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Recent Reviews for serenety L
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Dream (Poetry) - 10/21/2006 10:46:51 AM
Sincere sentiments to which I can completely relate. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 4/28/2006 7:38:45 PM
Je connais très bien ces sentiments. Merci de partager ces vers. Amour et paix,
Régis
Victim (Poetry) - 3/10/2004 7:44:03 AM
I can relate this...such an emotional write!!!!
Victim (Poetry) - 1/17/2004 10:41:52 PM
Lovely Nico, this was absolutely lovely. but it made me feel kind of sad that it might be true. love and peace G
Victim (Poetry) - 1/3/2004 3:40:35 AM
Emotional and extremely well written that flows along at gut wrenching speed,i love this...take good care...Mark
Happy End (Poetry) - 12/21/2003 8:13:04 AM
Truthful write !
Victim (Poetry) - 12/14/2003 1:13:43 PM
This touched the heart and soul !
Victim (Poetry) - 12/9/2003 2:58:38 AM
..oh the pain of it all...ghastly..
Well written!
thankyou..
Vesna :)
Victim (Poetry) - 11/30/2003 1:19:38 PM
Well, you seem to have many admirers. Nicely written on a painful subject.
Physical Eternity (Poetry) - 11/25/2003 2:02:22 PM
Quelle passion! C'est bien exprimé. ~Régis
Victim (Poetry) - 11/25/2003 7:11:16 AM
O' I can relate to this one!!
Be strong okay!!
Love Tinka
Victim (Poetry) - 11/25/2003 6:47:51 AM
This was so touching and just moved me deeply, beautifully written and expressed,
Reindeer
Victim (Poetry) - 11/25/2003 1:39:21 AM
very sad, emotive poem...
Victim (Poetry) - 11/24/2003 8:02:46 PM
You express feelings here that go right to your reader's soul. Well done! Love, peace and strength, Regis.
Victim (Poetry) - 11/24/2003 6:36:26 PM
Oh Nico, you sound like a wounded dove...beautiful sad poetry...well done!
Victim (Poetry) - 11/24/2003 6:19:41 PM
Such a sad poem Serenety. Very well done!!
Jack
Victim (Poetry) - 11/24/2003 5:31:41 PM
Touching poem well written.
Victim (Poetry) - 11/24/2003 2:53:55 PM
Sad expressions of a love gone...
Written well.......
Love the picture.........
Victim (Poetry) - 11/24/2003 1:33:59 PM
(((serenety)))
powerful, beautiful, expressive, emotive poem--BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
Victim (Poetry) - 11/24/2003 1:23:53 PM
So sad and heartfelt Serenety...stay strong.
~Chrissie
Victim (Poetry) - 11/24/2003 12:36:58 PM
Guess some just never know how lucky they were, keep on keeping on, sad poem, but reading it was like watching a tennis game, as far as looking from on side to the other. Soon your cry with joy, go have fun fun fun
Victim (Poetry) - 11/24/2003 12:12:16 PM
Serenety, sad and heartbreaking. Being a victim is hard to break away from. Stay strong. Lisa
Victim (Poetry) - 11/24/2003 11:57:32 AM
(((NICOLETTE)))
Sooo good to see you here again; what a beautiful and heartfelt write! I loved the form and the overall presentation; this is very well done! Truly enjoyed this moving write; thanks for sharing!
((((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :(
To ME, you are NOT a VICTIM; you are a SURVIVOR! :D
Happy End (Poetry) - 11/13/2003 10:31:04 AM
because true love
never ends
AMEN to that!!!!!
Vesna :)
Happy End (Poetry) - 11/9/2003 8:29:54 PM
Excellant truth!!!!
~Nikki~
Happy End (Poetry) - 11/9/2003 7:13:16 PM
very profound point...
Happy End (Poetry) - 11/9/2003 3:03:28 PM
Somebody's reading your poetry. Love is unending and getting modified all the time.
Happy End (Poetry) - 11/9/2003 8:26:56 AM
How true
Happy End (Poetry) - 11/8/2003 4:11:08 PM
I agree, true love never ends.
Though these days it seems true love is harder to find.
best wishes
Happy End (Poetry) - 11/8/2003 6:27:20 AM
Yes, and you've captured this
so succinctly.
