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Recent Reviews for Josephine M Bohen
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Arrayed Such As These (Book) - 10/14/2005 9:07:16 PM
Congratz on your publication....my "Orange" friend!!
Love Tinka
Arrayed Such As These (Book) - 10/14/2005 4:50:56 PM
Congratulations on the publication of your new book. All the best for a continued success.
Felix
River Magic A Photographic Symphony (Book) - 10/11/2005 12:35:32 PM
Josie,
Is this THE Josie, who's been missed? Gad, it's good to see you...congratulations on the book! If I ever get any money, I'll definately be buying a copy of this one.
Congratulations--
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
A Letter for Julie (Short Story) - 1/7/2004 8:21:36 PM
DEEP SHIT CUZ.. AMAZING AND INTERESTING STUFF!!!!!!
A Letter to John Steinbeck (Short Story) - 12/15/2003 1:45:54 PM
(((josie)))
an outstanding, well done tribute to one of my favorite authors--by one of my favorite poets :)
BRAVA, dear friend, and happy holiday to you and your family
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
A Letter for Julie (Short Story) - 5/13/2003 7:48:50 AM
Josefina,
I cannot share the level nor impact this powerful write had upon my heart accept to confess this, I wept! And wished That I had been so lucky as Julie, to have you as she did and does. This was good childlike, this was very good sigh....For what its worth, this impressed me a great deal, a great deal indeed! Thank you for sharing such a grand heart undressed...
Sincerely,
Rodney Evan Bohen
A Letter to John Steinbeck (Short Story) - 5/7/2003 8:44:52 PM
Josie,
This is brilliant, soft and endearing, tis a tribute all men would love to lay claim too,Tis a tribute That indeed would have touched Johns heart, and does indeed even now.
A grander tribute written in such innocence Ive seldom seen! the ground and vinyard where you tilled the earth this day poetess was good and fertile ground indeed! It shall reward you as it has me, review this piece and ground often, for it is one of your grandest moments in time!
I adored this piece, it took my breath away, it is a damn fine piece! Id submit it to a few magazines! Great piece cant say enough! youd make a spicy columnist you would!
Rodney Evan Bohen
A Letter for Julie (Short Story) - 4/18/2003 3:37:14 PM
i also need to write something like this to my sisters. i think it is so necessary, our lives and families are so far apart in these trying and lonely days. poignant, and full of passion and love. thank you for sharing this gem.
A Letter to John Steinbeck (Short Story) - 4/18/2003 3:33:56 PM
he will indeed catch them. what a fitting and wonderful tribute to a great writer, the product of his times, and environment. well done.
A Letter to John Steinbeck (Short Story) - 4/17/2003 7:20:57 AM
May your dreams come true and the Grapes of Wrath never visit your doorsteps. Good letter to a lot of people's hero.
A Letter to John Steinbeck (Short Story) - 3/8/2003 4:55:26 PM
Funny you should write about Steinbeck Josie; my father-in-law worked with Steinbeck on a project before Grapes of Wrath was written. A man of words to be admired; A woman of words to be read!
A Letter to John Steinbeck (Short Story) - 3/3/2003 7:09:46 PM
Ha, ha, ha!!! I'm not a Steinbeck fan but the letter was passionate and poignant. A wonderful salute to possibly your favorite writer.
A Letter to John Steinbeck (Short Story) - 12/6/2002 9:13:50 AM
nice letter you wrote to john! thanks for sharing! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
A Letter to John Steinbeck (Short Story) - 12/5/2002 11:53:08 AM
a lovely letter
I would not be surprised if he answers you
A Letter for Julie (Short Story) - 11/18/2002 5:12:35 PM
moving work
A Letter for Julie (Short Story) - 11/15/2002 12:17:17 AM
The honesty reminds me of Stephen King, and i like the languid flow of words. Great stuff.
A Letter for Julie (Short Story) - 11/2/2002 12:29:14 PM
You are a very special woman, Josie...and your sis is lucky to have you. A beautiful recollection in your memoirs here. I love the way you think.
Amor
A Letter for Julie (Short Story) - 10/10/2002 4:35:01 PM
Thank you! I have a little sister also...miss her lots and now much more...as I reach for the phone to call her.
A Letter for Julie (Short Story) - 10/8/2002 1:45:51 PM
such a beautiful, heartfelt tribute!! well done!!
A Letter for Julie (Short Story) - 9/26/2002 9:25:26 AM
what a wonderful story. your mom sounds like a wnderfully dedicated woman. thank you for sharing such a beautiful story
A Letter for Julie (Short Story) - 6/16/2002 11:10:50 AM
Your sister is lucky to have a big sister that loves her so much. I am sure she does know how loved she is! I enjoyed this letter you wrote.
Two things I want to comment on:
1. In this sentence, "Goes around comes around, is a true law of nature," I think you wanted to say........What goes around...
