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Recent Reviews for R A Beeman
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Savannah (Short Story) - 12/11/2008 10:59:27 AM
Salutations to Author-Poet R. A. Beeman.
"Savannah" kept my attention and showed me a multi color writng style.
I have enjoyed the reading of "Savannah".
I wish You a vitorious writing career.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Chain Linked Prayer (Short Story) - 11/1/2007 1:30:30 AM
A beautiful story...and an inspiration. Prayer can and does work miracles. You told it beautifully.
The Magic Pencil (Short Story) - 10/22/2007 3:59:42 PM
A good moral lesson magically conveyed through a magic pencil. Terrific.
Kathy
The Magic Pencil (Short Story) - 10/22/2007 11:38:39 AM
Magic --very nice. Great story, keeps the reader interested and moves along nicely. Sprinkles a little magic into a childs world and sends a very important message as well, work ethic.
Chain Linked Prayer (Short Story) - 2/8/2007 7:32:03 AM
Amazing story. I'm glad this potential tragedy had a happy ending. Malcolm Watts
Chain Linked Prayer (Short Story) - 3/31/2004 11:05:52 PM
what a beautiful story of faith and trust. captivating words and written from the heart.
Chain Linked Prayer (Short Story) - 3/31/2004 7:16:03 AM
Great and interesting story. It makes a great case for what the power of prayers can achieve. Healing is magic. Franz
Chain Linked Prayer (Short Story) - 3/30/2004 11:42:26 AM
Wonderful and uplifting story! Keep up the excellent job! Enjoyed so much; thanks for sharing!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Chain Linked Prayer (Short Story) - 3/30/2004 10:35:01 AM
An inspiring story, keep up the great work...
God Bless
~Michelle~
The Fair Affair (Article) - 10/21/2008 11:55:57 AM
R.A. <--- what's it stand for? Rob - Rich - ?
Terrific heartfelt love story - while I thoroughly understand, and concur with your beliefs about freedom, and fun, and happiness - a word of caution - no one enjoys being a Cuckold, especially in a small town like Frostburg.
The sooner your Wild Pony makes the Separation, the better! You don't want to wake up DEAD one day!
At age 68, that's my 2 cents worth. It is said that "Love is Blind" - sounds quite true here.
Like the lyrics in the old song, the Farmer says to the Boll Weevil - "I Wish you Well!"
Cordially, Tom.
The Unfair Affair (Article) - 2/7/2008 10:09:41 AM
What a great way to look at things. Life can be a roller coaster but thank God He is helping us steer if we are right with Him. "Those who are sinless can cast the first stone, and they all dropped the stones".
The Judas Within Me (Article) - 1/3/2008 11:30:24 AM
Very indepth thinking of oneself. I am sure we all have a little bit of Judas within us all. You are a great write.
Just To Be Mom (Article) - 9/24/2007 12:32:40 AM
This is beautiful
Just To Be Mom (Article) - 9/22/2007 3:59:50 PM
i do love this-such a beautiful thing to be a mom and cherish the joy of those children
The Fair Affair (Article) - 9/17/2007 6:20:16 PM
ok I enjoyed your story. Playing with fire.
The Unfair Affair (Article) - 9/8/2007 8:47:41 PM
Interesting Article, very deep. I also like your poetry.
The Fair Affair (Article) - 1/16/2007 6:00:39 PM
true to the soul, you know i understand, but will always be in my heart. do with it as yo will...but careful it too can burn as we both know.
The Judas Within Me (Article) - 4/1/2004 12:29:36 PM
Insightful write...
The Aroma of a Woman (Poetry) - 6/6/2011 3:39:18 AM
Ahhh, an excellent metaphor here. Mother Nature is indeed a woman. Very well done, Mr. Beeman.
Hugs to you,
CJ
Into The Well (Poetry) - 12/21/2010 7:12:03 PM
Such an interesting write, enjoyed.
Steel On Earth (Poetry) - 6/9/2010 10:11:04 AM
This was well thought out.
Great write.
God bless,
Lew
Steel On Earth (Poetry) - 6/9/2010 8:23:00 AM
brilliant!
Steel On Earth (Poetry) - 6/9/2010 5:11:49 AM
i love the depth of this write-well done!
Steel On Earth (Poetry) - 6/9/2010 3:40:58 AM
this is a beautiful reading Randy, and in every metaphor I also
enjoyed while too as you knowing our harvests are in cultivating
the soils to grow & yes...the souls of others.
Love is our bounty and our harvest...
I place nutrient rich compost tea into your earth gardens
made with mother's leaves & decomposing elements
(old leaves, twigs, straw ect...)
Vickie
Tilling With Growth never destruction
Vickie
Steel On Earth (Poetry) - 6/8/2010 9:43:56 PM
Randy, this is so beautiful and I love how you liken the earth to a relationship. It's so good to read your work again!
Steel On Earth (Poetry) - 6/8/2010 7:01:58 PM
Absolutely beautiful writing. ...and love touches my soul.
Love,
Tammy
Steel On Earth (Poetry) - 6/8/2010 5:36:21 PM
Beautiful and Serene. Be Well, Carin'
Ensconced (Poetry) - 5/28/2010 8:21:53 AM
so lovely---that words are inadequate to discribe the wonder,beauty and childlike innocence of this loving!
blessings
sophia
Into The Well (Poetry) - 5/26/2010 12:03:44 PM
A beautiful write.
Drink till your hearts content.
God bless,
Lew
Into The Well (Poetry) - 5/26/2010 3:18:06 AM
beautiful!
