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Recent Reviews for ~ Chanti
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Home Intruder (Short Story) - 10/1/2009 7:08:11 AM
~Chanti, We're ALL human aren't we? Great read!
Deborah
The Tokoloshe (Short Story) - 10/1/2009 7:03:01 AM
~Chanti, Black/White and Gray---Love your writing.
Deborah
The Yard (Short Story) - 5/9/2009 2:26:40 AM
The title grabbed my attention Chanti and your gift of prose inspires me to read on - you are especially talented. God Bless, Darby :)
A New Page (Short Story) - 5/2/2009 5:07:19 AM
"a clean page", the birth place of creativity -- you've done this detached writing very well Chanti -- writing totally detached requires a blank page as well as opening up a totally new set of perspectives on everything you write about -- very difficult to successfully accomplish from my perspective -- after all of the years, I have collected baggage just as everyone does that is extremely difficult to simply jettison and write without it creeping into my work -- your youth has the advantage there -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael
A New Page (Short Story) - 5/1/2009 8:32:08 PM
It's nice to see You flex your creative muscle; feels good don't it?
To breath life into a fiction character can really get the juices flowing again and Jenny has a lot more in common with you than you realize. We all unconsciously build our characters out of our own life experiences until we become masters at fiction.
I never knew you had Mexican resturants down there!
A New Page (Short Story) - 4/30/2009 8:37:45 PM
We are constantly faced with life-changing choices and most of the time, we do not realize it. I like this very much, Chanti. Love and best wishes,
Regis
A New Page (Short Story) - 4/30/2009 7:00:10 AM
Well Chanti I see this as being the beginning of some great reading, so I hope you keep feeding us. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie hugs, Rose
A New Page (Short Story) - 4/29/2009 9:15:22 AM
Now there is a story line that will touch a cord with many writers, both male and female. It is a great way to start any new chapter in a life that is just not where the mind would like it to be. Reality is a hard thing to face when the imagination can churn out such beauty. Lady J
A New Page (Short Story) - 4/29/2009 7:51:59 AM
I like the story concept, Chanti, and you write it with great skill.
My only reservation is Jenny's passive (perhaps too passive) relationship with Craig. Having said that, I like the way the story develops and. particularly, the end of it--which may well lead Jenny
to click the delete button on Craig. -gene.
A New Page (Short Story) - 4/29/2009 6:50:01 AM
Sometimes, the thing that keeps us from venturing down a new path is accepting that we chose the wrong path in the first place. My delete button is well-worn, unfortunately, I haven't had the courage to empty lifes recycle bin...
but I'm getting there.
A New Page (Short Story) - 4/29/2009 2:07:52 AM
Great write Chanti and haven't we all hovered over that delete button a time or two.
hugs
Fee
Finding my Father (Short Story) - 4/8/2009 6:42:04 AM
"You are your father's daughter" - Oh Chanti, that story really got to me. My own father was a brilliant man, and he left when my brother and I were very little. The truth be told my mother turfed him out because frankly he was not as good at being a husband as he was at being a dad.
I did briefly re-connect with him by letter, and he said those words to me "You are your father's daughter" and they made me proud. My mother said those words too. Many times. When she said them, however, they were not meant as a compliment.
My father died before I could see him again.
I read your article several times, it is beautifully written and I know your dad is proud of you.
Nkosi Bayeti (a Zulu short story) (Short Story) - 4/7/2009 2:18:51 PM
I love this, Chanti, and admire your compelling narrative skill.
You are indeed a most talented writer. -gene.
I am now trying to complete my collection of stories (the Captain
Jack series) which my son pressured me to develop as a novel. I am
now up to chapter 25 and near (I hope) to the end. Since it is largely driven by dialogue you can see why I admire your narrative skill. -gene
One Hundred Thousand Years or more (Short Story) - 4/2/2009 10:55:15 AM
A beautiful love story...It makes me wish I knew the real story. It made me smile and laugh, yet also made me cry.
Superbly done...