2. I think if you paragraphed this letter it would help it to be even better.
A Letter for Julie (Short Story) - 6/3/2002 10:54:58 AM
Be certain to keep a hard copy of this for your sister....beautifully written.
Mad Money (Article) - 1/7/2004 8:14:19 PM
What???
Mad Money (Article) - 10/10/2003 8:48:31 PM
Jose,
May I say I find this piece a brilliant write!
You have unearthed an unsettleing truth seldom
probed.If hatred accompanies the dollar, perhaps
it should be revisted indeed! Brave, courageous
and enlightening piece, I salute you....
Sincerely,
Rodney Evan Bohen
From O'Brien (Poetry) - 5/3/2011 11:23:31 PM
When I read the title I thought this was gonna be about Conan...nevermind...good read. :-)
Tom
Princess (Poetry) - 2/12/2011 2:58:17 PM
LOVELY
art (Poetry) - 8/22/2008 6:40:44 AM
Josephine...
Only a true artist can know such mysteries related to the canvas
You lass are both, poetess & artist.
The gallery awaits more.
writers write & painters paint.
Sincerely.
Rodney
2 or 3am (Poetry) - 9/6/2007 4:14:12 PM
Well, I'm glad my cell does the change for me...even after the law changed the time to change the, uh, time...
Tom
pipe dreams (Poetry) - 8/21/2006 7:24:34 AM
Ah, your dedication page sounds like the Who's Who of Authors Den.
Blessings on your dreams of being published, Josephine!
pipe dreams (Poetry) - 4/6/2006 8:36:46 PM
Josie,
How did I miss this one??????????? Thank you for putting me on your dedication page; wish we'd see more of you. Miss you when you're not here! An excellent write and dream, keep reaching!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
art (Poetry) - 10/3/2005 4:05:22 AM
great poem: your views about about art seem to be about subjectivity and perhaps a loss of innocence in the process..Anne pawlak.
Flight of Dreams (Poetry) - 7/11/2005 9:43:50 AM
Your thoughts give wing to beautiful poetry..well done!
vesna*
Best Friends For Life (Poetry) - 5/13/2005 9:40:27 AM
fantastic!!!
At The Beach (Poetry) - 12/21/2004 8:09:04 AM
I really wasn't sure what to expect from the title of this piece but it ended up being quite a nice surprise. Nice Work :)
Best Friends For Life (Poetry) - 7/28/2004 2:13:11 AM
Nothing like a good hug with no strings attached - could only be a sister :0) I enjoyed this write Josie. Susan
Best Friends For Life (Poetry) - 7/11/2004 7:52:51 PM
Josie,
Keep it coming................
Rod
Best Friends For Life (Poetry) - 7/5/2004 12:32:46 PM
nicely expressed..
Best Friends For Life (Poetry) - 7/1/2004 5:56:30 PM
aaawwweeeee...this is beautiful work from you,I loved it!
Best Friends For Life (Poetry) - 5/22/2004 12:41:14 PM
(((josie)))
excellent, vivid, multi-layered emotional write--well done!
i've missed you
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Best Friends For Life (Poetry) - 5/22/2004 8:18:56 AM
good one, josie! well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Best Friends For Life (Poetry) - 5/22/2004 5:19:21 AM
Well written Josie!!
Love Tinka
Best Friends For Life (Poetry) - 5/22/2004 12:20:56 AM
Well captured, Erin. Well done!
Carmen :-)
Flight of Dreams (Poetry) - 5/19/2004 9:32:14 PM
Josephine, this is a delightful poem :0)
Flight of Dreams (Poetry) - 4/25/2004 2:29:34 PM
"no doubt that this is real
that I was always meant
for
this
and I awake"
And upon awakening you find that your reality is even better than the Dream you so love.
Blessings,
Joseph
Flight of Dreams (Poetry) - 4/25/2004 2:07:00 PM
(((josie)))
i love this uplifting write and attitude--good for you! most excellent!
(((((HUGS))))) and love, karla. :)
Flight of Dreams (Poetry) - 4/25/2004 11:31:02 AM
perfect!!!
Flight of Dreams (Poetry) - 4/25/2004 7:39:33 AM
Beautiful poem Josie!!
Love Tinka
Flight of Dreams (Poetry) - 4/25/2004 7:27:32 AM
This poem rocks!
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
Flight of Dreams (Poetry) - 4/25/2004 2:46:44 AM
This poem took off and just kept soaring. Great poem.
Flight of Dreams (Poetry) - 4/25/2004 12:48:03 AM
I've had those kind of dreams.
Thanks for the memory.
Awesome poem.
Flight of Dreams (Poetry) - 4/24/2004 11:49:19 PM
Josefina,
Utterly charming and dreamlike,
Woven in simplicity,
babies breath undone....
Lady Peg said it all!
Yes you can sweet spirit, yes you can...
Good to see you back Lass..