Was it Worth it. (Poetry) - 4/8/2010 9:04:17 AM
R A Beeman is my #1 new favorite! The first I've read. While reading "Was it Worth it." -----I thought I was reading about myself. Wow. I loved it!!!!
Combing Through The Darkness (Poetry) - 1/18/2010 12:02:46 PM
It's great to release the snares of the past in which tend to drag us down, yet hold on to the lessons in which we should have learned, in order to slide in to a more peaceful future.Les Bond
Life is Funny That Way (Poetry) - 9/30/2009 8:12:07 AM
i like this poem it has a sweet sentimental value of friendship.
Ode To The Muffin Man (Poetry) - 8/18/2009 1:46:00 PM
well well well :)
Beauty Stand Still (Poetry) - 7/30/2009 5:47:36 PM
Beautiful writing sweet man...sure have missed you and your wonderful writing..hope everything is going ok with you and your family ..take care always OK..Hugsss,much happiness to you
Beauty Stand Still (Poetry) - 6/30/2009 4:20:37 AM
I liked your work. check mine also.
Beauty Stand Still (Poetry) - 6/30/2009 2:32:28 AM
Randy your words sensual & delicate
whispering the essence of love's beauty
Peace & Inspirations
Vickie
Beauty Stand Still (Poetry) - 6/29/2009 8:49:49 PM
visually beautiful!
Inclinations of Nature (Poetry) - 6/25/2009 11:03:20 PM
Randy, I have missed your work so much. As always, you write so beautifully and I love how you combine romance with nature. Lovely, lovely work.
Inclinations of Nature (Poetry) - 6/25/2009 8:54:28 PM
Yes, truly beautiful words from the heart of a wonderful man that I am so blessed to have in my life. The way you express yourself in your poetry is so amazing and I treasure that and I treasure you.
Love, Tammy
Inclinations of Nature (Poetry) - 6/25/2009 8:46:21 PM
what a wonderful write!
Inclinations of Nature (Poetry) - 6/25/2009 5:34:55 PM
Randy! This is the most inner devote declaration of love I have ever heard…beauty….beauty…beauty…
The purity of your words are romantic yes, & intimately sincere; but also feel as though the truth of love is speaking within a true essence of forevermore...this is so very beautiful in many perspectives of the heart & soul
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
Lady Fingers (Poetry) - 3/11/2009 5:17:19 AM
Breath taking..sure have missed you and your wonderful writing..stay safe and well..Hugsss
Testament of Time (Poetry) - 2/25/2009 10:11:49 PM
Excellent poem! Deep thoughts!
We think alot alike so please when you have a chance, come visit my site.
Yours in Christ,
John Michael Domino
Lady Fingers (Poetry) - 2/20/2009 2:10:24 PM
Randy Your Romantic Heart Inscribes Devote Tenderness Embracing Passions....This Is a Lovely Poem
An Evocative Dance of Love's Poetic Words...
Much Love & Inspiration
Vickie
Lady Fingers (Poetry) - 2/12/2009 1:49:06 AM
Excellent poem,take care
Edwin
Lady Fingers (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 11:52:47 PM
Beautiful...I love how you combine feeling with nature.
Lady Fingers (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 8:18:22 PM
and this write is a beautiful intertwining of words!
Combing Through The Darkness (Poetry) - 12/19/2008 10:11:50 AM
Poet! Your words are like earthen bounty, soothing into the rivers stream, walking along the banks & loving the moments of silence sweetly carressing my heart & soul....so softly spoken with tenderness as "Combing Through The Darkness" untangles these imbrue reflections your poetic page lets me discover...
Much Love To You Poet
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
Ensconced (Poetry) - 12/19/2008 10:07:12 AM
Randy, the sensate of loves essence permeates from your heart to the ink of your pen, upon the pages of your den...."Ensconced" was a warming read of love's purity & innocence enjoying the bounty of Mother Earth;s seasons...
Much Love To You Den Brother
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
Ode To The Muffin Man (Poetry) - 12/19/2008 10:04:15 AM
lol-So sweet are your sublimininal messages of sensual delight
Much Love To You Poet
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
Combing Through The Darkness (Poetry) - 12/12/2008 5:42:27 AM
I love this
Combing Through The Darkness (Poetry) - 12/10/2008 3:22:46 PM
Randy--I could read this over and over excellent write. You said it all here! Miss ya --Staci
Ode To The Muffin Man (Poetry) - 12/10/2008 1:26:54 PM
Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..so your a muffin man....yummmmmmmmmmmie....very well done sweet Randy..nice to read you again..keep smiling OK....Hugsssss,much love too you,and your family.....
Ensconced (Poetry) - 12/10/2008 11:47:43 AM
This is just lovely Randy. It has a soft, almost magical, dreamlike quality. A write that appeals to this hopeless romantic. Best, Elizabeth
Ode To The Muffin Man (Poetry) - 12/10/2008 10:25:18 AM
Man specially if it's baked with a Lemon Flavor... and poppy seeds on top....or vanilla and orange...yummy!!
MAN now I am hungry!!
Love Tinka
Ensconced (Poetry) - 12/9/2008 5:04:48 AM
Sounds like an interesting outing, and you paint a nice image of two lovers by the fire enjoying the snowflakes and most of all--each other.
Ensconced (Poetry) - 12/9/2008 2:44:38 AM
Randy, this is so beautiful. I especially like, "While I watch you make snow angels with the smile of a child, I close my eyes and give thanks for the smile you have just for me."...for some reason, these lines touched my heart.
