Recent Reviews for John T Banasiewicz Jr
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Weekend of Lover’s Renewal (Short Story) - 11/24/2004 10:37:10 PM
Fantastic story that could be turned into novel. I think you have what it takes to write stories. Keep doing it!
Happy Thanksgiving
Weekend of Lover’s Renewal (Short Story) - 11/19/2004 2:56:58 PM
This was a sweet, loving story and you told it beautifully, John. You really should explore writing more short stories.
Debbie
Weekend of Lover’s Renewal (Short Story) - 11/15/2004 1:00:05 PM
you ought to do more stories, tommy; i think you are good at it! do check out some of mine; think you may find some to your enjoyment! (i am known as the story queen here; have written nearly 1,400 of those little suckers! LOL) well done; enjoyed~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Weekend of Lover’s Renewal (Short Story) - 11/14/2004 4:10:53 AM
Although I think that dialogue should play an important part of most short stories, in some it just isn't needed. This is one such story. Your narrative was not dull or insipid, rather it gently pulled the reader along with the story in a benign, loving way. I neither became bored, (length had a little to do with that) or hurried with this very nicely-written love story.
Luncheon Mystery (Short Story) - 11/7/2004 10:25:45 AM
Wonderful little story here John! Enjoyed the read & thank you for this offering.
Peace to you & yours!
Luncheon Mystery (Short Story) - 9/1/2004 3:44:58 AM
Tommy, this is an excellent romantic story illustrating that even during a violent thunderstorm, love has the ability to shelter and comfort lovers and shed a brilliant glow it its aftermath. I liked how you combined the storm within their passion shared in this piece my friend. Thank you for sharing it.
Luncheon Mystery (Short Story) - 7/11/2004 5:15:41 AM
i like this
Luncheon Mystery (Short Story) - 6/4/2004 6:54:50 PM
To say so much in so little time - a true rare talent. More more! What happens next? (grin)
Monette
Luncheon Mystery (Short Story) - 5/24/2004 3:41:43 AM
Finesse. This is a fabulous, romantic write. Two thumbs up!
Luncheon Mystery (Short Story) - 5/10/2004 4:42:01 AM
Love the way you made the storm a part of the passion and love a part of the discovery of sunshine after a storm. Wonderfully done!
Debbie
Luncheon Mystery (Short Story) - 4/14/2004 8:38:48 PM
Bravo! A wonderful read over a lunch......two such lucky people!
Welcome to AuthorsDen!
~Rose~
Old Man’s Final Days (Poetry) - 4/16/2009 7:04:49 PM
I never thought grey was a problem. In fact in my 20s and 30s I used to try and make myself look older by putting frown lines on my forehead. To be honest I think you are being a bit self indulgent. In my experience the aging process is not something to regret but part of nature's cycle. I'm just relieved I wake up every morning. I have just passed my 74 th year.
Standing Proud Salute (Poetry) - 11/21/2008 10:56:28 AM
Dear John,
A wonderful poem.
GOD Bless you for remembering!
John Michael Domino
USAF Major (ret.)
Come visit me sometime!
Mr. “C” Finds Your Real Friends (Poetry) - 10/1/2008 10:02:09 PM
Yes!
Old Man’s Final Days (Poetry) - 7/22/2008 10:34:07 PM
Thanks for sharing this John, good to find I'm not alone in my thoughts of growing older. My head is balding in the back and I know I will not live beyond the year 2078 (most likely) but I do know I am Christ's, so that helps. Yes, love while we can!!
-in Christ, because of the cross, -Zach
Old Man’s Final Days (Poetry) - 6/6/2008 2:33:50 PM
Making the most of our finals days is easy. Just do each day a little more than the day before and grow in knowledge by reading more and viewing the world through rose colored glasses and taking the good along with the bad. Join us all in our old age and we will have an old agers club. You are only as old as you feel anyway.
Love's Bloom (Poetry) - 5/15/2008 6:14:39 AM
Keeping true alive needs work and lots of it. Being together and never having to say I'm sorry. Giving each other space but coming together when needed. Staying and hoping for the best in the future together and always a fine day to be had.