Rodney Evan Bohen
and I dream of flying
pure clear crisp night
turning up arms spread
stars
and I soar dipping and laughing
knowing I can go anywhere
do
anything
and there is no fear
Flight of Dreams (Poetry) - 4/24/2004 11:09:51 PM
Great poem! I like the way you went into it, as if in mid stream -- in the middle of a thought. There is a carefree flow to it, giving the impression of flying -- playful drifting. Good way to wake up. Good job!
Carmen :-)
Flight of Dreams (Poetry) - 4/24/2004 10:47:26 PM
Oh, I love this! It's so happy, so carefree, so uplifting... Just wonderful! Thank you.
Flight of Dreams (Poetry) - 4/24/2004 8:34:33 PM
I love the feel of this verses flight
"and I awake
with the cool wind on my face
the touch of angels
in my heart
holding me up
affirming
yes little one
you can
you most certainly
can"
YES YOU CAN...
This is beautiful Josephine!
Princess (Poetry) - 4/24/2004 8:01:54 PM
Josefina,
That is some very pretty writing young lady....
Sincerely,
Rodney Evan Bohen
Princess (Poetry) - 4/23/2004 9:26:17 PM
Beautiful free verse.
Princess (Poetry) - 4/23/2004 6:02:48 PM
Exquisite work Josephina!
~Joseph
Princess (Poetry) - 4/23/2004 4:04:00 PM
Utterly beautiful Josie!!
Loveeeeee your orange friend!!
Tinka
Princess (Poetry) - 4/23/2004 9:21:10 AM
So sweet and tender. Just beautiful, Josie.
Princess (Poetry) - 4/23/2004 8:55:21 AM
I have missed you too, Josie! It is so good to see you back here!
Wonderful write! Thanks for sharing!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Princess (Poetry) - 4/23/2004 8:44:37 AM
(((josie)))
o, how i've missed you, sweetie
this poem is a healing balm to my troubled soul--so peaceful and beautifully written
welcome back
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Tiny Whisper Tick (Poetry) - 4/1/2004 7:50:13 AM
Josefina,
Charming.....................
Rod
Fancy That an Artist (Poetry) - 2/11/2004 5:13:29 PM
fancy that indeed
the artist show through
Tiny Whisper Tick (Poetry) - 2/11/2004 5:11:42 PM
very warm
Tiny Whisper Tick (Poetry) - 2/11/2004 9:37:36 AM
(((josie)))
my friend, it is so nice to see you back where you belong
a beautiful write that evokes such pleasant feelings--thanks for the memory jog :)
((((((HUGS)))))) and love, karla. :)
Tiny Whisper Tick (Poetry) - 2/10/2004 9:29:44 PM
How, indeed. What a wonderful nostalgic write. Enjoyed this much, thank you.
Fancy That an Artist (Poetry) - 2/6/2004 11:46:24 PM
"an artist
sees deep within to hidden recesses that few others dare to trod"
Loved this. Thank you.
Fancy That an Artist (Poetry) - 2/3/2004 10:33:12 AM
Ya fancy what ya fancy, and ain't nothin' wrong with that! ;)
Rodd
Fancy That an Artist (Poetry) - 1/22/2004 3:57:22 PM
Fancy that....
Rod
High Shelf (Poetry) - 1/21/2004 8:42:23 AM
Josie,
it was then that I knew
words were my destiny
I shared this revelation
and she said that I could do anything
I'm just beginning
to believe
and realize
the reawakening
of the dream
of the typewriter
on the high shelf
They ARE your destiny, and yes, you can!
Believe on.....
Rod
Fancy That an Artist (Poetry) - 1/20/2004 2:05:49 PM
*screaming* JOSIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!
i have missed you soooooooooo much...am glad to see you're back where you belong
you haven't lost your touch--wonderful write
new name? :)
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
Fancy That an Artist (Poetry) - 1/20/2004 6:54:26 AM
Very well written Josie!!
And the new last name???
Am I losing my bearings or what...please help me out here.....I am totally confuuuuuuus!!
Love Tinka
Fancy That an Artist (Poetry) - 1/20/2004 4:45:59 AM
faraway looks that cause consternation to the seeing soul
an artist looks to the beauty
sees the mix of color in a rainbow
bows deeply to a sunset <--Love that part Josie
A beautifully penned piece.....Great to see you.....And your last name suits you :)
Ty, Dani
Fancy That an Artist (Poetry) - 1/20/2004 2:04:26 AM
I like to believe that artists can see into the soul and offer their knowledge in celebration. Thanks for these good, deep thoughts.
From O'Brien (Poetry) - 1/7/2004 11:45:22 AM
the best to all of you
From O'Brien (Poetry) - 12/27/2003 11:45:20 PM
very nice write
excellent
From O'Brien (Poetry) - 12/27/2003 2:04:15 PM
Josie a truly wonderful deep sentimental write that just reaches deep and out!
I shall miss you!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
From O'Brien (Poetry) - 12/27/2003 1:41:14 AM
Beautiful Sad piece of work, Josefina.