Ensconced (Poetry) - 12/8/2008 8:09:25 PM
Beautiful...yes, "as each snowflake is different...to have each moment be different and unique in reverence to each other." Another beautiful write Randy!
Ensconced (Poetry) - 12/8/2008 5:43:37 PM
lovely sensuality
What We Have Lost (Poetry) - 12/8/2008 5:27:22 PM
Positive and inspirational!
Ensconced (Poetry) - 12/8/2008 4:55:41 PM
Beautiful-so deeply passionate and romantic-well done!
Ensconced (Poetry) - 12/8/2008 3:30:34 PM
"Ensconced" has always been one of my favorite words - so your title drew me here, but your words drew me into a lovely, sensual connection. Very nice.
Ensconced (Poetry) - 12/8/2008 2:33:05 PM
Absolutely brilliant. Nothing more needs to be said by this reviewer except BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Testament of Time (Poetry) - 11/30/2008 9:11:55 AM
This is such a soothing and thoughtful write! The visuals allow you to pause and breathe in the authors words and envision what he is seeing. Wonderful message in this piece also. Most enjoyable read! Best, Elizabeth :)
Testament of Time (Poetry) - 11/25/2008 3:40:48 PM
R A,
This is a "Testament" to fine poetic writing . . . outstanding!!
Best regards,
Lance
Testament of Time (Poetry) - 11/25/2008 12:18:53 PM
Randy,
I really must say, I have missed your sweet words. I shall delve into the world of RBeeman..Nicely written, makes one feel as though they are the one you are writing it for.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Testament of Time (Poetry) - 11/17/2008 9:37:01 PM
well done, well said, enjoyed much
Testament of Time (Poetry) - 11/5/2008 5:53:09 PM
Beautiful Randy. Very expressive and visual as you added so much color to this write.
Testament of Time (Poetry) - 11/5/2008 2:40:14 AM
Randy, I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. This is simply beautiful.
Testament of Time (Poetry) - 11/4/2008 7:39:50 PM
such beauty in your words!
Testament of Time (Poetry) - 11/4/2008 4:39:11 PM
Randy,
How beautiful are the words you have written. Yes, truly a "testamant of time."
A testament, an example of honor, of commitment given, growing only in time is all I have to offer.
Breath taking indeed.
Tammy
Testament of Time (Poetry) - 11/4/2008 1:58:13 PM
RANDY - SUPERB COMPARISON AND CONTRAST !!!
The analogy is near perfection ... Tom.
Testament of Time (Poetry) - 11/4/2008 12:20:58 PM
Breath taking darlin...take care sweet Randy..you're in my thoughts...Hugsssssssss,much love too you
The Aroma of a Woman (Poetry) - 11/3/2008 8:14:00 PM
precise analogy and analysis of an aroma that mystifies as well as stimulates ...
A Diamond in the Rough (Poetry) - 11/3/2008 5:25:34 PM
Beautiful and meaningful--great commentary on society
When I Come (Poetry) - 11/3/2008 5:38:32 AM
Flows beautifully, blessings, Holly
The Aroma of a Woman (Poetry) - 11/3/2008 5:37:09 AM
A stunning write, blessings, Holly
Requiem of Silence (Poetry) - 10/28/2008 2:11:10 PM
Oh yes,How I love your words hmmm..once again you have taken my breath away sweet Randy...sighhhh.....HUgssssss
The Aroma of a Woman (Poetry) - 10/28/2008 2:09:18 PM
Oh my,breath taking..ohhh how I missed you sweet Randy...Hugs,much love too you
Requiem of Silence (Poetry) - 10/25/2008 2:21:02 PM
I love the write. Fall brings out something in you, poet. I love this time of year, too. God Bless,
Lew
The Aroma of a Woman (Poetry) - 10/22/2008 8:00:20 PM
such a beautiful write!
Requiem of Silence (Poetry) - 10/22/2008 7:39:40 PM
a very beautiful write-emotionally charged with the love to come
The Aroma of a Woman (Poetry) - 10/22/2008 6:54:38 PM
RANDY - SPLENDIFEROUS!
Aaaaah - the Winter of '69 - a very great year! TK.
The Aroma of a Woman (Poetry) - 10/22/2008 5:24:39 AM
Sensuousness turned into budding spring for the senses. Nice job.
Requiem of Silence (Poetry) - 10/22/2008 1:29:01 AM
Another beautiful write, Randy. I love how you combine nature with romance. Beautiful.
The Aroma of a Woman (Poetry) - 10/21/2008 10:43:45 PM
Beautiful, Randy.
The Aroma of a Woman (Poetry) - 10/21/2008 6:24:43 PM
A beautiful, beautiful write Randy. "For she doesnt' give just to any one, she chooses only whom she finds qualified.
For the winters are hard, yet she gladly shares her blanket of white."
Requiem of Silence (Poetry) - 10/21/2008 6:16:23 PM
Randy -- such a beautiful and deep felt poem...you always touch my heart with your writing, but this one especially so...ah, the beautiful seasons and colors of life and how they can make us feel laughter, comfort, and yes, even love. How sweet is the celebration of life.
Hugs,
Tammy
Now I Lay You Down (Poetry) - 10/13/2008 10:51:50 AM
luxurious saturant of passions
embracing the splenourous morning of your new day in "Now I Lay You Down" sensates the passions of our hearts Randy...lovely romantic capture from the beauty of your loving heart...romancing poet of love
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Now I Lay You Down (Poetry) - 10/12/2008 11:18:35 AM
You have described what so many couples desire to have, some time alone to spend blissful hours with the one's only true love. I felt like I was almost intruding in such precious moments. Loved the way it created a sensual mood even under the moanings of the creaky swing. I could almost hear the methodic creeeeeak, creeeeeeak...well done!