Who Are We (Poetry) - 5/15/2008 6:13:05 AM
So great you can talk about it. Many cannot still. Memorial Day is coming up for all vets to be thanked and remembered with care.
Passionate Whispers From A Distance (Poetry) - 5/15/2008 6:11:25 AM
Take care of her precious body and love her always. The dream is so realistic you have to have found true love.
Passionate Whispers From A Distance (Poetry) - 2/16/2008 10:13:20 AM
Is there a place like this? I want to go there. Great pen John. We need to hear more.
Ingeborg
August Lust (Poetry) - 2/7/2008 8:48:36 PM
The imagery is quite powerful, lending itself to the potent storytelling effort by the author. Wonderful descriptive tale of love.
Old Man’s Final Days (Poetry) - 2/7/2008 8:46:15 PM
The flow, meter and word choices of this poem are quite appealing. However, the topic is rather somber. It is a good reminder to the rest of us that no day is promised and we must make the best use of all the time that is given to us.
Majestic Mermaid (Poetry) - 2/5/2008 12:42:52 PM
Fantastic fantasy? Uh, about those scales ... ???
Sandy
Old Man’s Final Days (Poetry) - 1/11/2008 11:23:36 AM
Wonderful thoughts that are appreciated more when shared. Yes, I'm back!
Love,
Sandy
Majestic Mermaid (Poetry) - 6/11/2007 3:24:34 PM
I love old fashioned writings like these, so romantic.
Rose
Passionate Whispers From A Distance (Poetry) - 5/29/2007 11:25:48 PM
Truly Beautiful! Passionate and full of Longing!
A gem to treasure!
WArmly,WArrior Spirit Lady Sheeeoox
BE SAFE!
STay Positive!
Old Man’s Final Days (Poetry) - 4/3/2007 3:34:26 PM
THIS IS ALL HEART FELT AND I ALWAYS ENJOY POEMS FROM THE HEART NO MATTER WHAT IT IS ABOUT.
Canvas of Abuse (Poetry) - 3/11/2007 5:08:37 AM
This is good and so sad, but true. I read an article somewhere, that children who are killed by a parent, that as a rule it wasn't deliberate. It was a disiplining that got 'out of hand.' As Ann Landers once said: To understand all, is to forgive all.
Passionate Whispers From A Distance (Poetry) - 1/3/2007 8:32:20 AM
Ok, just took a breath, ... whew, I think I'll be ok.
Old Man’s Final Days (Poetry) - 12/21/2006 11:40:50 AM
Wonderful but sad poem.
Hope you are doing well.
Wishing you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year 2007.
Amira
Old Man’s Final Days (Poetry) - 11/3/2006 11:19:40 AM
indeed..ditto!
exceptional work John!
vesna:)
Old Man’s Final Days (Poetry) - 10/27/2006 9:50:00 AM
Beautiful offering John!!
Love Tinka
Old Man’s Final Days (Poetry) - 10/26/2006 4:52:03 AM
Listening to God’s earthly creatures
Waking to the sun’s warmth
Growing older with them
Wondering when I won’t feel this warmth
I seem to think about that more and more these days myself.
And very nice to see you posting, John.
Old Man’s Final Days (Poetry) - 10/25/2006 10:31:23 PM
John
I read it and I hear you,
When we arrive at our age
that's all I think about
But wish to spend as much more time
With my beautiful granddaughters
And handsome grandsons
The end
Is never far within my thoughts
Thank you for shring your wisdom
and this outstanding poetry.
Peace be with you
William
Kentucky Harvest (Poetry) - 10/11/2006 7:24:35 PM
Very good write...I too am from Kentucky and remain here today...we moved to Ohio when I was a small child, but moved back shortly thereafter, I love my heritage and was raised with much hard work in the garden, house, barn and this list could go on and on. But I'm not going to complain because I have a farm today, and I love working it. I relate well to your writing...glad I checked your page out feel free to visit my page I think you'll find that we have many things in common. I am from Clay County/Manchester Kentucky where I still reside....
Blessings to you from Ky.
Joyce Bowling
August Lust (Poetry) - 7/26/2006 2:38:16 AM
What a delicious setting..
Exceptional write..enjoyed..
Vesna
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