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Recent Reviews for Denise Edwards
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Faith holds a promise- part six (Short Story) - 6/18/2009 9:00:49 PM
A deeply moving story!
The letter of recomendation ( FICTION) (Short Story) - 12/4/2006 7:19:20 PM
Dear Denise,
This is a very sad story and although it's fiction it rings true.
Good luck and best wishes Joyce
TideWater! ( part 6 ) (Short Story) - 5/9/2006 3:22:52 PM
Hot, hot, hot and glad this was a short chapter Denise or you would have been getting this old feller hot. Just kidding it is going well for you I see with this latest installment.
Felix
Chronicles of the Dark Prince Part Four (Short Story) - 5/8/2006 7:03:36 PM
Excellent write, Denise; very well done! :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D
Chronicles of the Dark Prince Part Four (Short Story) - 5/8/2006 4:43:33 PM
Still keeping us at the edge of our seats in a rush to know what will happen next and the mixture of erotica, him entering her and biting her at the same time is a new twist in explicity that I kinda liked. Keep at it Denise, think you are on to somthing here.
Felix
TideWater! (part five) (Short Story) - 5/3/2006 2:59:47 AM
Now you are really getting into the story not just the sex but the real feelings of the two main characters are taking on a life of their own. The use of more and shorter paragraphs is also making the reading easier on the eyes and allowing the reader to absorb and retain more of the story. Well done and keep it coming.
Felix
Chronicles of the Dark Prince part three (Short Story) - 4/23/2006 7:43:08 PM
Another great chapter, Denise
your narration is so clear and loaded
with so much imagery,
getteing better by the chapters
the anicipation is unbearable
an excellent write
Love & Peace
William
Chronicles of the Dark Prince part 2 (Short Story) - 4/23/2006 9:45:12 AM
Denise
you amaze me, with this wonderful piece
The suspence is killing me
I feel I am being tortured
One chapter at a time
But still I want to thank you
for sharing such worthy reading.
Love & Peace
William
Chronicles of the Dark Prince part 2 (Short Story) - 4/23/2006 3:24:31 AM
Hi Denise, this has the makings of a great book, very interesting with a good hook. However I would make one suggestion, remove the bold, increase the font and break down into more paragraphs. It will be easier for you to edit, easier for us to read and will just improve the appearance greatly. Other then that it is great/
Felix
TideWater! Chapter 3 continued (Short Story) - 3/21/2006 7:55:20 PM
This story line and the characters are building quite nicely and this is becoming a must read.
Felix
TideWater! chapter 3 (Short Story) - 3/15/2006 11:30:16 AM
Hmmn things are heating up here in the romance/desire department, looking forward to seeing how this develops.
Felix
TideWater! chapter2 (Short Story) - 9/14/2005 12:37:34 PM
sorry Denise don't think this is an ending just another twist, can't leave us hanging as to whether he does her or not...not fair to do that lol
good story
Felix
The light of hope (Short Story) - 7/26/2004 3:07:00 AM
Beautiful and truthful sentiments expressed here Denise in an open a, honest and refreshing way .
God bless you , and may his Angels forevever guide and direct you on the path of life .
Peter Paton
The light of hope (Short Story) - 7/6/2004 1:17:41 PM
nice inspirational story, denise! well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in burleson, karen lynn. :D
The light of hope (Short Story) - 7/5/2004 1:45:46 PM
Totally agree about stumbling around uintil we find out place on earth here, and I to had to focus with my eyes to finally see where I should be.
Very enjoyable and I am glad you found your place
Tommy
The light of hope (Short Story) - 7/4/2004 4:46:20 PM
And even when the path is not paved, Awareness and Enlightenment allow us to find our way. A wonderful, soul searching piece, so well expressed.
Peace Be Still.
Tami
The light of hope (Short Story) - 7/4/2004 2:04:11 PM
Beautiful insight, my friend. Thanks.
The light of hope (Short Story) - 7/4/2004 8:03:51 AM
Thanks for sharing this, Denise. Asserting who you are, and finding your path, sure make a big difference.
Carmen :-)
The letter of recomendation ( FICTION) (Short Story) - 6/19/2004 10:04:35 PM
Denise I like your story. Once you have the onus of ex con on your back life becomes harder than ever to live. Love and Hugs
Bill Murray
The letter of recomendation ( FICTION) (Short Story) - 5/29/2004 10:37:22 AM
Powerful.
Tidewater! (Short Story) - 3/4/2004 8:28:06 AM
I like this one a lot. I am also prone to write long paragraphs and this seems to work well with you for some reason. Action is a hard genre to write for some reason, and I write one of the harder genres out there -- that being horror. I like how you use Chicago as part of the story as well.
The letter of recomendation ( FICTION) (Short Story) - 3/4/2004 8:25:23 AM
This is a solid write. I knew someone who died from the result of someone driving drunk so this one hits home to me in some form. This one don't seem to be finished for some reason, that is what I get from it. It seems like there could be more that can be done with it.
Welcoming a new writer (Article) - 12/29/2008 7:43:10 PM
Good idea Denise. I will check out his page. Malcolm Watts
This love condition (Article) - 11/22/2008 10:55:12 PM
Good article. I also believe that one can love more than once.
For me it is not that I have loved, but that I loved and gave too much.