Smiles,
Dorothy
Now I Lay You Down (Poetry) - 10/6/2008 9:59:28 PM
How beautiful, romantic and sweet this is. "I wish I could awake each morning with more than just this dream,"...and me, too!
Now I Lay You Down (Poetry) - 10/6/2008 9:15:26 AM
Thank You R A
For this beautiful and tender write
Its a true poetic gem
Most enjoyable
Peace be with you
William
Now I Lay You Down (Poetry) - 10/6/2008 4:14:22 AM
You are amazing Randy...hugs and love, Tammy
Now I Lay You Down (Poetry) - 10/6/2008 3:51:10 AM
beautiful and full of love and passion-
Now I Lay You Down (Poetry) - 10/6/2008 3:34:00 AM
Me toooooooooooooooooo..Was that you sweetie in my dream...sighhhhhhhhh..whoa me thinks I will go back to sleep...JUST MAYBE ........(Giggles)......beautiful writing sweet Randy...Hugss,much love too you
When I Come (Poetry) - 10/5/2008 5:50:33 PM
Yes, this one is very sweet and romantic just like you are. You already know I love this one (smile).
Tammy :)
When I Come (Poetry) - 10/5/2008 11:06:46 AM
Oh, yeah. Life IS enjoyable.
I've been gone too.
Playing catch up is fun with writes like this.
Really hot.
--RaeLynn
When I Come (Poetry) - 10/3/2008 11:06:09 PM
You may have been away for awhile Randy, but I see your poetry is just as good as ever.
When I Come (Poetry) - 10/3/2008 5:09:14 PM
Very beautiful and you sweetie can come to me any time (Giggles)...Hugsss,much love too you Rb..really glad your back sighhhhh....
When I Come (Poetry) - 10/3/2008 12:39:49 PM
a beautiful write-so self-less and pure
Inspire Me (Poetry) - 10/1/2008 5:01:55 PM
Welcome back, I have been away from AD also--it was a busy Summer. Trying to get inspired to write again, maybe your poem will help. Another great write from you!
Inspire Me (Poetry) - 10/1/2008 12:19:33 PM
Dear Randy,
I just want to take a few seconds to say that I am sorry for not keeping up
with my writing and responding to all those who have been such a blessing
to me with your kind words and honest comments regarding the things that I
write about...myself!!
BUT....intend to spend more time soon...I am just a little busy doing some
Grandma thingy's like knitting for new baby girl on her way!!
Love Granny-Tinka {:
Inspire Me (Poetry) - 10/1/2008 3:55:41 AM
This is an excellent write that most writers everywhere can likely identify with. There are times when the waiting keyboard is not enough to open up the muse's treasure trove of topics with the accompaniment of the flow of words.
Inspire Me (Poetry) - 10/1/2008 2:21:04 AM
Welcome back, Randy. Although you've been away, your work is just as beautiful as ever!
Inspire Me (Poetry) - 9/30/2008 6:03:27 PM
Well, welcome back sweetie..sure have missed you and your beautiul writing..great writing as always sweet man...HUgssss,much love too you
Open Me Gently (Poetry) - 8/19/2008 11:02:53 AM
Splendid piece
Grand pen
Rod
Outside (Poetry) - 8/19/2008 11:01:49 AM
Grand.
Feminine Prowess (Poetry) - 8/19/2008 11:00:21 AM
Pretty pen indeed
I's lose some of the adjectives.
Yet, they say the same to me
Very eloquent pen sir
Sincerely
Rodney
Open Me Gently (Poetry) - 8/12/2008 7:50:53 AM
A wonderful poem!
I often wonder... If we tell someone that if they were to put a small speck of something that looks like sand inside the grown and then wait a few weeks for it to produce many colors of the rainbow. Would they believe it is possible? I think not!
Then I ask.
What is a seed?
What is a flower???
Who is the creator?
Of course it is "Our GOD is heaven."
With HIM anything is posible.
God bless you as you continue to write!
John Michael
Kisses from Heaven (Poetry) - 8/12/2008 7:41:27 AM
A spirtual poem that is tells of cold surroundings but it still warms the heart.
BRAVO!
John Michael
On the Potter's Wheel (Poetry) - 7/19/2008 5:23:48 PM
Truth eternal from the ETERNAL ONE!
Open Me Gently (Poetry) - 6/10/2008 12:46:43 PM
Who would not but want love from you on such a beautiful morning and you are free to give it and make it worthwhile. The flowers are simply devine as your love beeing is to.
Feminine Prowess (Poetry) - 6/10/2008 12:44:21 PM
who could help but not be passionate down by the sands and the sea. The lotions she uses attract you too and are just the right way to do it. Joined as one on the beach and privately exploring your love for each other, sounds so passionate. Good seductive write.
What We Have Lost (Poetry) - 5/30/2008 5:16:05 AM
truly said...yes we have lost the dinner time together,sharing of the day-to-day stuff....very well written...neerja
What We Have Lost (Poetry) - 5/2/2008 7:30:01 AM
Times of reflection, introspection, and calibration of thoughts
bring understanding to fleeting hours.- What came to my mind, alignment/balance of thoughts~
Time at the dinner table, WE/I demand it atleast 1 day a wk! as family! Usually it's SAturday! or Friday night! Which is ok with me, to smile, chat and share! or laugh... I look forward to it! and they do too, it shows in the sweet comments offered! and food passed around!
