Recent Reviews for John H Bidwell
Unguarded Moment (Short Story) - 5/20/2011 9:39:11 AM|
Tremendous, John, tremendous. You amaze me with your depth of feeling and your ability to express it in your writing. (Clapping) BRAVO, my friend, BRAVO.
Hugs to you,
Unguarded Moment (Short Story) - 3/23/2011 5:34:11 AM
A beautiful love story. And the ending was beyond perfect. What shall I call you? YOURS! Heavenly.
Unguarded Moment (Short Story) - 3/17/2011 3:57:48 PM
Nicely done, John. I applaud you the ending.
Nightmare (Short Story) - 1/18/2011 7:00:58 AM
This gripped me and held me until, in the end I let out the breath I didn't know I'd been holding onto. The depth of empathy and insight here is surely from a deep connection with Light/Love.
Nightmare (Short Story) - 12/22/2009 12:35:30 PM
wow... if we could only use the other 90% of our brain, what might we see... what might we know...?
Return of a Stranger (Short Story) - 10/31/2009 6:28:03 AM
For some reason it reminds me of my brother, he lived in Boston. When he died in 2007 my Mom and I were there. When people in his building and a local store found out he died they said such wonderful things about him and some didn't even know his name. Now I will be able to think of him, that people cared when he no longer walked by. Thank you John
Nightmare (Short Story) - 10/31/2009 6:21:58 AM
John, that was amazing. When I first started to read, I thought oh no, not another attack. You made it into something amazing. I have always had a hard time with religion and as I get older I've learned that I am comfortable with my beliefs, not necessarily someone else interpretation of God's way. I really enjoyed it.
Nightmare (Short Story) - 10/24/2009 3:07:05 PM
Return of a Stranger (Short Story) - 10/24/2009 2:56:19 PM
Very good story to share indeed. Perhaps you'll have a chance to really get to know him now. Enjoyed, LadyJ
Nightmare (Short Story) - 7/15/2006 5:25:27 PM
Great message- I haven't ever seen a Christian arguement that is prochoice. Last time I checked, abortion was NOT addressed in the bible specifically, and like so many issues is all about interpretation. It was refreshing to see a different interpretation.
Nightmare (Short Story) - 12/13/2005 11:15:22 AM
Ah yes John , God as they concieve Him to be but not my God .Forgive them Lord for they know not what they do.Great message to all. Luke
Nightmare (Short Story) - 3/14/2005 4:46:20 AM
John, 'Judge not, lest ye be judged' I do my best to live by those words. This world would be a much better place if all would try it. Only God and myself, has to be aware of what I hold within..and even then my own opinions are not His.
A very powerful message you've penned here John. Thank you for sharing it.
Return of a Stranger (Short Story) - 2/9/2005 3:34:20 AM
Nightmare (Short Story) - 2/9/2005 3:32:28 AM
Return of a Stranger (Short Story) - 10/12/2003 8:06:57 AM
Just plain good.
Nightmare (Short Story) - 10/12/2003 8:01:49 AM
John: Obviously you being in the healthcare profession has given you great compassion. This has been a wonderful thing for me to read on a Sunday morning when I probably should be at church. This has given me some new insights into abortion; this is what true Christianity is all about.
Return of a Stranger (Short Story) - 8/7/2003 2:21:28 PM
This is a good story and it has reminded me of a something similar with a 'man-of-the-road' that took place with my husband and I some years back, I think I am going to have to write it up! Jackie <> <
Nightmare (Short Story) - 8/7/2003 2:16:01 PM
A question we should all ask ourselves, "What would Jesus do in this situation" Certainly something to make all of us think twiceabout making judgements. Jackie <> <
Nightmare (Short Story) - 5/15/2003 6:28:23 AM
Excellent insight into God's
point of view on this delicate
topic. This write speaks volumes.
I will read it again..
Nightmare (Short Story) - 4/4/2003 8:54:24 PM
Wow...a very difficult subject you tackled here and a very good job you have done with it. You've brought about a different view point and taken the opinions and objects of the two sides into a new light.
What an excellent write....bravo!!!
Return of a Stranger (Short Story) - 3/9/2003 12:44:32 PM
im anopther who looks forward more to your stories this was so entertainingly upliftring and yet funny nice job on this
Return of a Stranger (Short Story) - 3/8/2003 8:41:25 PM
This is wonderful!!!
I'm looking forward to more stories!!!
Sweet On You. (Poetry) - 4/28/2012 2:19:41 AM
Sorry to see you leave, John...good luck. This poem touches the heart and is very romantic. Thank you for sharing.
Sweet On You. (Poetry) - 4/20/2012 10:38:23 AM
How lovely John, beautifully written. I'm glad your back many I wish to follow. Thank you for the picturesque words.
That's Why (Poetry) - 9/8/2011 5:28:33 PM
Almost magical. Thank you for sharing that.
That's Why (Poetry) - 9/4/2011 12:31:01 PM
Beautiful poem John,
Keep dreaming; keep smiling.
