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Recent Reviews for Johnny L Duncan
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happy birthday NEW YEAR'S (Poetry) - 1/1/2012 7:10:51 AM
This is a very refreshing way to look at the New Year. I loved it!
Happy New Year to you, and Happy Birth Day New Year's.
Peace, love and light,
Amber
happy birthday NEW YEAR'S (Poetry) - 1/1/2012 12:48:38 AM
A unique way of greeting new year. Fantastic
happy birthday NEW YEAR'S (Poetry) - 1/1/2012 12:12:48 AM
Yes for sure this poem does put a new slant on The New Year...I wish I had of thought of it first,great idea and well written work!
GOD'S got GAME (Poetry) - 9/4/2011 7:23:16 PM
Credit illuminating Write...
My Own Near Death 3 Experiences (GOD) Could Care Less--He (God) Just Stands There Looking At (Me) You...
It Is Up To Humanity Clean Its Own (Shit) Act...
I Thank (God) For My 2 Hands
Brain And Wit Carry It Off
Muscle Brawn Back It Up...
Is To Each Alone Is
You Are Alone
Only You Can Save Your(Own)Self...
TRASK
U S A (United Southerners of America) (Poetry) - 5/9/2011 9:37:13 PM
I like the interweaving of this piece...well done sir...
Allen
A Good Mother (Poetry) - 5/4/2011 5:15:00 AM
I like the line "so she or he won't need retraining as a man." So many parents "ruin" their children by failing to recognize that they are preparing them for the future as men and women.
It sounds as though your mother was a WINNER! You must have the fondest of memories.
Connie
Jesus did not beLIEve (Poetry) - 4/29/2011 10:13:15 AM
I believe "awesome" is a word that describes God, and God only. With that belief, I can say that the truths in this poem are awesome! The words are well-chosen, the phrases and the paragraphs are laid out nicely, but the truth of God is awesome.
Sincerely,
Connie
the SPIRIT SNATCHER (Poetry) - 4/29/2011 6:51:14 AM
I feel that this is also a self experience of the mind poem, very touching and somewhat spiritual...I concur with the words as this kind of experience has happened to me.
Out of 10 = An 8 very good!
Why have you spelt Hurricane “Hurry Cane” under the title SNATCHED?
A Friend 2 Lean On (Poetry) - 4/26/2011 4:41:12 PM
Right on, the one & only friend there is...e
I'm Sick and Tired of Being Tried (Poetry) - 4/26/2011 4:39:52 PM
Well, I can't in all honesty say I understand & such, but to some degree I still do & no matter how long it takes, I'd like to see a change in the world...though I have to say, I doubt it...ed
the SON will rise again (Poetry) - 4/23/2011 5:30:44 AM
Johnny,
AMENk! He is ALIVE! Good work, Johnny!
Blessings,
~Linda
the answer is kNOw (Poetry) - 4/21/2011 2:04:13 PM
This is a very poignant poem,and it contains a great truth: KNOWledge is key.
Thanks for sharing,and continued success.
Barbara J. Henry
A Friend 2 Lean On (Poetry) - 4/17/2011 10:19:11 AM
Superlative advice, Johnny! I love the message, sharing the down-to-earth relationship that God provides. Fancy words-pfft! His love goes way past fancy words, and I pray that my love for Him does as well.
Connie
The Devil Had Sex On His Mind (Poetry) - 4/9/2011 5:33:55 AM
Wow I'm speechless... This very deep man, keep it up
How 2 Talk 2 God 2 (Poetry) - 4/9/2011 5:22:59 AM
Great piece of writing, very inspiring..
How 2 Talk 2 God 2 (Poetry) - 4/8/2011 5:30:17 AM
Just keep on preaching and teaching, Johnny! This is a pretty good message; it's a fine poem too. One love brother, I like it. God bless!!!
How 2 Talk 2 God 2 (Poetry) - 4/8/2011 3:39:13 AM
You write with such passion. This is written with a very clear message. Uniquely written as well.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
The N Word Cycle (Poetry) - 4/6/2011 6:43:19 AM
One thing I grew up with was the knowledge that if I ever used the "N Word" and got caught, I would get the crap beat out of me; so I never used the "N Word" Thankfully it never became a part of my vocabulary. May that cycle come to an end.