I love your intense thoughtful poem Randy! Again, I am sorry I haven't been here in awhile, no real reason- I miss reading and knowing your heart too, my fault...
watch as the first carpenter bees of the season fight for the
chance to once again bore into my logs. <----- Love this! I watched for almost an hr. a family woodpecker (visits the same tree every season and almost the same area too) I heard the knockin' and I came callin'- sounds like a poem or a line for one... I can sit and watch our trees for hrs. and almost see smiles bursting forward from there bark - Smiling... What shall you gain? Inspiration and boundless energy from it all! I know that is what I get! from every nuance of life, nature and love!
Write On!
Warm BIG Hugs, Warrior Purple PaSsion Shexooo
STay Positive!
Next! 2 read, I am enjoying this deep penetration of words and feelings sprouting! Another line for a poem, Ahhhhhh.... I felt a twinge..
Outside (Poetry) - 5/2/2008 7:19:07 AM
R U kiddin' - I just can't look, it always leads to touching and more of the same... I love all your expressive images Randy!Touch the skin of your lover and look into eyes full of life.
Such purity is released in these lines of life, love and embraces of heart and nature!!!I an outdoors soul all the way, even if just walking and noticing, this so inspired my soul~!Thank you for sharing your kind, giving O P E N heart "R" ! Sorry it's been awhile I've been here, just life taking over and me writing up a storm, then sharing! I plan to stay with YOU today.. Till I have to leave in a 1/2hr. Much love and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple PaSsion Shexooo
Write On!
Glad were outside is true enough! even better with no pollution! The smell of burning leaves is fine with me! How about you, and Do you like Skunk smell, some say it smells like coffee- nope, I don't smell that aroma! and how about GAS/Car....
Feminine Prowess (Poetry) - 5/2/2008 7:11:31 AM
WOW! Randy Rand, Passionate Seduction unending!
Love your stark vivid images!
Write On1
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple PaSsion Sheee
STay Positive!
STay Strong!
Feminine Prowess (Poetry) - 4/25/2008 7:29:34 AM
Lovely pen dear man...Hugsssss
Outside (Poetry) - 4/15/2008 5:09:40 PM
A writing filled with colorful contrasts; both kind and unkind truths (as in life)--food for the soul.
Thanks for sharing this.
Leann
What We Have Lost (Poetry) - 4/15/2008 5:25:53 AM
Splendid write on enjoying what we have while we have it.
Feminine Prowess (Poetry) - 4/14/2008 10:35:25 PM
Passionate writing, Randy!
Feminine Prowess (Poetry) - 4/14/2008 6:26:45 PM
Randy,
You have shared a very passionate write from the heart of desires yearning
Beautiful & Intoxicating
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
What We Have Lost (Poetry) - 4/13/2008 5:08:46 AM
A great poem Randy full of meaning. Love the last line, what shall we gain. We should always take time to admire the small things in life and the time we have as this can bring much joy!
Outside (Poetry) - 4/13/2008 2:18:18 AM
Randy, I love this...especially the last two paragraphs. As a lover of nature and the outdoors, I find this just beautiful!
Outside (Poetry) - 4/12/2008 8:00:48 PM
nature, outside, sunshine, love, everything to love!
What We Have Lost (Poetry) - 4/12/2008 5:29:57 PM
yes, we have indeed lost much--thought provoking--sad
Outside (Poetry) - 4/12/2008 10:42:18 AM
Aaaaaah! Mother Nature Nurtures!
To be One with Nature, and the Universe ... this is the ultimate QUEST!
What We Have Lost (Poetry) - 4/12/2008 10:36:03 AM
RANDY - you have expounded upon a classic, succinct query by W.S. ---
"To BE, or not to BE? - that is the question!"
Outside (Poetry) - 4/12/2008 5:14:48 AM
"Outside" covers many provocative thoughts, but you boil them down to one concept: a return to enjoying nature.
Outside (Poetry) - 4/12/2008 3:54:20 AM
Randy,
"Outside is our knowledge, our wisdom."
These Words Speak The Volumes Of Truths Wisdom. This Morning When I was outside with my boys the birds were singing like a sold out concert!! It is so beautiful as is your poetic expressions in your heart felt poetry!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
What We Have Lost (Poetry) - 4/12/2008 3:29:56 AM
Randy,
are you my twin lost at birth? Your words are like thoughts & things I have done & do...do....the tress swaying, watching the bees-Yes All that subtle, yet Obvious beauty catches me totally engulfs me. It is like a Maestro orchestrating his symphony....Beautiful Poem, ever true many mis out on the trueness in the concepts of time
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
What We Have Lost (Poetry) - 4/12/2008 2:57:25 AM
Beautfiul writing....lots to gain Randy for those who wait,when the time is right ,it will happen ...stay safe and well sweet man....Hugssssssssssss
Outside (Poetry) - 4/12/2008 2:54:11 AM
Sounds wonderful to me,have a wonderful and safe day RB...
What We Have Lost (Poetry) - 4/11/2008 11:05:18 PM
"Make seconds count, not just hours or days.
There is life to live and to explore." Wonderful owrds of wisdom, Randy.
Sweet Honey in the Rock (Poetry) - 4/9/2008 9:29:57 AM
Outstanding imagery in this offering!!