This love condition (Article) - 11/22/2008 7:08:17 PM
Lots fo food for thought in this article Dee and agree with the most of it. I do believe though that a person can love more than once in a lifetime.
hugs
fee
This love condition (Article) - 11/22/2008 1:02:17 PM
This one gave alot to think about... especially concerning love... if we are truly blessed...we find that soulmate....and in some instances...maybe even another in later life??? lindalaw
One vote for all times (Article) - 10/14/2008 2:58:04 PM
While Not Religious I've Always Cast My Vote For Word Of(God),i.e. Not Lesser Of 2 Political Evils...Besides Greed Mongering Corporate $$ No Matter Who You They Vote For Gets In Sin=
WILL STILL BE RUNNING USA TO THE DOGS...
Why Is That So Hard To See ?????
Credit Illuminating Write..
TRASSK
Childhood sexual abuse: From the soul of a survivor (Article) - 10/9/2008 7:13:46 PM
Denise, I know this is painful, as we have discussed before when I posted the three child abuse stories... I did not do an "article" as I am trying to get enough true stories together for the book I'm working on right now... This subject remains taboo in many areas, actually...everywhere...and we just have to do everything we can to get this word out... and to instill some self esteem into those who have been harmed...and as you said... the harm is inside and out...and does last a lifetime...even under the best of circumstances... Good for you... and let's keep raising hell... lindalaw
Childhood sexual abuse: From the soul of a survivor (Article) - 10/9/2008 3:17:23 PM
Denise, I couldn't agree more: The message to our young is, "Its' Not Your Fault." We have a campaign in Australia at the moment to hopefully get the message across to our young. Huge posters are being displayed where children frequent; supermarkets, video stores, schools etc. The image is of a young boy weeping and the caption reads: "Its' Not Your Fault." thank you Denise for dealing with this most important topic, your writing may not win the war today, however, you will most definetly strenghten the battle and keep it in the spotlight where these deviants will not be able to prey on our most precious possesion, our young.
Thank you again - You are helping.
Happiness always, Stuart
Childhood sexual abuse: From the soul of a survivor (Article) - 10/9/2008 12:45:01 PM
You are so right Dee, the more survivors speak out the more awareness those who don't always understand begin to and with knowledge comes a way to help these children...
Fee
Childhood sexual abuse: From the soul of a survivor (Article) - 10/9/2008 12:24:07 PM
As a survivor myself, I whole-heartedly agree with everything you said here. You even described my mother (a survivor herself) with amazing accuracy. Thank you for speaking out. Rebecca
Bad Impressions- Child sexual abuse (Article) - 9/29/2008 9:39:45 PM
Denise,
You described this most heinous of crimes to our young with immense accuracy. I can hear the poor girls pure voice of innocence in this masterfully crafted piece.
Terribly sad,
Stuart
Bad Impressions- Child sexual abuse (Article) - 9/29/2008 5:41:54 PM
I am in awe. To tackle and address such a real issue and aspect of this terrible tragedy is difficult to say the least, but you put us right inside that little girls heart and mind.
Fee
Darkness (Article) - 9/25/2008 6:11:25 AM
This is a beautiful article....and inspiring as well. So happy this is not about you now... (not sure if it is about you)...but either way... it is very human and you wrote it quite believable... If this is about you, my prayer is that you continue to go forward ...in the light... :-)) lindalaw
Darkness (Article) - 9/25/2008 3:22:12 AM
Amen to that sista, your words and writings reflect the light you now walk beneath...never go back.
hugs
fee
Darkness (Article) - 9/25/2008 2:19:38 AM
Oh Denise,
This article is truly a sad and at the same time an inspirational write.....you have shown strength and may the sun always shine brightly, on you.
Happiness in your world from now on.....
Stuart
How to stretch your food dollars (Article) - 9/24/2008 1:39:10 PM
Now I am Hungry
You see what you've done???
have to take a snack break now.....
Peace & love
William
Writing is a healing ointment (Article) - 9/7/2008 10:01:47 PM
My heart and soul goes out to you
reaching out to hug you, in an attempt
to take away your pain,
for all that a wonderful woman like yourself
had ever suffered, in the hand of abusers
and for the courage to expose your hidden secrets
with your new found God Given weapon,
"The ability to write about it".
Peace & love be with you My dear friend
William
Writing is a healing ointment (Article) - 9/7/2008 5:17:45 PM
Oh Denise,
How evil and cruel some people are, to deeply hurt and scar a young child chills me to the bone. We all have our reasons for writing, and you are showing an inner depth and courage which nobody can ever take away from you.
Keep writing and healing Denise, you are a gifted soul.
Happiness from now on!!
Stuart, your friend in Australia
A vision of love (Poetry) - 10/6/2012 6:05:29 AM
Oh a vision of love at its finest splendor! Beautiful! Thanks for sharing Denise! Blessings to you! :)
Debbie
A Hallowing tale! (Poetry) - 10/6/2012 6:00:37 AM
Ooh chilling stuff here! Very eerie and daunting and I love it! Great for Halloween! Thanks for sharing Denise! Great poem! :)
Movin and Groovin (Poetry) - 5/28/2011 6:55:27 PM
It Feels Good
always Movin & Groovin...
Ole Bones (Poetry) - 5/28/2011 6:53:55 PM
and let us instead turn up the Jams & rock on
gettin down with them Ole Bones in the closet
I like dancing with mine :)
Mandible Thrones
Victoria
Ole Bones (Poetry) - 5/3/2011 8:24:54 AM
A funny, haunting piece Denise. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
Ole Bones (Poetry) - 3/25/2011 8:17:22 PM
A haunting piece delightfully penned...