Amor
From O'Brien (Poetry) - 12/24/2003 7:44:59 PM
Wonderful and excellent poem
Happy Holidays Sweet josie.
Peg
From O'Brien (Poetry) - 12/23/2003 11:51:20 PM
I say people need to stay together for the sake of statistics.
From O'Brien (Poetry) - 12/23/2003 2:44:40 PM
(((josie)))
heartbreaking, beautiful, haunting write--BRAVA, dear friend
merry christmas to you and yours--and a safe, healthy, inspired new year
((((HUGS)))) and love,
karla. :)
From O'Brien (Poetry) - 12/23/2003 12:54:41 PM
Very well written Piece Josie!!
Merry Chrisrmas to you and your family!!
Love Tinka
From O'Brien (Poetry) - 12/23/2003 12:49:30 PM
excelllent write, josie; so glad to see you here again! have a wonderful christmas and a happy, blessed new year's! (((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
Exit (Poetry) - 12/13/2003 7:49:56 AM
Ah, Marketing... "marketing knows the weakness"
As one who has studied marketing, this line is bang-on. It's ALL in the marketing. Excellent write! So well expressed.
I wish you simple blessings this season,
Tami
Gold Coin (Poetry) - 12/13/2003 7:39:37 AM
Josie,
When I read your work, I find it difficult to find adequate words. So much of what you write moves me within. This is incredible. Thank you!
Tami
Sierra Nevada Sunset (Poetry) - 12/13/2003 7:32:18 AM
Josie,
Wow. Oh my gosh, Wow! This is a Masterpiece, pure and simple. So very many wonderful lines in this. Already, as I type, I want to be reading this again and again. (And already, I am inspired to write!) Thank you so much for sharing this gem.
Tami
Exit (Poetry) - 11/28/2003 7:32:21 AM
This is brilliant Josephine!
~Joseph
Exit (Poetry) - 11/26/2003 8:32:36 PM
Have a wonderful Thanksgiving!
Exit (Poetry) - 11/25/2003 9:39:12 PM
poetic aroma at its best!
Exit (Poetry) - 11/25/2003 3:15:27 PM
(((josie)))
gotta have my java WHAT AM I SAYING??? i don't DRINK coffee...now hot tea...YUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! gotta have that! :)
i adore this write--when your mind is on one thing, nothing can dissuade you LOL
(((HUGS))) and drink a cup for me LOL
karla. *HAPPY THANKSGIVING*
Exit (Poetry) - 11/25/2003 12:32:43 PM
Good one Josie!!
Love Tinka
Exit (Poetry) - 11/25/2003 12:06:51 PM
Great write, Josie! A piece of life in action. We all feel like this at one time or another.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Exit (Poetry) - 11/25/2003 12:06:46 PM
but josie, when you get hooked on that special coffee, there is no other like it. i spend 10 a week on bread company coffee wheni have every specialty coffee maker possible in my kitchen. go figure. but your words are right on...i'd add more but i have to go shopping
Exit (Poetry) - 11/25/2003 12:01:06 PM
good write, josie; well done! always enjoy your works! (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D Happy Thanksgiving Day; hope it's not a Turkey! LOL
Gold Coin (Poetry) - 11/23/2003 4:36:47 PM
always look for the coin that lands on its edge...
really well written poem of the perplexity of life...
Gold Coin (Poetry) - 11/22/2003 3:39:58 AM
Hi, loved this one.
Gold Coin (Poetry) - 11/21/2003 1:52:31 PM
((((josie))))
poignant and intensely felt--beautifully written--another keeper *BRAVA, dear friend*
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
Gold Coin (Poetry) - 11/21/2003 11:52:20 AM
fine write Josie!!
Love Tinka
Gold Coin (Poetry) - 11/21/2003 11:44:28 AM
Josie,
Brilliant...............
Rodney Evan Bohen
Gold Coin (Poetry) - 11/21/2003 10:03:16 AM
Josie, very sad and very well written. Remember there is always two sides to a coin so the odds are even.
Sierra Nevada Sunset (Poetry) - 11/21/2003 7:25:45 AM
great poem. love the images. well done.
Sierra Nevada Sunset (Poetry) - 11/21/2003 12:17:39 AM
the odd ones are always the most interesting...
Sierra Nevada Sunset (Poetry) - 11/19/2003 4:16:03 PM
Loved this poem. Was intrigued by the title. Glad I read it!
Sierra Nevada Sunset (Poetry) - 11/19/2003 1:52:05 PM
Josefina,
Masterful, and amazing, and it was my distinct
honor to read this piece blazed in exquisite.
Masterpiece, pure and simple.....
I was both enchanted and awed.
Sincerely,
Rodney Evan Bohen
Sierra Nevada Sunset (Poetry) - 11/19/2003 12:22:10 PM
(((o, josie)))
this just soars--amazing, beautiful write, captured and shared with power and conviction
BRAVA, dear friend--a keeper
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
Sierra Nevada Sunset (Poetry) - 11/19/2003 12:01:37 PM
This is glorious Josie!A triumphant write just like you!