Lov eTinka
Sweet Honey in the Rock (Poetry) - 4/9/2008 5:30:57 AM
Oh yes,very beautiful writing dear man...as always outstanding work...have a wonderful and safe day Randy...Hugssssssssss,much love to you
Sweet Honey in the Rock (Poetry) - 4/8/2008 11:20:58 PM
Randy, there are so many beautfiul things in this. The imagery...incredible. And just the simple thought of being out in a hammock with a cold beer...makes me wish I was there with you! My favorite line..."Yet I am a stone conquered and cured by the very life that I live" These are my favorite writes of yours...the ones dealing with life and nature. Nobody writes them like you do. Beautiful work.
Sweet Honey in the Rock (Poetry) - 4/8/2008 7:25:08 PM
outside, in a hmmock, with a cold beer--wonderful time, wonderful write
Sweet Honey in the Rock (Poetry) - 4/8/2008 4:38:22 PM
Randy,
Your Heart & Soul Is A Romantic Poet Speaking Into Your Pen.
This Lovely Write Is Special & Endearing.
I am also amazed at the power of Mother Nature Always, as you see in the rock & root. WOW!
Some Hearts Are Stone Yes, and need much Honey & Softness
Lovely Write Randy....
Embrassé
Tweener Days of Spring (Poetry) - 4/7/2008 1:51:12 PM
Tweener... being Brit this is a new word on me! But suddenly I realise what I have always been in life! I like the interleaving of your thoughts and comparisons here, Randy. Truly like the budding of spring. TY Kate xx
Open Me Gently (Poetry) - 4/7/2008 11:40:45 AM
absolutely beautiful! Wow
Tweener Days of Spring (Poetry) - 4/6/2008 7:53:23 PM
tweener...enjoyed your clever usage here, restless for the warmer times myself
Tweener Days of Spring (Poetry) - 4/5/2008 2:55:49 PM
Well written, enjoyed, blessings, Holly
Tweener Days of Spring (Poetry) - 4/5/2008 10:14:29 AM
Very beautiful indeed ,have a wonderful and safe day Randy...HUgssss
Tweener Days of Spring (Poetry) - 4/4/2008 7:52:32 PM
A middle ground, awaiting for a change of season. Lots of meaning in your write. Enjoyed!
Tweener Days of Spring (Poetry) - 4/4/2008 10:50:29 AM
Great write. Keep in mind, although they chill us... Those April showers will bring May flowers and warm weather is just a breath away.
God Bless,
Lew
Tweener Days of Spring (Poetry) - 4/3/2008 10:55:10 PM
I have mentioned in the past that I am a warm weather person...but you are perhaps the only writer that continually makes me appreciate winter. Beautiful, beautiful writing, Randy.
Tweener Days of Spring (Poetry) - 4/3/2008 8:27:37 PM
i like this write!! so well put--and when we are right in the middle of that tweener period!
Tweener Days of Spring (Poetry) - 4/3/2008 4:13:49 PM
Randy,
Sensual Write Of Your Longing & Comforts By Your Fire.
I too am ready for spring. All the rain/snow/thunder/lightening combined confuses me with this mix of seasons is not natural.
Now enjoy your fire for spring is blooming under the bite of winters snow.
Embrassé
Vickie
Tweener Days of Spring (Poetry) - 4/3/2008 3:54:24 PM
Oh, I remember the 'tweener days. . .a restless yearning indeed. Nice work, Randy. Eileen
Open Me Gently (Poetry) - 3/31/2008 3:01:42 PM
Such a beauty this poem is, I can really feel, smell, and taste this poem!! Great job.
Open Me Gently (Poetry) - 3/30/2008 4:11:26 PM
another gorgeous expression from your pen
Open Me Gently (Poetry) - 3/30/2008 9:34:02 AM
oh my goodness Randy, I wrote a similar poem last week,and just posted it about morning glories.;-) Yours is better though, it is far more creative!
Open Me Gently (Poetry) - 3/29/2008 9:31:34 AM
This is stunning work!!
Love Tinka
Open Me Gently (Poetry) - 3/29/2008 12:23:42 AM
Beautiful, sensuous...the imagery like that of a flower in bloom. You brought tears to my eyes with this write of yours.
Open Me Gently (Poetry) - 3/28/2008 8:25:37 PM
a beautifull expression of awakening
Open Me Gently (Poetry) - 3/28/2008 6:13:14 PM
Very nice Randy,stay safe and well...HUgssssss
Open Me Gently (Poetry) - 3/28/2008 5:25:52 PM
Refreshing Beauty, Tender Love! Randy I loved this heartfelt poem.
Christine
Penetrate Me (Poetry) - 3/28/2008 5:00:44 PM
Oh The Exotic Sensual Passions Released In Love!!
This is A Very Sensual Lovely Express of Lovers!
Embrasse'
Vickie
Open Me Gently (Poetry) - 3/28/2008 4:41:14 PM
This Is Sensually Beautiful & Intensely Fragrant My Friend :)
Embrasse'
Vickie
His Father's Tears (Poetry) - 3/28/2008 4:07:59 PM
Your heart pour out to your son in this write. Powerful indeed. I hope he grasp and hold on to the dear lessons in life, most of all listens to the words of his Father, making him proud.
Open Me Gently (Poetry) - 3/28/2008 2:52:19 PM
Beautiful little flowers opening their petal arms to greet the morning light. In a breath the world opens up in color and change is once again apparent, well done...
Be always safe,
Karen
Open Me Gently (Poetry) - 3/28/2008 12:43:11 PM
This is a beautiful description of spring's rebirth and blossoms unfurling and leaves us with the pleasurable sense of nature. Lots of great images. Well done.