Be always safe,
Karen
Ole Bones (Poetry) - 3/25/2011 7:26:51 PM
excellent piece
An enjoyable write
Love & Peace be with you
William
Movin and Groovin (Poetry) - 3/25/2011 3:42:30 PM
Gotta love it, I was smiling as soon as I seen the dancing figure. lol
fee
Ole Bones (Poetry) - 3/25/2011 3:41:26 PM
Good one and tonight my knees are feeling pretty creeky lol, best remember to repost this one for Halloween as well.
fee
Ole Bones (Poetry) - 3/25/2011 12:50:03 PM
Denise, some years ago you could have be writing about me, but
I've put on more than a few pounds and I hardly ever creak or
crack or rattle no more. -gene.
Ole Bones (Poetry) - 3/25/2011 9:04:51 AM
Good thing to be rid of him too, Denise. Nicely expressed metaphorically. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
Movin and Groovin (Poetry) - 3/25/2011 9:03:49 AM
That is some dance, Denise! Sweet! Thanks for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Ole Bones (Poetry) - 3/25/2011 8:38:14 AM
Oh my heavens he looks like someone I work with ..LOL ooopsss did I say that I didddddd....cute real cute sweet denise...Hugsss
Love,
Chanti Lace
Movin and Groovin (Poetry) - 3/25/2011 8:33:38 AM
Oh yeahhh letsssss shakeeeeeeeeeeeeee ourrrrrr thingies woohoooooooooooo shake here shake there come on sweet denise letssssssss danceeee.. you go girl oh yeahhhhhhh..chanti swaysssssssssssssss herrrrrrrrrrrrrr everythingggggggg that away and this awayyyyyyyyy yeah..oh love this sweet lady..Hugssssssss,much love to you...
A perfect proposal (Poetry) - 3/17/2011 1:34:39 PM
Lovely memories well-shared via your verses, Denise. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
A perfect proposal (Poetry) - 3/16/2011 4:22:40 PM
Beautiful romance shines through in this write, Denise.
A perfect proposal (Poetry) - 3/16/2011 12:00:41 PM
So tender and romantic.
A perfect proposal (Poetry) - 3/16/2011 11:12:18 AM
Denise, I have missed your beautiful poetry, so lovely to read you again. I love this sentimental heart touching poem.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
A perfect proposal (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 6:41:48 PM
A beautiful, loving, and warm memory to forever hold dear...
Be always safe,
Karen
A quest of hearts (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 6:39:21 AM
Oh my..sweet lady your words melt me in so many ways...sighhh..lovely writing as always..Hugsss,much love to you my sweet friend..
A perfect proposal (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 6:36:43 AM
Breath taking just like you sweet lady my sweet friend...Hugssss
Love Always,
Chanti Lace
A perfect proposal (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 5:59:28 AM
'My heart bloomed like spring flowers' ...... beautifully written love poem.
Donna
A quest of hearts (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 4:20:00 AM
Beautiful romance and suspense well done.
fee
A perfect proposal (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 4:17:26 AM
What a perfect love story with so much romance and heart in each line.\fee
A perfect proposal (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 3:38:53 AM
This is the best.
John
A perfect proposal (Poetry) - 3/15/2011 12:33:26 AM
An enjoyable poem, Denise
A quest of hearts (Poetry) - 3/14/2011 8:20:32 PM
This has a sweet, dreamy, almost ethereal aura to it, Denise. Nicely done! Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Shattered dreams (Poetry) - 3/9/2011 7:38:03 PM
Deep, moving, internally enchanting....
Be always safe,
Karen
For love she did defend (Poetry) - 3/9/2011 5:53:42 PM
Sad are the ways of this worlkd, Denise; as your verses server to remind. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Shattered dreams (Poetry) - 3/9/2011 10:19:00 AM
Breath taking sweet lady ...just like you sighhh....Hugssssss
Shattered dreams (Poetry) - 3/9/2011 8:03:06 AM
Denise, " Shattered dreams," losing a loved
one and going through the grief...
Remarkedly written.
Always,
Deborah
Shattered dreams (Poetry) - 3/9/2011 7:40:48 AM
Truly captivating almost Shakespearean in feel...enjoyed.
fee
Shattered dreams (Poetry) - 3/9/2011 5:15:50 AM
Denise,
I love reading Shakespeare, and you have made his language come alive in this most tender and thought provoking poem. It's filled with emotion and pain but done eloquently.
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Shattered dreams (Poetry) - 3/9/2011 4:38:01 AM
Classic, beautiful and deeply emotive Denise.
Shattered dreams (Poetry) - 3/8/2011 8:53:54 PM
Soul-grasping in meaning and emotive strength, Denise. Thank you for sharing. I can relate. Love and best wishes,
Regis
A vision of love (Poetry) - 3/4/2011 8:44:35 PM
Reaching into the depth of your heart, beautiful...
Be always safe,
Karen
A vision of love (Poetry) - 3/4/2011 11:34:26 AM
Truly compelling, bittersweetly sad; thank you, Denise. Love and best wishes,
Regis
A vision of love (Poetry) - 3/4/2011 4:19:02 AM
Oh my.... breath taking just like you sweet denise..sighhhhhhhhhhhh...as always beautiful writing sweet lady...Hugss,much love too you always
Chanti Lace
A vision of love (Poetry) - 3/4/2011 3:48:57 AM
The purest poetry, wistful being.
John
For love she did defend (Poetry) - 3/4/2011 2:05:25 AM
You are on a streak and this is also a wonderful mini-story write that leaves the reader wanting more.
fee
Queen of the dazzling lights (Poetry) - 3/4/2011 2:04:11 AM
Wow, two home run poems in one day...this one "shines"
fee
A vision of love (Poetry) - 3/4/2011 2:02:22 AM
Captivatingly, heart touchingly, superbly done Denise, simple but so beautiful....
fee
The rhythm of the dance (Poetry) - 2/27/2011 9:54:49 AM
Such great energy in this poem Denise, would make anyone want to dance!