Cheers,
Dan
How 2 Talk 2 God (Poetry) - 4/5/2011 10:07:41 PM
Amen! So true!!! Thanks I needed this.
Steph
the LIVER of LOVE (Poetry) - 4/5/2011 10:02:35 PM
This makes me think of what my Mom told me about the Liver & Love.... Very informative.
Steph
REcession dePRESSION (Poetry) - 4/5/2011 9:56:27 PM
Love it!!! You are an Honest Man.
a DEAD MAN'S name (Poetry) - 4/5/2011 9:46:38 PM
WowwWWW!!!! Amazing!
The N Word Cycle (Poetry) - 4/5/2011 9:39:31 PM
This is incredible! It really sums it up.
Thank you for sharing this poem.
Steph
The Macabre MESSENGER (Poetry) - 4/5/2011 7:50:05 AM
Very interesting indeed. Makes me think of the master of mystery himself (Poe).
Late Bird (Poetry) - 3/26/2011 10:15:58 AM
If you were one of my grandchildren, I would just say, "Johnny, this is really weird!" You're not, so I guess I'll say, "Unique." I admit, I read every word; couldn't leave without finishing the story.
An interesting line is "But Late Bird did Cute Kitty consume," because it could mean that Late Bird consumed Cute Kitty, or the reverse, because of the structure.
It sure sounds like something one of my grandkids (in their twenties) would write, especially the morals at the end!
Thanks for the laughs!
Connie
The Devil Had Sex On His Mind (Poetry) - 3/25/2011 6:27:29 AM
Wowww...awesome writing indeed sweet man...stay safe and well..Hugss
The Devil Had Sex On His Mind (Poetry) - 3/25/2011 5:20:48 AM
This is so very powerful. Very well written and conceived. You are an amazing writer.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
the LIVER of LOVE (Poetry) - 3/22/2011 5:34:03 AM
Interestimg indeed dear man....stay safe and well..Hugssss
How 2 Talk 2 God (Poetry) - 3/20/2011 10:13:10 AM
Really do like these words of advice, i talk to God daily and sometimes more than once. Love my God and he give me my needs, always.
i love u (Poetry) - 3/20/2011 2:07:38 AM
Says it all!
1221Y2K12 (Poetry) - 3/18/2011 5:26:42 PM
The line that stands out most to me is
"God's name will be in every mouth!" The sobering thing about that is that many will be cursing God instead of repenting and praying to Him.
Powerful warning, well done!
Connie
I Can (Poetry) - 3/18/2011 5:21:53 PM
WOW! This is an amazing poem. I'm glad you made the colors so American; It accentuates the words of determination and boldness. Congratulations on your achievements.
Connie
1221Y2K12 (Poetry) - 3/18/2011 10:23:03 AM
I don't want to be a part of the rapture if it comes, I want to be here to see what happens...;-)e
1221Y2K12 (Poetry) - 3/18/2011 4:08:04 AM
Though 12/21/2012 may never be for no man knows the day or time, buth truth be spoken now in your words as the day and hour does draw near...well done
Allen
HERstory Happens Every Minute (Poetry) - 1/9/2011 3:31:19 PM
Well done indeed ..enjoyed ...stay safe and well..Hugss
HERstory Happens Every Minute (Poetry) - 1/5/2011 5:58:09 PM
Expressive and direct, well written tribute...
Be always safe,
Karen
REcession dePRESSION (Poetry) - 1/4/2011 8:33:24 AM
Johnny, my only concern is that at the pace we've set as a nation, it would not surprise me that in another ten years, there may not be a middle class. Nice writing.
Cheers,
Dan
REcession dePRESSION (Poetry) - 1/4/2011 7:55:17 AM
It's easy to see that you've done the research on this one. Facts are facts and can't be disputed. I see nothing to dispute in the well-penned words you've written.
Thank you for sharing your opinion in this easy-to-understand piece of poetry.
Donna
I Can (Poetry) - 11/28/2010 7:30:15 PM
Here Here, You Can! Powerful poetry, Johnny, welcome to the den!
I shall look forward to more of your work.
Peace, love and light,
Amber
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