A man's home is his castle (Short Story) - 8/31/2009 2:24:57 PM
It's very descriptive, and paints a good picture of a utopia for a day, but there is not really any conflict. I guess it depends on what you're trying to achieve. Either way, it is a good escape from coming home from a full-time job that has ceased to be really rewarding only to have to keep myself alert enough so that I can still write and someday pull myself out of the lonely hole I've dug out for myself.
Faith holds a promise- part six (Short Story) - 6/18/2009 9:00:49 PM
A deeply moving story!
Chronicles of the dark Prince--Part eleven (Short Story) - 9/7/2008 11:19:06 PM
I remember starting to read
these wonderful chapters
Well done Denise
Love & peace
William
Chronicles of the Dark Prince (Part one (Short Story) - 9/5/2008 11:04:32 PM
I'm a big fan of vampire tales. This story reminds me of the beginning of Anne Rice's famed novel ("Interview with the Vampire"), when Lestat grabs his prey. Great descriptions and an intriguing start to a series.
Sheila
A man's home is his castle (Short Story) - 8/20/2008 11:35:47 AM
Only one question Denise does she have a sister and where can I find her. Just kidding great romance write that stirs the blood with desire and passion.
hugs
Fee
Chronicles of the dark prince: part seven (Short Story) - 8/15/2008 5:29:16 AM
Chilling piece; well done, Denise! :)
Chronicles of the dark prince- part five (Short Story) - 8/14/2008 11:51:42 AM
Eerie and scary, wouldn'twant to be reading this by candlelight alone on a stormy night.
hugs
Fee
The letter of recomendation ( FICTION) (Short Story) - 12/4/2006 7:19:20 PM
Dear Denise,
This is a very sad story and although it's fiction it rings true.
Good luck and best wishes Joyce
Chronicles of the Dark Prince (Part one (Short Story) - 5/12/2006 11:47:54 AM
Vampires! Always a chilling charmer. LOL. ~~Nordette
TideWater! ( part 7) (Short Story) - 5/12/2006 11:12:46 AM
An enthralling account that captures the attention and holds it, Denise. Thank you and best wishes with your story. Love and peace to you,
Regis
TideWater! ( part 7) (Short Story) - 5/9/2006 4:30:48 PM
Yes you are really building your story, your characters and your readers to a climax that i am sure will be earth shattering.
Felix
TideWater! ( part 6 ) (Short Story) - 5/9/2006 3:22:52 PM
Hot, hot, hot and glad this was a short chapter Denise or you would have been getting this old feller hot. Just kidding it is going well for you I see with this latest installment.
Felix
Chronicles of the Dark Prince Part Four (Short Story) - 5/8/2006 7:03:36 PM
Excellent write, Denise; very well done! :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D
Chronicles of the Dark Prince Part Four (Short Story) - 5/8/2006 4:43:33 PM
Still keeping us at the edge of our seats in a rush to know what will happen next and the mixture of erotica, him entering her and biting her at the same time is a new twist in explicity that I kinda liked. Keep at it Denise, think you are on to somthing here.
Felix
TideWater! (part five) (Short Story) - 5/3/2006 2:59:47 AM
Now you are really getting into the story not just the sex but the real feelings of the two main characters are taking on a life of their own. The use of more and shorter paragraphs is also making the reading easier on the eyes and allowing the reader to absorb and retain more of the story. Well done and keep it coming.
Felix
Chronicles of the Dark Prince part three (Short Story) - 4/23/2006 7:43:08 PM
Another great chapter, Denise
your narration is so clear and loaded
with so much imagery,
getteing better by the chapters
the anicipation is unbearable
an excellent write
Love & Peace
William
Chronicles of the Dark Prince part 2 (Short Story) - 4/23/2006 9:45:12 AM
Denise
you amaze me, with this wonderful piece
The suspence is killing me
I feel I am being tortured
One chapter at a time
But still I want to thank you
for sharing such worthy reading.
Love & Peace
William
Chronicles of the Dark Prince part 2 (Short Story) - 4/23/2006 3:24:31 AM
Hi Denise, this has the makings of a great book, very interesting with a good hook. However I would make one suggestion, remove the bold, increase the font and break down into more paragraphs. It will be easier for you to edit, easier for us to read and will just improve the appearance greatly. Other then that it is great/
Felix
Chronicles of the Dark Prince (Part one (Short Story) - 4/22/2006 11:28:56 PM
Chilling write, Denise. But well versed. I love the "Welcme to my world!" As I read I could hear the narrator deep booming voice. Well written.
God bless,
Sandie.
Chronicles of the Dark Prince (Part one (Short Story) - 4/12/2006 6:10:32 PM
This is great Denise
absolultely A fantastic composition
loaded with great imagery,
you took me there, to that corner
Of your talented imagination,
the anticipations of Part 2
is already geting the best of me
Excellent piece Denise
Love & Peace
William
Chronicles of the Dark Prince (Part one (Short Story) - 4/12/2006 4:26:31 PM
Wow scary sense of dread building to the climatic ending. Well done story Denise.