The rhythm of the dance (Poetry) - 2/26/2011 1:31:54 PM
i love it too, great poem
The rhythm of the dance (Poetry) - 2/24/2011 9:08:08 AM
This is a really a very romantic poem and remember, it takes two to tango. There is romance in the air with those daring stares, and when the dance is over and you have cught your breath, then you retire for the night and what goes on behind closed doors, goes on. Thanx for sharing this delightful poem that has a smooth flowing cadence all its own.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
The rhythm of the dance (Poetry) - 2/23/2011 8:28:24 PM
An elegant unfolding of tripping the light fantastic. Take Care. Ciao tj
The rhythm of the dance (Poetry) - 2/23/2011 8:28:03 PM
Beautiful writing sweet lady.....I love how you ended this.....nice too see you posting....sighhh...Hugsss
The rhythm of the dance (Poetry) - 2/23/2011 3:32:04 PM
The dance of life spins around in spirals of sweet music always changing. Our dance partners may change but the music continues. Well written Denise....
fee
The rhythm of the dance (Poetry) - 2/23/2011 1:27:25 PM
I could see and hear it all...loved it!
Diana...
The rhythm of the dance (Poetry) - 2/23/2011 3:47:50 AM
I can just hear the sound of the big band. Nothing quite like it. They have an orchestra around here that puts on shows and has at least one big dance a year.
The rhythm of the dance (Poetry) - 2/22/2011 10:56:24 PM
You have created the mood of such an experience very effectively through your verses, Denise. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
They wrote it all down (Poetry) - 2/19/2011 8:12:55 AM
Excellent writing my sweet friend....please stay safe and always be you sweet lady...Hugss..remember you are always in my thoughts and my prayers.....ALWAYS
Love,
Chanti Lace
They wrote it all down (Poetry) - 2/18/2011 11:47:48 AM
Brilliant piece of art with the perfect capture of the picture or perhaps the picture captures so well the words.
fee
They wrote it all down (Poetry) - 2/18/2011 1:27:19 AM
well expressed feelings and desires...
They wrote it all down (Poetry) - 2/17/2011 9:33:12 PM
This is yet another of your moving and meaningful writes that expresses feelings with which I can relate, Denise. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
A tempest dream (Poetry) - 2/17/2011 7:35:25 PM
Intense... ...and I love the ending, Denise. Love and best wishes,
Regis
They wrote it all down (Poetry) - 2/17/2011 7:02:10 PM
A different kind of pinning for a lost lover, and one that I like for its difference. This showed talent behind the words.
Soul Embraced (Poetry) - 2/17/2011 6:53:33 PM
I agree with Regis this is a classic poem
truly in depth and elegant
Through Love's Bounty
Victoria
A tempest dream (Poetry) - 2/17/2011 6:48:46 PM
this is beautiful Denise
unending love storms
Victoria
They wrote it all down (Poetry) - 2/17/2011 6:46:52 PM
and what you have written down
is deeply expressionate
our choices are never as certain
as we sometimes think they will be
New Dreams & Moons Dawning
Victoria
Behind my chamber door (Poetry) - 2/17/2011 6:15:17 PM
You write lovely love poetry, Denise. Thank you for sharing your gifts. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Moments in love (Poetry) - 2/17/2011 6:14:22 PM
Your expressive verses make me want to be the teacher, Denise. Well done. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
This truth you must know (Poetry) - 2/17/2011 6:13:28 PM
Your powerful imagery and metaphors serve to enhance the power of the meaning and emotions expressed in your verses here, Denise. Love and blessings,
Regis
This love, I confess (Poetry) - 2/17/2011 6:12:00 PM
Such a sweet invitation expressed in compelling fashion via your verses, Denise. Nicely done. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Soul Embraced (Poetry) - 2/17/2011 6:11:06 PM
Thank you for sharing this classic poem of love and passion, Denise. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
He's just not you (Poetry) - 2/17/2011 6:09:56 PM
Some love (lovers) are simply irreplaceable. Nicely expressed, Denise. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Bliss (Poetry) - 2/17/2011 6:08:06 PM
A blissfully beautiful haiku, Denise. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Moments in love (Poetry) - 2/9/2011 7:15:31 AM
Sighh..lovely just like you sweet lady..Oh my..
My comfort (Poetry) - 2/9/2011 7:14:34 AM
Breath taking sweet ladyy..sighhh..Hugs
Mystery of the deep (Poetry) - 5/19/2010 6:26:11 AM
i can feel the simmering energies waiting to burst forth----a very lovely poem indeed!!!
Moments in love (Poetry) - 10/23/2009 3:03:05 AM
NICE!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Moments in love (Poetry) - 10/21/2009 7:48:02 AM
You may be the student in love but you are the teacher in poetry for the simple beauty of this one teaches so much...
hugs
fee
Moments in love (Poetry) - 10/21/2009 7:20:41 AM
I want to steal this poem!! lol
But I won't. Its one of those 'wow' poems.
I don't wanna get caught with stolen property! lol
Memory Cascade (Poetry) - 10/21/2009 2:43:14 AM
Unbelievable.I love your passion and deep feelings on love.It is captivating,compelling and intriging that is beautifully express from a beautiful woman.
