Recent Reviews for Kate Burnside
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Hum (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 6:15:44 PM
A mixed experience, with hybrid sensations... inflating, floating, fluttering... dissolving. A different perception adopted.
Axilea
Hum (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 1:42:59 PM
Makes me think of blowing soap bubbles when I was a kid. Very nice. Patrick
Hum (Poetry) - 11/23/2009 11:48:53 PM
Kate, you truly know how to make things hum!You are an incredible wordsmith! Bless you!
Hum (Poetry) - 11/23/2009 9:01:53 AM
A joy to read, Kate, so enlightened. Love it!
Hum (Poetry) - 11/23/2009 4:40:49 AM
Excellent poem, Kate. You really do a great job at creating a weightless feeling with your words, a kind of spiraling, floating sensation. It felt as though I was drifting into a dream or an alpha state of meditation. Love it!
Take care,
Sherry
Hum (Poetry) - 11/23/2009 2:56:55 AM
From the smoke of a burned our forest here comes falling an angel with ephemeral wings dissolving a flurry of rain drops like tears from the sky.
Georg
Hum (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 11:44:32 PM
Kate, for me, the first word sets the tone for this entire poem. It feels light and dreamy. Very imaginative. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
Hum (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 9:52:00 PM
Metamorphosis laden with a delicate grip transcending personal coherence copping a buzz-hum in a fever of flight, the verbal equivalent of the state of mind. The poet's imagination is bathed in journey in the inner and outer reality of existence....you've grown a stinger, Kate!
Love,
Sage
Hum (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 8:10:11 PM
Such a wonderful flow eluding to life's presumptuous flavor...
Be always safe,
Karen
Hum (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 5:50:29 PM
....such a fine line...to breathe in life is miraculous..great write Kate
Love,
Christine
Hum (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 4:47:19 PM
you do transcendental well :)....love that ending and relate to its power...
Hum (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 4:20:02 PM
Such eloquent simplicity as you meld the words and esence of thought into the reality of life. Very nicely done Kate.
fee
Hum (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 3:44:01 PM
...and you're certain you never did acid, huh? This was a close trip then...;-) ed
Hum (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 3:30:41 PM
Lost in the wonder of your words, in you - this is ethereal, hypnotic in its beauty - well done, Kate.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Hum (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 2:59:33 PM
Kate,
Feathery and weighty in one, the images evoke awareness beyond the usual; love "idea a throb in my throat" followed immediately by, "Swollen, I float mysterious"...
Great work.
John
Hum (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 2:23:44 PM
I had strange thoughts when I first saw the title, but . . . This was an empirical delight, and by that I mean if we can write it, it is real and proven simply because the words has writ. Lovely cascade of thought no matter how short-lived your wings were at this particular time. Good.
Hum (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 1:25:13 PM
You take a flight into fantasy in this delightful head tickler.
Hum (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 1:11:25 PM
A lovely and captivating write (experience shared), Kate. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Hum (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 1:10:00 PM
Wonderful write, Kate; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours! :D
Passion Versus Adoration (Poetry) - 11/21/2009 3:53:46 PM
Kate, as one who has occasionally taken many self centered aspects of my life way too serious, this reminds me of my insignificance -- your humor bites with a degree of stark truth -- as for what could be classified as heroes to emulate, I never found a mortal that filled the bill -- you have offered us the good stuff, moral conflicts, to mull around and ponder relative significances -- peace and love my dear friend --Jon Michael
Passion Versus Adoration (Poetry) - 11/20/2009 11:59:33 AM
I think the non-US folks are right. I think many Americans (of course not all) do not get irony and expect to be spoonfed the literal. Did I just say that out loud?
I agree with the others who've pointed out that:
"...mostly I lie in bed at night
and scribble my arguments
in hair on my pillow..."
is top notch writing!
Passion Versus Adoration (Poetry) - 11/19/2009 6:46:10 PM
A change of view, the world growing smaller until you focus on what's really important, the small thing beyond the big. Loved this.
Passion Versus Adoration (Poetry) - 11/19/2009 12:31:25 PM
Very Ironic. Bless You My Friend.
Passion Versus Adoration (Poetry) - 11/18/2009 3:56:05 PM
The irony is that 40 years ago I took myself seriously.
Today, thanks to the bloody likes of you, I smile a lot.
=gene.
Passion Versus Adoration (Poetry) - 11/18/2009 11:09:30 AM
Such unique and beautiful images and expression Kate.
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