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Recent Reviews for Robin Adams
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Too Many Tears (Book) - 2/5/2004 4:57:50 PM
Very good book! Loved every page from beginning to end and constantly get hooked right back into it any time I read a portion of it. It doesn't matter how many times I read it, it never gets boring! I constantly find new things in it and have new thoughts on the characters and who they really are. I get hooked in very few authors but I'll be eternally hooked on this one!
Too Many Tears (Book) - 9/16/2003 2:56:54 PM
Too Many Tears is a captivating story. It is well written and a page-turner from the very beginning. Set during the early 1600's, it is a touching story of a little girl abandoned by her parents in the colonies.
At the age of 5, Alisha finds herself not only blind, but also left alone. She embarks on her own journey for survival. She meets a kind gentleman, Dimetre. He takes her into his life and home and provides for her. Life is not easy in the early colonies, but add blindness and abandonment to the mix and it provides a heart wrenching story. I enjoyed the well-created characters that worked their way into my heart.
I would recommend this book for readers looking for a creative new take on early American life. I hated to see this book come to an end; I would have liked to follow Alisha and Dimetre's life for a while longer.
(Reviewed by Kathy Bosworth for Denise's Pieces Book Reviews)
Pub Pops (Short Story) - 5/12/2007 1:45:40 PM
Interesting! In fact, it's even more interesting now that I read the first comment and see that it's part of your family history.
Terry
Off the Beat (Short Story) - 3/29/2007 8:24:33 AM
Love this!
http://www.myspace.com/searcy7
Eternal Tears- Introduction (Short Story) - 6/7/2004 7:39:31 PM
Did a strong job writing this one, and I have to add it is very creative in the way it is done.
Pub Pops (Short Story) - 4/25/2004 10:27:39 PM
I remember your Dad telling this story! We laughed about it and almost called him a liar until your Mom told us that it was the truth. The family will love it.
One Night (Short Story) - 3/20/2004 8:11:51 AM
I still say, "Wow!" everytime I read it!
One Night (Short Story) - 3/16/2004 4:39:46 PM
Shows one thing about horror writers from Illinois, we don't mess around.
Screams in the Night (Short Story) - 3/16/2004 4:17:20 PM
Impressive write. How long ago did you write this one? No matter how old the story is, you know you got the reader if you can scare the living daylights out of them.
Screams in the Night (Short Story) - 3/11/2004 7:54:27 PM
Robin, a good thrill ride for my nerves.
Screams in the Night (Short Story) - 3/9/2004 2:54:45 PM
Chilling read!
Off the Beat (Short Story) - 1/21/2004 11:26:42 AM
good story; thanks for sharing! :) (((HUGS))) and love, your tx. friend, karen lynn.
One Night (Short Story) - 11/20/2003 11:45:45 AM
What a excellant and truly gripping tale...LOVE IT!
~Nikki~
Memories (Short Story) - 8/26/2003 5:12:01 PM
good write; thanks for posting! :D (((HUGS)))
Loss (Poetry) - 5/10/2010 4:04:19 AM
We all suffer much loss in our lives, of good family members and friends also. I lost my brother and his wife withing a week of each other Jan a year ago, then just lost a dear cousin my age, tues after Easter. It keeps on coming and must be faced. Your poetry helps too comfort too.
Loss (Poetry) - 5/10/2010 1:21:51 AM
Fine work, Robin !
Childhood Home (Poetry) - 4/4/2010 9:52:14 PM
Thank you for sharing these meaningful memories, Robin. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Tropic Vacation (Poetry) - 1/4/2010 1:55:25 PM
wow, i could use a trip there now. you really created that island in my mind's eye :)
Tropic Vacation (Poetry) - 1/3/2010 6:37:15 AM
Beautifully written piece.I enjoy reading it.take care
Tropic Vacation (Poetry) - 1/2/2010 9:18:31 PM
very nice
Tropic Vacation (Poetry) - 1/2/2010 9:13:07 PM
Could feel myself sink into a cabana chair, sipping frozen drinks and allowing the day to slip away with the sun over the horizon. Beautiful Robin! Thank you for sharing your Holiday with us.
Tropic Vacation (Poetry) - 1/2/2010 7:52:33 PM
It was nice!
Distance (Poetry) - 8/31/2009 6:20:51 AM
I miss you too baby!
I'll be there soon!