Sierra Nevada Sunset (Poetry) - 11/19/2003 9:57:46 AM
I loved this litany of imagery from life. Amazing what a mountain sunset can inspire. There is that spot in our core that is capable of deepest emotion. The dying rays appear to have touched that spot in you.
Excellent write.
Best regards,
Leland
Sierra Nevada Sunset (Poetry) - 11/19/2003 9:28:59 AM
this is a fantastic write, josie; enjoyed very much! thank you for sharing; always a joy to read your writes! (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D love you, sweet josie gurl!
Wondering (Poetry) - 11/19/2003 8:54:18 AM
Honest and and heart-felt! A lovely expression!
Wondering (Poetry) - 11/17/2003 9:13:02 AM
the ultimate irony
you are able to show everyone how it feels inside to not be able to show everyone how it feels inside
Wondering (Poetry) - 11/16/2003 1:45:52 PM
(((josie)))
AWESOME write--it will come (i'm still waiting, too)
beautiful expression, thought provoking
(((((HUGS))))) and love,
karla. :)
Wondering (Poetry) - 11/15/2003 8:10:14 PM
This write came, and it is awesome..
Have a great night.......
Wondering (Poetry) - 11/15/2003 9:41:44 AM
a brilliant and deep write
Wondering (Poetry) - 11/15/2003 9:31:42 AM
wow, josie; you write with a talent that i am in awe of! well done; keep on writing, my friend, and never stop! this write ROCKS, and so do you! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :D love you, josie!
Wondering (Poetry) - 11/15/2003 9:13:38 AM
Wow Jo you just described what all we writers go through...and you did it wonderfully...which means the muse is still at work...floria
Wondering (Poetry) - 11/15/2003 8:34:06 AM
Josie,
This is wonderful - Just wonderful! Write on!
Wondering (Poetry) - 11/15/2003 8:13:10 AM
Your words here say what I think your heart speaks, good write
Wondering (Poetry) - 11/15/2003 8:00:09 AM
It is here! You are writing better than ever Josey. I miss you so much.
Wondering (Poetry) - 11/15/2003 7:57:53 AM
YOUR heart seeps through your quill into your poetry!
Grains of Memories (Poetry) - 11/14/2003 10:43:42 AM
Girl, I REALLY enjoyed this one... THanks for sharing...
Rodd
Grains of Memories (Poetry) - 11/14/2003 6:35:24 AM
Sounds perfect as a description for "Father Time." Will certainly be tracking more of your work.
blessin's,
cynth'ya lewis reed
Grains of Memories (Poetry) - 11/13/2003 10:54:17 AM
you captured the eternal moment with this piece, poet. just one glimpse brought all of that knowledge...very well done.
Your Scent (Poetry) - 11/12/2003 9:05:58 AM
This flows effortlessly and touches deep within... Excellent write!
Grains of Memories (Poetry) - 11/12/2003 9:02:04 AM
So full of emotion and expressed very well.
Grains of Memories (Poetry) - 11/5/2003 8:42:39 PM
very creative,
a feeling like
"i've been there before"
Grains of Memories (Poetry) - 11/5/2003 5:10:51 PM
Josie,
This is so deep and full of much meaning, oh each verse, each word...a grain of sand within itself to explore! Excellant Write!
~Nikki~
Grains of Memories (Poetry) - 11/5/2003 8:35:39 AM
Josie, this is great
Grains of Memories (Poetry) - 11/4/2003 2:11:17 PM
(((josie)))
o, this is outstanding--one of your best
i'm putting this gem into my library *thank you*
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
Grains of Memories (Poetry) - 11/4/2003 9:02:09 AM
Super write, Josie; glad to be reading you again! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
Grains of Memories (Poetry) - 11/4/2003 8:10:49 AM
Josefina,
I am simply awed.....
Rodney Evan Bohen
falling
grains of memories
smiling faces
laughter
sorrow
pain
tumbling against each other
pushing through the portal
freefall granules
of yesterdays
Grains of Memories (Poetry) - 11/4/2003 5:04:25 AM
This is the one!
Grains of Memories (Poetry) - 11/4/2003 3:57:21 AM
Wonderfully-written and flows very well.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Grains of Memories (Poetry) - 11/3/2003 10:13:40 PM
Very well written... as always Josie!!
Love Tinka
addiction (Poetry) - 11/2/2003 11:52:05 PM
You got all of pegged....lol loved it
(((HUGS)))
Sonja
Flickering of Heart (Poetry) - 11/2/2003 11:48:16 PM
Wonderful.loved every word
(((HUGS)))
Sonja
Your Scent (Poetry) - 11/2/2003 11:45:17 PM
very good write keep up the good work
lots more coming our I hope
Lots of luck and love to ya
Sonja
Your Scent (Poetry) - 10/28/2003 3:06:11 PM
(((josie)))
i have missed you, girl
stay safe out there in california--all those fires *GOD*
beautiful, beautiful write BRAVA, my lady, a keeper
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
Your Scent (Poetry) - 10/26/2003 7:42:30 AM
This is beautiful Josey, touches the heart.