Happy End (Poetry) - 11/8/2003 2:08:37 AM
Sweet write filled with hope!!
Pictures are working fine...lol....thought you still at page "one'...
lololo...men...hehehehe!!!
Love tinka
Happy End (Poetry) - 11/8/2003 12:20:05 AM
Excellent....short but very very deep and powerful...thank u so much!!!!!
Happy End (Poetry) - 11/8/2003 12:16:53 AM
nice true love Nico. no it never ends even when it does end it goes on and on and on your mind aLL THE time haunting you, such is life. G
Happy End (Poetry) - 11/7/2003 10:40:41 PM
short;sweet;true
Happy End (Poetry) - 11/7/2003 9:08:03 PM
How true! So glad to have you back!
Great truth you do speak!
Excellent!
Happy End (Poetry) - 11/7/2003 5:48:50 PM
Hmmm...Nico, you are so wise. Like this one a lot.
~ Sara
Happy End (Poetry) - 11/7/2003 4:51:28 PM
Succinct and powerful in the meaning intended.
Happy End (Poetry) - 11/7/2003 4:42:57 PM
SO TRUE
never say good bye
William
Happy End (Poetry) - 11/7/2003 4:35:53 PM
That's right...
Glad your back too
Thanks always for your comments
Have a great night...
Happy End (Poetry) - 11/7/2003 3:45:41 PM
Wonderful Nico...good to see you back...
Physical Eternity (Poetry) - 11/1/2003 7:13:44 PM
This reminds me of "Let's get Physical" by Olivia Neton John...
Love the write, and thaks for the reviews.......
Did you care? (Poetry) - 11/1/2003 1:23:58 PM
We all need answers as reassurance of love for all these questions. Wonderful write.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Tomorrow is forever (Poetry) - 11/1/2003 1:22:13 PM
Sounds like a message you have for someone. Straight to the point! Ouch!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Physical Eternity (Poetry) - 11/1/2003 1:20:11 PM
Now...How can any man resist this? This is great serenety!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Physical Eternity (Poetry) - 11/1/2003 10:39:33 AM
Beautifully penned, this was just lovely,
Reindeer
Physical Eternity (Poetry) - 11/1/2003 6:06:25 AM
Well somebody will be a lucky if you put into practice what you so eloquently wrote in that poem
Physical Eternity (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 3:35:13 PM
I love your way with words... We have very similar writing styles... ;)
Rodd
Tomorrow is forever (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 1:38:45 AM
Never too late Nico, enjoyed reading this, so romantic, "tomorrow and him are forever." wishing you the best and forgeting the rest. hug G
Physical Eternity (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 1:30:46 AM
Ok Nico, think I will. what a lovely romantic write, so powerful. You romantic little you. hugs G
Physical Eternity (Poetry) - 10/27/2003 1:40:10 PM
Truly beautiful, Nico.
~Chrissie
Physical Eternity (Poetry) - 10/27/2003 11:19:29 AM
interesting concept, very real application. this piece read like an equation, as you worked through the problem, culiminating in the answer.
Physical Eternity (Poetry) - 10/27/2003 5:25:31 AM
wow....you have penned a gem here...clap clap clap.....very very passionate write....one of ure best....BHUWAN
Physical Eternity (Poetry) - 10/26/2003 7:28:55 PM
Beautifully woven words pf wonder...
And like this line says...
"Eyes wide shut to see"
Sometime we have to close our eyes to see the deeply...
Physical Eternity (Poetry) - 10/26/2003 6:03:33 PM
A terrific poem, so very passionate.
Physical Eternity (Poetry) - 10/26/2003 4:32:19 PM
A pssionate eternity awaits. Great!
Physical Eternity (Poetry) - 10/26/2003 2:50:24 PM
An invite that can't be refused. Passion is the eenal flame.
Physical Eternity (Poetry) - 10/26/2003 12:30:05 PM
Beautiful little write serenety!
Jack
Physical Eternity (Poetry) - 10/26/2003 12:03:18 PM
Lets fly baby!!
Love the Idea...lol!!
Only need the babe!!
Love Tinka
Physical Eternity (Poetry) - 10/26/2003 11:35:16 AM
Very creatively written Nico! Like your thoughts...