Love (Poetry) - 5/18/2009 11:10:36 AM
they are cherished moments by my as well
Away (Poetry) - 5/18/2009 11:07:58 AM
so now that you're home for a week then on vacation for a week where's the poem about that?
Love it.
Love (Poetry) - 5/15/2009 1:42:13 AM
This is a great poem you have written,take care
EDWIN
Love (Poetry) - 5/14/2009 9:43:51 AM
This reminds me of a soft lovely greeting card...straight to the heart. Michelle
Bad Dreams (Poetry) - 5/12/2009 9:21:46 PM
Indeed sometimes the past is a relentless stalker. Nicely done, Robin. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Love (Poetry) - 5/12/2009 9:20:20 PM
It would be wonderful if all relationships experienced such as what you share via your verses here, Robing. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
Away (Poetry) - 5/12/2009 7:23:32 AM
Very accurate description of a life taken over by "misplaced priorities"
and vice, they always end up "cracked and broken". Honest and strong piece of work!
Cynthia
Bad Dreams (Poetry) - 5/12/2009 5:15:39 AM
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Tears (Poetry) - 5/12/2009 5:13:42 AM
POWERFUL!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Away (Poetry) - 5/12/2009 5:11:40 AM
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Away (Poetry) - 5/11/2009 8:50:09 PM
I appreciate this view of life that you present via your verses, Robin. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Anticipation (Poetry) - 4/28/2009 7:12:41 AM
lol, I know EXACTLY what you're talking about! I know which days on a "normal" week too!
Love it!
Naked (Poetry) - 4/10/2009 11:33:11 AM
A compelling and meaningful write, Robin. Thank you for sharing it. Love and blessings,
Regis
Naked (Poetry) - 4/9/2009 6:55:25 PM
I know it would be hard for me to move on Robin. Thank you for sharing such a depth within your heart. Good work. Be well, Kathy
Naked (Poetry) - 4/9/2009 3:58:31 PM
great write!
You'll get to see him again some day!
(Or you could just live at home more often and watch things move around with me)
Quiet (Poetry) - 2/19/2009 4:03:50 PM
Extremely poignant expressions.....
Be always safe,
Karen
Quiet (Poetry) - 2/19/2009 6:02:10 AM
They say silence is golden but I've never believed it. Silence during a storm is a warning to duck and cover. Silence during a hurricane is a warning to hunker down for the other side. Silence never really exists....
Quiet (Poetry) - 2/18/2009 9:54:12 PM
Great poem.I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin
What if (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 12:34:46 PM
Oh boy, sorry for the scarey flight, but it does give us pause as to where our priorities rest, beautifully stated...
Be always safe,
Karen
What if (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 10:44:10 AM
The world would be a sad, sad place without you!
The cats would go insane waiting for your return.
I wouldn't be the same but I would manage somehow.
Who’s there? (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 10:41:28 AM
one always hopes it's good news....or maybe me calling just to giggle with you....
What if (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 4:23:27 AM
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
What if (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 1:49:17 AM
I agree with everything you said.Time can by so fast and we need to appreciate everything that we have from our family to our friends.Life is more precious than anything that we can even imagine.Take care
Edwin
Who’s there? (Poetry) - 2/3/2009 1:01:14 PM
Oh they say when opportunity knocks one should always take the chace.....
Be always safe,
Karen
Who’s there? (Poetry) - 2/3/2009 11:33:21 AM
Pause for reflection, Robin. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
Ramblings (Poetry) - 1/29/2009 9:58:01 PM
And with you it will stay, beautifully versed...
Be always safe,
Karen
Ramblings (Poetry) - 1/29/2009 7:36:26 PM
I hope it stays with you too dear.
Now finish your thesis and don't forget....
YOU'RE IT!!!!
Glad your writing again
Ramblings (Poetry) - 1/29/2009 7:28:17 PM
When you have hope you will have everything. Just keep praying! Well-expressed piece!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
Ode to the Sky (Poetry) - 1/19/2009 8:21:00 AM
Beautifully penned Ode to Sky, Robin - as a cloudwatcher, I always look up for the answers. :) Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Tears (Poetry) - 1/19/2009 8:19:48 AM
Oh, my goodness - this is powerfully penned, Robin. As the daughter, sister, niece, cousin of Veterans, as well as an Air Force Veteran myself, thank you for writing the turmoil those that serve feel. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Flag (Poetry) - 1/19/2009 8:17:57 AM
Might be glassed in a small, simple wooden frame but so much meaning in its triangulated corners - powerfully penned, Robin, well done. Thank you for remembering sacrifice, paid.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Flag (Poetry) - 1/19/2009 5:10:57 AM
unfortunately too many of those glass covered small simple wooden boxes are in too many homes.
heartfelt great write!