Barbara J. Henry
Dream Of You (Poetry) - 7/8/2011 10:00:50 PM
I can relate to this completely as I am experiencing this kind of "thing" right now and, because of past experiences... ...I do worry. Thank you for sharing, John. Love and peace to you,
A Dancing To (Poetry) - 7/5/2011 3:20:35 PM
I love this. More of us need to take the time to dance through life.
Don’t Tell Me You’re Not Here. (Poetry) - 5/20/2011 1:35:19 PM
You are so right, John...Gazebos can hold dear, the magical places for a poet's heart! So fitting that love is there, and all around ....for us to write about.
Nobody Dares (Poetry) - 5/20/2011 9:53:38 AM
It sounds like you had a difficult childhood, John. My inner child's heart reaches out to yours with a hug. It always amazes me -- volumes are spoken in a poem, and though the lines are few, the pain is faced, embraced, and there is a cleansing that comes from feeling the words as we are writing them. Well done, John, well done.
Hugs to you,
Sweet On You. (Poetry) - 5/20/2011 9:36:58 AM
Oh John, your heart simply radiates through every word you write. This is wonderful and I love how you write.
Hugs to you,
Sweet On You. (Poetry) - 5/14/2011 6:58:13 AM
You have a lot of friends here who will miss you. I can imagine you are busy, though, and wish you health and happiness always.
Candlelight is something I don't get to see very often. I can't have any matches around because of my son. I had a four alarm fire in my yard the other day. I have to say, though, the tykes that did it sure did a good job getting rid of the weeds. And the fire did a great job of weeding out which neighbors are truly going to be friends. Anyway, you were a fireman so I thought you might like to know.
Sweet On You. (Poetry) - 5/13/2011 6:24:55 AM
John don't stay gone long, you'll be greatly missed. Lovely poem.
Reading (Poetry) - 5/11/2011 11:12:19 AM
You have an amazing knack to combine rhyme, rhythm and heart. Patrick
Sweet On You. (Poetry) - 5/6/2011 10:11:12 AM
This is indeed a very sweet offering, John. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you,
Sweet On You. (Poetry) - 5/4/2011 10:49:01 AM
Farewell for now, John. Patrick
Sweet On You. (Poetry) - 4/27/2011 4:28:48 AM
Sad to hear you are leaving, but glad if it's best for you! I will miss you,and pray you'll have all you need and that your dreams and desires are met!
Sweet On You. (Poetry) - 4/26/2011 7:13:06 AM
Lovely poem John, I will really miss you and your great writing. Take care of your family, hope to see you back here, May God bless you lots and lots in your life. Thanks for all the great poetry. Baz
Sweet On You. (Poetry) - 4/26/2011 2:57:41 AM
Well...Sweet John I will miss you here on AD ... but sometimes we have to do what's in our heart and I certainly understand about being with your family...just remember you always have a freind in me and I will always be here for you always...please stay safe and well...Hugsss... and this poem is breath taking ... sighhhhh..... just like the man who wrote it...take care my sweeet friend......
Chanti xoxoxo....keep smiling OK
Sweet On You. (Poetry) - 4/25/2011 4:41:47 PM
John focus where you are needed...come back when you are ready..the sooner the better~
Sweet On You. (Poetry) - 4/25/2011 3:46:27 PM
John, I will miss you on AD but hopefully we can stay in touch on facebook. You are such a loving man and these words are so sweet! You take care my friend. :)
Sweet On You. (Poetry) - 4/25/2011 3:09:58 PM
You will be missed my friend and especially with such tender love poems as this for the romantics in the crowd. Hurry back.
That's Why (Poetry) - 4/25/2011 12:34:24 PM
Love it..yeah love it..
gonna miss ya kiddo..don't stay away too long from AD ..please?
Sweet On You. (Poetry) - 4/25/2011 12:29:42 PM
Needless to say, this is a sad day indeed..my best pal is leaving..darn it John!!!
You and I were supposed to explain the love of Twin Flames here AD..now ya know there's no man here that fathoms the role of Twin Flames better than YOU! So, with that in mind, you come BACK here real quick..ya hear me?????
Go do your thing kiddo..do your thing then resume blessing all of us here with your sublime verse..OK?
PS I sure am gonna miss your poetry.. .:(
Sweet On You. (Poetry) - 4/25/2011 12:01:10 PM
I can understand leaving. I do the same thing from time to time. Make your time gone to be beneficial.
Sweet On You. (Poetry) - 4/25/2011 11:23:39 AM
Words spoken so dear with much devotion a touching write indeed Laura
Sweet On You. (Poetry) - 4/25/2011 11:03:56 AM
So soft...the velvet touch of the Gentle~Man, we know as John!
Prayers ascending as your admirers write...a healing for your family,
and your poetry to return to us very soon!
Sweet On You. (Poetry) - 4/25/2011 9:34:51 AM
Your wonderful writing will certainly be missed, John, but family is always a priority! Blessings...I hope everything goes well for you and you're back really soon.
Sweet On You. (Poetry) - 4/25/2011 9:32:35 AM
Awe John you will be missed my friend....I understand when it's time to take care of family, because they are the greatest of gifts. God Bless You and I hope you gift us with your presence again someday.
