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Recent Reviews for Donni-Jay De-Ville

The Lustful Destroyer (Book) - 9/10/2007 4:03:05 PM
I want you to understand clearly that God loves you and wants you to be whole. Having said that, I think from the bio that you wrote about yourself and from this and other things that you wrote, you have a problem. It is called a spirit of prostitution and it has torn you from the family and happiness that you need. I can give you a website to visit if you are interested in being free. Type christianword.org. They have free prayer books to read out loud. These prayers in the book are so long and thorough that you cannot possibly say it without just reading what is said but try it. God bless you. Only Jesus can set you free. All others are quacks.

Into the Lyon's Den (eBook) (Book) - 4/20/2005 12:12:19 AM
O.k.-O.k.-O.K.-What happen from there: Wonderfully written, elequently spoken and felt! I saw my life in 2 of your chapters Donn. Glad this character got out of that miserable life of lessons in 1 piece. I know I will be reading on, some words you use catch me by surprise and I wish I could write that way. YOur great and Thanks again for a great read... It took me almost a total of 6 hrs to read. I had to stop and go back in the same evening. I met a gentle-man online and we are still happy and together after 3 yrs. To take your next chapter to online service of dating was another surprise. Still wondering how the couple went on with their lives after they met? Truly an Excellent piece of Art and life endured Once again. HuGs,Sheee

The Lustful Destroyer (Book) - 4/19/2005 3:40:06 PM
Muliple Personality comes to mind... by the Truama this person experienced over and over and over again! Happy 2 say, this person will get past it-Listening to their heart - and to work from there! 1 STep at a time- Divide and Conquor. YOu have to- a Body and Mind can take only So much--- Lady,Sheee P.S. What an article.

The Conflicts and Struggles in the Life of Donni-Jay De-Ville! (Book) - 8/19/2004 9:56:47 PM
Thanks for sharing your lifestory Donni!! God bless...stay strong!! Love Tinka

The Conflicts and Struggles in the Life of Donni-Jay De-Ville! (Book) - 2/1/2004 12:46:33 AM
cant wait to read more ! You have intrigued me Donni ,so far I'm hooked :))love and thoughts jan

The Conflicts and Struggles in the Life of Donni-Jay De-Ville! (Book) - 12/27/2003 3:33:17 AM
This has so much promise, intrigue and depth, i cant wait to read the finished work, get on with it!!!!! XX

Into the Lyon's Den (eBook) (Book) - 12/13/2003 10:41:22 PM
This was a very erotic write, Excellent! :)

A Dangerous Liason with a Loving Intruder (Short Story) - 11/7/2006 11:48:35 AM
midly-erotic? It bursts of erotic... Great write Donni-Jay. Love the story. And your photo even more. Unbelievable - the way you look. Brings back some sort of hope that life is not over once you have crossed the magic 40 ! Hope you are doing well. Haven't been around alot lately - too much work and stress. But will try to read again regularly - especially your work. Love Amira

Ching the Big Tiny Dog! (R.I.P.) 1/3/05 (Short Story) - 7/10/2006 4:44:32 AM
Donni-Jay, Your heart in this write astounds me. Ching sounds like she was one of a kind, which reminds me of my dog who died in late 2000, whose final act was of love, to an elderly lady. Take Care, Charles D. O'Connor III- Check out my new and controversial story "The Curiosity shop"- many like it, only a few people don't and those people have brutally attacked it but take your true opinion on it. I know it needs editing but I have found an editor as we speak.

Ching the Big Tiny Dog! (R.I.P.) 1/3/05 (Short Story) - 12/10/2005 8:42:50 AM
Beautiful tribute to a special little dog with a gigantic heart! Well done, Donni-Jay; she will surely be missed, but this tribute to a pet is about as good as any I have seen! God bless you, dear heart, and Merry Christmas and a Happy, HEALTHY New Year to you and yours! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D Ching reminds me a lot of "Bert", a little solid black Pomeranian that lives a few streets up from us, but "Bert", unlike your "Ching", is a mean little thing. He had been abused, so I don't blame him for his surly nature! Still, he IS a cutie, and I can't help but to laugh whenever he barks and growls at me every time I go by!