Tears (Poetry) - 10/28/2008 4:22:37 PM
speechless
great write
Tears (Poetry) - 10/28/2008 3:51:16 PM
Extremely heartrendering write and thoughts, Godspeed to all who serve....
Be always safe,
Karen
Tears (Poetry) - 10/28/2008 8:48:03 AM
Awesome. Great insight. Liz
Fleeting (Poetry) - 9/17/2008 7:19:27 AM
There is no end to our journey! Not even death can keep us apart!
Great write
Time (Poetry) - 9/14/2008 2:12:34 PM
Very well expressed. I understand and relate to what you have expressed here, Robin. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Time (Poetry) - 6/10/2008 7:54:46 AM
Time is endless so long as we're together and I'm not going anywhere!
Christmas Miracle (Poetry) - 12/28/2007 6:25:05 AM
Well done my friend, enjoyed this much!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Christmas Miracle (Poetry) - 12/3/2007 3:20:55 PM
The miracle of Christmas so artfully expressed. Merry Christmas to you and your family.....
Be safe,
Karen
Christmas Miracle (Poetry) - 12/1/2007 10:02:47 AM
Oh such a wonderful write!
And Karla is right
It should last more than 1 night
:)
Christmas Miracle (Poetry) - 11/30/2007 7:29:43 AM
Christmas Miracles are always Wondrous!
Christmas Miracle (Poetry) - 11/30/2007 7:26:21 AM
Robin,
Beautiful! Too bad the magic can't last all year 'round.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Hard (Poetry) - 10/27/2007 6:25:34 PM
To be forever with one that means so much, how devotionally lovely....
Be safe,
Karen
Hard (Poetry) - 10/26/2007 4:19:39 PM
Time is eternal when we're together! Never forget that!
Love the write, love the wavy line you did, looks like a waterfall!
Soldier’s Reflections (Poetry) - 10/18/2007 8:59:14 AM
Wonderful write.
Chrissy
Ode to the Sky (Poetry) - 10/13/2007 1:59:46 AM
well written conceptual spectrum ... nice images ...
Ode to the Sky (Poetry) - 10/10/2007 6:23:56 PM
Beautifully and sensively written piece, enjoyed...
Be safe,
Karen
Ode to the Sky (Poetry) - 10/9/2007 8:55:03 PM
You know how much I love just looking at the sky, night or day, it doesn't matter to me!
Wonderful write
Soldier’s Anthem (Poetry) - 10/9/2007 5:43:17 PM
Are you getting the itch to join?
Great write as always! I wish Mike was alive to read them!
Soldier’s Anthem (Poetry) - 10/8/2007 10:09:43 PM
I for one salute you for your efforts, patriotism, honesty and bravery. Thank you for this piece....
Be safe,
Karen
Soldier’s Anthem (Poetry) - 10/8/2007 5:31:29 PM
What a patriotic write this is!!! Great job!!!1!
Sandie May Angel ;o)
Soldier’s Anthem (Poetry) - 10/8/2007 3:14:11 AM
God bless our military!!!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Saving this one! :)
Soldier’s Anthem (Poetry) - 10/7/2007 8:11:59 PM
Robin,
God bless you for standing with our men and women in uniform: well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Soldier’s Reflections (Poetry) - 10/5/2007 10:41:58 PM
Robin,
As a Veteran, I thank you for remembering the sacrifices made/paid. God bless you, God bless the troops and keep all safe. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Soldier’s Reflections (Poetry) - 10/5/2007 9:03:14 PM
You have left me speechless with this tremendously awesome write!
Soldier’s Reflections (Poetry) - 10/5/2007 7:57:34 PM
A scene that has been played over time and time again my many a young soldier leaving all behind to fight for his or her country. Wish there were no good bye's but that is just the way it is. A very sincere write....
Be safe,
Karen
Colors (Poetry) - 9/21/2007 1:00:00 PM
The canvas changes every day. It is telling us that there is no constant in life - only God.
I do enjoy looking at what He paints every day and night.
Kathy
Colors (Poetry) - 9/21/2007 9:16:37 AM
Great Write!
I wish I could watch the sun rise and set with you every single day!
We've had some beautiful sunsets lately, the sunrises are okay, there isn't enough moisture in the air to create the beautiful colors you and I like.