That's Why (Poetry) - 4/25/2011 6:07:22 AM
One does not even have to admit to being a dreamer...
to Love this one! Thanks, John!!
Her & Me (Poetry) - 4/25/2011 6:01:46 AM
As I read your words, thoughts of the "Desperato" song lyrics came to mind..."You better Love somebody, before it's too late"...for surrealism to surface.
Cooking Class (Poetry) - 4/25/2011 5:48:54 AM
Cookin` don't last...but Kissin` do!
Your kitchen of romance!!
Exciting to read what was on your mind...Lady Vivian
That's Why (Poetry) - 4/23/2011 3:33:19 AM
Notes (Poetry) - 4/22/2011 9:22:28 PM
Tears that flow...become a river...and brings a message in a bottle
to fruition...such is your pen...John, who writes the love notes!
Her & Me (Poetry) - 4/22/2011 2:47:22 PM
All too often we hurt the one we should appreciate more than any other. It is unexcusable but all we can do is beg forgiveness, and learn from our mistakes and hope the one we hurt loves us enough to accept our apologies.
That's Why (Poetry) - 4/22/2011 2:30:37 PM
Enjoyed and yes it seems as I grow older I too believe this way a lot more than ever before.
That's Why (Poetry) - 4/22/2011 2:27:15 PM
Nothing wrong with being a dreamer sweet John...we all are...lovely writing as always .... sighhhh....you truly are a blessing to all of us...Happy Easter John ...Hugsss..stay safe and well...
Chanti Lace xoxo......keep smiling OK
That's Why (Poetry) - 4/22/2011 12:47:44 PM
Wondrous poetry here John! Have to save this one!
That's Why (Poetry) - 4/22/2011 10:43:00 AM
I really like this John, one of your finest, dust and all. Patrick
That's Why (Poetry) - 4/22/2011 9:47:42 AM
And these are fine reasons "why," John. Thank you for sharing these lovely thoughts via your verses here. Love and best wishes,
That's Why (Poetry) - 4/21/2011 3:39:23 PM
Loved the lyrical flow of this poem, John! I'm a dreamer too...
Notes (Poetry) - 4/21/2011 11:13:34 AM
Felix got it right. Patrick
Cooking Class (Poetry) - 4/21/2011 10:27:24 AM
Very clever and fun to read. I'm sure you will be headed back for advanced studies. Patrick
Cooking Class (Poetry) - 4/21/2011 9:28:15 AM
Clever poem, I liked it, fresh angle on cooking. God bless. Baz
Her & Me (Poetry) - 4/21/2011 8:20:12 AM
John, I'm not quite sure where you were heading with this, but I think you got there. Its an intriguing write, but if I'm reading it correctly, I think you may have just "burned a bridge."
Good Luck and thanks,
Cooking Class (Poetry) - 4/21/2011 5:12:57 AM
"Al Dente" - perfectly cooked John.
Cooking Class (Poetry) - 4/21/2011 4:25:01 AM
Delightful poetry that keeps you glued to the page to see what happens next.:)
Cooking Class (Poetry) - 4/21/2011 3:57:44 AM
Giggle....this was naughty and so much fun!!!! Enjoyed, John!
Cooking Class (Poetry) - 4/21/2011 2:48:16 AM
Oh my...now sweet John this is soooooooooooooo hot...I think I need a drink...cooking guys.... wowwwwwwwwwwww......very interesting indeed but remember when you play with fire it can be so dangerous...but can lead into pure delight...sighhhhh...your heart is on fire darlin....smokinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn hot...Hugsss.....stay safe and well.... have a wonderful Easter..
Chanti Lace xoxoxo
Cooking Class (Poetry) - 4/21/2011 1:48:32 AM
I love it, wonderful story told in poetic good form...
Cooking Class (Poetry) - 4/20/2011 6:16:48 PM
Haha! You must have not been using the right recipe when you cooked this up. Took three time to get it right. Hah! But you finally made it and everything turned out scrumptious.
Notes (Poetry) - 4/20/2011 5:56:07 PM
It is not how long a note is, but what is in the note, this speaks volumes John~
I Love You (Poetry) - 4/20/2011 11:07:37 AM
Though the visions might, true love never fades. Patrick
I Love You (Poetry) - 4/20/2011 3:48:51 AM
I hope this lady comes around and returns the love. Your a beautiful man with so much love to give!! :)
Notes (Poetry) - 4/19/2011 3:12:57 PM
Lovely note and I would add a small PS note to that if it was me................"and I will do my best to keep you"
Notes (Poetry) - 4/19/2011 2:31:00 PM
I can relate to leaving those little notes. Unfortunately, I do not get ones like this:) Very nice!
Notes (Poetry) - 4/19/2011 1:55:35 PM
John, How very sweet...that is romance.
Notes (Poetry) - 4/19/2011 9:07:44 AM
Aw! Hopefully your special friend will appreciate what your ex did not...I think leaving romantic notes is amazing..enjoyed this, John.