A Dangerous Liason with a Loving Intruder (Short Story) - 8/19/2005 12:39:50 PM
lol love the ending! great writing, nice style!

The Creeps! (Short Story) - 4/19/2005 1:46:30 PM
I do believe in love at first sight! And I do believe also that it may not last long. Both of the spirits have to learn to grow together. Or the lust will be all they have, until that wears off eventually. -- Donn- from your words- TRue True True! Experiences is what helps grow the bond between Two and ofcourse Trust most of all. True Love takes time- I do know this well too and I'm 45yrs. Young... Body-Mind-and SouL- Some guys are like Bees to honey-Don't any repel? Take the time for some of you out there,and find an interest and start there 1st-Friendship will follow and who knows what else- Hold your head high and let your Confidence show through is all you can do. HuGs,Sheee

The Creeps! (Short Story) - 3/1/2005 1:49:16 PM
well done

A Dangerous Liason with a Loving Intruder (Short Story) - 1/28/2005 2:09:16 PM
Okay this was very interesting and erotic and by the way my husband says that you would make a good Wonder Woman.

A Dangerous Liason with a Loving Intruder (Short Story) - 1/28/2005 1:25:47 PM
Great write Donni...you look great in that "Outfit" wow!! Love Tinka

A Dangerous Liason with a Loving Intruder (Short Story) - 1/28/2005 12:10:27 PM
great write, and nice picture, donni-jay! very well done! (((HUGS))) adn much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :)

The Creeps! (Short Story) - 10/18/2004 4:30:46 PM
Fun write, Donni! LOL Thanks for sharing! (((HUGS)))

The Creeps! (Short Story) - 10/18/2004 3:27:28 AM
Thanks for this very true story Donni!! Geeez some are like a fly on stickytape...lol!! Love Tinka

My teeny Pom won an Award! (Article) - 1/31/2008 10:35:33 AM
Congratz MA!! Love Tinka

My teeny Pom won an Award! (Article) - 1/31/2008 4:37:17 AM
so very cute!

Hello again, I'm back! It's Donni-Jay. (Article) - 12/7/2005 8:41:21 AM
Donni-Jay!! Welcome back, girl; you have been missed!! Wonderful to know that you are on the mend, and I LOVE the picture!! Your baby is toooo adorable; I LOVE Pomeranians!! AWWW! (And the man isn't half bad lookin' either! LOL) Wonderfully happy write! Merry Christmas and a Happy, HEALTHY New Year to you too!! (((HUGS))) And much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Hello again, I'm back! It's Donni-Jay. (Article) - 12/7/2005 6:23:07 AM
Welcome Back!

Polite request for Readers (Article) - 8/19/2005 12:42:01 PM
hm, i never thought of writing something like this for people! does it work?

No Thanks for Sharing my disastrous life with you! (Article) - 8/12/2005 8:14:15 AM
Hello Donni! Thank you for sharing your thoughts and life experiences with me and the rest of the world. You have much to teach us. I am inspired! Peace, Manes Pierre

Paul Bruce on Donni-Jay (Article) - 4/19/2005 3:31:08 PM
Wow- Donn- I'm sure you gained strength by all your tribulations once again. GOOD 4 U! It's Never too late to learn..and Paul, you have to learn to Appreciate ones around you, who are there and want to be there. BEing alone is NO fun! YOU know it in your Heart of Hearts- I Hope you can hang on and look for a new hobby w/ more interests than alcohol, which you will only drown in possibly. Donn. YOU did what you could and YOU know this... Time 4 Happiness and People to Appreciate you Fully- Look 4 it, and expect it and Hang onto to it.. Don't throw it away- YOU deserve it and more.. Thank YOu 4 sharingggggg..What a long read- but, well worth it. Plowwwww on through life, What you believe - YOU will Find! HuGs,Sheee P.S. Please! Remember, YOu Donn-R NOt put on this Earth to allow Others to walk on you, like a rug- YOUr talented and will go farrrrrrrrrrr.... I feel it! and- What YOU Put OUT to the UniVerse, Will Come Back to YOu! Positive not Negative Circumstances, I do hope!

