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Recent Reviews for Kate Saundby
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Book 9: The Nublis Chronicles: The Spirit Dogs of Sirius (Book) - 1/16/2003 1:45:39 PM
Good job and keep up the good work. By the way i love your photo!
(HUGS)
BUTTON1991
A Circle Of Arcs (Book) - 7/6/2002 1:49:17 PM
enjoyed the excerpt
Book 11: The Nublis Chronicles: The Wages of Deception (Book) - 4/3/2002 9:58:54 AM
I think it's AD's Book of The Month and just voted my preference. Go Tennessee! vls
The Spirit Dogs of Sirius (Short Story) - 11/19/2007 10:28:53 PM
Hi Kate! I read the excerpt from your story," The Spirit Dogs of Sirius". I found it quite interesting. I am inspired to try and write a Sci-fi too. All the best. Please feel free to visit my sites at either, www.freewebs.com/kendoo or here in the "Den".
The Spirit Dogs of Sirius (Short Story) - 9/28/2003 3:56:41 AM
enjoyed the read, i am fond of fantasy
well done
Many Happy Returns (Short Story) - 9/28/2003 3:53:30 AM
enjoyed the read
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 7/18/2011 3:34:04 PM
What a sad, pathetic poem. However, for some of us, Life has not been so pathetic. I have been married to my Jennie for 45 years and counting. The saddest realization of all is that one of us must pass on before the other.
<u>Loves Fate </u>
I wonder what the aim of life must be,
'Twas chance by God or did some sprite decree
I'd find my bride in youth so needed be.
O'er forty years have passed since vows decreed.
Jennie gives love, her love gives life to me.
She sees my walnut face its cracks and lines;
A gut that droops like Bab'lon's garden vines.
Yet gray's her hair I touch her gentle skin.
Aren't orchid petals wrapt with beauty thin?
My loved flower inspires such thoughts when near;
I can't imagine days with out her here.
But,
--Frost swapped out our youthful years of summer.
Now,
--Fate must claim one life before the other!
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 11/21/2009 4:42:17 PM
Kate, Beautiful poetry.
Deborah
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 5/20/2009 10:13:26 AM
Beautifully penned. Very emotional and powerful read. I enjoyed it very much.
Anna
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 8/5/2008 9:06:51 PM
Hello Kate, I read your poem,"The Other Woman". I found it powerful!
Great imagery. I can identify a little with this. Bin there done that. Asked for forgivness. All was O.K. in time. Well done. Please feel free to visit my site here in the "Den".
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 7/27/2008 10:44:40 PM
HEARTBREAK - A tough subject to write about.
Still, you pulled it off very nicely! Bravo!
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 4/12/2008 12:44:42 PM
Very well said and so painfully true.
Malcolm
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 1/24/2008 1:34:04 AM
Kate,
So many of us read your words and felt the familiarity of your pain. You have described my first love of over 50 years ago who has but a month or two to live due to bone cancer. I know I will come back and read your words many times over.
Thank you for sharing your pain.
Tina
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 2:52:27 PM
Love indeed has blinders, but the other woman always has a space that one can never fill.
This has touched my heart. I am guessing that while it was hard to write, you have righted a wrong and begun to sing your own song.
Blessings,
Kathy
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 5/28/2007 11:29:17 PM
Excellent poem. Well thought out. 10/10
Gerald J Tate
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 5/9/2007 3:00:59 PM
Hi Kate;
I saw you in your office last week do you remember me?
My screen name here is Spirit Warrior,
and I have come to see what I might see.
I completely enjoyed "The Other Woman"
And see that in life, we have some things we share (Pain for one)
I look forward to reviewing more of your work because I can see your a Woman who cares. God Bless -Spirit Warrior
p.s. Thankyou so much for turning me on to The Authors Den!
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 4/29/2007 6:53:00 AM
Extremely well written about such a gut-wrenching topic. Outstanding!!
Hugs, Laura
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 10/21/2006 5:33:04 PM
What a fabulous poem. WELL WRITTEN!!!!!!
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 6/29/2006 7:21:29 PM
Kate, I really enjoyed your "Other Woman" poem.
Arthur
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 4/27/2006 5:06:58 PM
WOW THIS WAS DEEP AND ALL SO REAL ABOUT THE STORMS OF LIFE SUCH AS SECRETS LIES AND THE AFTERMATH.
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 7/16/2005 8:08:55 AM
Beautiful yet moving and sad write, Kate!
God bless,
Sandie.
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 10/17/2003 1:04:49 PM
Absolutely remarkable! As others have said, "exquisite, touching, beautiful, powerful, moving and heart-wrenching." As an editor, I've only one suggestion for a better flow of merely one line, by reversing the order of two words as well as change one and add one: "He left no memories of that summer NOR OF a love that NEVER WOULD be."
Still in all, a great poet you are. Stop in and visit my A/D pages when you have time.
Love in Christ~~
Bonnie Q
Unicorn Haven
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 10/10/2003 10:36:21 PM
Exquisite.
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 9/21/2003 3:35:20 PM
A touching write. Thanks for sharing.......
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 9/20/2003 10:02:45 AM
Very deep and sad. Great write.
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 8/26/2003 9:33:21 AM
Beautiful!!!!!!!!
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 8/23/2003 1:03:14 PM
A beautiful poem.
Greetings from Atlanta.
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 8/5/2003 12:03:04 PM
Well done, thanks for sharing.
Keep the faith your best days are ahead of you.
Officer William Heffner
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 7/11/2003 3:06:34 PM
Hi -
I finally found the chance to read your work. This one is very touching.
Connie
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 5/23/2003 8:21:59 AM
Powerful and chilling. Brought tears to my eyes. Thanks for sharing.
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 4/26/2003 6:56:35 PM
Very moving !
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 4/15/2003 3:15:35 PM
Very touching and emotive...
Doc
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 11:46:58 PM
what a wonderful ride of emotions...thanks
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 4/5/2003 3:12:45 PM
Greetings, Kate,
So good to find one more person who writes rhyming poetry. I like your easy to read poem and look foreward to reading more. This poem especially touches me because I fell in love with a married woman when I was 17. we talked it over and decided to do the right thing. She is still married to the same man. I have been married twice and am now single but I have never stopped loving her and it's been over 40 years now.
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 9:46:11 PM
Kate, you have written a poem filled with emotion that one can acually feel.
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 10:24:16 AM
A heartwrenching poem Kate and written so well.
Chrissie
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 8:21:30 AM
Quite a beautiful poem, it almost had me in tears. And as someone who both carries a torch and is in love with a torch carrier, this touches me.
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 6:52:52 AM
Kate, heart wrenching. How many live their lives this way. I am so glad you found another. This must have torn the heart out of you. Bill Murray
The Other Woman (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 6:42:34 AM
Heart-wrenching, but a wonder to read! You've given us a treasure...thank you!
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