Reading (Poetry) - 4/19/2011 8:56:06 AM
Wonderful rhythm to this poem, John! Heartfelt sentiment to a lively beat....well done!
Notes (Poetry) - 4/19/2011 7:14:16 AM
A "special" friend is a friend for life.
God bless you,
Notes (Poetry) - 4/19/2011 7:03:47 AM
John, Somehow this is sad and at the same time very uplifting. We just can't stop our brains from doing their thing, can we? Even though my memory is simply awful these days, "Every once in a while," I still go back.
Enjoyed this one immensely. Thanks Dick
Notes (Poetry) - 4/19/2011 6:04:05 AM
Beautiful writing sweet John...very sweet indeed sighhhh....keep smiling ....Hugsss....its so nice to need someone isn't it?..sighhh
Chanti Lace xoxo
I Love You (Poetry) - 4/19/2011 6:00:38 AM
Beautiful sonnet to love, John! A keeper....
If There’s A Muse (Poetry) - 4/19/2011 5:52:54 AM
I hear ya' loud and clear, John....I'm never truly alone. My muse is always right there with me....enjoyed!
Notes (Poetry) - 4/19/2011 5:33:25 AM
Wonderfully clever and sweet.
Nobody Dares (Poetry) - 4/19/2011 5:26:40 AM
I feel it John, my mother was a perfectionist too. I couldn't eat eggs when I was a child they made me sick. She would cook them for breakfast and if I didn't eat them I would still be sitting there that evening when my Daddy came home, then to bed with no supper. This poem goes deep into your memories and wounds. I'm so sorry for your pain.
Notes (Poetry) - 4/19/2011 5:25:43 AM
A Charming write indeed Laura
I Love You (Poetry) - 4/19/2011 5:24:56 AM
Oh My, this is so intense and so beautifully written. That last line is golden and expresses how love is priceless even if not returned.
Nobody Dares (Poetry) - 4/19/2011 5:18:31 AM
Sounds like Mother ran a tight ship....funny the things we remember...enjoye this little glimpse into your childhood, John.
I Love You (Poetry) - 4/18/2011 11:25:50 PM
Darn it John..you and I have the same disease ..we love and love and love yet, our 'beloveds' are nowhere to be seen..perhaps that is the fate such souls endure..
Well, at least we have a pen strong which knows where IT belongs..LOL!
I sure am saving this one..absolutely spot on!!!
Nobody Dares (Poetry) - 4/18/2011 7:27:16 PM
Double spaced...lines in between could solve the mystery...
lessons learned? Ponderings enough to read more than once
cleverly penned by John.
Nobody Dares (Poetry) - 4/18/2011 3:06:08 PM
Interesting turn of events that come out in this work...makes one wonder.
Nobody Dares (Poetry) - 4/18/2011 11:36:40 AM
It has been said that there are no accidents. I would have loved to be curbside. Patrick
Sleeping Through The Sunrise. (Poetry) - 4/18/2011 11:14:23 AM
I feel this way about the sunrise... but it rises earlier than I on most days. :~) When I do watch it it never disappoints...
Nobody Dares (Poetry) - 4/18/2011 8:56:55 AM
Oh, I've been there. . .this is really a good poem about a certain kind of parenting. Even with strict rules, there's still a lot of love.
Nobody Dares (Poetry) - 4/18/2011 8:40:16 AM
Every one makes mistakes darlin....your mom loved you very much sighhh........little boys are little boys now little girls well that another story sweet John.....lovely as always have a wonderful and safe day OK...Hugss,much love too you...Hugsss...no crying allowed ya hear me...sighhhh
Nobody Dares (Poetry) - 4/18/2011 5:43:43 AM
Family life gives great ideas for writing...e
Nobody Dares (Poetry) - 4/18/2011 4:45:41 AM
Spilt milk or sour milk, it's 6 of one and half dozen of the other. Or is it? Nice write John, but I think there were probably other factors at work here.
Nobody Dares (Poetry) - 4/18/2011 4:11:33 AM
A moving write Laura
If There’s A Muse (Poetry) - 4/17/2011 9:15:48 AM
sharing our conquests as well as defeats makes the journey more palatable ...
I Love You (Poetry) - 4/17/2011 3:17:36 AM
Oh my...this is breathless...your heart is so beautiful sweet John...Love is a wonderful thing don't ever let go what you feel in your heart darlin...sighhhh......as always wonderful writing just like the man who wrote it..Hugssss
Chanti Lace xoxoox
I Love You (Poetry) - 4/17/2011 2:15:22 AM
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
I Love You (Poetry) - 4/16/2011 5:23:31 PM
Perhaps that is the true meaning of love...to never let go.
I Love You (Poetry) - 4/16/2011 11:11:19 AM
A beautifully passionate piece of writing...I imagine this depth of Love could be almost painful to experience...
I Love You (Poetry) - 4/16/2011 11:08:17 AM
A Lovely poem indeed Laura
I Love You (Poetry) - 4/16/2011 10:20:35 AM
Divine love purifies our hearts and glorifies our being. What else can matter?