Colors (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 1:32:53 PM
An array of beauty bestowed up us all by God. A wonderfully beautiful write....
Be safe,
Karen
Colors (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 12:10:20 PM
Robin, God's beauty to the world is beyond believe and every picture is different, never the same. I enjoyed this a lot.
Colors (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 9:20:05 AM
Wonderfully done Robin.
We should all take in this beauty and re-generate our spirits.
thanks for a calming read.
My best regards,
Chris
Guide (Poetry) - 9/15/2007 7:11:47 AM
A beautiful write. Muses are wonderful that way! Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Guide (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 10:34:31 PM
A lovely prayer like piece so full of love and endearment....
Be safe,
Karen
Guide (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 9:17:21 PM
OUTSTANDING, Robin. Yes. When you least expect it, BAM, there it comes, the inspiration you sought! Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Guide (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 8:40:56 PM
Oh that Muse can be a recluse that surprises you when she lets loose. Enjoyed
Guide (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 6:50:50 PM
Great Write!
Having more conversations with dead people?
Oh and if you were religious I'd say something about your belief in God is true but since you're not you'll have to tell me who the Guide is :)
A Man (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 1:51:30 AM
And so, as time goes on, man still uses and abuses these gifts to the point of destruction. It is amazing how we just never seem to learn.
I liked the way this was written. thanks
Best regards,
Chris
A Man (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 1:32:11 AM
So many gifts...we have been given...but to understand the essence of just one...yet many are lost.
Welll done and brought to light...
John
A Man (Poetry) - 9/11/2007 9:37:48 PM
Robin,
Man's inhumanity to man, to the planet, to its creatures: man is determined to live a lonely existance, isn't he? Powerfully thought provoking, you've said a lot. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
A Man (Poetry) - 9/11/2007 9:31:57 PM
The Earth is out of course from the greed that overwhelms some. Some want more than they can use, thinking they are gods they shall die like men.
A Man (Poetry) - 9/11/2007 9:22:13 PM
Maybe you should have called it "Ode to Global Warming"
Oh wait, that's right Global Warming doesn't exist! We barely hit 75 today so how could Global Warming exist when we had such a beautiful day?
On a side note we're still under burn restrictions from the drought...
Great Write!
Life - War of the Roses (Poetry) - 8/8/2007 9:15:43 PM
So true!
Great Write!
Miss you too!
Never Really Gone (Poetry) - 8/7/2007 6:32:54 PM
A loving sentiment to carry with you and share. As long as one is remembered they are never really gone.....
Be safe,
Karen
Never Really Gone (Poetry) - 8/7/2007 5:31:21 PM
I was born in Chicago ... nice write
Richard
Never Really Gone (Poetry) - 8/7/2007 3:27:38 PM
As long as our memories stay intact, no one ever leaves us that we loved.
Never Really Gone (Poetry) - 8/7/2007 10:50:53 AM
Awesomely wonderful write! It sent shivers down my spine and gave me goose bumps!
Wife - War of the Roses (Poetry) - 7/21/2007 3:20:33 PM
You sneaky woman you!
You know, if you keep putting poems out there people might get the impression that you're a serious writer!
We wouldn't want that now would we???
Great Write and I'll throw my creative cap on and pen one back!
Internal Clock (Poetry) - 7/17/2007 8:28:33 PM
I used to feel the tick too, then the cysts came :(
Military Service (Poetry) - 7/16/2007 5:54:01 PM
This was an exceptional piece of poetry!!!!
Military Service (Poetry) - 7/16/2007 2:52:08 PM
wonderful write
Military Service (Poetry) - 7/16/2007 8:18:07 AM
Amen, Robin, Amen. Thank you for penning this powerful reminder: would we be so brave? As a Veteran, I thank you.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
All These Things (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 9:16:51 AM
Wonderfully written. Great perspective.
Hugs, Laura
All These Things (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 7:23:41 AM
Wow!
I'm speechless!
Great Write!
Images (Poetry) - 5/12/2007 1:48:31 PM
Very good. I love it.
Terry
Images (Poetry) - 5/8/2007 3:24:00 PM
Wonderful write!
Chrissy
Please be my Valentine (Poetry) - 2/15/2007 8:46:10 AM
Awe, this is just beautiful...sounds a lot like my husband, can offer himself and an I love you, a small token of his affection to show his love..but you know you've penned it well my friend, this is what true love if founded on and built upon, it is what helps true love stand the tests of time...great write! Glad I stopped by...