My comfort (Poetry) - 10/21/2009 2:41:27 AM
This is a beautiful poem.I love it.take care
My comfort (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 3:54:18 PM
I was blessed with a love such as yours. Powerful emotions and from the heart.
Memory Cascade (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 3:51:36 PM
Wow...this is jaw dropping romance writing at its best. well done Denise.
hugs
fee
My comfort (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 3:48:00 PM
To find that type of heart softening peace in love and life is indeed a gift from the heavens...savor every moment of it Denise.
hugs
fee
Over Shadowed (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 5:25:12 AM
Denise, There is a darkness entwined beneath a clarity in the poem. Very well written my dear lady. Surely have missed you here on the den. Lovely to have you back among our warm hearts.
One of your best poems I have read!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Over Shadowed (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 3:51:40 AM
Truly one of your best with so much feeling and emotion winding through it in a weave of poetic brilliance. Well Done
hugs
FEe
Over Shadowed (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 2:51:58 AM
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Over Shadowed (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 2:30:48 AM
Its good to read your poems again:-),how's everything.I enjoy reading this poem,take care
The serenade of seduction (Poetry) - 9/17/2009 10:42:13 PM
Very sensual and romantic. Like Amber I love the ending because it is so endearing to the heart and soul.
Aching to read, consent from warm virgin eyes
To kiss the sweet, sweet lips not kissed till then
To feel her tenderness, in lovelorn sighs
And share love’s pleasures in purity, not sin“.
These are words of true romance. It kind just tugs at the heartstrings to be this beautiful lady. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie.
Yearnings ( revised) (Poetry) - 8/5/2009 3:14:05 AM
Magnificent and wonderful poem Denise,take care
EDWIN
The serenade of seduction (Poetry) - 6/13/2009 8:11:26 PM
I like, I like - very impressive.
Best wishes
HH
The flames that burn within (Poetry) - 6/12/2009 9:43:46 AM
OMG! Your poem left me breathless! Passion very well penned! Whew!! I love this.
Anna
Love's lyrical whispers (Poetry) - 6/12/2009 9:42:14 AM
Lovely lyrical flow to this poem Denise. I truly enjoyed the love story.
Anna
The serenade of seduction (Poetry) - 5/20/2009 4:49:15 AM
Oh my,your words are breath taking sweet lady...sighhhhhh..stay safe and well...Hugsss
The serenade of seduction (Poetry) - 5/20/2009 3:50:51 AM
Denise,
"The serenade of seduction" Is Beautiful Love Poetry!
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
The price of loving you (Poetry) - 5/20/2009 2:49:35 AM
Deep and passionate poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
EDWIN
Our book of love and passion (Poetry) - 5/20/2009 2:47:40 AM
I'm a leaf because I've fallin in love with this poem.Great work
EDWIN
Illusions of love (Poetry) - 5/20/2009 2:45:34 AM
Beautifully written.You are talented in your words :-)
EDWIN
Deliriously into you (Poetry) - 5/20/2009 2:43:22 AM
Beautiful lyrics from a beautiful person :-).Its very sweet and tender.I can just picture myself in that photo dancing to love songs playing from the radio as the hearts beat to every lyric that touches the fiber of our souls.I enjoy reading it,take care
EDWIN
Legend of the enchanted river (Poetry) - 5/20/2009 2:40:20 AM
Everytime that I read your poetry,I am always impress by how you write and also the way you express yourself.Take care
EDWIN
The serenade of seduction (Poetry) - 5/20/2009 2:37:46 AM
You have written a masterpiece of a poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
EDWIN
The serenade of seduction (Poetry) - 5/19/2009 9:17:22 PM
Inspired and achingly romantic write, Denise! This "Serenade" deserves an encore. Act II, perhaps? Bravo!
The serenade of seduction (Poetry) - 5/19/2009 11:44:14 AM
Lovely, Denise. I'm easily seduced...by your words. -gene.
The serenade of seduction (Poetry) - 5/19/2009 8:22:46 AM
I love this poem! The way you ended it was sweetness..
"Aching to read, consent from warm virgin eyes
To kiss the sweet, sweet lips not kissed till then
To feel her tenderness, in lovelorn sighs
And share love’s pleasures in purity, not sin“.
Pure sensuality and artistry!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Legend of the enchanted river (Poetry) - 5/18/2009 4:07:49 PM
Captured moments of a romantic age...lovely as always Dee.
hugs
fee
The serenade of seduction (Poetry) - 5/18/2009 4:03:03 PM
Oh Dee, hot and sensuous as a threesome...well done and nice way to warm up for summer.
fee
Legend of the enchanted river (Poetry) - 5/18/2009 9:41:55 AM
Thank you for sharing this enchanting tale, Denise. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Deliriously into you (Poetry) - 5/8/2009 8:15:30 PM
Sweet picture with such warm, loving words....
Be always safe,
Karen
Deliriously into you (Poetry) - 5/8/2009 12:11:31 AM
What beautiful lyrics!
Deliriously into you (Poetry) - 5/7/2009 4:17:49 PM
I can truly hear this song being sung Dee and sung from the heart.
hugs
Fee
Deliriously into you (Poetry) - 5/7/2009 1:30:45 PM
Such Beauty is felt in the lyrics of this utterly BEAUTIFUL song Denise!