Felix
TideWater! Chapter 3 continued (Short Story) - 3/21/2006 7:55:20 PM
This story line and the characters are building quite nicely and this is becoming a must read.
Felix
TideWater! chapter 3 (Short Story) - 3/15/2006 11:30:16 AM
Hmmn things are heating up here in the romance/desire department, looking forward to seeing how this develops.
Felix
TideWater! chapter2 (Short Story) - 9/14/2005 12:37:34 PM
sorry Denise don't think this is an ending just another twist, can't leave us hanging as to whether he does her or not...not fair to do that lol
good story
Felix
The light of hope (Short Story) - 7/26/2004 3:07:00 AM
Beautiful and truthful sentiments expressed here Denise in an open a, honest and refreshing way .
God bless you , and may his Angels forevever guide and direct you on the path of life .
Peter Paton
Welcoming a new writer (Article) - 12/29/2008 7:43:10 PM
Good idea Denise. I will check out his page. Malcolm Watts
This love condition (Article) - 11/22/2008 10:55:12 PM
Good article. I also believe that one can love more than once.
For me it is not that I have loved, but that I loved and gave too much.
This love condition (Article) - 11/22/2008 7:08:17 PM
Lots fo food for thought in this article Dee and agree with the most of it. I do believe though that a person can love more than once in a lifetime.
hugs
fee
This love condition (Article) - 11/22/2008 1:02:17 PM
This one gave alot to think about... especially concerning love... if we are truly blessed...we find that soulmate....and in some instances...maybe even another in later life??? lindalaw
One vote for all times (Article) - 10/14/2008 2:58:04 PM
While Not Religious I've Always Cast My Vote For Word Of(God),i.e. Not Lesser Of 2 Political Evils...Besides Greed Mongering Corporate $$ No Matter Who You They Vote For Gets In Sin=
WILL STILL BE RUNNING USA TO THE DOGS...
Why Is That So Hard To See ?????
Credit Illuminating Write..
TRASSK
Childhood sexual abuse: From the soul of a survivor (Article) - 10/9/2008 7:13:46 PM
Denise, I know this is painful, as we have discussed before when I posted the three child abuse stories... I did not do an "article" as I am trying to get enough true stories together for the book I'm working on right now... This subject remains taboo in many areas, actually...everywhere...and we just have to do everything we can to get this word out... and to instill some self esteem into those who have been harmed...and as you said... the harm is inside and out...and does last a lifetime...even under the best of circumstances... Good for you... and let's keep raising hell... lindalaw
Childhood sexual abuse: From the soul of a survivor (Article) - 10/9/2008 3:17:23 PM
Denise, I couldn't agree more: The message to our young is, "Its' Not Your Fault." We have a campaign in Australia at the moment to hopefully get the message across to our young. Huge posters are being displayed where children frequent; supermarkets, video stores, schools etc. The image is of a young boy weeping and the caption reads: "Its' Not Your Fault." thank you Denise for dealing with this most important topic, your writing may not win the war today, however, you will most definetly strenghten the battle and keep it in the spotlight where these deviants will not be able to prey on our most precious possesion, our young.
Thank you again - You are helping.
Happiness always, Stuart
Childhood sexual abuse: From the soul of a survivor (Article) - 10/9/2008 12:45:01 PM
You are so right Dee, the more survivors speak out the more awareness those who don't always understand begin to and with knowledge comes a way to help these children...
Fee
Childhood sexual abuse: From the soul of a survivor (Article) - 10/9/2008 12:24:07 PM
As a survivor myself, I whole-heartedly agree with everything you said here. You even described my mother (a survivor herself) with amazing accuracy. Thank you for speaking out. Rebecca
Bad Impressions- Child sexual abuse (Article) - 9/29/2008 9:39:45 PM
Denise,
You described this most heinous of crimes to our young with immense accuracy. I can hear the poor girls pure voice of innocence in this masterfully crafted piece.
Terribly sad,
Stuart
Bad Impressions- Child sexual abuse (Article) - 9/29/2008 5:41:54 PM
I am in awe. To tackle and address such a real issue and aspect of this terrible tragedy is difficult to say the least, but you put us right inside that little girls heart and mind.
Fee
Darkness (Article) - 9/25/2008 6:11:25 AM
This is a beautiful article....and inspiring as well. So happy this is not about you now... (not sure if it is about you)...but either way... it is very human and you wrote it quite believable... If this is about you, my prayer is that you continue to go forward ...in the light... :-)) lindalaw
Darkness (Article) - 9/25/2008 3:22:12 AM
Amen to that sista, your words and writings reflect the light you now walk beneath...never go back.
hugs
fee
Darkness (Article) - 9/25/2008 2:19:38 AM
Oh Denise,
This article is truly a sad and at the same time an inspirational write.....you have shown strength and may the sun always shine brightly, on you.
Happiness in your world from now on.....
Stuart
How to stretch your food dollars (Article) - 9/24/2008 1:39:10 PM
Now I am Hungry
You see what you've done???
have to take a snack break now.....