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Please be my Valentine (Poetry) - 2/15/2007 5:28:52 AM
Love the picture,if only love could be so easy without material things in mind...
Michael
Please be my Valentine (Poetry) - 2/14/2007 10:11:33 PM
Very beautiful truth.
Please be my Valentine (Poetry) - 2/14/2007 8:33:03 PM
Not only did you just give me the greatest present on this Earth but just being able to cuddle up with you is the greatest present on Earth!
Graduation (Poetry) - 2/14/2007 4:00:38 PM
Congratulations on an achievement that will last forever. You have wonderful friends as well.
Graduation (Poetry) - 2/14/2007 9:42:06 AM
Thanks! It means a lot to me to have that degree in hand but I'm STILL up in the air if that all important BS after my name is a good thing or not!
Great Write, as usual!
Conversation (Poetry) - 1/26/2007 7:43:14 AM
Wonderful write, as always! I hate to say it but you write more when you're gone...maybe over the next 9 months you'll pen more wonderful prose!
Conversation (Poetry) - 1/25/2007 6:35:30 PM
well written analogy and metaphor, Robin ...
Conversation (Poetry) - 1/25/2007 4:02:39 AM
so much can be learned from within
from the "conversation" in us
out firstmind thirdeye
loved the way you brought this together
wise and insightful
Conversation (Poetry) - 1/24/2007 8:07:01 AM
what a great concept! particularly love "Fear me not as many do, said the sky to a girl" - ty.
Dusk (Poetry) - 12/24/2006 3:54:52 PM
wonderful imagery and ambiance ...
Dusk (Poetry) - 12/21/2006 4:36:06 PM
Nature can bring out the emotions of its beauty and so, bring forth the thoughts of melody through poetry...nice work...
Art Sun...
Dusk (Poetry) - 12/21/2006 4:19:27 PM
The pic and poem are both a delight and well expressed.
Dusk (Poetry) - 12/21/2006 4:02:13 PM
Wonderful prose!
Chrissy
Fairy Tales (Poetry) - 10/4/2006 1:10:42 AM
very nicley written Robin,
steve
Soldier (Poetry) - 10/4/2006 1:08:24 AM
Excellent insight into war that most only see from a distance,
thank you for sharing.
steve
Soldier (Poetry) - 9/22/2006 3:54:59 PM
This one threatens tears, but is such a dear tribute...
Chrissy
Brighter Future - War of The Roses (Poetry) - 9/22/2006 3:16:00 PM
Great rhyme with a reason...
Soldier (Poetry) - 9/21/2006 12:30:20 PM
Wonderful wrte. Mike would be proud of you for it!
Soldier (Poetry) - 9/21/2006 12:00:56 PM
Robin,
This is gorgeous, moving poetry; thank you for penning such a powerful poetry in defense of those who defend our nation! As a veteran, I salute you.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Brighter Future - War of The Roses (Poetry) - 9/14/2006 11:55:12 AM
I'll skip with you this weekend!
Choices (Poetry) - 8/15/2006 7:02:20 PM
This could become a mantra. A good reminder about how our choices affect our reality.
Well done!
Chanti
Choices (Poetry) - 8/15/2006 5:24:28 PM
choices are there for the making and created by the will of character for the benefit of all possible expression ....
well written!
Choices (Poetry) - 8/15/2006 10:12:38 AM
Choices can be a blessing or a curse. A very complete poem. Good job,
Jill
Choices (Poetry) - 8/13/2006 12:17:05 PM
Too many choices can be a painful thing too...
Choices (Poetry) - 8/12/2006 12:34:04 PM
It's the tough choices I hate!
Great write!
Unexplained (Poetry) - 7/12/2006 10:58:59 AM
Very good...
Just Write! (Poetry) - 7/11/2006 10:35:32 PM
Just write for the self, don't worry about fixing it...as long as you are happy...Peace thru the Write, Ed & Rufuz (w00f)
Unexplained (Poetry) - 7/10/2006 10:10:39 PM
Intuition and Universal Mind is a great thing.
Well said and done.
Unexplained (Poetry) - 7/10/2006 8:53:46 PM
When I walked in tonight it felt like the apartment was alive! The cats were going bonkers!
Another great write!
And why does it take you being in a different time zone to unblock your writers block?
BTW you're still it!
Still Here (Poetry) - 7/10/2006 8:50:03 PM
And he's been active while I was away tonight!