Your Scent (Poetry) - 10/25/2003 1:26:43 PM
Touche the heart with this!!
Love Tinka
Your Scent (Poetry) - 10/25/2003 9:49:32 AM
Beautiful verses.
Your Scent (Poetry) - 10/25/2003 8:28:18 AM
Beautiful poem, I love how it can be comprehended in different ways! ~Z~
Your Scent (Poetry) - 10/25/2003 8:26:15 AM
Very good poem .
"reached out felt knew
that you were gone
and there were no tears
no release no help
just the smell
washing me in you"
Your Scent (Poetry) - 10/24/2003 6:52:14 PM
i inhaled this poem effortlessly... an excellent write!
Your Scent (Poetry) - 10/24/2003 5:27:26 PM
Jose,
Unusual, breathtaking and mysterious...
One of the finest pieces I have ever
had the pleasure of reading! I salute you....
Rodney Evan Bohen
just the smell
washing me in you
your scent
that is
really
my
own
Your Scent (Poetry) - 10/24/2003 5:18:46 PM
oh this is so
i don't know......personal...yet universal
wow
its great
pax
A
Your Scent (Poetry) - 10/24/2003 4:49:56 PM
Oh... ;( plucked a chord in my heart... ;) Thanks for sharing Jo...
Your Scent (Poetry) - 10/24/2003 2:32:10 PM
Gosh this is sad Josephing...I can relate to this..could be of a lost love or a someone lost to death...very well written expression of sorrow either way..floria
Drips of Mist (Poetry) - 10/22/2003 10:07:01 PM
Do I detect a hint of uncle Walt here?
Super, Super imagery! Fine work!
Backward Glance (Poetry) - 10/22/2003 8:27:07 PM
Ooooooooooh, I like this! (I like your style, Josephine.) Wonderful imagery and CONNECTION! Thanks.
Tami
Flickering of Heart (Poetry) - 10/22/2003 8:20:55 PM
Ah, I found myself nodding and smiling at this read. Thanks!
Tami
Peace Be Still (Poetry) - 10/22/2003 8:18:29 PM
Peace doesn't mean to have no turmoil in your life. Peace means to be among all the turmoil and still have peace in your heart. (I have a "short story" by this same title.) I loved this write and the serenity within that it implies/implores...
Tami
A Gift for Me (Poetry) - 10/22/2003 8:10:39 PM
Filled with optimism and promise. Beautifully done. Thanks for sharing this one.
Tami
Drips of Mist (Poetry) - 10/22/2003 8:07:51 PM
Wonderful imagery in this.
your moody (Poetry) - 10/15/2003 9:30:05 AM
Jose,
Would ya send me one of those?
Good write as always....in typical signature Josie style, fasshion and form...
Rod Bohen
friend calls
how’re you doin
look at my ring
well right now sorta happy/sad
what is that
disconcerting to say the least
but easier
I guess
than
really trying to figure out
how I’m doing
Drips of Mist (Poetry) - 10/10/2003 7:55:17 AM
This was so outstanding, beautiful to read this morning!
Reindeer
Drips of Mist (Poetry) - 10/10/2003 5:55:21 AM
Good to read you once more, I am never disappointed.
Drips of Mist (Poetry) - 10/9/2003 8:08:47 AM
Jose,
What a grand view you must have! There is an ancient Indian myth that states, that when the Hawk lands near you, and looks upon you,it is a grand sighn, for the myth continues to state, that the Hawk only will gaze upon greatness and power, hence, reflecting his own, as if looking into a mirror. Grand piece Jose, reflecting your seeing eye indeed.
Sincerely,
Rodney Evan Bohen
Drips of Mist (Poetry) - 10/8/2003 6:32:07 PM
Perfect write!!!
Drips of Mist (Poetry) - 10/8/2003 3:03:15 PM
nice
Drips of Mist (Poetry) - 10/8/2003 3:01:59 PM
Excellent write!
Drips of Mist (Poetry) - 10/8/2003 10:18:29 AM
Lovely write, Josie; can relate to the foggy mists; it's been foggy here in Texas the past few mornings! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D Luv ya, Gurl!
Drips of Mist (Poetry) - 10/8/2003 10:16:07 AM
(((o, josie)))
what a beautiful write--could see it as i read this
well done
especially loved
"...hawk perches
turns regal head
sees all
knows i see him
knows all
shrugs off my life
with an opening of wings
and merging into fog
sound
and heartbeat"
WOW
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
Holding Hands (Poetry) - 10/8/2003 5:31:19 AM
a touching poem
Holding Hands (Poetry) - 10/8/2003 4:07:41 AM
Priceless remembrance Josie!!