God Bless You,
I Love You (Poetry) - 4/16/2011 9:44:49 AM
Exposing Your heart...professing love...for beautiful is the
red rose, from a bud grows...and flowers so beautifully in Your Soul!
Thank You, John...from Love, Lady Vivian
I Love You (Poetry) - 4/16/2011 9:35:20 AM
If that love is not reciprocal, it can be intensely painful. I can relate to the love that you have describe with your verses here, John. Thank you. Love and peace,
If There’s A Muse (Poetry) - 4/15/2011 5:36:26 AM
What a beautiful relationship and poem.
Reading (Poetry) - 4/15/2011 5:35:07 AM
You write the sweetest romance poetry John, just lovely.
If There’s A Muse (Poetry) - 4/14/2011 1:42:02 AM
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
If There’s A Muse (Poetry) - 4/13/2011 1:25:59 PM
Very beautiful. And may your muse be with you forever.
Fate (Poetry) - 4/13/2011 11:23:07 AM
I'm a nervous passenger but you drove pretty well here. Patrick
Sleeping Through The Sunrise. (Poetry) - 4/13/2011 10:49:18 AM
Perfect rhythm and rhyme scheme. (Never used back to back rhy words before, hmmmm. You are absolutely right but I am so morning lazy. Best just to stay up all night and wait for the show.Patrick
If There’s A Muse (Poetry) - 4/13/2011 10:26:57 AM
If a muse is a reflection, then your pond runs smooth and deep and crystal clear. Patrick
If There’s A Muse (Poetry) - 4/13/2011 9:31:52 AM
A great write that applies to so many of us as poets and writers, when we find someone like that we hold them dear to our hearts and allow their love in to bless our words with their magic...
If There’s A Muse (Poetry) - 4/13/2011 9:07:19 AM
True friendship is a treasure and surely a muse can be a true friend (even if absent now and then for awhile). Thank you, John. Love and peace to you,
If There’s A Muse (Poetry) - 4/13/2011 7:00:10 AM
Well done John.
Sometimes mine takes off on road trips :=)
If There’s A Muse (Poetry) - 4/13/2011 6:44:20 AM
Clinging to every word, John...so beautifully penned by You! Having a muse or being one, is wonderfully exciting...Lady Vivian
If There’s A Muse (Poetry) - 4/13/2011 5:00:44 AM
Oh my....breath taking as always sweet John..its funny how some people can just take your breath completely away at times isnt' it?....have a wonderful and safe day OK....lovely writing indeed...Hugss...keep smiling always...
Chanti Lace xoxo
If There’s A Muse (Poetry) - 4/13/2011 4:46:55 AM
A Lovely poem indeed and words well told great write Laura
If There’s A Muse (Poetry) - 4/13/2011 4:13:14 AM
John - once again you have written a beautiful poem! You're the best!
God Bless You,
Reading (Poetry) - 4/12/2011 10:22:05 AM
To hear the words of prose from someone we care about truly...is a real blessing and a special treat. Enjoy my friend.
Reading (Poetry) - 4/12/2011 7:42:47 AM
Excellent work. The rhyme and meter are perfection.
Reading (Poetry) - 4/11/2011 6:38:11 PM
Very touching piece that strikes right at the emotions of the heart...
Be always safe,
Sleeping Through The Sunrise. (Poetry) - 4/11/2011 1:08:38 PM
John set the course...for the morning of the rising sun...to soar with the eagles, giving hope to those who have not yet learned to fly!...For as You painted this Inspiring picture, I very much wanted to wake up to the golden glow of the sun dancing...Lady Vivian
Reading (Poetry) - 4/11/2011 8:14:17 AM
Oh my ..how precious your words are...sweet John I know what you mean I felt that also awhile ago sighh..when someone enters your life its magical and it can happen just like you said it here....sighhhh lovely writing just like the sweet man who wrote these words...keep smiling ok...Hugsss
Chanti Lace xoxo
Sleeping Through The Sunrise. (Poetry) - 4/11/2011 5:01:00 AM
I always or most always wake up and enjoy the sunrise. Wonderful poem.
Tiger (Poetry) - 4/11/2011 5:00:01 AM
A wild man for some wild times. Lovely expression of passion John.
Sleeping Through The Sunrise. (Poetry) - 4/8/2011 4:55:23 AM
"Each day an opportunity to join or miss your chance" speaks the truth. We are here and then gone in the blink of an eye, and we can only just do our best to follow that voice within the beat. To love and forgive, to be there for our sunrises and loved ones.
Sleeping Through The Sunrise. (Poetry) - 4/8/2011 4:12:58 AM
Beautiful words and word pictures...
Sleeping Through The Sunrise. (Poetry) - 4/8/2011 4:02:29 AM
Enchanting write, John! And I couldn't agree with you more...there's breathtaking vistas all around us...and we have front row seats for free....
Sleeping Through The Sunrise. (Poetry) - 4/7/2011 9:59:41 PM
What a wonderful piece! Love to step outside early in the morning to observe the sun rising to begin a new day, just fascinating...
Be always safe,
Sleeping Through The Sunrise. (Poetry) - 4/7/2011 1:08:08 PM
I agree with Ed. Nothing beats the play of the
morning sun on the ocean. -gene.