His Father's Tears (Poetry) - 3/26/2008 6:44:37 PM
heartfelt from a father to a son...it is hard to let them be who they are...all you can do is love them mask and all
His Father's Tears (Poetry) - 3/26/2008 4:35:10 AM
Oh my,very powerful words dear man,missed ya..as always enjoyed...have a wonderful day Randy...Hugssssss
Luv,
Chanti Lace
His Father's Tears (Poetry) - 3/26/2008 12:30:15 AM
You have touched my heart with this and have brought tears to my eyes.
His Father's Tears (Poetry) - 3/25/2008 7:22:46 PM
what incredible love lies within this write--deeply moving
His Father's Tears (Poetry) - 3/25/2008 3:44:06 PM
This is a touching poem of the power of love. The photo is amazing and true. Eileen
His Father's Tears (Poetry) - 3/25/2008 3:35:29 PM
Beautiful write for your son. The light in the photo is something you are correct.
Tight Jeans (Poetry) - 3/24/2008 4:04:02 PM
you have an amazing attention to detail, a gift of living the moment to its fullest...a pleasure to read
Penetrate Me (Poetry) - 3/24/2008 9:40:32 AM
A penetrivously offering....you penetrated my mind with this one for sure....lol...I am preggies after this read.....ooops could not resist that comment!!!!
You romantic you!!
Love Tinka
Penetrate Me (Poetry) - 3/24/2008 3:52:06 AM
wow--very sensual, erotic and romantic!
Penetrate Me (Poetry) - 3/24/2008 2:43:57 AM
Sexy, sensual, romantic...perfect!
Tight Jeans (Poetry) - 3/23/2008 1:42:57 AM
Teh tighter the better, to hug the curves!
Sexy thoughts throughout, I find breathless Randy Rand!
I have missed many I see, I will park my tight jean fanny right here and read a few more!
From the steam to the jeans and all the hundreds of
movements in between, I will forever be blessed to watch
this tight jeans ritual played out over and over just for me.
In tight jeans or nothing at all, you look lovely wearing it all. An amazing play on words! I hear the song playing in my mind!
WOW! To be watched by YOU! the inspiration that grew...
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Shexooo
STay Positive!
STay Strong!
The Erection of Spring (Poetry) - 3/23/2008 1:34:44 AM
The sensuous imageries SCREAMS out peacefully!
What a blessing of a NEW Spring!
Thank YOU Randy Rand, I enjoyed!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Shexooo
STay Positive!
STay STrong!
May Your spirit enjoy the erection of Spring! It's all it's stunning allurement!
On the Potter's Wheel (Poetry) - 3/23/2008 1:29:12 AM
YOur creativeness leaves me in AWE Randy Rand!
His perfections can never be molded!
I enjoyed this poem, your heart in IT and your style crafting IT!
Amazing!
HaPPY! EASTER! to you and yours from our HOME!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Shexooo
STay Positive!
STay Strong!
On the Potter's Wheel (Poetry) - 3/22/2008 9:01:58 PM
a beautiful way to look at how we go about the process of becoming
On the Potter's Wheel (Poetry) - 3/22/2008 9:13:59 AM
Most beautiful offering....by far one of your finest!!
Love Tinka
The Erection of Spring (Poetry) - 3/22/2008 8:05:29 AM
Most stunning piece you offered here!!
Love Tinka
On the Potter's Wheel (Poetry) - 3/21/2008 11:57:04 PM
Truly, truly beautiful.No other way to describe it.
On the Potter's Wheel (Poetry) - 3/21/2008 6:50:05 PM
A wonderful write Randy, we are all a work in the making that is true.
On the Potter's Wheel (Poetry) - 3/21/2008 3:59:35 PM
Wow... What a superbly crafted bit of poetry to carry this beautiful message.
Well done!
Cryssa
On the Potter's Wheel (Poetry) - 3/21/2008 3:11:34 PM
RAB,
This Is An Excellent Express.
And Your Words Depict The Still Thriving Reality of This Truth Still Today.
Embrasse'
Vickie
On the Potter's Wheel (Poetry) - 3/21/2008 3:00:33 PM
He has made a fine vessel of you, to share the drink of his love!
Happy Easter! Jasmin Horst
The Erection of Spring (Poetry) - 3/21/2008 8:42:58 AM
"The Erection of Spring" sings the birthings of new life.
Tender and yet strong shafts efface then shoot from the "...mother's earth..." beautiful blessings for us all to nurture and adore.
RB, I simply loved this and the delicacies held within.
Spring blessings to you,
~Gwendolyn
The Erection of Spring (Poetry) - 3/21/2008 12:28:23 AM
Sensual, beautiful. One of the things I like so much about your poetry, is the imagery.
The Erection of Spring (Poetry) - 3/20/2008 5:24:18 PM
love the metaphoric way you did this--pretty darn clever and senual as well!
In the Essence of Her Love (Poetry) - 3/20/2008 2:52:22 PM
Randy,
"Her smile captured my heart from the first time I tasted
her lips.
Her eyes sought out herself in me. Her notion of love
is wrapped around the heart strings of his soul."
Breathless Passioned Poet! Excellent Write!
Embrasse'
Vickie
In Her Teddy (Poetry) - 3/20/2008 2:50:02 PM
Hello Randy,
Only A Man Of Passion For A Woman Can See These Things We Do.
You Are A Gem Of A Romantic Poet In Your Eloquently Detailed
Recollections Of Her Ritual. This Is Truely A Very Loving & Beautiful Write My Friend.
