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Recent Reviews for Vivienne G Blackledge
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Car Booty (Poetry) - 3/5/2012 8:15:07 PM
Wonderful poem, Vivienne. I feel as if I'm there with you and your friend. I've heard that people buy on ebay to sell on and make a little profit. Thanks for reading my poem.
Parking my car, or trying to! (Poetry) - 2/17/2012 1:16:25 PM
As I read it, I thought of a funny song with the same lyrics. Have no fear! Some new cars have automatic parking already, and I'm sure every car will have it for too long. And then pretty soon, we won't have to drive and will all be on public transportation and lost another freedom that we have to run over curbs whenever we like.
Ron
The Real Diet (Poetry) - 2/16/2012 7:08:30 AM
"Skirt too tight on Tuesday" I have had Tuesdays like that too...oh is that a skirt, I thought it said shirt...;-)e
William, a lovely dog (Poetry) - 2/16/2012 7:06:26 AM
Cute...I've lost my dog but not to death, have to adopt him out...still I think of him often...e
Car Booty (Poetry) - 2/16/2012 7:04:35 AM
One persons trash is another persons treasure...e
Parking my car, or trying to! (Poetry) - 2/16/2012 7:02:01 AM
Are you by chance blond...my other half is and CANNOT back up for anything...then when I back her car in to a space, I have to as well get it out...figure when u hit the curb u are close enough to it...
;-) ed
The Break-up (Poetry) - 11/8/2011 3:40:00 PM
I sure can empathise. And the lass I thought was right lived thousands of miles away in NY USA.
Somewhen you'll realise it is so long bad rubbish!
William, a lovely dog (Poetry) - 11/8/2011 1:07:04 PM
When I first read this it really bought a tear to my eye!! A very touching and moving poem. Thank you for sharing this.
Bursting out with smiles (Poetry) - 11/2/2011 3:52:07 PM
sweet
The Real Diet (Poetry) - 11/1/2011 6:37:30 AM
Really cute and comical! Your diet is like most women's. Keep up the good/bad/good/bad work!
Connie
William, a lovely dog (Poetry) - 11/1/2011 6:35:43 AM
It is so terribly hard to lose a pet-friend. They are truly God's gift to us. This has just the right combination of sadness and hope.
Connie
Bursting out with smiles (Poetry) - 11/1/2011 6:34:17 AM
Welcome to Authors' Den, Vivienne,
I think the first ending is better; seems to fit in with the rest.
I'm sure most of the children of battling parents would be thrilled to have this happy outcome. Family life is priceless and irreplaceable.
Connie
William, a lovely dog (Poetry) - 10/25/2011 12:39:22 PM
Stunning. Having just lost my father, this would (with minor changes) have been a first rate poem at his funeral.
This is a poem that will help many in their darkest hour.
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