Cryssa
Mucky Duck (Short Story) - 3/22/2009 10:39:54 AM
Indeed it did bring a smile but also warmed the heart. I'm glad to know that Mucky finally "fit in". The story of Mucky reminded me of the time my dad brought home two ducklings the same day my Mom brought home my baby brother. What a racket! Thanks for the story AND the memory! Mary Lou
The Yard (Short Story) - 3/4/2009 2:32:54 AM
For some reason, I suspected they were chickens from the start. Had I been wrong, I would have had to read it over with a new state of mind...lol. This is a fantastic story. Your use of personification brings this story to life. I like the gossipy feel to the yard throughout, and your word choices are superb. Way to write, Chanti:) Love and Hugs,
Sheila
Spinach Tooth (Short Story) - 2/26/2009 3:39:44 PM
Loved it---brought wide smile to my face. Been, there, done that ALMOST! For a paper trail story take a look at my Not So Hot story. Thanks for the laugh Chanti!
Spinach Tooth (Short Story) - 2/15/2009 8:40:39 AM
Comical and very human. After reading this I looked in the mirror to check my teeth, then I laughed after checking behind me for toilet paper and aliens. This is a funny, warmhearted, and compact mirrored memoir that allows us to reflect upon ourselves. Thanks Chanti for this enjoyable side-dish on life.
Starman
Nkosi Bayeti (a Zulu short story) (Short Story) - 1/26/2009 3:39:15 AM
Beautifully written! Your words counjour up movie-like imagees!! Superb!!
Nkosi Bayeti (a Zulu short story) (Short Story) - 11/4/2008 5:23:58 AM
Superbly written; visceral and uncompromising, beautiful in its way too.A marvellous evocation of a distictly African way of life.
Finding my Father (Short Story) - 8/16/2008 10:12:36 PM
If our father took good care of us when they were still alive, what more when they are now living to an immaterial world, where they come to be our angels to guide us eternally...AOUIE
A flight of imagination (Short Story) - 8/16/2008 9:56:22 PM
The secret of life is in the childhood within us. It brings back the memories of laughters and more laughters and more laughters - a world without even knowing the meaning of the word - problem...AOUIE
Tears of rain (Short Story) - 8/4/2008 8:58:22 AM
Chanti.....this was too beautiful for words. it made me cry. How poignant and honest this love. I look forward to reading all your writings. This could easily be the basis for a beautiful novel. Thank you for this heartwarming read. Maria
Nkosi Bayeti (a Zulu short story) (Short Story) - 7/28/2008 5:16:13 AM
Wonderfully-told, Chanti. I always love the rich tapestry with which you weave your tales.
And, coincident or not, I am just now finishing the first of the two-book Michener novel "The Covenant." The crux of the story involves the very beginnings of South Africa - the people, the social structure, the tribes, the assgais, the kraals, the tribes and tribal customs. [the book was given to me by my sister, Peggy, not long before her tragic and unexpected death in 1984 at age 23 - finishing the novel is a part of my catharsis and a way of continuing to honor my sister.]
I am, clearly, fascinated by history and, even though Michener's is a fictional account, it was researched and based largely on factual aspects of the land and the people of the time covered. The span of the book ranges from 30,000 B.C. up to the 1800's. -- Jeff
Nkosi Bayeti (a Zulu short story) (Short Story) - 7/22/2008 8:37:24 PM
Riveting! --Charlie
Luctor et emergo (Article) - 11/3/2009 9:26:55 AM
Sometimes looking at reality is painful, but it's better then burying your head in the sand...You might suffocate. Excellent write, Chanti.
Luctor et emergo (Article) - 11/2/2009 6:45:09 AM
I don't know about 'following anyone' on any other service - I already have far too many things and places I am following but, if I should chance your way, I certaintly will read you. I very much enjoy your thoughts and your depth of contemplation - especially the "stalled bus" and "studying your navel" analaogies.
Your take is precisely correct in this article: we always struggle to be happy, to find peace and to be satisfied - if there were no struggle, and no race, what would be the point? Happiness is elusive, fleeting and malleable - sometimes we must mold ourselve "to fit the moment;" and... there is nothing wrong with that. Other times, we must find a middle ground - and this is equally normal in most situations.