Peace & love
William
Writing is a healing ointment (Article) - 9/7/2008 10:01:47 PM
My heart and soul goes out to you
reaching out to hug you, in an attempt
to take away your pain,
for all that a wonderful woman like yourself
had ever suffered, in the hand of abusers
and for the courage to expose your hidden secrets
with your new found God Given weapon,
"The ability to write about it".
Peace & love be with you My dear friend
William
Writing is a healing ointment (Article) - 9/7/2008 5:17:45 PM
Oh Denise,
How evil and cruel some people are, to deeply hurt and scar a young child chills me to the bone. We all have our reasons for writing, and you are showing an inner depth and courage which nobody can ever take away from you.
Keep writing and healing Denise, you are a gifted soul.
Happiness from now on!!
Stuart, your friend in Australia
Moments in love (Poetry) - 10/23/2009 3:03:05 AM
NICE!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Moments in love (Poetry) - 10/21/2009 7:48:02 AM
You may be the student in love but you are the teacher in poetry for the simple beauty of this one teaches so much...
hugs
fee
Moments in love (Poetry) - 10/21/2009 7:20:41 AM
I want to steal this poem!! lol
But I won't. Its one of those 'wow' poems.
I don't wanna get caught with stolen property! lol
Memory Cascade (Poetry) - 10/21/2009 2:43:14 AM
Unbelievable.I love your passion and deep feelings on love.It is captivating,compelling and intriging that is beautifully express from a beautiful woman.
My comfort (Poetry) - 10/21/2009 2:41:27 AM
This is a beautiful poem.I love it.take care
Dark inclinations (Poetry) - 10/21/2009 2:39:37 AM
This is a great poem.Outstanding piece you have written.take care
My comfort (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 3:54:18 PM
I was blessed with a love such as yours. Powerful emotions and from the heart.
Memory Cascade (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 3:51:36 PM
Wow...this is jaw dropping romance writing at its best. well done Denise.
hugs
fee
My comfort (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 3:48:00 PM
To find that type of heart softening peace in love and life is indeed a gift from the heavens...savor every moment of it Denise.
hugs
fee
Over Shadowed (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 5:25:12 AM
Denise, There is a darkness entwined beneath a clarity in the poem. Very well written my dear lady. Surely have missed you here on the den. Lovely to have you back among our warm hearts.
One of your best poems I have read!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Over Shadowed (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 3:51:40 AM
Truly one of your best with so much feeling and emotion winding through it in a weave of poetic brilliance. Well Done
hugs
FEe
Over Shadowed (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 2:51:58 AM
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Over Shadowed (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 2:30:48 AM
Its good to read your poems again:-),how's everything.I enjoy reading this poem,take care
The serenade of seduction (Poetry) - 9/17/2009 10:42:13 PM
Very sensual and romantic. Like Amber I love the ending because it is so endearing to the heart and soul.
Aching to read, consent from warm virgin eyes
To kiss the sweet, sweet lips not kissed till then
To feel her tenderness, in lovelorn sighs
And share love’s pleasures in purity, not sin“.
These are words of true romance. It kind just tugs at the heartstrings to be this beautiful lady. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie.
Yearnings ( revised) (Poetry) - 8/5/2009 3:14:05 AM
Magnificent and wonderful poem Denise,take care
EDWIN
The serenade of seduction (Poetry) - 6/13/2009 8:11:26 PM
I like, I like - very impressive.
Best wishes
HH
The flames that burn within (Poetry) - 6/12/2009 9:43:46 AM
OMG! Your poem left me breathless! Passion very well penned! Whew!! I love this.
Anna
Love's lyrical whispers (Poetry) - 6/12/2009 9:42:14 AM
Lovely lyrical flow to this poem Denise. I truly enjoyed the love story.
Anna
The serenade of seduction (Poetry) - 5/20/2009 4:49:15 AM
Oh my,your words are breath taking sweet lady...sighhhhhh..stay safe and well...Hugsss
The serenade of seduction (Poetry) - 5/20/2009 3:50:51 AM
Denise,
"The serenade of seduction" Is Beautiful Love Poetry!
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
The price of loving you (Poetry) - 5/20/2009 2:49:35 AM
Deep and passionate poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
EDWIN
Our book of love and passion (Poetry) - 5/20/2009 2:47:40 AM
I'm a leaf because I've fallin in love with this poem.Great work
EDWIN
Illusions of love (Poetry) - 5/20/2009 2:45:34 AM
Beautifully written.You are talented in your words :-)
EDWIN
Deliriously into you (Poetry) - 5/20/2009 2:43:22 AM
Beautiful lyrics from a beautiful person :-).Its very sweet and tender.I can just picture myself in that photo dancing to love songs playing from the radio as the hearts beat to every lyric that touches the fiber of our souls.I enjoy reading it,take care
EDWIN
Legend of the enchanted river (Poetry) - 5/20/2009 2:40:20 AM
Everytime that I read your poetry,I am always impress by how you write and also the way you express yourself.Take care
EDWIN
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