Sleeping Through The Sunrise. (Poetry) - 4/7/2011 12:22:17 PM
Free yet not enjoyed by many. Beautiful piece.
Sleeping Through The Sunrise. (Poetry) - 4/7/2011 9:08:56 AM
John, My favorite time of the morning! I am an early riser and love to sip coffee while watching the sun rise. The simple things can mean so much! ~Chessly
Sleeping Through The Sunrise. (Poetry) - 4/7/2011 8:09:04 AM
Sounds divine sweet John..I love the sunrise ... when I am by a beautiful lake.....ohhhhhhhh yes divine..Hugss
Sleeping Through The Sunrise. (Poetry) - 4/7/2011 7:07:13 AM
What a lovely poem, makes me want to get up early tommorow, and that is something. Nature gives the most beautiful sights. God bless. Baz
Sleeping Through The Sunrise. (Poetry) - 4/7/2011 6:52:47 AM
The best beginning of the day is when it starts at the ocean...its like life renews itself daily...e
Tiger (Poetry) - 4/4/2011 7:31:51 AM
oh my Tiger, this is passion with a roooooaaar!(and a meow;)
Comfort (Poetry) - 4/3/2011 9:36:37 AM
John, I found my father deceased a few years ago. His loss affects me every day of my life. About a month ago I was driving singing a Doobie Brother song and felt the warm sun going right through me! I can't explain it but the grief got better that day. When we release the tears and grieve we heal our heart. We have to love ourself and take comfort knowing we will get through anything! Take care, ~Chessly
Tiger (Poetry) - 4/3/2011 9:13:30 AM
John, Very sweet poem of love, and devotion!! Roaring sexy! Take care, ~Chessly
Tiger (Poetry) - 4/2/2011 3:53:34 AM
Sensually explicit captures of the most natural of our instincts...well done my friend..
Tiger (Poetry) - 4/1/2011 10:57:06 AM
Charming poem and one of my favorites actually.
And what she said (down there below):)
Tiger (Poetry) - 4/1/2011 4:06:01 AM
PURRRRFECTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT..wowwwwwww ya got me purrin darlin..hot stuff hope your feeling better sweet John..also thank you for being you...sighhhh...Hugss
Chanti Lace xoxo
Tiger (Poetry) - 3/31/2011 5:38:43 PM
Well look at you, John, you've turned in a stellar performance in my humble opinion. THIS is very well constructed, edge of the seat kind of tale, with one hell of a twist at the end. Gotta love it! And I do.
Comfort (Poetry) - 3/31/2011 8:52:29 AM
The loss is always remembered even when we have to deal with reality.
Comfort (Poetry) - 3/31/2011 7:21:52 AM
Wow....you nailed this one John...so bittersweet that it tears at the heart and haunts the mind with images of loss...
Comfort (Poetry) - 3/31/2011 4:54:34 AM
Lovely poem, actually.
Comfort (Poetry) - 3/31/2011 4:17:17 AM
So sorry for your loss, but glad you wrote this poem out of your grief, If I could send you a card or flowers to acknowledge your grief I would. In the words of my poem, "May God comfort you in this time of grief, and from your sorrow and pain give you relief. May God hold you so tight in his arms, and carry you at this time in his palms. God bless. Baz
I Sea You (Poetry) - 3/28/2011 5:34:18 AM
Ooooh! This is so romantic and beautiful!!!! Well done, John!
I Sea You (Poetry) - 3/27/2011 6:48:59 AM
Peace be with you
Leave It To Me (Poetry) - 3/26/2011 9:04:59 AM
Hey! A fun romantic poem! Love it. Patrick
I Sea You (Poetry) - 3/25/2011 4:13:58 PM
John I swear you are raising the bar for us all in the romance writing department...this is fantastic my friend.
Just A Man (Poetry) - 3/25/2011 11:16:40 AM
Just an insanely romantic man. Patrick
I Sea You (Poetry) - 3/25/2011 11:05:08 AM
Romantic, romantic, romantic. Patrick
I Sea You (Poetry) - 3/25/2011 8:30:49 AM
The beach is a wonderful backdrop fro a love story. So beautiful.
I Sea You (Poetry) - 3/25/2011 6:34:38 AM
John, This poem is very loving, romantic, and dreammy!! Images of the sea are beautiful!! Lucky lady! Take care, ~Chessly
I Sea You (Poetry) - 3/24/2011 3:38:13 PM
Oh how utterly romantic...the use of the sea imagery in a love poem always does it for me! Beautiful poem.
Best wishes, Diana...
I Sea You (Poetry) - 3/24/2011 8:54:20 AM
How blessed is the one whom this poem is for! Your declarations of love are always charming and beautiful!
I Sea You (Poetry) - 3/24/2011 8:27:12 AM
Oh my..you have taken my breath away with your words sweet John....sighhh..now rest and feel better soon dear friend....keep smiling OK..Hugss
I Sea You (Poetry) - 3/24/2011 4:56:40 AM
Connected and eternal... so beautiful.