As a new love comes in to your life, much is felt Strongly with a delirious Freedom of heart, soul and mind!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings of LOVE, LIGHT, PEACE, and Inspirations, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
Our book of love and passion (Poetry) - 5/7/2009 3:28:32 AM
Breath taking sweet lady....sighhhhhhhh...I have missed you ..keep smiling OK stay safe and well..Hugss
Deliriously into you (Poetry) - 5/6/2009 10:01:52 PM
talks beautifully of the abandonment of new love
Illusions of love (Poetry) - 5/5/2009 8:09:09 PM
Denise, very heartfelt and heartrending. Written with words from deep within your heart of a sad ending to what appeared as reciprocal love.
The writers pain is felt.
Mark
Illusions of love (Poetry) - 5/5/2009 6:58:27 PM
warm, beautiful sentiment ...
Illusions of love (Poetry) - 5/5/2009 8:38:41 AM
Sad but beautifully written, Denise. I love these lines in
particular:
Your lips covered mine with your beautiful lies...
I wiped the mist from the window of my heart...
-gene.
Illusions of love (Poetry) - 5/4/2009 9:03:48 PM
This write shines, Denise! Beauty in heartache...Lin
Illusions of love (Poetry) - 5/4/2009 8:24:03 PM
Such a heavy heart, filled with dispair and disappointment. Yet better days are just ahead...
Be always safe,
Karen
Our book of love and passion (Poetry) - 5/4/2009 6:23:40 PM
How romantically moving and passionate, as it should be....
Be always safe,
Karen
Love's lyrical whispers (Poetry) - 5/4/2009 6:00:34 PM
This is what we wish for, Denise. So tenderly penned. Thank you...Lin
The price of loving you (Poetry) - 5/4/2009 5:58:18 PM
Beautiful! Soulful and longing poem from the heart. Well worth the price of pain, I think...Lin
Our book of love and passion (Poetry) - 5/4/2009 5:54:38 PM
Sigh...this is just lovely, Denise. Passion and tenderness entwined in a wonderful write!
Blessings, Lin
Love's lyrical whispers (Poetry) - 5/3/2009 7:46:31 PM
Would that all relationships could experience such loving completeness, Denise. Love and peace to you,
Regis
The price of loving you (Poetry) - 5/3/2009 7:45:36 PM
How long do I have to pay the price
For my foolishness, my open heart
How I can relate to what you express here, Denise. I could ask the very same question. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Our book of love and passion (Poetry) - 5/3/2009 7:44:24 PM
Passionate and loving; these are compelling verses, Denise. Thank you for sharing them. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Our book of love and passion (Poetry) - 5/3/2009 6:26:27 PM
Nicely romantic and sensual. Another one of your finest.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
The price of loving you (Poetry) - 5/3/2009 3:11:42 PM
Pure from the heart and soul of someone who knows love and is not afraid to pay the price.
fee
Our book of love and passion (Poetry) - 5/3/2009 3:10:11 PM
Sounds like you are describing a best seller to me...
hugs
fee
The flames that burn within (Poetry) - 4/17/2009 6:48:59 PM
Oh my,this is breath taking sweet lady...sure have missed you and your wonderful writing...stay safe and well..Hugsss
The flames that burn within (Poetry) - 3/28/2009 7:47:43 PM
Very passionate poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin
Rapture within a dancing firestorm (Poetry) - 3/28/2009 7:15:30 PM
I will simply echo Michelle's words because I think she's very nicely evaluated what you have shared here. Thank you, Denise. Love and best wishes,
Regis
The flames that burn within (Poetry) - 3/28/2009 7:13:59 PM
Thank you for sharing this erotic and sensual offering, Densise. It is very compelling. Love and best wishes,
Regis
The flames that burn within (Poetry) - 3/26/2009 11:17:32 AM
Wow passionately wonderful write that singes the eyes with it's sensual flames licking from each verse..
hugs
Fee
The flames that burn within (Poetry) - 3/25/2009 4:16:15 PM
Very romantic and descriptive!
A love many never know
Rapture within a dancing firestorm (Poetry) - 3/16/2009 2:34:46 PM
Passionate, erotic, a firestorm indeed! Excellent use of desciptive wording without making this pleasurable piece bawdy extreme! Bravo!
Nicole
Rapture within a dancing firestorm (Poetry) - 3/15/2009 4:27:18 AM
So passionate and mildly erotic too. Wow! There i snoting more to say, because you said it all in the poem. I rate this a 10 out of 10 and than you for sharing this very uplifting piece of rapture.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
Rapture within a dancing firestorm (Poetry) - 3/15/2009 4:15:23 AM
This is one fantastic and romantic piece you have written.Reading this poem made my day.take care Denise.Its good reading your poems again
Edwin
Rapture within a dancing firestorm (Poetry) - 3/13/2009 6:08:22 PM
Woohoooooooo....beautiful writing sweet lady..I love how you write..breath taking indeed...have a wonderful and safe evening...Hugssss
Rapture within a dancing firestorm (Poetry) - 3/13/2009 4:24:45 PM
WOW!! You know what's really great about this...it isn't crap. Alot of times, passionate poems are written with a heavy hand dipped into the ink pot of extra adjectives- not so with yours, a delicate hand has sculpted this pleasurable, decadent poem.
Rapture within a dancing firestorm (Poetry) - 3/13/2009 3:13:39 PM
I can feel the vibrations from here, girl when it comes to passionate fire storms...you rock.
hugs
Fee
Universal Constellation (Poetry) - 3/13/2009 11:46:34 AM
Thank you for sharing this lovely gift of your thoughts and verses, Denise. Love and blessings,
Regis
Universal Constellation (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 1:19:24 PM
Passions well lit in this tender beauty....
Be always safe,
Karen
Universal Constellation (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 8:43:39 AM
So beautifully intense and romantic!