Loving your writing - always,
-- Jeff
Luctor et emergo (Article) - 11/2/2009 2:26:30 AM
Well said, There is much truth in the old quote, "Too much sunshine makes a desert."
Luctor et emergo (Article) - 11/1/2009 4:25:33 PM
A fine article; honest and to the point. I appreciate and respect the philosophical perspective that you share in your writing here, Chanti. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Luctor et emergo (Article) - 11/1/2009 2:39:58 PM
I read / I saw / I scratched my head / I said, 'What the *&#!% / I will follow your journey / Hopefully I will come away from it . . . Better / More knowledgeable / I never quit learning / Get it on . . .
How to Critique poetry (Article) - 8/22/2009 3:59:01 AM
Chanti presents a positive approach to constructive criticism. It is necessary for people to critiques one another in order for there to be growth and evolution. However, it is also necessary for us to do it with caring. This article also gives us much food for thought. Thank you.
Turn it Around (Article) - 8/13/2009 2:01:53 PM
And then there are those that don't care. Everything in this world can be positive but the ones who choose to not care think they are only ignorant, instead of stupid. Ignorance can be cured by education, but a stupid person cannot be cured because their viewponts will never be changed. It is the way of the world today. Stupidity reigns supreme in the world today from people starting and fighting wars for no real reason to those who discriminate against others that are different. They don't know why they do it, but they just know they are right. Bah humbug!
Anyway your article is right on Chanti, and if people actually take the time to think about what they read here, they can turn their lives around. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie.
Mother Jailed for Spraying Child at Car-wash. (Article) - 5/10/2009 12:38:07 PM
I saw this when it first came out and was appalled by what I saw. I too learned as a single parent for two years, that just doing nothing solves some problems it just takes a little longer. Quite honestly it was a control issue, parents are the decision makers and it becomes frustrating when a child at any age fails to comply. Granted with infants it’s much more frustrating because of the lack of communication, but none the less, even the most stubborn child will give up eventually and as long as the essentials needs are taken care of. Patience works wonders.
Stay well and keep writing
Ed
Turn it Around (Article) - 4/26/2009 8:41:36 AM
Mahalo; glad to see you can see, nice pic!
Turn it Around (Article) - 4/26/2009 7:01:22 AM
I believe that professor Morris Massey fostered a theory that is easily subscribed to --"who you are, is where you were when" -- almost everyone is a made person, psychologically by the age of eight -- the only thing that can change our personality beyond that age, are significant emotional events -- additionally I believe that it is our perceptions that are critical as to how we view any situation -- many times we too easily trap ourselves with self-fulfilling prophecies -- an interesting write Chant -- peace and love -- Jon Michael
Turn it Around (Article) - 4/25/2009 5:01:38 PM
Amen, girlfriend. Amen.
Love and hugs,
Tami
P.S. I've only had intermittent internet access, but I'll be in touch soon. Promise.
Turn it Around (Article) - 4/22/2009 4:34:21 PM
Thank you for sharing this gift of wisdom from living, Chanti. I appreciate and respect your perspective. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Turn it Around (Article) - 4/22/2009 3:42:32 PM
Written from the perspective of one who can see through the darkest of times...beautiful words of wisdom...Love, Michelle
Mother Jailed for Spraying Child at Car-wash. (Article) - 4/22/2009 2:40:43 PM
Hi Chanti -
This same article can be a "basic" for me physically abusing woman and woman abusing men" WALK AWAY, you can and shouldn't feel you have to WIN" every argument, some skyrocket out of control,
This mom, I would say do what you say, GO HOME! Forget the car wash, just like in a groc. store, YOU LEAVE and let the child know, who is the Adult here and how this will be approached! The RIGHT WAY!
Colic in children will keep you up for days and YES, it's tiring and exhausting and patience has to be dug up, or assist for help!
Great article!
Stay Positive!
Warmest Blessings of Peace and Love, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
Psss. Any mom's reading this with a colic child or just out of control, a soothing ride in the car - and if worse comes to worse, sit in BACK of a Closed door and a towel around your head (to block out the screams) A release will be had, unless your child is feeling sick...I remember that working perfectly! YOU are not ignoring, you are allowing them to "try" and get your attention, strength in matters when YOU must not give in! Good luck and have FAith!