Love Tinka
Holding Hands (Poetry) - 10/7/2003 8:48:53 PM
So touching ,Josie, as you do so well, superb writing!
Holding Hands (Poetry) - 10/7/2003 7:17:49 PM
Extremely well written.
Holding Hands (Poetry) - 10/7/2003 5:34:51 PM
I am reminded like this a lot, Josephine! And your description is so touching... thank you for sharing this...
In Spirit,
Bear
Holding Hands (Poetry) - 10/7/2003 2:07:51 PM
What a wonderful remembrance! Excellent poem!
Holding Hands (Poetry) - 10/7/2003 1:20:19 PM
(((josie)))
awwwwwwwwwwwwww such a soft, delightful write--a mother's love perfectly displayed in this beauty
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
Holding Hands (Poetry) - 10/7/2003 1:04:53 PM
oh, this is so lovely and soft... taken from a moment in life and relived and shared with all of us
Holding Hands (Poetry) - 10/7/2003 12:47:23 PM
Jose,
Touching piece,a mothers rembrance...... precious to be sure. Your work of recent has impressed me above measure, whatever ground you have been tilling young lass, continue therein, for it is yielding fine and rich fruit indeed!
May I take this opportunity as well to compliment you on the excellent article you posted yesterday entitled "Mad Money" too bad none take the time to read articles, because this one was illuminating and insightful to be sure! Pregnant with wisdom, and flooded in truth standing tall. I salute you....for your power of pen never ceases to amaze me indeed....
Sincerely,
Rodney Evan Bohen
Holding Hands (Poetry) - 10/7/2003 12:20:51 PM
beautiful little write; thanks for sharing, josie! sure don't envy y'all in cali with the gubanatorial elections; boy, whatta MESS! i feel sorry for y'all there! y'all are in my prayers! :( (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn.
A Gift for Me (Poetry) - 10/6/2003 5:42:42 PM
is it not life so beautiful
excellent write
William
A Gift for Me (Poetry) - 10/6/2003 5:15:55 PM
You Finally Learned To Love Yourself!
TRASK
A Gift for Me (Poetry) - 10/6/2003 4:09:25 PM
theres so little of real beauty left in the world, we have to cherish it where we find it
A Gift for Me (Poetry) - 10/6/2003 2:54:10 PM
The true gift is the gift of wonder. That's when we see beauty and possibilities. Excellent poem, Josie!
A Gift for Me (Poetry) - 10/6/2003 2:25:54 PM
Sometimes new starts are treasures in themselves! Excellent write!
A Gift for Me (Poetry) - 10/6/2003 2:17:52 PM
(((josie)))
a wise, profound write--beautiful imagery!
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
A Gift for Me (Poetry) - 10/6/2003 12:39:07 PM
Interesting write Josie!!
Love Tinka
A Gift for Me (Poetry) - 10/6/2003 12:17:43 PM
I felt the hope and joy with trembling in this fine write.
A Gift for Me (Poetry) - 10/6/2003 11:24:24 AM
nice write, josie; well done! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. (becca is from texas, too! so your first reviewers are both from texas! LOL)
A Gift for Me (Poetry) - 10/6/2003 11:11:44 AM
A most interesting write.
Linger On (Poetry) - 10/6/2003 7:50:34 AM
Josephine, this is wonderful, it expresses what I tried to say in The Life of Words, but you did it so much better.
Bobbi
Linger On (Poetry) - 10/5/2003 5:53:52 PM
you render your words soundly...
Linger On (Poetry) - 10/5/2003 2:02:24 AM
Great piece as always.
Amor
Linger On (Poetry) - 10/4/2003 12:05:13 PM
Mosr excellently done Josie!!
love Tinka
Linger On (Poetry) - 10/3/2003 4:40:00 PM
excellent.
Linger On (Poetry) - 10/3/2003 1:45:06 PM
You got that right, words can mess you up! :o) Excellent write.
Linger On (Poetry) - 10/3/2003 1:31:33 PM
Josefina,
You startle me with every new piece!
Well done.....you paint your heart well indeed
Rodney Evan Bohen
Linger On (Poetry) - 10/3/2003 1:13:31 PM
(((josie)))
sticks and stones may break your bones, but words will never hurt you...DON'T YOU BELIEVE IT
i'm still living with the pain of verbal assaults hurled at me over the years...this one is a keeper. excellent, heartfelt write
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :(
Linger On (Poetry) - 10/3/2003 1:00:42 PM
Oh,how very true! This is one for my library! Excellent poem!
Linger On (Poetry) - 10/3/2003 12:39:53 PM
Josie.. I know the truth when I read/see/hear it.. this is the real stuff! What really annoys me is when someone says their piece followed immediately by 'just kidding'.. HA! <--- as you have been known to say! (smile) Words pack a punch.. no two ways about it.. great piece here. It's lovely to read you.. katy xox.