Universal Constellation (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 5:08:43 AM
Here, here...well done Dee and with such passionate aplomb. Love it and the picture so perfectly matched to it.
Hugs
Fee
Universal Constellation (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 12:27:31 AM
juicy
Universal Constellation (Poetry) - 3/11/2009 9:08:31 PM
Whewwww!! Beautiful write. Thank you for sharing. Carin'
Universal Constellation (Poetry) - 3/11/2009 7:20:47 PM
Lovely writing as always beautiful lady....sighhhhhhhh..have a great evening...Hugssss
Universal Constellation (Poetry) - 3/11/2009 5:19:28 PM
Love that lives in the heavens. Passionate and sensual. Liz
Embrace the night (Poetry) - 3/11/2009 2:59:38 PM
Oh how this moves with such style and grace....
Be always safe,
Karen
Embrace the night (Poetry) - 3/11/2009 1:40:29 PM
This is one of the best poems I've read in long time. I applaud you Denise. You had me hooked from the first word to the last.
Write On,
Marcia
Embrace the night (Poetry) - 3/11/2009 1:15:52 PM
I swear that you get better and better with each write...this is sensational and so well done.
hugs
Fee
Fading with dawn's light (Poetry) - 3/11/2009 10:41:56 AM
Denise,
Your Muse Is Embracing The Tender Mercies of Loves Depth, the poem is very touching & raises our senses to know the blessing we have before us are on borrowed time...
Peace, Love & Poetry
Vickie
Fading with dawn's light (Poetry) - 3/10/2009 4:39:16 PM
Only the eyes close dear Denise, then look inside and there he is, with you as long as you love him, nothings changed, only the eyes close. Hugs! Jasmin Horst
Fading with dawn's light (Poetry) - 3/10/2009 3:12:30 PM
Very well written sweet lady,I have sure missed you and your wonderful writing..hope every thing is well with you...stay safe and well...Hugsssss
Fading with dawn's light (Poetry) - 3/10/2009 2:49:28 PM
So much sadness and heartbreak beautifully written. I started crying about half way through.
Fading with dawn's light (Poetry) - 3/10/2009 11:34:43 AM
Very beautifully done Dee with such deep emotion and longing for what could have been. Love especially the ending.
hugs
Fee
Fading with dawn's light (Poetry) - 3/10/2009 11:04:33 AM
This is so amazing Denise, I loved the energy of this poem. Truly felt within my soul.
Stunning photo also.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Fading with dawn's light (Poetry) - 3/10/2009 10:55:09 AM
Ooooh, hauntingly beautiful and sad. Liz
Our Rhapsody of love (Poetry) - 2/26/2009 6:53:06 PM
"As I shed all my inhibitions
Loving you is my only ambition"
Wait! Is that smoke or steam rising from my monitor?
Richard
Twilight and rain (Poetry) - 2/26/2009 6:50:19 PM
A woman in need who knows what she wants.
Sensual and passionate!
Is it okay if I start breathing again?
Richard
Twilight and rain (Poetry) - 2/21/2009 10:16:22 AM
Bravo, Denise, Bravo! Dang, this is a good one!
Our Rhapsody of love (Poetry) - 2/21/2009 10:13:25 AM
Beautiful, musical phrases of passion, Denise! Exceptionally well expressed! (Sigh) LOL!
Our Rhapsody of love (Poetry) - 2/21/2009 8:54:07 AM
Oh my, this is definitely Decadent and delicious! I just love your passionate heart, Denise. Love the photo, absolutely perfection!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Twilight and rain (Poetry) - 2/21/2009 5:11:10 AM
Wow two in a row both strong and heartfelt. Well done my friend Dee.
Fee
Our Rhapsody of love (Poetry) - 2/21/2009 5:09:40 AM
Welcomme back and as always you return with a passionate piece that stirs the heart and soul.
fee
Our Rhapsody of love (Poetry) - 2/21/2009 4:45:28 AM
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Twilight and rain (Poetry) - 2/21/2009 12:16:05 AM
This is a gorgeous poem you have written.take care
Edwin
Our Rhapsody of love (Poetry) - 2/21/2009 12:14:02 AM
Drop dead beautiful and passionate in your words of this poem.I simply enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin
Twilight and rain (Poetry) - 2/20/2009 7:28:24 PM
Denise ~ Your imagination and words paint an exquisite picture. Thank you for sharing. Carin'
Twilight and rain (Poetry) - 2/20/2009 12:32:13 PM
Awesome. Such an illusion that is so real but still you realize the fragility. Fantasy can be so seductive. You have managed to blend the surreal with the real and make it all real. Bravo. Liz
Awakening by the ocean's shore (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 7:27:32 PM
Denise this is the most tender poem of all your tender poems I have read from you thus far-absolutely poetic love...
this poem is the depths of love's vault speaking from devote tenderness, this is very very lovely....very soothing to read
& also very embracing
Much Love & Inspirations
Vickie
The heart remembers (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 7:23:53 PM
Loving Passions Are Your Words of Memorandums Love Denise
Embrace Them All!!
Much Love & Inspirations
Vickie
The heart remembers (Poetry) - 2/16/2009 11:14:55 AM
A beautiful piece Denise
Most enjoyable reading
Love & peace
William
The heart remembers (Poetry) - 2/13/2009 3:40:57 AM
I love reading your poems.I always enjoy reading them like this one.Take care and have a Happy and Beautiful Valentine's Day.
Edwin
The heart remembers (Poetry) - 2/12/2009 4:32:10 PM
Beautiful, sweet sentiments from a heart filled with hope and sincere love....