Romance! What women want, (Article) - 4/22/2009 2:26:48 PM
YOU pretty much covered quite a bit Chanti! I know my sweet man leaves a note taped to my towel(if I'm heading into the shower and he places my favorite candle on the side of the sink. I smile when I see THEM. He is one to write poetry, once in awhile (mostly special occasions he will write one in a card or have it printed and folded in the card). When I see a note on the table and how he signed off, with sweetness, I almost cry (7 yrs. and we met on Match.com and he has growing kids, 19, boy, 16girl, and 15teen girl, we have weekends) but he makes an effort and I still see it. He plays a guitar (has a few cuz it's ONE of his passions) and he plays for me, when sitting outside ( I never want that to change) as he sips his coffee/etc. He listens intently ( you got that right) when he does ask me a ? about what I am sharing, I know he is listening and cares about the situation. The nibbles here and there (in unsuspecting times) is an intense feeling to me. Just to walk by and rub my back, as I sqiggle, and say OH, MORE, OH, MORE More.. cuz he got me going and he SMILES and does, wins my heart! And.. compliments to HIM helps a lot! The more compliments you let him aware of, he knows where he stands and by your response too! Paul also askes often, while going in the kitchen, 'what something honey' and I smile inside, cuz he is a giver and not a taker... My EX was! Ex of 19yrs and married him 2X/s - Dumb but I wanted it to work out then I realized I wanted BETTER and deserved better. Thank you for sharing so much of what can and does make a woman smile, also to open the door for her - will put a smile on her face, tell your brother. And.. If she likes Ice Coffee,or Coffee Milk, etc. pick it up BEFORE he sees her (whatever he thinks alone, I think will touch her heart deeply) I hope he is HAPPY and SHE treats him with love and respect, and won't be a TAKER! #2 Takers don't cut it...
Stay Positive!
Warmest Blessings and Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
Pss...Chanti - YOU have a way of writing your articles with a sweet easy flair to them, I get way to wordy.. Must try harder! I appreciate yours and love reading them. I try to get to most...
Turn it Around (Article) - 4/22/2009 2:07:45 PM
YOUR Article was very handy to me Chanti, when things happen (nomatter how severe) we must turn them around. I often thought (would the man I love so very much, and how he shows me his love to me) would that change if "HE" decided to STAY with me, if I lost my ability to do for myself, and ONE day that discussion came up. He said, NO! I would never leave you for any reason, and then of course an ability can put a strain (no matter the strength and length of love that one feels within) I thought of being in a wheel chair (others do it and go to NICE places, would I put my love through that. He assured me he would take me through a Mall and I don't go to Malls, but he wouldn't mind. and I cried. I couldn't stop crying, when you loose something within you, (there is no more relying on yourself, or YOU learn a new way of being able to) but some things you have to accept it and learn to rely. It would be tough for me. I enjoyed the time it took for you to write this article out my friend, and I'm so happy to hear YOU have your eyesight back, that had to be a scary (NEW) Adventure to go through (sometimes alone I'm sure) and you did it. YOU think maybe (because you tried to do all you can) that the good came back into your life, and the easier moments you didn't lose forever. I'm glad POSITIVE came from it all! You're a GREAT person with a GREAT Heart and I appreciate our long-standing friendship (even if spiritually) the strength is felt! What I see happening to others around me when "A Negative or self defeating) thing comes into their life. There life changes (sometimes in a while different NEW direction) and you start to wonder, GOD HAS a PLAN, and we just don't ever know it till it happens. Also the other areas are strengthened even more and more stronger appreciated, in a different level! I'm happy that all is turning out for you, a temporary set back...
Stay Positive!
Stay SAFE!
Pss... YOU were speaking of good luck or superstitions, I have one, sneakers/shoes off the table - Some quickly put them down without thinking.. and when it happens, others around screetch... I am one..