Poet or Writer? (Article) - 4/19/2005 1:35:17 PM
Debbie *( I super Apoligize- I'm new at sharing my feelings here in AD- I will become a Member soon,I feel it) but.. I had to copy and paste this in, in regards to -Poet or Writer- by Donni- When YOu Debbie mentioned--->being frustrated about the way a poem could be/is written. I see it also as, When it's written too simple- as I have some of my poems written, cuz- it was the way I felt that day- I feel it can loose someones interest as they read it.. cuz- it wasn't elequently spoken- I hope I didn't step on toes here.. but, I felt strongly how you felt too in your article to D- *( which is below) I wonder is being detail-Oriented has anything to do with it- or someone reading a poem who is ADD- could find it boring and just need to read something more with depth... I Wonder- but, writing from the Heart is where it's at- and that can NoT be wrong. Is my feelings also. Debbie - Thanks for helping me -get my emotions pumping on writing styles! :) and Donn- Thanks! 4 the Topic at hand. YOu make some of us think HARD, and Thinking is Creativity. Sheee Though, there are many great poets here at AD, and I do mean great, many, tend to go over my head. Though I enjoy the flow, the rhythm and beat of many of the poems, many times the meaning of the poem is beyond me and I find myself becoming frustrated while reading it. So much so that, reluctantly, I will discontinue reading the poem and move on. This is not to say the poetry isn't good, because I know it is, it's not to my taste. And that's what writing is all about. Everyone has their own tastes and styles of writing. I'm one of those annoying people who always look for the positive slant on everything and always try to find something good to say about anything (doesn't always happen, but I try). I don't believe in critiquing badly anyone's style of writing. They have put a lot of effort into it as well as a lot of themselves. This to me, means the most, that and the fact that they've chosen to share their work with us, is in itself an honor. Debbie

No Thanks for Sharing my disastrous life with you! (Article) - 4/19/2005 1:15:18 PM
I just have to hope that people will see my book when it is on the shelf for sale, so that it can serve its purpose and help those who have suffered, or who are still suffering. I can see no other purpose for my having lived such a life, if it isn't to be able to help others get through theirs! Donni-- I'm Sheee - I've written to you a few times, but.. If you may- let me speak for others, Not writing reviews to others. The reason could be time- Time is of the Essense and they could of bookmarked you and then, forgotten... Keep up what you do and feel and your magic will rub off to the one it is meant for. Right now- I feel like it's Me... Sorry, to put it so bluntly... but - let me tell you.. Parts of your Saddest and Challenging parts of your life.. was mine- and I could feel your tears as you try to express your strength to just go on! Another thing I would like to mention.. is, Since your Such an Excellent Artist.. Why -? would you want any comments from others.. I believe in Constructive Critism too, it's Really Important... but, some - may not want to hurt your feelings by writing something mundane or trifle... I always speak from my heart and I feel that is the most important way to go through life with Everyone... To have others like you is GReat- but, yOU have to like yourself and Have Faith in yourself.. and I learned that the hard way...What are you doing as of today? I would love to know.. your newest accomplishments, and How are your children? Did they come around? I wrote alot and I hope you or anyone hasn't minded but, I felt it important to shareeeeeee.... Have a GREAT DAy! WEek and MOnth... Lady,Sheee *(Sheila G)