I had to adjust every picture hanging on the walls and had to put your mom's pic back onto the wall, no it's not broken! I should have taken pictures of it all! Sorry I didn't think of it...
I miss him too!
I Feel You (Poetry) - 7/10/2006 8:46:39 PM
I feel you to baby!
Great write!
Fairy Tales (Poetry) - 5/14/2006 4:39:57 AM
enjoyed the read
Fairy Tales (Poetry) - 5/10/2006 2:40:19 PM
Very well said...
Fairy Tales (Poetry) - 5/9/2006 5:21:22 AM
You never cease to amaze me with your writing! This poem could be the outlook of an adult or it could show the harsh reality of youth. It could also just be the musings of someone in their late life. Any way you chose to look at it it's a wonderful poem!
Fairy Tales (Poetry) - 5/9/2006 4:28:12 AM
I like this. Robin, this was both enchanting and magical! Wonderful write indeed!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Fairy Tales (Poetry) - 5/8/2006 11:13:13 PM
Powerful write. I like the thought wave through this.
Just Write! (Poetry) - 4/23/2006 8:21:50 AM
Very true of writers. I had a friend who was always editing her first rough drafts as she wrote them, and couldn't get much down on the page. I told her to 'free fall' and edit nothing. Write like she was the only one who would ever read it. Then...after a few days, edit. She's been writing like crazy and had a wonderful article published in a fairly large newspaper! So...loosen up those grammar grundies and let it just flow...
Just Write! (Poetry) - 4/23/2006 8:15:04 AM
I think it happened eventually Robin, gotta to agree, just think your feel and get it down.
Paul;-)
Just Write! (Poetry) - 4/23/2006 8:10:49 AM
I know the feeling! It can be so hard to just write it down. Your mind races and before you can get to pen and paper or a computer the words are "poof" just gone...I get frustrated when I have lines running through my head that don't make sense but I write them down anyways and when I look back I have about 3 different incomplete poems written down! And then of course I never fnish them cause they get lost or the calico chews them up :)
Keep writing! I love when you surprise me with a poem!
Just Write! (Poetry) - 4/23/2006 7:58:57 AM
“Fix it later
Just write your thoughts”
I believe that's the best advice for any writer, Robin.
Just Write! (Poetry) - 4/23/2006 7:39:33 AM
We live in poetry and stories everyday. Just write, and fix it up later! That's what I always do.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Just Write! (Poetry) - 4/23/2006 7:38:47 AM
When the Muse grips your fingers and your pen starts to flow....
I love the light flow of your words as the mind unlocks it's spirit for the Muse to answer through your pen.
Susan
Two Years (Poetry) - 3/23/2006 11:21:25 AM
Great poetry. It's often difficult to rhyme, so I commend those who are able to write for the ear as well as the heart...
Two Years (Poetry) - 3/22/2006 1:02:39 PM
wonderful creative lines here..
love joanne
Two Years (Poetry) - 3/22/2006 7:22:04 AM
I miss him too! No matter how much he aggravated me!
A very heartfelt write!
Talking to the Dead (Poetry) - 1/19/2006 10:04:53 AM
This was written and expressed very well and it is ok to talk to the dead for i believe the spirit never does just the body. They can be your best frind that willo never tell your personal business. God bless you.
Talking to the Dead (Poetry) - 1/15/2006 5:47:43 PM
Oh They Hear You All Right,But,I Don't Think You'll Want To Hear Them...
Credit For the Write...
TRASK
Talking to the Dead (Poetry) - 1/15/2006 5:13:16 AM
one can speak with the dead, the interesting part is when they answer ...
nice couplets!
Talking to the Dead (Poetry) - 1/12/2006 1:30:47 PM
As one who sometimes sees her dead cousin in her dreams, I'm certainly not one to judge talking to the dead...
Talking to the Dead (Poetry) - 1/12/2006 7:27:52 AM
What a sweet nostalgic write, Robin. At the end of it, I had a smile on my face - i talk to the dead too, especially my cousin sister whom I still don't believe to have gone - I think we all do talk to them, asking them questions and guidance.
God bless, Robin!
Sandie.
Talking to the Dead (Poetry) - 1/12/2006 5:50:17 AM
Wonderful! Personally they are listening but you know my views!
Oh and your Dads picture moved again yesterday, while I was looking over at it...
Talking to the Dead (Poetry) - 1/12/2006 2:00:47 AM
this is a wonderful poem, thx for sharing.