Warmest Blessings of Love, Light, PEACE, and Inspirations, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
I wasn't going to come on A/D. today but I am glad I did and popped you on! :) YOU got me appreciating the strength of love I have in my life! and from those around me! For I know (IF) I needed them, I wouldn't be alone and I wonder "IF" I had/or was a lone, JUST how bad would it be... hmmmm
BE HAPPY!
Mother Jailed for Spraying Child at Car-wash. (Article) - 4/21/2009 4:38:46 PM
patience is not endowed to us, we must learn its ways -- however if anyone intends to be a parent, is is an essential quality you had better cultivate -- the parent in this story acted in a manner I cannot imagine any parent acting, regardless of how upset she became -- thanks for sharing Chanti -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael
Mother Jailed for Spraying Child at Car-wash. (Article) - 4/21/2009 1:27:27 PM
I can remember those early days when colic would keep Julie screaming for hours. I thought I'd go mad if I didn't get some sleep. I can understand how a mother can snap with the intense racket as well as the horrific frustration. My pediatrician told me to buy a book when Julie was BORN called "Dare to Discipline" by Dr James Dobson (written WAY before he became a fruit loop that thinks that Tickle Me Elmo is gay). The advice was right on, so much so that I wished he'd move in and help me parent Julie! BUT when I applied his wisdom we had relative peace, compared to many other families with children her age who didn't. I think that so many times what is abuse isn't intentional...much like suicide. All the perpetrator wants to do is make it stop...the noise, the pain, whatever the torment is...and just can't handle it all alone. Yes, we have a choice whether or not to act, but when pushed to the maximum not all can be as level headed as you were and walk away. Some just lose it. It's not right by any means, but I can understand the parameters of what would drive someone to insanity when it comes to parenting. Great article Chants. Much love, Michelle
Mother Jailed for Spraying Child at Car-wash. (Article) - 4/21/2009 9:04:49 AM
I totally agree with you Rose. We have to learn how to drive and acquire a license before we drive a car but anyone can have a child and unfortunately so many are abused. The story that I shared above is one of so many. I didn't touch on the countless stories of horrific abuse including sexual, emotional and physical because it just makes me feel so angry and helpless. I did once write about a case some years back of a baby that was beaten to death by his stepfather. After seeing the photos I was in tears for days. I might have reached my breaking point at times when raising my children but I could never imagine harming them. They were (and still are) far too precious to me. If there's one thing I'm proud of in my life it is that I raised three healthy, wonderful children and they were raised with plenty of love. My eldest daughter still says that she had the a perfect childhood. Since my own was rather tough, I consider this to be a great compliment.
Mother Jailed for Spraying Child at Car-wash. (Article) - 4/20/2009 5:36:00 PM
I could think of a few things to do with this mother but some people may not think I am such a nice person. I wrote a short story once, it was called "Children should come with instructions" not everyone is cut out to be a loving and caring parent. Patience, love and understanding are a must. Thank you for sharing Chanti.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Susan Boyle Wows the World! (Article) - 4/20/2009 12:07:58 PM
Good Article.
Had the same feeling.
What most people don't realise, there's more to it - not simply beautiful voice and a touching moment.
Her voice has The Healing power. Just listening to it may help to cure many people.
And i hope to hear some religious songs or prayers she might sing.
Because her mission is special - not just to be another pop star.
Susan Boyle Wows the World! (Article) - 4/18/2009 5:23:20 PM
Nice article. I was deeply moved by her performance as well. It is obvious that Susan Boyle is very talented. I was moved even more by the way she responded to the hostility that was before her. It was so obvious that the audience was against her and the judges were not impressed. Nevertheless, she managed to give an amazing performance. To me, it took more than courage to rise against this kind of enmity. But, at the end, she was the winner. Hopefully, someday, we would be able to appreciate all people regardless of their looks.
Susan Boyle Wows the World! (Article) - 4/16/2009 6:15:34 AM
I'm an Minister, and I've always pulled for the underdog. When I saw Ms. Boyle standing before the Simon Cowell and others, I'd hoped that she would "do something different", and not get embarrassed. And she did! I believe she brought tears to the eyes of both women and men! I certainely had to hold back my tears because I could see the humbleness and genuiness in her, and in her singing. All she wanted to do was to sing to an audience once...that's why she was just walkng off the stage afterwards. I pray that she will be blessed by God.