Polite request for Readers (Article) - 4/19/2005 1:05:18 PM
Miss D- Or Mrs. by now, I hope 4 YOU... YOu sounded so sad- I will attempt to tell you what I felt by reading your VEry LOng and Interesting Bio- and I had no tea, I love green tea- but, I was Intrigued immensely... I love to write but, you have a different style- a NO Holds Barred kind of feeling- I like that alot... True-Honest and full of depth- Thank you 4 being So Honest.. My life w/ a children started at 20 too and I married an Alcoholic - who I married 2Xs, thinking he would change and live life -REaL- but, his emOtions became a dry drunk- No emotions.... Another life of twists and turns and a hurtful childhood -that strenthened me... Thanks for allowing us to peek into Your feelings of the heart and SouL... YOur in my Favorites and I hOpe True Love and the light of Happiness found you and will stay with you. YOur sweet and Honest- I will read more later. Lady,Sheee OXO.... Hope you don't mind. Good luck book writing.. I'm trying and getting nowhere FASttttttttttt, but I don't give up either.

Better to have loved?? (Article) - 4/7/2005 4:34:57 PM
This is so beautiful and yet very true. I'm very thankful to have come across your page. God bless and keep you. Keep up the good work and I'll be praying for you.

Eye Laser Treatment or not? (Article) - 3/1/2005 1:40:11 PM
good article

No Thanks for Sharing my disastrous life with you! (Article) - 3/1/2005 1:39:39 PM
I think most people just don't add a note to anything

Better to have loved?? (Article) - 3/1/2005 1:38:28 PM
well done

Poet or Writer? (Article) - 12/5/2004 4:05:23 PM
Poetry does indeed have a history, a definition, and guidelines that distinguish it from prose. The two words are frequently misused here at AuthorsDen. Sometimes writers who prefer rhyme come upon free and blank verse and call it prose when reviewing it because they miss all the other attributes of the piece that place it squarely in the poetry category. At other times people write pieces that have no rhythm, rhyme, literary devices, or flow, but they line it up in verse form and people applaud it as poetry. Well, it's not. Yes, poetry often makes us feel, but there are some excellent poets who simply make us think. It's not all about feelings. Nevertheless, since so many writers here write for fun, emotional, or socialization reasons and do not aspire to the writing profession, why argue about it? Life's too short. Those who want to hone their craft will figure it out, and those who are just having fun will continue to do as they please or feel. Nordette

No Thanks for Sharing my disastrous life with you! (Article) - 12/5/2004 3:47:38 PM
Donni, people generally won't read and review longer works these days. For some reason that seems to be more so on this site. I don't know why. But I do know that sometimes a writer's style, no matter how compelling the story, can turn readers away. A good editor can help when this is the problem. I'm not saying that's your case. I haven't read your chapters. Anyhow, often people will read and read, like what they read, but are still too lazy or sometimes just too distracted to comment. I'm surprised sometimes by the people who will pop up and comment on my Den and say that they've been following me for months, but that will be the first I've heard from them. Be encouraged.

No Thanks for Sharing my disastrous life with you! (Article) - 12/4/2004 3:08:03 PM
I am sorry more people aren't paying attention to you, Donni. I have read your articles about your life, and I am sorry if I haven't commented as regularly as I should; forgive me? Still, your story deserves (and needs) to be told, and I am glad you shared it with us here. Good luck with the book; that's more than I have right now! I have over 1,400 stories, but no book! so you have me beat there! maybe one day i will have a book of my own.....*sigh* i can only dream and keep writing and hope for the best.... (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(

No Thanks for Sharing my disastrous life with you! (Article) - 12/4/2004 1:32:34 PM
Donni-Jay: Sweets, the same exact thing is happening to me. I'm writing about my disastrous life right now. Very few people are commenting, but lots are reading. I suspect whoever is reading doesn't want me to know who they are, because the way I see it, almost EVERYONE is screwed up. Just be thankful people are reading, because that probably means you are helping and inspiring people to help themselves. I appreciate your rant--I'm experiencing the same thing right now.