Linger On (Poetry) - 10/3/2003 12:21:02 PM
yes, they do, josie, even years later. good and truthful write; well done! :( (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn.
Flickering of Heart (Poetry) - 9/28/2003 5:33:14 AM
This is awesome Josephine! Good message ... I love it!
~Joseph
Flickering of Heart (Poetry) - 9/27/2003 7:27:42 PM
A beautiful write
Profound nd excellent
William
Flickering of Heart (Poetry) - 9/26/2003 8:29:09 PM
Hi Jo,
Profound Wisdom my friend.
The flickering candle may enlighten an entire abode, yet it never has the luxury of
beholding its own radiance. Vicky
Flickering of Heart (Poetry) - 9/26/2003 5:45:23 PM
Love candles your poem is very good.
Taylor
Flickering of Heart (Poetry) - 9/26/2003 4:18:19 PM
we cast our meager light
into a world of darkness
hoping
we bring illumination
of
good of peace of sincerity
flickering of heart
here bright in sorrow
burning wick
each
and
every one"
I love these words... excellent write...
In Spirit,
Bear
Flickering of Heart (Poetry) - 9/26/2003 2:39:32 PM
Jose,
Magnifico......
Rodney Evan Bohen
Flickering of Heart (Poetry) - 9/26/2003 2:07:58 PM
beautiful poetry Josie1!
Love Tinka
Flickering of Heart (Poetry) - 9/26/2003 1:47:48 PM
Such beautiful poetry! I loved this!
Reindeer
Peace Be Still (Poetry) - 9/26/2003 1:31:09 PM
(((josie)))
a keeper for my library--i agree, one of your best
shh--peace, be still a soft, tranquil, calming, wise write *STANDING OVATION*
((((HUGS)))) and love,
karla. :)
Flickering of Heart (Poetry) - 9/26/2003 1:21:59 PM
(((josie)))
another outstanding write--well done
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
Flickering of Heart (Poetry) - 9/26/2003 1:18:04 PM
beautiful write, josie! well done! :D (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn.
Flickering of Heart (Poetry) - 9/26/2003 1:12:32 PM
I loved this! Wonderful!
~Jen
Peace Be Still (Poetry) - 9/26/2003 10:41:25 AM
i concur with ted: one of your best! :D great job, josie! love ya! (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn.
Peace Be Still (Poetry) - 9/26/2003 10:37:04 AM
What a powerful message! Simple, yet profound. Lovely work.
~Joseph
Peace Be Still (Poetry) - 9/26/2003 6:59:11 AM
Josefina,
Tender piece lass! I for one am quite taken with the simplicity wrapped in eloquent power....prancing in laced loveliness, keep up the good work! You are a gentle soul indeed.....
Sincerely,
Rodney Evan Bohen
Peace Be Still (Poetry) - 9/25/2003 7:36:42 PM
One of your best.
Peace Be Still (Poetry) - 9/25/2003 1:05:13 PM
Hush! tranquility...peace...sleep!!
love Tinka
Peace Be Still (Poetry) - 9/25/2003 12:37:32 PM
wonderfully expressed Josie. the quietness takes me to a soft powdery place
Peace Be Still (Poetry) - 9/25/2003 12:29:20 PM
this is lovely... for in stillness one can find their true self
Testimony of Love (Poetry) - 9/25/2003 9:52:43 AM
This is beautiful :`)``!!!
I love the way your poems read. I have missed your words! Been a while. What a heart you write with!
Thank you,
Teresa Emilie
Peace Be Still (Poetry) - 9/25/2003 9:49:29 AM
There is nothing quite like silence. I like the thought process in this. Very cleansing words to read.
Thanks,
Teresa Emilie
The Norm (Poetry) - 9/25/2003 1:25:02 AM
in this world, it is certainly difficult to see things clearly...
The Norm (Poetry) - 9/24/2003 11:05:34 PM
This was outstanding, I love your poetry, always a pleasure to visit your den!
Reindeer
The Norm (Poetry) - 9/24/2003 5:29:30 AM
Some amazing lines in this Josephine! May we break free from "The Norm" and truly live!
~Joseph
The Norm (Poetry) - 9/23/2003 10:25:35 PM
The poets speak were no one dares. Nice write!
The Norm (Poetry) - 9/23/2003 7:32:28 PM
another great write...
The Norm (Poetry) - 9/23/2003 3:36:35 PM
Insightful write Josie!!
Love Tinka
The Norm (Poetry) - 9/23/2003 12:59:36 PM
(((josie)))
perfection! a keeper for my library! *thanks*
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
Testimony of Love (Poetry) - 9/23/2003 10:41:56 AM
Josefina,
No, thank you....
Rodney
The Norm (Poetry) - 9/23/2003 10:36:15 AM
Jose,
Insightful write....
Good line! Wish I'd written it....
Rodney Evan Bohen
"smiling façade of driftwood"
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