Thank you for sharing, Marie. Love and blessings to you,
Regis
Valkerie (Poetry) - 12/29/2008 4:35:09 AM
Great write and loved the picture, such a perfect compliment to your words Marie.
fee
Winter Storm (Poetry) - 12/28/2008 5:41:21 PM
I can completely relate to these sentiments, Marie. I love to fall asleep to the song of the wind and the rain. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Winter Storm (Poetry) - 12/2/2008 3:55:44 AM
wow...great write,really enjoyed the storm,the rain...good picture one gets,though practically getting drenched sends shivers..but this was wow....!!! neerja
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