No Thanks for Sharing my disastrous life with you! (Article) - 12/4/2004 4:49:19 AM
Hi Donni: I think we are all subjected to this treatment at one time or another, and yes, it does hurt our feelings a lot, especially when we think most people are or once have been our friend(s). Don't lose your faith, put your book on the shelves in the bookstore, I'm sure a lot of people are going to read it. Sometimes it is always better to hold a book in hand to read than to read that from a computer screen. Good luck with all your future endeavours! Sandie May Angel :o)

No Thanks for Sharing my disastrous life with you! (Article) - 12/4/2004 3:21:13 AM
I do read you Donni as you know...but have been attacked and judged badly by people here on AD...and I just felt that by not showing my "FACE" MIGHT CALM THE WATERS" But the battle is still on... I am losing faith in those I thought were my so called friends....that turned out to be backstabbers instead!! Even false E-mails with my name attached to it is going around and I have no Idea Who this impersonater of my ID is!! Take care... and best regards to Rev Davey!! Lovew Tinka

Poet or Writer? (Article) - 11/7/2004 2:00:51 AM
In a way I agree with the point you were trying to get across. First, I don't call myself a poet or novelist or any of the other title people give themselves, I'm just a writer. I write b/c I love the written word and the feelings expressed through them. That said, when I first came to AD I began with reading and writng only poetry. I now, almost always write essays, articles and short stories. I'm finding I'm enjoying this as much if not more than writing poetry (though my first book, due out the beginning of next year) has quite a lot of poetry in it, the essays I was able to just expound my thoughts and feelings in. Though, there are many great poets here at AD, and I do mean great, many, tend to go over my head. Though I enjoy the flow, the rhythm and beat of many of the poems, many times the meaning of the poem is beyond me and I find myself becoming frustrated while reading it. So much so that, reluctantly, I will discontinue reading the poem and move on. This is not to say the poetry isn't good, because I know it is, it's not to my taste. And that's what writing is all about. Everyone has their own tastes and styles of writing. I'm one of those annoying people who always look for the positive slant on everything and always try to find something good to say about anything (doesn't always happen, but I try). I don't believe in critiquing badly anyone's style of writing. They have put a lot of effort into it as well as a lot of themselves. This to me, means the most, that and the fact that they've chosen to share their work with us, is in itself an honor. Debbie

Cheetahs, real fast crittas! (Article) - 10/21/2004 10:29:25 AM
This is wonderful and what a picture to go with it!!

Supernatural Panther (Article) - 10/21/2004 10:28:47 AM
Thank you so much and what a majestic picture. I think I do love them because of their majesty and mystery. This is beautiful Donni-J.

Pharoahs and Lions (Article) - 10/21/2004 10:27:17 AM
This is really interesting Donni J, would like to be more like those Pharoahs!

Paul Bruce on Donni-Jay (Article) - 10/19/2004 9:40:36 PM
Dear Donni-Jay; This guy really needs a whole helluva lot more help than you could ever give him. Such people are really adept at preying upon the emotions of others. I really sympathize with you for having to experience such pain and suffering. Doc

To my Beloved Daughters who were adopted. (Poetry) - 5/29/2009 3:23:35 AM
Sad , life does throw curve balls sometimes. I hope they are well and happy......M

Good thing that I said my Prayers. (Poetry) - 5/29/2009 3:21:28 AM
Cute , It brought a smile to my face. Glad your bruises were not worse....M

I Still Love You (Song lyrics) (Poetry) - 5/29/2009 3:19:37 AM
A great song poem. Wish I could hear the melody too.....M

Good thing that I said my Prayers. (Poetry) - 2/28/2009 7:16:32 AM
Haha! Just one of those days when you least expected it!!! Sandie Angel :o)

Getting old aint so bad..... (Poetry) - 9/26/2008 7:53:53 PM
Nice spirit!