Physical Eternity (Poetry) - 10/26/2003 11:12:28 AM
Great poem Nico. That physical eternity is equisite isn't it?
Love,
Sara
Physical Eternity (Poetry) - 10/26/2003 9:51:03 AM
Love your depth of the emotions in verse.
Physical Eternity (Poetry) - 10/26/2003 9:42:28 AM
Very lovely and passionate.
Physical Eternity (Poetry) - 10/26/2003 9:33:52 AM
Terrific piece. A real sense of warmth and want here.
Tomorrow is forever (Poetry) - 10/21/2003 5:22:42 PM
Quick and to the point! Bravo!
Tomorrow is forever (Poetry) - 10/19/2003 11:31:34 PM
Fantastic write....excellent!!!!
Tomorrow is forever (Poetry) - 10/19/2003 6:46:03 PM
Excellant work Serenety!
Whatever it is/was you needed to release/ to let go you did it here beautifully!
~Nikki~
Did you care? (Poetry) - 10/19/2003 12:24:20 PM
From your writing, the question is rhetorical. Well said.
Tomorrow is forever (Poetry) - 10/19/2003 12:22:29 PM
You got "over the hump" I gather. Good!
Tomorrow is forever (Poetry) - 10/19/2003 7:47:40 AM
"B-R-A-V-O!!!"
~Jackie~
Tomorrow is forever (Poetry) - 10/18/2003 5:55:34 PM
I am so very happy for you!
"Tomorrow is forever"
Tell that old fool where to go!
Lotsa Love,
Becca in Roanoke, Texas
ICQ (Poetry) - 10/18/2003 8:50:34 AM
Hope it works out for you. I have some very bad experiences from chat engines.
Peace !!
Tomorrow is forever (Poetry) - 10/18/2003 8:48:55 AM
One always manages to rise from the ashes when love goes wrong. usually when you least expect it to happen. Lovely write
Tomorrow is forever (Poetry) - 10/18/2003 7:53:28 AM
Serenty L,
I loved the bit of wisdom you placed on your biography page. This poem "Tomorrow is forever" is excellent. Thank you for reading mine and for your nice comments.
Tomorrow is forever (Poetry) - 10/18/2003 7:00:40 AM
I am happy for you serenety!!
love Tinka
Tomorrow is forever (Poetry) - 10/18/2003 1:13:18 AM
Excellent poetry.
Tomorrow is forever (Poetry) - 10/17/2003 9:49:17 PM
Wow! Nico, this is a gem, you really nailed this and did it with flair!
Tomorrow is forever (Poetry) - 10/17/2003 9:41:36 PM
you consolidate this poem brilliantly!
Tomorrow is forever (Poetry) - 10/17/2003 5:16:19 PM
A superb write!
Glad to read you again......
Tomorrow is forever (Poetry) - 10/17/2003 5:11:39 PM
Those last lines are classic. Super piece!
Tomorrow is forever (Poetry) - 10/17/2003 2:52:41 PM
Wonderful write Serenety!
"Yesterday and you are past
Tomorrow and him are forever"
Jack
Tomorrow is forever (Poetry) - 10/17/2003 2:39:21 PM
His loss is someone
else's gain...
Great write...
Trixie :)
Tomorrow is forever (Poetry) - 10/17/2003 1:20:30 PM
*HIGH FIVE* ...whew I loved the feel of this one.
Great verse. Love the sentiment you kicked him in
the !.#! with.... ;o)
~Dana~
Tomorrow is forever (Poetry) - 10/17/2003 12:53:14 PM
All right, I love this...so positive...
"taking all the love you threw away
Yesterday and you are past
Tomorrow and him are forever"
What a wonderful concept.
Love,
Sara
Tomorrow is forever (Poetry) - 10/17/2003 12:21:44 PM
Excellent, I loved this, especially today,
Reindeer
Did you care? (Poetry) - 10/8/2003 8:33:29 PM
You cut straight to the heart with this one, dear lady. I have asked those same questions so many times. A most sincere and deep write.
~Jackie~
Did you care? (Poetry) - 10/2/2003 5:10:34 PM
passion that questions itself...
Did you care? (Poetry) - 10/2/2003 7:16:20 AM
But then we have to pick up the pieces and carry on regardless.