Answer – War of the Roses (Poetry) - 1/9/2006 12:29:25 PM
Love is unpredictable...
Answer – War of the Roses (Poetry) - 1/9/2006 9:02:04 AM
Beautiful write you minx! I'll get to writing as soon as I take a test :)...Now if I could only figure out what makes you wirte in the first place! And if there's any way to bottle it!
Answer – War of the Roses (Poetry) - 1/9/2006 7:55:29 AM
Beautiful insightful poetry this was inspiring thank you for sharing this one.
Missing You (Poetry) - 11/10/2005 12:30:17 PM
Lucky am I too have read Melissa's and now this. Thank you for sharing this love with the world.
Missing You (Poetry) - 11/3/2005 5:22:55 AM
I miss you too! I sleep even worse when you're not here!
You got it right though! It's how I feel too!
Missing You (Poetry) - 11/3/2005 4:57:50 AM
lovely touching write.:-) shoma
All Hallows' Eve (Poetry) - 10/31/2005 6:50:35 PM
Ohhhhhh Spooky...Love the Pic!
Great Write!
Challenges (Poetry) - 10/7/2005 2:32:12 PM
wonderful talent
Challenges (Poetry) - 10/7/2005 12:56:43 PM
You know I can't believe how chilling this one is!
Great Write!
Me? To Be? (Joseph's Challenge) (Poetry) - 8/6/2005 3:47:18 PM
Excellent response! You chose the best thing to be!;-)
Eileen
Me? To Be? (Joseph's Challenge) (Poetry) - 8/2/2005 9:08:27 AM
well it is nice to know that after going through it all you still want to be yourself! Great Write!!!
Me? To Be? (Joseph's Challenge) (Poetry) - 8/1/2005 12:26:57 PM
Me???
I guess so many of us are content to be ourselves n this site
that's encouraging
lovely response
Me? To Be? (Joseph's Challenge) (Poetry) - 8/1/2005 9:58:03 AM
nice response to the challenge ...
Me? To Be? (Joseph's Challenge) (Poetry) - 8/1/2005 7:07:29 AM
Wonderful write for the challenge! Enjoyed to read about the many choices!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Me? To Be? (Joseph's Challenge) (Poetry) - 8/1/2005 6:24:13 AM
Very lovely, this is wonderful!
Reindeer
Me? To Be? (Joseph's Challenge) (Poetry) - 8/1/2005 3:31:22 AM
Robin,
You have pondered the question well
and have penned a wonderful poem in response.
Love & Light,
Joseph
Me? To Be? (Joseph's Challenge) (Poetry) - 7/31/2005 6:31:37 PM
Very nice. Enjoyed.
Tears – War of the Roses (Poetry) - 7/7/2005 11:55:23 AM
Extremely well penned! and very sneaky I might add! It's so hard to catch you doing it when you're not home!
Invisible Heroes (Poetry) - 7/6/2005 11:43:35 PM
A Beautiful and Heartwarming tribute and I will Always remember them The invisible heroes, Thanks to you they are not invisable. not at all. This is so Loving such an honest reminder of all they do and give up so selflessly.
Beautiful Loving Tribute to each and every one , All my love and gratitude Always and Forever Always for them to them XOOX I Love You All with all my heart!
A special moment of silence for Michael McNulty and all others. Peace be with their loved ones and friends. ~Salute!~
I place a special rose in memory of them next to my Flag.
Thank you so very much for this Beautiful Loving poem. xoox
Tracey
Turn About – War of the Roses (Poetry) - 7/5/2005 8:45:43 AM
ohhhhh! Sneaky, Sneaky, Sneaky....you little minx...and btw you're getting good at this! I like!
Turn About – War of the Roses (Poetry) - 7/5/2005 4:03:16 AM
Interesting read...
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Fight (Poetry) - 7/4/2005 7:19:19 PM
Very powerful write!
Fight (Poetry) - 7/4/2005 11:39:29 AM
and live...for the now! wonderful write.
Fight (Poetry) - 7/4/2005 10:37:19 AM
Powerful and with so many possibilites of meanings, great write!
Fight (Poetry) - 7/4/2005 8:45:37 AM
Encouragement and strength to carry on in your words. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Game On – War of the Roses (Poetry) - 7/3/2005 8:54:41 PM
I'll get you! Just you wait and see! :)
Game On – War of the Roses (Poetry) - 7/3/2005 7:03:22 AM
Very well written poetry!