Be always safe,
Karen
The heart remembers (Poetry) - 2/12/2009 3:24:48 PM
Another beautiful offering by a lady with a gift for loving and expressing that love. well done Dee.
hugs
fee
A black rose (Poetry) - 2/12/2009 12:59:31 PM
Powerfully expressed, Denisa. Seems sad to my. Thank you though. Love and best wishes,
Regis
The heart remembers (Poetry) - 2/12/2009 10:08:51 AM
Without our sweet memories we would not be able to plan our future... good writing... hugs, lindalaw
Awakening by the ocean's shore (Poetry) - 2/12/2009 10:03:46 AM
This poem is in the same musical flow as the ocean... lovely write. hugs, lindalaw
Awakening by the ocean's shore (Poetry) - 2/12/2009 7:04:00 AM
Fee, your comment is the loveliest! so poetically beautiful! Thank you!
Awakening by the ocean's shore (Poetry) - 2/12/2009 6:47:56 AM
Your words ebb and flow with warmth and beauty much like the tides that kiss the sands on the shore in waves each day. Well done Dee.
Fee
The Night Of The Dancing Fires (Poetry) - 2/12/2009 4:09:45 AM
Dee,
"The Night Of The Dancing Fires" is a lovely story poem filled with the romance of pleasures sensate opening hearts gate; capturing also the very essence of lover's dwell even in their absence echoed within memories yearn...
Peace, Love & Poetry
Vickie
A black rose (Poetry) - 2/11/2009 3:57:36 PM
Dee this is special and grips the heart in a choke hold.
Fee
A black rose (Poetry) - 2/11/2009 9:33:28 AM
Very well expressed, Denise!
A black rose (Poetry) - 2/11/2009 5:25:29 AM
Great poem,take care
Edwin
A black rose (Poetry) - 2/11/2009 3:43:31 AM
Very nice!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
A black rose (Poetry) - 2/10/2009 8:25:45 PM
Visually poignant as your words. You connect with a universal theme of the vulnerability when we open ourselves to love and it is lost.
Love songs keep us dancing (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 4:39:54 PM
"Love songs keep us dancing..."
What a wonderfully romantic view of life and it's joy.
Richard
This world of ours (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 4:37:11 PM
Your soft lyrics describe so well what few of us ever think about; and "Alone in our togethernes" says it all.
What a lovely, romantic write, Denise! I love it.
Richard
A dove's tears (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 1:43:33 AM
Deep and powerful poem,take care
Edwin
The gift of love (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 1:41:27 AM
I enjoy reading this poem.He better grab a hold of your love because your love is as sweet as sugar.take care
Edwin
This world of ours (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 1:39:23 AM
Hi Denise,this is a romantic and beautiful poem.Reading your poems always make my day.Take care
Edwin
The gift of love (Poetry) - 2/7/2009 12:48:12 PM
Very nicely done Dee...two in a row. Well done.
fee
This world of ours (Poetry) - 2/7/2009 12:47:07 PM
There is always a secret side to every relationship that only the couple know...some times it is bad but others it is great as you describe in this lovely write.
hugs
fee
This world of ours (Poetry) - 2/7/2009 12:09:11 PM
Alone in our togetherness
I’m tranquil within your nearness
The power of love guides us
In this world of ours no one else sees
Would that such were so for all relationships, Denise. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and blessings to you,
Regis
The gift of love (Poetry) - 2/7/2009 10:08:36 AM
Sounds to me like you are reaching out, hope he grabs a hold of your love! Nicely written, Denise.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
This world of ours (Poetry) - 2/7/2009 8:33:35 AM
This is a lovely romantic poem, well written, and certainly one that embodies a passionate connection. hugs, lindalaw
A dove's tears (Poetry) - 1/28/2009 9:30:20 PM
Very moving this touched my heart. Warmth and Love to you.
A dove's tears (Poetry) - 1/28/2009 3:15:11 PM
Dee this is one of your ultimate best and I strongly advise you submit this to as many places as possible for it is indeed heart melting. Very nicely done dear friend.
hugs
fee
The wisdom in the wind (Poetry) - 1/25/2009 11:52:50 PM
Very nicely done Dee and captured the place, the moment and the memory.
fee
Love songs keep us dancing (Poetry) - 1/25/2009 11:51:44 PM
You wrote this like the words to a slow love song...soft, moving, sensual but with the dream of all love should be and more.
fee
Love songs keep us dancing (Poetry) - 1/25/2009 11:10:32 PM
Hi Denise
How I wish I could have persuaded my husband to have dance lessons. But when we shuffle around, it's still great. Loved the poem. Cheers! Liz
The wisdom in the wind (Poetry) - 1/25/2009 8:17:31 PM
Beautifully written poem,I love it,take care
Edwin
The wisdom in the wind (Poetry) - 1/25/2009 8:15:32 PM
Wonderful capture of life at its best, and nothing to hide. Warmth to you. Carin
Love songs keep us dancing (Poetry) - 1/25/2009 8:15:07 PM
Hi Denise,this is a wonderful poem.Your pen danced to the rhythm inside of your hands and on the floors of your paper.You know,I was thinking about dancing with my girlfriend one day under the Manhattan Bridge near the sand,water and rocks while there are candles around us in the cool night of the summer,dancing away in bliss as our hearts are the radios to each other with a special connection that will never disturb our signals of love.I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin
The Night Of The Dancing Fires (Poetry) - 1/24/2009 1:06:08 PM
A tragic tale of love and love lost; a recurring theme in this life/world, Denise. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
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