The good thing is that beautiful things can come out of even the most distressing situations..... and it did in the shape of this poem
Did you care? (Poetry) - 9/30/2003 7:16:27 PM
Very sad write. Save all the pieces you broke into. One day you will be made whole again, Better than before.
Hugs,
The Voice
Did you care? (Poetry) - 9/30/2003 3:58:26 PM
So heart wrenching, well penned.
Did you care? (Poetry) - 9/30/2003 2:02:37 AM
clap clap clap....very excellent write....this goes into my library....cheers...love n luck....BHUWAN
Did you care? (Poetry) - 9/29/2003 9:43:51 PM
Very emotional and sad poem.
Did you care? (Poetry) - 9/29/2003 8:52:43 PM
This is very moving, sometimes love doesn't go the way we had hoped. May better days behead for you.
Did you care? (Poetry) - 9/29/2003 8:47:53 PM
Nico, this is very heartfelt - we all relate. Time heals :0)
Did you care? (Poetry) - 9/29/2003 7:23:05 PM
Sad when one stops loving the other..
Powerful and written well..
Missed ya, and thanks for all your
great comments..
x0x0xx0x0x0x
Did you care? (Poetry) - 9/29/2003 7:19:19 PM
That's painful! Well written.
Did you care? (Poetry) - 9/29/2003 6:32:56 PM
Nice write! You go girl and tell it to him straight!
Did you care? (Poetry) - 9/29/2003 5:44:12 PM
Beautifully expressed Nico! So glad you're back hope all is well. excellent poem!
Did you care? (Poetry) - 9/29/2003 5:13:51 PM
Hi Nico,
It's been a long time since you wrote one for us. You hit it right on the head. Did he really care? Men just do not play by the same rules as women. Stay strong, better days are always ahead.
~ Sara
Did you care? (Poetry) - 9/29/2003 1:26:12 PM
Oh so sad Nico but poetically very good, true expression of how disappointing love can be. hugs G
Did you care? (Poetry) - 9/29/2003 1:22:19 PM
Serenity,
Oh this one touches so.
"Did you care about
how my life broke into pieces
when I saw in your eyes that the love had died?
Did you care about
how often I wanted to die
when I figured out that you love the other one?
I doubt you did"
Lady Peg
Did you care? (Poetry) - 9/29/2003 1:05:02 PM
wow, serenety, what a knock out of a write that pulls no punches in the emotions department! well done, and strongly expressed! (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :(
Did you care? (Poetry) - 9/29/2003 12:56:58 PM
(((serenety)))
i have missed you and your strong, powerful writes
this one hits right between the eyes--well done
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :(
Did you care? (Poetry) - 9/29/2003 12:15:04 PM
Ouch! You penned a terrible thought beautifully. So sad, but so well said.
~Dana~
Did you care? (Poetry) - 9/29/2003 12:08:52 PM
This was so brutal to read today, how deeply I felt this, powerfully moving,
Reindeer
Did you care? (Poetry) - 9/29/2003 12:05:05 PM
This one has a punch like a 14lb hammer...head-on!!
I have been asking this question a million times over and over again...hope you okay Nico!!
I am happy for the moment my friend!!
I never stopped loving "Him" my love is unconditional...and I will never stop either!!
Love Tinka
Dream (Poetry) - 9/21/2003 2:46:02 AM
Welcome back...
Dare to be different.
Reaching out for the stars.
Each new dream leads the way.
Accepting nothing less.
Making the world you love.
See things as they can be.
Dream (Poetry) - 9/19/2003 9:02:43 PM
Lovely threading of words Serenity :0)
What's the definition of friend? (Poetry) - 9/16/2003 6:08:49 PM
You have the friend meaning down excellently. True friends never complain, they just help...
What I need....... (Poetry) - 9/16/2003 6:04:31 PM
You will find each other for sure.
Excellent write........
I wished (Poetry) - 9/16/2003 6:02:32 PM
Can't change the old past, but we can have a wonderfuil future. Got me thinking for sure...
Fights (Poetry) - 9/16/2003 5:59:17 PM
Wow! You said a lot here. Your amazing.......
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 9/16/2003 5:56:41 PM
I don't know any french, but the poem is wonderful. Thanks much for reading and commenting on my work.....[[[[[HUGS]]]]]
Dream (Poetry) - 9/16/2003 11:16:52 AM
Hello Nico glad you're back and with a blast in this great little piece.