Reindeer
Game On – War of the Roses (Poetry) - 7/3/2005 1:27:39 AM
Nice work!
Rhyme on
The Capital (Poetry) - 7/2/2005 3:07:52 PM
Powerful write...I wish it didn't happen but it did and you honor all of them with your words.
Lonely Travels (Poetry) - 6/16/2005 1:12:54 PM
Wow..you hit the nail on the head with lonely travels. Excellent writing!
Lonely Travels (Poetry) - 6/6/2005 9:50:38 PM
I miss you too....Pathetic aren't we? :) I hate coming home to only the cats...it's kind eerie...
One Year (Poetry) - 3/21/2005 5:18:05 PM
wow.....feel the love here
wonderful gifts he must have instilled
strength and honor
outstanding tribute
One Year (Poetry) - 3/20/2005 11:09:57 AM
It was an easier year than I thought it would be. Those first 3 months were the hardest and everyday it got a little easier but I still wish it was him on the other end when the phone rings at the crack of dawn.
Rhyming – War of the Roses (Poetry) - 2/19/2005 1:32:15 AM
Excellent...very very creative write...love n luck...BHUWAN
Rhyming – War of the Roses (Poetry) - 1/31/2005 11:25:02 AM
very creative
very cute as well
like the art, too!!!
Rhyming – War of the Roses (Poetry) - 1/28/2005 10:44:33 AM
This one is very clever.
Rhyming – War of the Roses (Poetry) - 1/27/2005 8:27:18 PM
Tricky, tricky, tricky.....When did you write this? You little minx you. Don't worry...I'll get you, and both your cats too...hehehe
Great Write BTW
Holiday Blues (Poetry) - 1/22/2005 1:25:22 PM
This time to which you refer here is always difficult for me as well although I am not sure why. A heartfelt and meaningful offering, Robin. Love and peace to you. Regis
Holiday Blues (Poetry) - 12/15/2004 12:41:01 PM
(((robin)))
got 'em myself--i'm beginning to dislike christmas, especially since i'll have to work AGAIN...three years in a row...gonna be open all day, owner can't stand to be closed one freaking day, 'cause he'll lose money...but will he be there??? HELL NO. let his lackies earn him his freaking bonus (which we never see)
sorry
nothing to do with your poem, just the title opened up this chasm of bitterness within
and here you lost someone--stupid me
i'm sorry for your loss--forgive me?
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :( *tears*
Holiday Blues (Poetry) - 12/15/2004 12:03:31 PM
i'm sorry for your mourning, holidays are the worst, but hold on to the good memories and he will be there with you as much as is possible
Holiday Blues (Poetry) - 12/15/2004 12:01:12 PM
i can relate to this; had the holiday blues myself, but thankfully i am over them now. even completed my shopping today; did it all in one day!! (i am so proud of myself...well, okay, NOT QUITE done, but close, close! still have to finish up shopping for my twin sister; with her, she is never done, and it is always christmas with her around!) great write! but all we CAN do is reflect on the TRUE meaning of christmas..JESUS CHRIST!-- and concentrate on THAT and to heck with everything else!
Holiday Blues (Poetry) - 12/15/2004 11:16:26 AM
It'll be hard for all of us, but we'll make it through together.
No More Words (Poetry) - 12/5/2004 3:23:53 AM
Well penned.
Waiting (Poetry) - 12/5/2004 3:23:27 AM
Oh...I can relate.
Well written.
Silent Night (Poetry) - 12/5/2004 3:23:00 AM
Exellent!
Awakening (Poetry) - 12/5/2004 3:22:21 AM
A powerful write.Very good.
Serenity (Poetry) - 12/5/2004 3:21:57 AM
A brilliant piece of work!
Term (Poetry) - 11/6/2004 11:09:41 PM
Enjoy the move. Canada is a lovely place.
Reign (Poetry) - 10/28/2004 7:18:43 AM
Yes, she does look like to Queen of Sheba sitting under that plant. Great Write
Reign (Poetry) - 10/26/2004 1:33:38 PM
I love cats. This reminds me of one that I know who goes by the name of mittens. She looks a little different than this but she has the attitude! Fine writing! You have done your cat proud!
Hooves
Reign (Poetry) - 10/25/2004 6:15:33 PM
Nice ode to the Kitty Queen.. :)
EDL
Reign (Poetry) - 10/25/2004 5:09:35 PM
LOL love it!
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