Recent Reviews for Julie Palella
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MacGregor's Curse (Book) - 9/14/2008 8:24:57 AM
OOOhh sorry dear
But there is only one lake in Scotland ...lake Monteith. Every other one is a Loch pronounced Law..gh
Miller
Soul Survivor (Book) - 1/2/2008 9:04:59 PM
Julie,
Just a few points of note.
In the first paragraph, you state that Haley is "narrowing her eyes through the windshield." What is being narrowed here is her gaze not her eyes.
In the second paragraph you describe what a "cell" is, yet your subject in the previous sentence does not refer to it. It's not clear what this cell is.
In the same paragraph you write, "Like a million water balloons slamming down at once, [the rain hit so hard that] the windshield wipers [had to be kept] on full speed and still couldn’t keep up." What is slamming down here? The rain not the windshield wipers.
Attention to detail in one's writing is a key to success. May you garner all the success from writing that you desire. God bless.
Jeff
Whispers in the Everglades (Short Story) - 9/30/2008 5:34:39 AM
Hi Karin,
Excellent! I really like your style!
My wife and I also live in S Florida. The sunsets are among my favorite things. You have inspired me to write a poem about sunsets.
Check it out on my website this afternoon.
Blessings,
Giovanni
Whispers in the Everglades (Short Story) - 6/18/2008 10:51:05 AM
I loved this story! Excellent,and well written!
Whispers in the Everglades (Short Story) - 8/31/2007 11:29:44 AM
Great story:)
There's is far more to this world than meets the eyes...
Or should I say, some eyes:)
Whispers in the Everglades (Short Story) - 7/18/2007 8:51:43 AM
Excellent story! You add the paranormal and make it totally beliveable, not an easy thing to do.
Larry H
Whispers in the Everglades (Short Story) - 10/29/2006 1:31:23 AM
Very good, Julie. Braw in fact. Enjoyed. kenny
Whispers in the Everglades (Short Story) - 6/23/2006 10:16:39 PM
OMG Julie, this is so scary it sent chills down my back. The plot, the scenery, the dialogue and how you have woven it all together with your marvelous writing skills, make this a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing this with us.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & (((HUGS))) Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
Whispers in the Everglades (Short Story) - 1/13/2006 11:42:16 AM
Julie,
Very impressive writing.
Whispers in the Everglades (Short Story) - 12/30/2004 7:47:08 PM
Now this is a good story and I said that there were many things about our old house that troubled me. It finally died on May 15, 1997 and this story reminds me about some things I have also seen and heard. But we moved the spot from the old one. There is much about the everglades that comes out. Thanks for a good mystery story.
Local Author (Article) - 9/17/2007 3:21:20 PM
The layout looks great! However, would you mind sharing some specific info? For example: Did you recoup your entire investment with book sales? Which day of the week was it placed in the paper? Which section? Was the book shown in color? How many lines did you use? What was the total cost? Regards ... Reginald V. Johnson
Local Author (Article) - 3/30/2005 4:33:32 PM
Nicely done. Best wishes on your book.
M.Rose
Local Author (Article) - 3/30/2005 5:06:45 AM
well done
Local Author (Article) - 3/12/2005 7:15:39 AM
COngratulations...BHUWAN!!!!
Local Author (Article) - 12/12/2004 6:43:04 PM
That local newspaper is a Wonderful idea.! Reaches so many that would not really know or take time or may never know about. Super Idea! The book sounds like a no putting down sounds exciting and frightening at the same time.
Thank You for this.
Have a smilin' day. everyday!
Tracey
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