Adapt and accept just the same,
but keep the flame,
and stay in the game.
Love maybe places least expected,
but not visibly detected.
love you Nico, G
Dream (Poetry) - 9/15/2003 8:41:38 AM
Accepting this and swallowing truth is the only thing some can do--we live, we learn, we moooooove on :) -- It sometimes takes a bigger person to be able to do so. Great work.
Thanks,
Teresa Emilie
Dream (Poetry) - 9/15/2003 5:35:18 AM
Well done!
Dream (Poetry) - 9/14/2003 4:41:54 AM
welcome back....BHUWAN
Dream (Poetry) - 9/13/2003 7:00:11 PM
Many dreams don't. Excellent poem. Gald your posting again...
Dream (Poetry) - 9/13/2003 6:34:23 PM
Serenity, you have been missed. A wonderful poem to start with! welcome back!;-)
Dream (Poetry) - 9/13/2003 1:50:11 PM
Welcome back Nico! Hope you had a relaxing and rejuvenating vacation.
~Joseph
Dream (Poetry) - 9/13/2003 11:36:15 AM
Oh yes..I feel this one so deeply, beautifully expressed,
Reindeer
Dream (Poetry) - 9/13/2003 9:32:04 AM
WOOOOHOOOO!!! OUR SERENETY IS BACK!! WELCOME BACK; WE HAVE MISSED YOU HERE AT THE DEN! GLAD YOU ENJOYED YOUR VACATION!
Wonderful write; so glad to be readin' you again!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D :D (happy cuz you are back!)
Dream (Poetry) - 9/13/2003 7:06:10 AM
Very true, welcome back. You were missed.
Dream (Poetry) - 9/13/2003 6:44:01 AM
AAAAAAAAA!!!! Welcome back!!
You better tell me soooooon how you are okay!!
I am still the same old same old ME!!
Love Tinka
Dream (Poetry) - 9/13/2003 5:15:19 AM
Wow!...This was spoken so honestly and with much sadness.
I'm so glad you are home again. There's been many changes, and now everything you type on this board is a contest piece. Heehee! Good luck!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Dream (Poetry) - 9/13/2003 5:04:56 AM
True...and yet, some dreams can still come true. Welcome home.
Dream (Poetry) - 9/13/2003 4:51:37 AM
yes, with sadness we must accept it. I sure understand all this holds. Thank you,,and Welcome Back! Lisa
Don't know !!! (Poetry) - 8/28/2003 1:44:33 PM
Absolutely lovely Nico. hope your vacation is fine like this nice poem you shared with us. I need a vacation too. hugs G
Don't know !!! (Poetry) - 8/24/2003 5:42:11 PM
This is so good! I especially like:
"I can't let the past back in, or wait what tomorrow will bring"
~Jackie~
Don't know !!! (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 10:50:09 PM
Very nice poem. You have a safe and fun trip!
Don't know !!! (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 9:14:34 PM
Nico, enjoyed your poem and trust the trip and the event of the ring will be sensational :0)
Don't know !!! (Poetry) - 8/16/2003 6:04:37 PM
Neat poem. Have a wonderful and safe trip.
Don't know !!! (Poetry) - 8/15/2003 7:09:16 PM
Have a wonderful time and please come back soon......smile
Don't know !!! (Poetry) - 8/15/2003 9:30:18 AM
Beautiful poem, you have been and will be missed, be safe.
Don't know !!! (Poetry) - 8/15/2003 8:55:41 AM
please have fun and stay safe, and know you can always come by my den whenever you can. you will be missed, nico! (and so will you, debs; debs, you take care, and stay safe, too, okay??) (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :D
Don't know !!! (Poetry) - 8/15/2003 6:39:17 AM
Have a good time! See you soon!
Dale
Don't know !!! (Poetry) - 8/15/2003 1:08:20 AM
Excellent rhyme, to go with this fine writing!
Kudos!
tony:)
Don't know !!! (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 11:26:53 PM
Have a great time...come back soon!!!
Don't know !!! (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 3:20:19 PM
Nico, I've missed you and now you're going again;-) Have a wonderful time away whatever you do and wherever you are.;-)Thanks for sharing!