There is healing power and a great gift of love in your words.
I Sea You (Poetry) - 3/23/2011 8:03:17 PM
so beautifully written.....must be love.....~ Morgan
Sneaking Up Behind You (Poetry) - 3/23/2011 5:27:46 PM
I Sea You (Poetry) - 3/23/2011 5:26:10 PM
Ah John you and I never quit!
I am also rather ill..been so for days..but my pen never sleeps..it's 3AM here in Croatia,my temp is high..but who cares I just HAD to review this gem of a poem..You are the only male poet who truly GETS the Twin Flame concept..am proud of ya!
I'm saving this one..
Thank you dearest friend..
I Sea You (Poetry) - 3/23/2011 5:16:06 PM
Stop writing when you are sick...you should be in bed resting...
I Sea You (Poetry) - 3/23/2011 3:20:48 PM
Ah, John, you old devil you (old? naw, just an expression).
To write such fervent and tender verses takes a special kind of a heart, and anyone who reads these verses understands that. Especially, that special one, especially her.
Cares Away (Poetry) - 3/23/2011 10:22:19 AM
John, This poem is so tender and sweet, and sensual!! A massage is the ticket to a passionate surprise! Hey what happened after that if ya didn't go to sleep? Take care my friend. :)
Cares Away (Poetry) - 3/22/2011 5:37:30 PM
Nicely written John. The best part about going to bed with the person you love. Melissa
Cares Away (Poetry) - 3/22/2011 10:03:52 AM
To give that special touch felt in body, heart and soul is amazing..this is simply beautiful!
Just A Man (Poetry) - 3/22/2011 9:17:49 AM
There has to be contentment in your heart, John, to write with such romantic eloquence. Yes, there is more to you, alright! :) Excellent!
Cares Away (Poetry) - 3/21/2011 7:33:17 PM
very sensual.....~ Morgan
Cares Away (Poetry) - 3/21/2011 7:24:46 PM
sounds to me like the best part of the evening is just beginning...nicely sensually written.
Peace, love and light,
Cares Away (Poetry) - 3/21/2011 5:16:22 PM
this is tender & sensual & just all out beautiful in love
and the touch of loves hand and heart John-YOU!
Love's Bounty & Blessings
Cares Away (Poetry) - 3/21/2011 3:07:49 PM
John: You said it all - this is awesome, keep stroking she truly loves it.
God Bless You,
Cares Away (Poetry) - 3/21/2011 12:38:47 PM
Hmnnn sounds like you could be giving the rest of us lessons in being romantic my friend...well done.
Cares Away (Poetry) - 3/21/2011 12:24:30 PM
Nice way to wake her up, and nice that she was so agreeable about it. Enjoyed . . .
Cares Away (Poetry) - 3/21/2011 11:56:52 AM
Beautiful softness to this poem, how you tune in to her rhythm so naturally, the way you relax tightness and help her let go of defenses. None of your poems are ever rushed which is kind of amazing to read about in this rushing world. Therefore, as with all your poetry, this is dreamy and has great heart.
Cares Away (Poetry) - 3/21/2011 10:57:03 AM
I'm impressed! I usually get the elbow massage. Patrick
Just A Man (Poetry) - 3/21/2011 8:34:27 AM
Beautifully romantic words, John! How could anyone resist???
Just A Man (Poetry) - 3/21/2011 6:37:20 AM
Loved this poem, guess I can relate to the feeling of love not fulfilled, "its you or I'll forever grieve" is a fantastic line. Great poem. God bless. Baz
Just A Man (Poetry) - 3/20/2011 3:41:30 PM
This is eloquently passionate and honest.
Love and friendship make a life worth living. May you be surrounded by both sweet John.
Just A Man (Poetry) - 3/20/2011 2:43:05 PM
To fulfill the destiny of love I believe is what we all long for in our own way....you capture this well here.
Just A Man (Poetry) - 3/20/2011 1:56:06 PM
The consummate romantic you are...e
Going Home (Poetry) - 3/19/2011 7:32:42 AM
So deeply moving, John, one that appeals to the physical and spiritual; so please forgive me, for when I read this write, my emotions connected with a love so deep that it could only be for Jesus. Because of love so deep, He gave His life for all. Yes, this write deserves a shift to a higher level. Hope you don't mind my presumption.
Leave It To Me (Poetry) - 3/19/2011 4:12:41 AM
Fun, spontanious, just what life should be!
Leave It To Me (Poetry) - 3/18/2011 6:11:39 PM
Romantically upbeat and I think I could see you dancing too...
Be always safe,
Leave It To Me (Poetry) - 3/18/2011 8:56:53 AM
A lovely, lilting, romantic offering, John. Makes one feel like dancing. Love and peace to you,
Daylight Loving Time (Poetry) - 3/17/2011 9:19:22 PM
A fun unique view of temporal tomfoolery. I'm not a romance kind of poet but I like this. Patrick
Black Out (Poetry) - 3/17/2011 9:08:36 PM
I think this is the most fun I have EVER had reading a poem. Now I suppose that makes me a MCP, mentally only I assure you. Patrick
Passage (Poetry) - 3/17/2011 4:20:51 PM
Someone is swooning today, reading your beautiful tribute to her love. This is terrific writing!