Susan Boyle Wows the World! (Article) - 4/15/2009 6:10:56 PM
an amazing singer -- but most impressive of all -- a genuinely wonderful person -- something neither beauty nor make-up can create -- thanks for sharing Chanti
Susan Boyle Wows the World! (Article) - 4/15/2009 3:45:05 PM
It's a shame that we always judge the exterior package before we get to know what lies beneath. What a gem this woman is...a lovely commentary Chants. I played the performance over and over...I couldn't get enough. BTW, Simon is trying to sign her to his Sony BMG label, so she's on her way to the big time. :-) Love, Michelle
Come to me... (Poetry) - 10/1/2009 7:14:55 AM
~Chanti, That is exactly how poetry should be looked at(just what you
said).
Deborah
I Believe in Miracles (Poetry) - 9/6/2009 7:57:04 PM
OK i clicked on the links, I don't know how that helps and I hope it's not to late. I wished I had known sooner but I wasn't tracking you, just stopped by to read a poem of yours. And what a wonderful verse it is. I can feel for this elderly lady. How sad when you get old and have no one. At least my parents had me to help them to the end. Been in financial trouble myself when my family passed on, so I know what it's like...
I Believe in Miracles (Poetry) - 8/23/2009 8:45:05 AM
I agree Chanti, and this is a wonderful piece. It tells the reader to be psoitive, but I have a question. Howe can a person be positive when the cards are stacked against her?
I read both of your articles, and I agree with some of the points, and disagree with others. I guess that is why we have a brain. LOL. Anyway, men and women will be at odds with each other through eternity because I have heard many men say, I just can't understand women, while his friend says, who can. Men are so easy to understand though. Wear something low cut, not necessarily provocative, but just low enough tomake his sexual appetite water, and he will trip over himself to get a woman in bed.
The other article I agree to disagree, but home remedies do have their significance. My mother was a licensed cosmetologist, and while she never knew she was teaching me the secrets of makeup and hair styles, I learned that makeup does have an impact on how our skin looks throughout our lives. My mother was always so young looking that people thought she was my sister. Even after I left the institutions.
You have written this very well and the articles that go with this poem are good too, but evokes controversy, and that is a good thing. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie.
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 8/18/2009 5:20:48 PM
Excellent and so true! : )
I Believe in Miracles (Poetry) - 8/10/2009 9:40:23 AM
will do truly wonderful what you are doing,
peace & blessings to you and your effort
I Believe in Miracles (Poetry) - 8/9/2009 7:13:21 PM
Chanti, you are a compassionate woman -- giving selflessly -- I read the two articles you wrote -- both are very good -- may the bright light of love be eternally with you my friend -- peace and love -- Jon Michael
I Believe in Miracles (Poetry) - 8/9/2009 2:53:24 PM
All many people need is a little boost. I'm helping an elderly lady (my mother) after my father had a long illness and left her nearly destitute. I'm helping a woman in prison who helped me without pay. I'm helping a woman in a wheelchair repair my old lowered-floor van she acquired it from the charity I gave it to.
Keep up the good work!
Ron
I Believe in Miracles (Poetry) - 8/9/2009 2:12:36 PM
Wonderful poem which conveys your warm and giving heart to any reader.
I Believe in Miracles (Poetry) - 8/8/2009 10:51:20 AM
No donations required, simply click on the links to the articles that I've supplied. Each click adds up and pays towards helping this woman. Many thanks... Chanti
I Believe in Miracles (Poetry) - 8/8/2009 9:54:58 AM
A wonderous analogy on faith and compassion.