Don't know !!! (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 3:03:16 PM
Have a lovely vacation, This poem was so lovely,
Reindeer
Don't know !!! (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 2:52:23 PM
we will miss you, have a great time!
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 2:50:59 PM
beautiful Write!
Don't know !!! (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 2:27:03 PM
Enjoy your vacation...will be missing your wonderful air here....
In Spirit,
Bear
Don't know !!! (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 1:39:19 PM
Will miss you too. Yes I married her and was a very good to her. She ran off with another man after 5 1/2 years. I was kinda relieved.
I always took care of my two girls I had by her. Have a great time....love & more from....Ron
Don't know !!! (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 1:21:28 PM
Nico Enjoy your vacation..and be happy!!
Not onLine to often!!
got your message thanks!!
We will talk on your return!!
Love Tinka
Don't know !!! (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 12:11:31 PM
Have a wonderful vacation Nico! We'll miss you and look forward to your return.
~Joseph
Don't know !!! (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 12:09:19 PM
eeewwww, a ring! Sounds quite serious to me! Have fun, and get some rest! We'll want to hear the whole story when you get back! *grin* ~SH~
Don't know !!! (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 11:56:37 AM
Holy cow!!!! A ring??? Can't wait for your return in September to find out what you decide. Have a great time and work on your tan. Go for a swim everyday and most of all...STAY COOL!!!
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/10/2003 6:01:51 PM
Friendship is one of those strange things in life. A sort of conundrum.
Well written. Short and to the point...
Perhaps your Friendship has been tested recently? Which is why you have been moved to share this poem? Just a thought...
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/10/2003 6:34:35 AM
Yes, true freinds discriminate at all. They just stick by you through thick or thin. love. G
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/9/2003 9:01:56 PM
Your right about true friends with your write here. I'm thankful your stopping my way. I will put you on the tracker.
Great write!
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/9/2003 2:44:19 PM
Beautiful and well said! I liked this,
Reindeer
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 8/7/2003 1:06:15 PM
It's beautiful! And thankfully with your translation I know what it said. ;)
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/6/2003 12:02:46 PM
True, very true...Thank you for sharing this!!
Love
Tinka
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/6/2003 9:09:45 AM
A true friend is more then a good thing ! Loved your write
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/6/2003 8:43:50 AM
well said, nothings beats true friends, they are jewels
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/6/2003 4:20:42 AM
Beautiful thoughts about a true friend.
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/6/2003 1:53:29 AM
Indeed they are Serenety! Great little write!
Jack
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/5/2003 9:16:35 PM
You got that exactly right! Well done Nico!
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/5/2003 7:16:49 PM
This is so true, Serenety!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
16 words (Poetry) - 8/5/2003 6:48:29 PM
a wonderful entry to the challange.....smile
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/5/2003 6:44:58 PM
yep,thats how they are...very good!
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/5/2003 6:39:29 PM
so very true and well said.....
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/5/2003 5:29:53 PM
So wise Nico. With all the drama of the past few weeks in my life I find this poem to be truly inspiring. Exactly the tonic I needed to set my mind in another direction. A reconcilliatory one. Thank you for telling us all this. Your special friend is lucky to have you as a friend.
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/5/2003 5:27:16 PM
very true write...superb!!!
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/5/2003 5:14:55 PM
Wonderful breakdown of what true friends are.
~Jackie~
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/5/2003 4:07:22 PM
Yes they are.. but they are few and far between
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/5/2003 3:35:40 PM
True, so true.
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/5/2003 3:11:40 PM
So True and you always find out who
they are eventually.
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/5/2003 3:05:30 PM
Beautiful write, Nico.
Love,
Jill
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/5/2003 2:52:01 PM
Very wise words Nico. Good friends are to be treasured.
~Chrissie
True Friends (Poetry) - 8/5/2003 2:40:34 PM
so true; this speaks volumes! lovely write, nico!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :)
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 8/5/2003 9:59:27 AM
WHTAEVER YOU WROTE, I TRIED TO UNDERSTAND,
I DID JUST A FEW WORDS
WHATEVER,
IT SOUNDS SO DELICIOUS
WILLIAM
I feel lonely (Poetry) - 8/4/2003 4:59:04 PM
Poor baby girl. Thank you for pouring your heart out. This cried all by itself.