Good thing that I said my Prayers. (Poetry) - 9/26/2008 7:53:04 PM
Awesome!

Getting old aint so bad..... (Poetry) - 8/21/2008 8:27:21 AM
Very articulate and insightful write, Donni! I hope you continue to write because you definately have a gift for it. We've both written a poem on growing old and seems we both agree, it doesn't have to be a bad thing. ~ Zach, your fellow human and poet

Good thing that I said my Prayers. (Poetry) - 8/21/2008 8:22:43 AM
Hi Donni-Jay! I was tickled by your poem because I've had days like that! :D I like the way you write in a very down-to-earth, personal style- very refreshing. Reading over your bio I believe that the true and living God has been protecting you. your fellow human and poet, ~Zach

Please Read This! (Poetry) - 8/7/2008 11:58:12 PM
Excellent! Vic

Getting old aint so bad..... (Poetry) - 8/7/2008 11:56:22 PM
Been reading your Bio Page and poetry again. I like your stuff. So, how come you've stopped? Vic

Please Read This! (Poetry) - 6/3/2008 7:09:52 PM
Did come across you bio tonight for first time and read it very good it is and keeps us informed of you and your doings and life. What a life you had too. Love this poem, it tells us you care that we read your writes and want us to learn something from your writes and your life too. Must read more of yours.

Good thing that I said my Prayers. (Poetry) - 6/3/2008 7:07:48 PM
My cat is always around me and in the way too. Especially when I am busy and not looking out for her. She is a nuisance sometimes, but I love her dearly. I loved this write, it is deeply written and from your heart.

When He is not there with us. (Poetry) - 2/25/2008 1:39:15 PM
good intuitive writing and so inspiration to all your readers I hope. Thanks for sharing and keep going on the good working poems and truly making people read and share and think.

Good thing that I said my Prayers. (Poetry) - 11/24/2007 7:02:40 PM
One of those days! Great write...

A Thrill for you! (Poetry) - 9/28/2007 1:41:59 PM
wow, glad i found your site. you have a great bio and i enjoy your works. speaks volumes about life and the desire to live each day a little than yesterday. always, randy

A new Love heals (Poetry) - 8/5/2007 3:46:23 PM
YOu go girl. Great write. Liz

Good thing that I said my Prayers. (Poetry) - 7/27/2007 6:24:36 PM
lol. I've had those kind of days. Liz

Very simple poem of thanks! (Poetry) - 7/4/2007 4:09:24 PM
This is a sweet little poem, and a bit sad too, which is how a story should be told, no matter how many words are used. Sometimes little is good, and in this case it's very good! Well done and good luck

Double Trouble (Poetry) - 2/22/2007 7:56:19 AM
Donni-Jay, This is perfect lyric for a song! If only Stevie Ray were still with us....... Peace, Bill

To my Beloved Daughters who were adopted. (Poetry) - 1/28/2007 2:14:11 PM
So sad, I feel your pain. I think that in your daughter's dreams, an angel speaks and tells them of your love. God bless you, Rose

Naked Donni-Jay (Poetry) - 1/21/2007 9:21:36 AM
how could it offend-it, both picture and verse are beautiful!

Dedicated to Paul Bruce (Poetry) - 1/21/2007 9:19:54 AM
very sad, but all to real when those who used to love, decide not to

Yesterday's Boy (Poetry) - 1/21/2007 9:17:53 AM
your bio was interesting--i am glad you will be writing your story. INteresting write here as well

Very simple poem of thanks! (Poetry) - 10/18/2006 3:41:58 PM
This is a very nice simple thank you prayer thanks for sharing this one.

Getting old aint so bad..... (Poetry) - 7/14/2006 6:51:15 PM
Donni, I really enjoyed this poem. Hey, you now have a pen pal in the USA. Homeschool