I Believe in Miracles (Poetry) - 8/8/2009 7:38:40 AM
I wish I could help, too, Chanti - but as Karen (below) said, we're barely keeping our heads above water. Y'all have my prayers, the compassionate ones who are able to help, and especially those needing help. Yesterday, Karen and I were downtown Fort Worth - all the homeless! Breaks my heart -
(((((HUGS))))) love and prayer, Karla. :(
I Believe in Miracles (Poetry) - 8/8/2009 3:23:17 AM
Great cause; I wish I could help, but I am disabled, and we are living on less than $250 per month for two people. I hope you understand. I will do the next best thing: pray for this dear lady; how awful! Too many people facing this today; and meanwhile, the fat cats continue to play and don't give a rip. And yesterday, while we were in downtown Fort Worth, we saw some homeless veterans, including one who walked on crutches and was dragging his possessions behind him. This should NOT be! Absolutely heartbreaking to witness! We wanted to help, but couldn't, didn't have any money ourselves on us. We felt bad for them!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <
I Believe in Miracles (Poetry) - 8/7/2009 7:16:33 PM
Your poem reminded me that I need to be vigilant too: never to lose hope or faith. Thank you for that!
I will click your articles too.
Axilea
I Believe in Miracles (Poetry) - 8/7/2009 1:26:02 PM
Wonderful... I Lost My 4 B Room Home 20 Years Fraudulent Foreclosure,End Up Slept My 2 Seat Car 5 Long Months Homeless---Now Its Hole In Wall Apartments,i.e. Nobody Then Could Care Less Than They Can Care Now...
Until You Become 1 Of Millions Of HOMELESS Who Live Sleep In Your Own Back Yards Streets = Most Children Starving For (Corn Fed Gasoline ) Food.....
Only Then Will You Ever Understand Or Be Able To Write About It...
How Many Here A D s Think They You All Are INFALLIBLE!!
Lotsa Ruck In UR Endeavor...
TRASK..
I Believe in Miracles (Poetry) - 8/7/2009 10:57:20 AM
Chanti, you are a beautiful woman with a huge heart. I will try
to do what I can to help. -gene.
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/27/2009 5:06:29 AM
~Chanti, How very true and well put
Always,
Deborah
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/24/2009 1:59:58 PM
Fantabulous and I agree. My fav line is"Your life is a diet
That you deny you are on" there are a lot of ways to read this. Enjoyed! xoxoxo
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/23/2009 11:17:25 PM
OH YES DEAR SISTER! This is a beautiful write and even though it is light, it gives a serious message for all of us. We not only need to keep ourselves beautiful but we need to have a beautiful spirit too and care about the things that go way beyond youth. Like love, caring, nurturing, protecting, doing everyday mundane jobs like doing the laundry, getting the groceries, taking our children to school, going to our children's school functions, smiling when your kindergartener brings home an abstract drawing, and you put it under a magnet on the fridge, like taking the time to enjoy the laughter of your children playing without a care in the backyard, going out of your way to make someone's days a little better and brighter than it would have otherwise been. I could go on and on and on. But I will stop here. I'm sorry if I was rambling but this poem can make a person do that. Thank you for sharing Chanti. This is a very beautiful and all too true piece.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie.
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/18/2009 9:22:43 AM
Not many age gracefully, makes for a lot of fake people. Steve
The Cradle of Shape (Poetry) - 7/16/2009 6:40:44 PM
simplicity with a dash of absract, love the painting. Wonderful blending of visual and eroticly emotional expressions. Fasntastic!
Ed
Red Dust (Poetry) - 7/16/2009 4:24:40 PM
sigh...so softly beautiful.
It is beautiful Chanti!
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/3/2009 7:30:18 AM
You make your point gently, humorously and without invective. This is so much more effective than harsh diatribe. Hurrah for you!
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/2/2009 6:54:28 PM
Plastic people; lol
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/2/2009 9:29:33 AM
Look good by all means and take care of yourself
Just focus on the things that never grow old
that don’t fade away and can never be sold
On kindness, compassion, integrity and truth
These are the things that last way beyond youth.
Most apt and timely advice, Chanti. I could not agree more with the theme of this poem. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/2/2009 6:36:44 AM
WOW! THIS IS AN PRIME EXPRESSION OF POETIC ARTISTRY. ALL THE ELEMENTS THAT ARE POURED INTO PRODUCING AN EXCELLENT POEM ARE FOUND HEREIN. ENJOYED. THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU. JOYCE
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