Emilie
Keys of my heart (Poetry) - 8/4/2003 4:58:00 PM
I love poems about keys and hearts... this is great. I liked the read :)
Thanks,
Emilie
If (Poetry) - 8/4/2003 4:56:58 PM
Ouch ...small and damned powerful!
Thanks,
Emilie
ICQ (Poetry) - 8/4/2003 4:55:45 PM
Writing about this shows your range on things you can write about. AND...you did an excellent job too!
Thanks,
Emilie
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 8/4/2003 4:53:13 PM
Sexy! How original :) I love that!
Thanks,
Emilie
What I need....... (Poetry) - 8/4/2003 2:11:53 PM
very well done....thanks for sharing!
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 8/4/2003 2:03:44 PM
I am very happy for you! Hope you will never be without a job or love again.....smile
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 8/4/2003 12:20:01 PM
Oooooo! Congratulations! I'm so glad you've found yourself a new job and a new love. Wow! Aint live grand?! I'm so happy for you.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
16 words (Poetry) - 8/4/2003 10:15:54 AM
true love is found within...but i wonder the same as you...good write!!
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 8/3/2003 9:12:45 AM
glad you are able to say good-bye to sadness and welcome to love
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 8/3/2003 1:01:24 AM
Bueno para ustedes Nico-(Good for you Nico).
Fasten your seat belt and enjoy the ride. I love french but don't know any. amor usted mi amor. G
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 8/2/2003 8:35:54 AM
Beautiful! So glad you translated it for us, so happy for you!
Reindeer
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 7/31/2003 9:37:13 AM
Absolutely beautiful! Welcome back!
~Joseph
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 7/31/2003 3:15:24 AM
Truly lovely.
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 7/30/2003 8:56:57 PM
I dont know what this says, but it sure looks pretty! lol
Jack
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 7/30/2003 7:22:31 PM
Oh Nico, I don't understand the French at all, but your translation fills my heart. It makes me feel so strong reading about your happiness. Your positive write makes me feel positive about life. What more could a poet ask for?
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 7/30/2003 7:09:35 PM
Superbly done....loved ure style....BHUWAN
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 7/30/2003 5:57:45 PM
Shoot, I labored over the translation, then I saw Serenety's post. Got most of it too. Bravo. Come up for air. You are missed.
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 7/30/2003 4:45:07 PM
Happiness Is What Ya Make Of It In Any Language!
TRASK
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 7/30/2003 3:44:30 PM
A beautiful language translations not needed .........smile
Voila!!!
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 7/30/2003 2:12:27 PM
Okay, here comes the translation:
She is tired, tired of life,
tired of a life without love, without luck.
After her day she puts her head on the pillow
closing her eyes
and prays that this will last forever.
But a new day kisses her awake,
and sometimes
happiness comes when no-one expects it.
Good-bye sadness
Welcome love !
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 7/30/2003 2:11:06 PM
She is tired tired from life of a life without love or happiness after the day she rests his tete on the cushion she closes its eyes and taken that this be for eternity
but a new day greets it and some times the happiness apparait when one does not await it
Good-bye sadness good day love!
Hope this is it
love
tinka
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 7/30/2003 1:58:07 PM
(((serenety)))
tres bon! :) (although my french is severely limited...please translate!)
it flows nicely, and looks pretty! :)
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
Au revoir tristesse (Poetry) - 7/30/2003 1:47:40 PM
((((serenety))))
i don't know what you wrote (my french is severely limited! LOL), but i think french is a beautiful language, and love what you wrote! now, do me a favor...OH please translate into english what you wrote! LOL so glad to see you posting again; i was starting to wonder about you...glad you are doing great! hope it continues! (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :) MAGNIFIQUE!!!!
Fights (Poetry) - 7/23/2003 1:32:43 AM
"don't give up on your love." go as far as you can then leave the man or woman. There's a lesson to be learned after loss. You learn to hang in there almost at any reasonable cost. Just as you stated here. llve u G
Fights (Poetry) - 7/22/2003 10:51:20 AM
YOu got that right ......very wise message
I wished (Poetry) - 7/19/2003 5:59:12 PM
I liked that piece. Depth within simplicity
Fights (Poetry) - 7/18/2003 5:20:16 AM
You raise some good points in this poem. Thanks for sharing!
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