Leave It To Me (Poetry) - 3/17/2011 4:18:28 PM
This is a genuine cheer-me-up poem, so cute and lively. We need more Happy rhymes!
Leave It To Me (Poetry) - 3/17/2011 3:12:13 PM
Always, and always leave it to you. A Man leads, a woman submits. Awesome John!
Leave It To Me (Poetry) - 3/17/2011 2:48:27 PM
To be in that kind of love and luxory of sharing it side by side, face to face....wow...beautiful, don't blame you for singing and dancing.
Leave It To Me (Poetry) - 3/17/2011 1:04:04 PM
John, Your soul is beautiful and I bet you are fun wherever you go! This poem is so uplifting and positive! I love it! Happy St.Pats to you my friend. :) Chessly
Leave It To Me (Poetry) - 3/17/2011 10:20:15 AM
Great poetry, with a heartfelt message for everyone . . . Live . . . Live life to the fullest.
Leave It To Me (Poetry) - 3/17/2011 8:54:59 AM
Yeees...I'm sure you eat your salads with a flair for life.
If this is for real, I hope there's karaoke wherever you go, although I'm sure YOU don't need it she might, to remove inhibitions you know. Ending on a most remarkable note, this is very rejuvenating.
Leave It To Me (Poetry) - 3/17/2011 8:48:34 AM
Ditto..you got it John do your way my sweet friend you are a wonderful ,sweet man..and I know that... sighhhh..wishing you the best forever .... stay safe and well and remember I am here for you always.....Hugsss
Chanti Lace your friend always
Passage (Poetry) - 3/16/2011 4:49:50 PM
You truly express the words many of us feel with this touching write that says so much about how strongly you feel.
Passage (Poetry) - 3/16/2011 4:13:47 PM
This is definitely a beautiful piece of classic romance.
Passage (Poetry) - 3/16/2011 1:26:56 PM
"And what is time? I’ll think of it no more-
But only time with you whom I adore" This line is breathtaking, your poem is simply beautiful~
Passage (Poetry) - 3/16/2011 11:56:01 AM
So beautifully romantic John, lovely work.
Passage (Poetry) - 3/16/2011 11:30:27 AM
This is an amazing gift of love for someone.
Your voice is soft and peaceful...tinged with bittersweet sadness.
Passage (Poetry) - 3/16/2011 9:27:52 AM
Beautifully stated and heartily felt by this reader. Poets write their lines with phrases full of love felt and loving back. When love has to be apart the words do not stop, but merely intensify.
Smile (Poetry) - 3/16/2011 7:48:24 AM
I read this one on two levels, John. The first as if it's about your significant other who has gone away; the second as if directed to Jesus as the lover of your soul. Either way, it's a beautiful write...deep and meaningful on both levels. Thank you!
Smile (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 7:31:17 PM
Awwww, so close and yet so far. Much warmth flowing through...
Be always safe,
Smile (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 5:39:05 PM
excellent rhyme, just like the previous Fugue you wrote. Smiles are key. Morgan
Smile (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 3:11:47 PM
When we love someone just seeing their smiles is enough to warm our hearts and make us love them all the more.
Smile (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 11:55:19 AM
A picture full of life, a smile can move a mountain!
Smile (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 11:54:37 AM
I know those feelings well, John. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace,
Smile (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 10:58:16 AM
You have quite a knack for these little love ballads, John. Patrick
Smile (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 8:16:40 AM
Beautiful poem, looking at pictures can bring such emotion, could picture you looking at a photo on your desk at work as you wrote this. God bless. Baz
Smile (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 7:06:41 AM
A smile can say so much! Very sweet words! She is one lucky lady to have you feel so much for her. Beautiful poetry my friend. :)
Smile (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 6:55:17 AM
your poetry makes everyone smile...e
Smile (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 6:44:00 AM
Wait a minute...didn't I just send you a pic? ;-)
Smile (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 6:28:42 AM
Lovely write. Wonderful expression of love.
Smile (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 5:59:56 AM
Oh my god this brought tears rolling down my face... so very beautiful sweet Johnn..sighhh....Hugsss..you left me speechless oh myyyyy
Chanti Lace xoxo
Smile (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 5:44:44 AM
Love poetry unsurpassed, John. When the rhyme rhymes there is nothing quite like that method of telling a story of love, it just seems to flower within itself. Very good.
Going Home (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 4:28:26 AM
Very smoothly done my friend... felt like I was walking along the road listening to you tell me your tale...
Going Home (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 4:09:16 AM
Deeply emotional write, John....poetry is a beautiful way to express our deepest feelings, and you write it very well!
Going Home (Poetry) - 3/14/2011 10:09:16 PM
You write with such conviction and ferver, yet it carries a meloncholy feel weaved in and out, well said...
Be alway safe,
Going Home (Poetry) - 3/14/2011 8:08:03 PM
Writing does cleanse the heart and who knows, might point the direction to a romance of epic proportions. Patrick