Embrasse'
Vickie
The Erection of Spring (Poetry) - 3/20/2008 2:42:03 PM
Oh, I like this poem! The lushness and sensuality of nature are juxtaposed with our own spring fever! Neatly composed, Randy.
Tight Jeans (Poetry) - 3/20/2008 11:22:50 AM
Very creative..and sexy!!
Love tinka
Tight Jeans (Poetry) - 3/20/2008 6:24:40 AM
Hmmmmm.............on going writes. Very exciting poem. Hope your girl can breathe in those tight fitting jeans. Keep up the writing!
Tight Jeans (Poetry) - 3/19/2008 12:50:17 AM
Sexy write, Randy! Enjoyed it!
Tight Jeans (Poetry) - 3/18/2008 7:20:17 PM
very sexy!! i love this!
Tight Jeans (Poetry) - 3/18/2008 5:11:33 PM
Steamen hot stuff, great write!
Tight Jeans (Poetry) - 3/18/2008 4:04:30 PM
I love your poem. :-)
Tori
Tight Jeans (Poetry) - 3/18/2008 1:53:14 PM
Yeaaaaa,I also love tight very tight jeans(Giggles) very nice indeed Rb..stay safe and well,Happy Easter Randy...Hugssssss
Am I Still Pretty (Poetry) - 3/9/2008 1:52:00 PM
And what a husbandman you are! Any wilting flower would be standing ten feet tall by the end of this fabulous ode and outpouring of passion and devotion. Beautifully sustained metaphor here which reaches deeper and deeper with each succeeding line. "There is still thunder in your being and lightning in your touch" - this is a very powerful and gorgeous phrase! Thank you, Randy. Super stuff! :)) xx
Am I Still Pretty (Poetry) - 3/8/2008 10:26:31 AM
how could her self esteem be lacking with words like this floating around her...very nice display of compassion
To Ponder a Minute (Poetry) - 3/8/2008 8:56:49 AM
I've been mesmerized (as your lines state) by time of a day, and how fast or slow they tick away!
We must appreciate the small and BIG blessings of time, that we allowed to dine!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Lady Shexooo
STay Positive!
STay Strong!
Every minute an appreciative second of time released! An essence...
In the Essence of Her Love (Poetry) - 3/8/2008 8:50:05 AM
WOW! This is EXQUISITE! Randy RAnd!
Your words usage stuns my soul!
A love transferred to one another, making ONE!
A divine unity
of two souls expressed lovingly!
Write On! Master Rand!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Lady Sheoxooo
STay POsitive!
I feel such a release of appreciation through your lines! from the deep center of your kind sweet and appreciative heart!
In Her Teddy (Poetry) - 3/8/2008 8:43:43 AM
Ahhh, I do that too, spray parfum on my straps of my teddy, where the fingers TOUCH so lovingly!
Exquisite poem Randy Rand! I can see you sitting on the a seat, drinking up (pun intended) the lovely fresh fragrant view in front of you! and writing down those appreciative feelings!
And then....
Write On!
A treasured gem I will savor!!!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Lady Sweet Shexooo
STay Positive!
STay STrong!
Am I Still Pretty (Poetry) - 3/8/2008 8:39:49 AM
Christmas Cactus- I had one! I miss it's beauty!
What an encapsulated stunning poem Randy Rand!
I most enjoyed your frilly loving touches of femininity to a a beautiful awesome unique plant! and that touch of sensuousness!
Write On!
Who said you lost that literary touch! Not "I"
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Lady Sweet Shexooo
STay Positive!
STay STrong!
Am I Still Pretty (Poetry) - 3/8/2008 8:14:47 AM
A BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN PIECE
TANKS FOR SHARING
PEACE BE WITH YOU
WILLIAM
Am I Still Pretty (Poetry) - 3/7/2008 3:10:07 PM
I so get this one! Well written of course as all the rest. Thank you
Am I Still Pretty (Poetry) - 3/7/2008 12:54:56 PM
this is a lovely statement of long lasting love
Am I Still Pretty (Poetry) - 3/7/2008 11:31:48 AM
Beautiful poem--true beauty is in the eyes of the beholder.
Am I Still Pretty (Poetry) - 3/7/2008 9:54:27 AM
A beautiful and romantic write.
God Bless,
Lew
Am I Still Pretty (Poetry) - 3/7/2008 9:28:02 AM
Oh my,so beautiful are your words and so touching to the mind,heart and soul.....stay safe and well sweet Randy..have a wonderful day OK..Hugssss
Luv,
CL
Am I Still Pretty (Poetry) - 3/7/2008 9:07:01 AM
Romantic, dreamy, and beautiful. A Valentine! Eileen
In Her Teddy (Poetry) - 3/7/2008 5:03:17 AM
The sensual arms of romance beautifully embraced in each line!
Exquisite!
Selene
In Her Teddy (Poetry) - 3/5/2008 4:01:49 PM
Oh my,how beautfiul this is Randy,missed ya,I hope you enjoy my new poem...stay safe and well...Hugsss
Luv,
CL
In Her Teddy (Poetry) - 3/5/2008 2:50:07 PM
beautiful moments from your goddess
In Her Teddy (Poetry) - 3/5/2008 2:13:45 PM
wonderful metaphores here--i really enjoyed it
In Her Teddy (Poetry) - 3/5/2008 12:19:43 PM
Wonderful offering!!
Love Tinka
In Her Teddy (Poetry) - 3/5/2008 10:37:26 AM
Well inspired write. Lady J
To Ponder a Minute (Poetry) - 2/25/2008 4:19:01 PM
tick-tock, a minute can mean a life-time, great job!
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